Chapter 19
jeevika : woh manvi...
virat : bhabhi manvi theek toh hai na...
jeevika : haan woh theek hai... mannu aap dono ko bulaya rahi hai... virat she is missing you... lets go...
viren n virat : hmmm...
CHAPTER 18
in manvi's room
manvi : partner where were you...?? i was missing you...
virat : i am also missing you partner...
manvi : isnt it funny london jaakar tumhari english kharab ho gai hai...!!! missing you nahi missed you... mera dumbo chep... 🤣
virat : why havent u eaten your food manvi...???
manvi : bcos u were not here to share this sada gala khana with me...
virat : chalo lets eat... i am very hungry...
manvi : really...?? do u think that i will fall into this trap of yours... do i look like a 5 yrs old kid virat...???
virat : nopes... u look like my jungli billi... 😛
manvi : khana thanda ho raha hai...
virat : hehe... yeah i know...
then both ate that food sharing it with each other...
everybody was now relieved seeing manvi and virat happy together and they decided to go back home and rest for sometime... while jeevika and virat decided to stayback... prem and his family also left for their house... prem now had belief on virat and he only wanted one thing now and that was manvi to be happy and the obvious and sole reason for her happiness was virat...
jeevika : main abhi aati hu...
virat : okay...
manvi : okk di... come soon...
now manvi turns to virat...
manvi : did u miss me...???
virat : no...
manvi : what...?????????? how could you...????????
virat ; yes i didnt miss you meri ded futiya because in order to miss u first i have to forget you...!! and that is just impossible for me to do... i can forget to breathe but not you manvi... you are my everything partner...
manvi : but you know what i really missed you...!!!
virat : hmmm...
manvi : when will we go back home...???
virat : tomorrow morning...
manvi : and then you will take me for a long drive...
virat : kisne kaha...??? (who said it...???)
manvi : i said it... you dumbo...!!
virat : ohh me and dumbo...???
manvi : yes u and dumbo...!!!
virat : u have lost it ms. manvi...
manvi : forget it... i want to ask you something important...
virat : kya keh dharti gol kyun hai...??? (what... ? oh so u want to ask why the earth is round in shape...??)
manvi : i am serious chep... have i met that prem before...??
virat : kya...??
manvi : yeah... i felt like i know him.. felt as if i have seen him somewhere before... and his touch...
virat : touch...??
manvi : yeah.. his touch seemed so familiar... dont know why...??? and when he said FRIENDS FOREVER it clicked in my mind... felt as if i have heard these words before and shockingly in the same voice...
virat (was now becoming insecure still was trying to control himself) : manvi... this is not possible... you just need to take rest.. thats it...
manvi : par virat...
virat : listen i only want to talk about u and me right now... nobody else...
manvi : okk baba... mere angry young man virat singh vadera...!!
virat : manvi... do u like prem...?? (despite the promise virat made to prem of uniting him and manvi, he was still somewhere down in his heart praying for manvi to refuse... he couldnt take it again.. he couldnt hear it again that his manvi likes prem... )
manvi : how can i like him in the very first meeting...??? yeah he is sweet and charming... but so what..?? my chep is more dashing and handsome than him...
virat : really...??
manvi : jhooth bolun toh hospital mein aag lag jae... (if god forbid i lie, then the hospital will catch fire.. )
jeevika : woww... how sweet you two are...!!!
manvi : where were you di...??? what took u so long...??
jeevika : had gone to call viren ji...
manvi : so jeevika ji blushes on talking of viren ji... amazing...!! virat dont u think they both are just perfect and they should just get married...
virat : bilkul... bhabhi bana hi leta hu tumhari di ko...
manvi : aur main viren bhaiya ko jiju 😃
virat : done...!!!
jeevika : kya virat tum bhi...!!! ☺️
virat : its ok bhabhi ji... (winking at jeevika)
manvi : virat... you cannot wink at my di..
virat : she is my hone wali bhabhi bandariya...
manvi : but you will not wink at her...
virat : why...?? are you jealous jealous...???
manvi : yes i am jealous... so...??? 😕
virat (happy) : nothing...
jeevika : virat pls go and eat something na...
virat : no i am not hungry...
manvi : par i am hungry...
virat : haaye meri bhookhi sherni...
manvi : plss pizza mangwa do na... plss di...
jeevika : okk... but dnt tell anybody...
manvi : promise...
virat : i will just order it... our favourite...
manvi : okkyy... make it fast virat...
after sometime virat came back with manvi's favourite pizza and all thre of them had a pizza party...
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next day...
at chaudhary mansion...
badi b : chalo meri chudail ghar aa gayi... (ohh my chudail is back home...)
manvi : haan haan... ab kya karogi budiya...??
badi b : mujhe toh darr lagta bhootni se...
manvi : bhootni ko apne kangan dedo... bhootni chali jaegi... 😉
badi b : chal chal... apna rasta naap...
beeji : chodiye naa ye sab beeji...
manvi : OMG...it feels too great to be back...
naina : god bless you my darling... how are you now...??
manvi : mum i am alright... infact very happy...
naina : always be happy my baby... come now lets go into your room...
manvi : no mom i want to sit here with everybody...
rikesh : manvi jaana go and take rest... and nobody is going anywhere... we all are here only...
manvi : on one condition...
rikesh : agreed... 👍🏼
manvi : today virat will take me for a long drive...
naina : okkay... now lets go manvi...
everybody was a little shocked on seeing the changed attitude of naina towards virat and his friendship with manvi but at the end of the day they were elated...
manvi : thank you mom... virat...??
virat : hmm...
manvi : be ready... pls wake me up at time... okkk..??
virat : okk...
manvi : bye everybody... see you later.. i am feeling a little tired u see...
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naina : thank god rikesh... manvi is okkk...
rikesh : i know naina... and now she is happy as well...
naina : rikesh i had never ever imagined that virat loves manvi to that an extent... i always thought that he wants to rule my daughter's life... but now i think i was just being skeptical... it doesnot mean that if i had a bad experience in love , my daughter will also go through it...
rikesh : hey... u dont have to think about all this now...
naina : ofcouse i have to rikesh... i really didnt wanted manvi to feel suffocated in a relationship like i did once... that is only because in virat's eyes i saw something that i saw in HIS eyes years back... i saw extreme possessiveness and protectiveness that can spoil any relationship and can ruin its essence and meaning... but now i am very sure that virat really truly loves my manvi... but what about prem...???
rikesh : i am also worried thinking about prem... it is not that prem doesnt love manvi but i wonder why is this all happening with us and that too now... when we were planning to get manvi married to prem as soon as possible...
naina : rikesh u know i dont believe in signs and all... but i think that god has stopped us from committing a mistake... a mistake of parting two lovers.. a crime of separating two souls that are meant for each other... but we are struck in a situation where we can do nothing except sitting and watching what has destiny in store for us...
rikesh : you are right mrs. chaudhary... we have to wait and watch... let destiny decide whats gonna happen next... we can just pray for our children to be happy and get whatever they deserve...
naina : mr chaudhary you are right as always... thanks for being there...!!
rikesh : hello sunti ho... no thank you and no sorry in love...
naina : you have just become filmy like mannu...
rikesh : and you are just now blushing like my jeevi...
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manvi gets up around 3 in the afternoon... the first thing she does was calling virat...
manvi : kahan ho partner...???
virat : garage mein...
manvi : wahan kya kar rahe ho...??? 😕
virat : khana bana raha hoon... u must be hungry na...!!! 😆
manvi : hasna tha...??? 😡
virat : u only said that u want to go on a long drive so i was...
manvi : ohh i see... bike le aana... 😃
virat : bike...???
manvi : yeah...
virat : why bmw wont work...???
manvi : naah... today only bike...
virat : as you say partner...
manvi : that like my partner... come soon...
virat : anything for you partner... your wish is my command...
manvi : love you for that chep... 😃
virat ended the call and sighed " i love you for everything..." ❤️ ❤️
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kya hua... hum se to koi pucho kyu hum sabko ko hai besabri se intezaar mein batati ho naa yaar (ghatiya shayri)we all want our sweet si pyaari si gudiya si Naina to update a chapter asap please update soon 😭 rula diya na kya yaar not fair mujhe update chaiye aur agle mahine hi 😉 im only saying this because i want you to update the FF after your exams as i know how mush pressure one is under whilst revising once again dear good luck with the exams and i hope you get top marks 😃 names below 🤓
11 years ago
naina plz continue soon yarwaiting impatiently for the next update
11 years ago
awssumm...veii interestn👏..pls update soon n pm me,,,,,,,,,,
11 years ago
Plz update soon...this is very interesting story
12 years ago
i will try and update it asap...else it will be next week for sure...
12 years ago
when will you update net part😊
12 years ago
Hey naina.. When r u going to update this!! Please update soon!!Waiting wagerly!!😊
12 years ago
how sweet, maanvi is getting better and she is with her chep viratvirat will do his best to keep her happy, i hope maanvi realise that she is in love with virat.It was a nice conversation between the parents and her mum waking up to virat's true feelings for maanvi but what will happen to prem if virman decide to be together?thanks for the pm, please continue
12 years ago
awesome update dear .beautifully written .loved it .thanks for the pm .
12 years ago
Awesome..Thanx for the pm and update soon
12 years ago