Chapter 8
"aur phir bhi dono yeh trip miss karna afford nahin karsakthe" taani replied her voice
smooth
The smoothness sarcasm that the voice conveyed was something that reys mom hadnt
heard from her, the others however looked at her
part 8
" matlab?" mom asked and then replied herself," i guess so, dono miss karna afford
nahin karsakthe kyunki inki team bohot bada hain...'
"maybe aunty but shayad isiliye zyaada kyunki hamara commitment towards d3 badaa
hain" sharon interrupted. Reys mom smiled at her and turned to taani
" thats what i meant mom.." rey began when his mom interrupted him still looking at
taani said," but taani what did you mean?"
"wahin jo sharon bhabhi ne kahaan"
"no im sure you meant something different...aisa laga ki tum yeh kehrahin thi ki even
though dono husband wife proffessionally kaam karthe hain...phir bhi unko aisa
opportunitis miss karne ka luxury nahin hotha...haina? " she smiled more broadly and
shaking her head," you really are stuck on being a housewife arent you? Isiliye jo bhi
mauka aaye usse defend karne lagthi hoon" her smile suggesting that she found it
amusing that taani was so innocent," but dear its not like that..."
Something in mom s smile snapped taani s years of upbringing," i know mom ki aisa
nahin hain...mujhe defend karne ki zaroorat hi nahin hain...its understood ki abhi jo
main kaam karrahin hoon usmein jo mujhe compensation salary jo bhi kaho miltha hain..
.wo tho kuch bhi nahin ...in comparison to what i would have got being a full time
housewife" her tone losing its respectful ness and bordering on rude
Sharon started to enjoy the arguement, rey looked from one to the other wondering
what taani was actually saying while swayam started giving her a badon se aise baat
karthe hain? Look
She ignored all three of them and stared at her mom inlaw...reys mom continued to
smile," haan haan all that satisfaction sacrifice and what not ..." she began sarcasm
dripping reminding taani of rey s sarcasm and she suddenly stood up , mom stopped
," no mom...just a minute tehro" and walked away to the front room
"ummm aunty i guess shes tired , shes not really ..." swayam began while rey ran out
after her
its ok swayam..i know her well enough...shes stressed out. Reys dad was also saying
that though shes picked up quite well , shes getting tired easily...thats the effect of being
at home for a long time " she had stopped eating by then
Sharon frowned," its her choice right aunty...kya farak padtha hain as long as shes happy"
Reys mom shook her head ," no sharon, i didnt expect this from you...you have always
been strong independent girl bachpan se hi , thats how girls should be ...confident and
career oriented ...who know what they want out of life ...but taani s like..."
Sharon smiled ," taani knows what she wants...hum sab se pehel hum sab se zyaada ...she
always wanted to be reys wife. I dont know why its so difficult to accept ki usse aur kuch
chahiye hi nahin"
Swayam now gave her his badon se aise baat karthe hain? Look which sharon ignored
" fine its her life but pata nahin wo accept kyun nahin karlethi ki being at home is not a
good option for women bas...financially or otherwise...respect kaun detha hain? And
khudh ki earning... She needs to ask another person for everything..."
her voice had a disgust in it that she didnt try to hide.
Taani and rey had come back by then and taani heard it but she walked to her mom in
law s side with a long sheet of paper and placed it on the table in front of her
"pehle tho mom aapne rey itni acchi seekh tho di hain ki wo apni wife ka respect
karsakhe , wo kaam karein ya na karein but wo chodo...yeh dekho, this is my paycheck ...
if i had got paid as a housewife till now...yeh ek mahine ka hain...sample "
reys mom stared at the paper , sharon in surprise got up from her seat walked out to
stand behind reys mom to read it, swayam bent over to catch what it was while rey
went feeling slightly funny back to his seat and started eating his dinner- he had run
behind her to console her but here she was ready for a full blown war, he smiled to
himself and thought ki aaj mom ko shock lagnewaala hain
Taani meanwhile continued her explanations ,"... this includes all the household work
like laundry karna cooking etc., yeh dekho list( sharons eyebrows went up) and is column
mein uska individualised cost likha hain...thats what i should get paid for each of the work
...agar koi yeh sab kuch professionally karein tho...by the way ismein sunithi( maid) kaka
maali bhaiyaa and driver uncle ka bhi hain kyunki i outsource my duties unko...
Aur supervisory role hoga mera usmein"
reys mom looked at it intently her face changing ,taani didnt look at anyone except the
paper," now this doesnt include keeping the socks and shoes in place, keeping the towel
back after reys bath, reminding rey of every birthday anniversary of all of his relatives
and cousins and friends ...u know generally appointments jo PA s karthe hain wo sab
kuch maine ismein daala hain...miscellaneous reponsibilities mein...
And phir there will be special responsibilities like the painting ya interiors...unka idea ...
jis time mera ankle sprain hua tha yeh sab move karthe karthe haina rey? " she looked at
him once and without waiting for his answer continued," un sab special responsibilities
ka maine extra daala hain...usually its one per year tho wo annual mein add hojaayega..
like is saal main pregnant hoon...tho pregnancy allowance milni chahiye na...
thats a promotion ...phir baby aajaayega tho mother allowance bhi hoga..."
she stopped to take a breath and then said pointing to another line ," aur ismein mom i
ve included all deductions like my own kharcha ...parlour ka , dresses ka...accessories
medical etc., even khaane peene ka you know ...wo sab deduct karke hi yeh salary hain
meri housewife job ki...matlab agar main ek professionnal housewife hothi tho this s
what my monthly paycheck would be like..."
She pulled the paper towards herself and placing her pen on it continued," abhi hamaari
shaadi ko..kitne saal hue rey?'
"three years five months"
"...haan tho this * 3 years matlab 36 months plus four = 40 months ...ok...lo mom this is
my earning teen saal se..." she stared at the large figure looking impressed , sharon
looked impressed as well while reys mom s face was expressionless...rey looked at his
dinner plate suddenly wanting to laugh swayam looked at the paper, then at all of them
one by one and stopped at taanis face, she again began,
"...and this is actually basic services...ismein jo quality ke liye main add karsakthi hoona
...ummm...like branded stuff zyaada costly hothe hain...us hisaaaf se tho..." she looked
at rey and said regretfully," rey mom sahin kehthi hain, aapki earning bilkul bhi kaafi
nahin...aap as a wife mujhe afford hi nahin karsakthe!" and sighed dramatically ," aap
please ab zyaada earn karna shuru karo or i should be stuck in this low paying office job...
kitna nuksaan horahaan hain mera"
Swayam frowned , rey smiled sharon wanted to laugh loud while mom still looked at the
paper. Taani walked to her seat next to rey and sitting down said," actually is list mein
mom maine ek service include nahin kiya hain...but thats because i get as much pleasure
out of it as rey ...so that comes free perk dono keliye " and picking up a piece of roti put
it into her mouth," itne saare paid services ke saath ek service free free free"
"TAANI" swayam finally snapped
Sharon closed her mouth to stop from laughing , rey looked at taani once and wanting to
laugh at her last sentence but gave her a stop it look and turning to his mom said," mom
leave her...aapka dinner ..."
Reys mom got up and saying ,"im done rey, by this standards" waving the paper," your
dad has to pay me so much more now..." and walked out
Sharon waited for two second and then burst out laughing
"yeh kaisa tareeka hain aunty se baat karne ka? Kya tha wo? Services yeh wo? Aise koi
kehtha hain? " swayam," aur rey tu chup kyun tha? Maine isiliye kahaan tune hi usse
bigaada hain.."
"arre like i had a chance ki main kuch kehsakhoon"
"offo swayam...auntys cool,haan agar meri mother in law se aisi baat karthi tab problem
hojaathi" sharon said making swayam glare at her
"thats not the point sharon...taani .."
"kuch zyaada hi rude tha kya rey?" taani suddenly felt guilty and ignoring swayam looked
at rey
Rey looked at her and realising what he would say now would matter maximum to her
said," haan taani but then...wo tumhaari real feeling thi ...patch up with her later, tumne
unse nahin unki thoughts se fight kiya bas" and squeezed her hand on the table.
She smiled thankful for his understanding.
Swayam who was about to tell taani off, stopped himself as he heard rey say that and
sharon saw him stop his lecturing to taani , smiled.
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Late in the night- kitchen
Rey came in to take water, reys mom came as well looking fresh still
"soye nahin abhi tak beta?" he shook his head and handed her the water bottle, she took
a sip and noticing him staring at her expectantly raised her eyebrows. He shook his head
, bent it and then with a smile said," mom, sorry... i hope you didnt mind what taani said
...i mean i know she sounded rude..par.."
"rey , when you dont think shes wrong dont apologise for her"He stopped," i think wo
bohot upset hogi agar usse yeh pata chalega ki tumne sorry kahaan uski taraf se"
"no mom...wo bhi jaanthi hain ki wo thoda rude aur sarcastic thi..."
"hum dono ko complain karne ka koi haq nahin bantha kisiki sarcastic hone ka...
we deserve it...'' she laughed, he smiled" but on a serious note, i understood what she
meant...shes right in a way and usse zyaada mujhe yeh ehsaas hua ki usse kitna hurt
hua hain.." she looked apologetic," sabki comments ka especially mera..." she shook her
head," so dont insult her by apologising...aur ab apni wife ki tarafdaari karna band karo
and go to sleep"
he smiled and moving forwards gave her a hug. mom was so straightforward
love you mom
She was surprised, he was usually the fathers son...her eyes softening, she hugged him
back, patted his cheek and said," i hope ki tum yeh jaanthe ho ki main uske saath
rehnewaali hoon whether u apologise or not..maska maarne ki zaroorat nahin hain.."
she joked, "waise aaj mujhe realise hua ki tum taani se pyaar kyun karthe ho!
Ki wo tumhe apni little finger pe nachaathi kaise hain"
he grinned though saying embarrassed , "nothing like that(she was grinning) but mom ..
..i think shes missing her mom aur...main bhi nahin hoon..." he fumbled
She understood his worry, hugged him again saying," dont worry about her. Hum dono
uska khayal rakhenge " and pulling out of the hug," you go and earn now..usko afford
karne ke liye" and burst out laughing.
Rey joined her in the laugh as she ruffled his hair affectionately
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Comments (28)
superb update😊😊taani answering her mil was superb🤣🤣🤣i was laughing lyk hell when she was explaining the chart🤣🤣and rey was trying to suppress his laughter😆😆swayam...why he has to behave lyk a jerk all the tymnice to see that rey mom understood taani😊rey & his mom talk was nice😊update soon😊
9 years ago
OMG :)What an update :)Wow :)Superb yaar :)Loved it :)Update soon :)Thanx for the PM :)
9 years ago
nice chapter... Absolutely loving the story ...something new and fresh concept...keep writing :)samruddhi2014-11-15 03:25:54
9 years ago
it was an extra ordinary l laughed but the fact remain same...what ever Taani said was absolutely so very much correctbeing girls if one is just a housewife it dosen't means she don't have any dignityI am so in love with this story.
9 years ago
Omg what an updateTaani's answer was hilarious I was laughing throughout update her last line was damn funny but ya housewife is not easy job I enjoyed Sharey reaction rey is very supportive husbandTaani's MIL is also understanding rey and her kitchen convo was niceWaiting next part Update soon
9 years ago
Mind blowing update.. It was really funny..😆 thankx for pm..😊
9 years ago
Finally catched all partsamazing conceptlast chapter was so much funwaiting for next part
9 years ago
🤣 kya update tha taani ne jawaab diyakya rey ki mom ko aur finally she understand her
9 years ago
mere ko to last line bahutavhi lagiand nice update
9 years ago
superb dear..taani speech was damn hilarious nd true..specially tat pleasure one..i like sharey reaction in the whole scene specially at last..but now i think rey mom understand taani pov also to some extent
9 years ago