Chapter 4

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Chapter 4: How feelings Change!

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"Beta, iss bike pe na boys hi suit hotein hain, girls nai" he said

"Ek Jhapad padega swayam, I WANT A RIDE! Thats it!" she finished

Oh, so it was our very own Swayam.. MR. Romeo...

"Chal Chal.. Nikal. tujhe aur ride? no" he said

"But i said na i want it!" kriya argued.

"No!" he said

And the argument continues... finally rey who was getting bored finally said

"Dude, betha le na.. problem kya hai?" he said

"Yaar, tu samajhta nai hai. meri bike pe larki? can u believe it? and han, tujhe agar itni fikar ha toh tu hi betha le.." swayam said winking.

kriya turned to rey..

"Fine, come on kriya" rey said and took her

"Badla liya jaega tujhse toh" kriya mumbled and left

"Haan-Haan Chal na" swayam said

"Toh kya mebhi iss bike nahi beth sakti?" some one entered

"woah why not?" swayam said "But, i'm afraid jahan ham jaa rhein hain, vo jagah tumhe pasand nai aayegi" he said

"Tum le bhar chal, pasand aana na aana bad ki baatein hain" she said

"Sharon. tum? aur meri bike pe?" he said

okay, so it was sharon, bole toh miss Juliet...

"K come on" he said

Kriya who was hearing all this said.. oops!.. yelled

"ACCHA! USKE LIYE JAGAH HA, MERE LIYE NAI. SO MEAN SWAYAM"

But swayam drove off..

Rey: oh,miss jhansi ki raani, vo gaye. hum chalein?

Kriya: chalo.. (😊)

Rey: hold me tight..

kriya held his shoulder.. while rey took her arms and pulled them tighter around his waist.

Kriya smiled she wasnot used to made special. she wasn't used to all this. she was a small towner.. after a few seconds kriya noticed rey was going to the opposite direction to which swayam has gone. she was confused. totally...

Kriya: Where are we going?

rey: that was a trick, to take sharon on a date. don't you know it..

kriya gasped: what u serios?

rey: do i look like joking?

kriya: dont tell me u still mad at me and swayam!?

rey: No, it isn't that. was just thinking about something else.

kriya: what?

rey: why are you so.. umm.. behenji types??

kriya: Stop the bike..

rey: fine, i'm sorry. i didn't mean it that way.

kriya: no, i wanted an ice-cream and i know i'm behenji types

rey: u know? u mean ur not mad at me.

kriya: No, why should i? i mean i know i always tie up my hair, i never ever wear short clothes, and that's because my parents always wanted me behenji-typed.

rey: i know where to take you now..

kriya: where?

rey: if i tell u what will be the surprise..

...

Sometime Later..

"I'm not going to wear this!" she yelled

"pleasE!" he said '

"No!" she said abruptly

"Not for me even?" he said making a puppy face..

she snatched the cloth peice from his hand and left

"Only because you're telling me to do that" she winked and disappeared into the changing room.

He was waiting. he had previosly heard that girls take a ton of time to dress up, but had never experienced it. today for the very first tym she was taking this long, he had other works too. she had to do it fast.. he knocked "Could you change in 10 minutes?" he said ..

She could change in 5.. and as a matter of fact, she had already done it.. but the dress was so small that she was afraid to come out. embarrassed actually. what will happen if he sees her like this in such a short dress. but he had chosen it. so she had to.. gosh! "I..I'm already done actually" she stammered "Great! come out, why don't you?" he said "I.. I can't, could you.. umm.. come.. uh.. inside?" she stammered "You want me to come in.. with YOU?" he screamed.. "yeah. i'm a bit embarrassed to come out" she said "oh.. uh.. allright" he said...'

Dress-

Gulping, he saw the room's latch open. At the thought of seeing her inside Alone made him nervous. what if something happened? like someone caught them inside. he some how managed to push the door open instead of thinking what the circumstances wud b lyk wen he will see her. And he decided that he had to GO..

(For those who are expecting a hot scene here are right! but as u all know i love the suspense.. so stay tuned to Savage Awakening to read the upcoming hot scene)

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Swayam: you know mene sab kuch plan kar rakha ha, dinner, candles, dance just .. Everything., tum perfect lag rahi ho, toh arena bhi close to perfect toh hona chaiye na? *smirk*

she smiled at seeing him this excited, he was adorable, cute, and was totally lovable. but, well, she had to do it. welcoming swayam would be back stabbing him-Vishal. and, she couldn't do it.. she loved him. they were like meant to be together. and swayam. well, he had something in him. Something that attracted her more than she should be, and well.. she had to admit she really liked him ..

Sharon: Swayam, just a minute. me yahan date attend karne nai aayi huh.. i came to tell u dat.. dat.. this can't happen..

swayam: kya sharon?

sharon: Jo bhi tum soch rahe ho. WE, we can't be together... so please, stop trying so hard. i hate to see you trying so hard for me, especially wen i know the fact that we can't be together. I'm so sorry to tell u this..

swayam: but, why? why can't this happen sharon? why? kya me tumhe.. like.. pasand nai huh?

sharon: no.. its.. its really not that.. i really really like you. but, i love vishal and being like this with you.. would be like back stabbing him. You Understand?

Only and Only for Kinjal di...!! 🤗 🤗

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Precap- Hot scenes btw SS and KR coming up...

Thank kinjal di for the upd8.. as i was in no mood to update she forced me to write..

so how was it?

well, i couldn't re-read it..

and i really wrote it in a haste..

hope that was fine? was it?

well, feel free to criticise..

rotten tomatoes, ggs, potatoes all are welcomed..

and juttes bhi..

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kuhu bhatta @kuhu_Arsha

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awsumm blossom suprb updates,,,i m loving it,,,sry 4 late cmt

11 years ago

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Konpal Gupta @-CRJ-

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mast tha.shuru mein laga it will be kriyaansh ya swaron but kriyam nkle! 😆Im waiting for kriyaansh hawt scenes!n W*F!shar loves vishal!not done!Poor swayu 🥺

11 years ago

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