Chapter 20
this is the next part of virman PTYKA... on demand...
so i want to dedicate this part to my friends NIKESHATHANA and S.KHAN... 😊
i have updated it on your constant requests...
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chapter 19
virat entered chaudhary mansion playing with the bike's key and suddenly stopped in his way on seeing naina coming down the stairs. naina passed him a smile signalling him to proceed forward. virat passed the smile back and went to manvi's bedroom. virat never had a habit of knocking the door before entering into her bedroom as he always felt that he had right on manvi and everything that belongs to her. today also he entered her bedroom and saw her getting ready. virat stopped at the midway and admired his angel. he was mesmerised looking at her and wished that she only belonged to him and only him but the reality was hurting him like thousands of daggers were being stabbed in his heart. his manvi was not longer his. she will only be his till she regains her memory. and the moment she remembers everything, he will lose her all over again... he will lose whatever meant the world to him... he will lose every reason of him being alive... he will lose his love, his world , his manvi... and the worst thing would happen again - manvi will hate him... the very thought of manvi hating him killed him... the girl whom he loves like hell will hate him the most...
manvi was getting ready when she saw virat entering her room without knocking on it... and whispered 'same old habit...' she saw him admiring her and she blushed on seeing him look at her that way... manvi stared at his image in the mirror and kissed him... she whispered " next time you will kiss me..." and then she noticed sudden change in virat's body language. manvi turned around, ran to him and engulfed him in her arms...
virat was immediately brought to reality when he felt manvi hugging him so tight as if she wanted to protect him frm the harsh world.. virat hugged her back and inhalled her sweet fragrance...
virat : manvi...
manvi : hmm...
virat : why are you behaving like fevicol...???
manvi : what...???
virat : get away bandariya...
manvi : virat... i .. i..
virat : forget it... lets go...
manvi : yeah lets just go...
manvi : hmm...
virat : why are you behaving like fevicol...???
manvi : what...???
virat : get away bandariya...
manvi : virat... i .. i..
virat : forget it... lets go...
manvi : yeah lets just go...
virat took manvi for a long bike ride and on the way she insited that she wants to drive it too... virat was too worried thinking she might get hurt but at last gave her to request.
manvi sat in front and virat sat behind her and taught her how to drive a bike... his hand protectively held her close to him and making sure that she doesnt get hurt...
manvi sat in front and virat sat behind her and taught her how to drive a bike... his hand protectively held her close to him and making sure that she doesnt get hurt...
they stopped in the middle of a field... manvi was so happy on riding the bike, that as she got off the bike and hugged virat. as that was an unexpected hug, virat lost his balance and fell back not alone but with manvi in his arms. they fell down in the field and manvi was still looking in his eyes and virat was unable to divert his attention from her. without breaking the eyelock, virat turned her and now he was on top of her. he slightly brushed away the fringe falling on her face behind her ear so that he can see her clearly without any obstacle. he was looking at her hoping that time would just stop there and then leaving then in each other's arm for eternity. manvi was losing her senses because of their sudden closeness. she had been close to virat several times but this time something was different. his touch held some different feel that was enough to melt her already thunping heart. his eyes were speaking volumes whuch his lips never spoke. manvi didnt know when her attention diverted from his eyes to his lips. virat was trying his best to control himself and get away from her. but how could he move away from the reason of his existence... how could he stop his heart from loving her...
manvi without even thinking twice just listened to her heart and her hand made its way to his silky hair. as she brushed her long fingers into his silky hair, virat began to lose his senses and restrain his immense love for her. he bent a little to capture her beautiful lips but suddenly his phone rang spoiling their moment of love.
virat immediately got from top of her and attended the call.
virat : hello...
prem : hey...
virat : prem...
prem : dude sorry to disturb you but i wanted to ask about manvi..
virat : hmmm...
prem : how is she...?? did she take her medicine...??? does she remembers anything...???
virat : she is fine prem... took the medicine on time.. n there is no improvement
prem : thanks virat... please keep me updated...
virat : yeah sure... bye..
prem : bye...
virat : hello...
prem : hey...
virat : prem...
prem : dude sorry to disturb you but i wanted to ask about manvi..
virat : hmmm...
prem : how is she...?? did she take her medicine...??? does she remembers anything...???
virat : she is fine prem... took the medicine on time.. n there is no improvement
prem : thanks virat... please keep me updated...
virat : yeah sure... bye..
prem : bye...
virat ended the call and saw manvi staring at him..
virat : what...???
manvi : so your friend has no work other than disturbing you...
virat : sorry...??
manvi : he should be sorry he just spoiled a moment...
virat : what did you just say...???
manvi : nothing...
virat : the sherni is blushing...
manvi : i am feeling hungry...
virat : lets go home quickly...
manvi : i want to eat outside... not at home...
virat : but partner...
manvi : pls partner...
virat : ok...
manvi : so sweet of you...
virat : i know...
manvi : will you promise me something...???
virat : hmmm...
manvi : promise that you will never leave me.. you will never go away from me...
virat was in a fix. he was not in his state of mind. what was he supposed to do...??? promise manvi something that owuld never be possible or keep the promise that he made to prem...
manvi : bolo na partner...
virat : manvi.. i..
manvi : its ok if you dont want to promise... i can understand...
virat : can you promise me the same thing...??? can you promise me that you will never leave me and go away...???
manvi : ye-
virat : think before you say something...
manvi : yes i promise and i will never break it... now your turn...
virat : i promise...
virat : what...???
manvi : so your friend has no work other than disturbing you...
virat : sorry...??
manvi : he should be sorry he just spoiled a moment...
virat : what did you just say...???
manvi : nothing...
virat : the sherni is blushing...
manvi : i am feeling hungry...
virat : lets go home quickly...
manvi : i want to eat outside... not at home...
virat : but partner...
manvi : pls partner...
virat : ok...
manvi : so sweet of you...
virat : i know...
manvi : will you promise me something...???
virat : hmmm...
manvi : promise that you will never leave me.. you will never go away from me...
virat was in a fix. he was not in his state of mind. what was he supposed to do...??? promise manvi something that owuld never be possible or keep the promise that he made to prem...
manvi : bolo na partner...
virat : manvi.. i..
manvi : its ok if you dont want to promise... i can understand...
virat : can you promise me the same thing...??? can you promise me that you will never leave me and go away...???
manvi : ye-
virat : think before you say something...
manvi : yes i promise and i will never break it... now your turn...
virat : i promise...
manvi and virat had some snacks and virat dropped manvi back at her house.
manvi : chalo na...
virat : no.. you go..
manvi : this is not done...!!! come n jin me for dinner...
virat : i have to go home manvi...
manvi : why...??? is this not your house...??
virat : try n nderstand...
manvi : what is this...??? chep you have changed.. are you in love...??? do you love somebody...???
virat : yes i am in love... i really love her...
manvi : stop joking virat... lets go...
virat : i am not joking.. i really love her and i just cannot live without her...
manvi : is she beautiful...???
virat : very beautiful... infact the prettiest...
manvi : hmm... goodnight...
virat : goodnight partner...
manvi : chalo na...
virat : no.. you go..
manvi : this is not done...!!! come n jin me for dinner...
virat : i have to go home manvi...
manvi : why...??? is this not your house...??
virat : try n nderstand...
manvi : what is this...??? chep you have changed.. are you in love...??? do you love somebody...???
virat : yes i am in love... i really love her...
manvi : stop joking virat... lets go...
virat : i am not joking.. i really love her and i just cannot live without her...
manvi : is she beautiful...???
virat : very beautiful... infact the prettiest...
manvi : hmm... goodnight...
virat : goodnight partner...
manvi was lost in her thoughts when jeevika came and kept her hand on hers...
jeevika : mannu... how was your bike ride...??
manvi : di...
jeevika : what happened...?? you look stressed...
manvi : di virat loves somebody...
jeevika : really...???
manvi : yeah... he said that...
jeevika : wowww... we should be really happy fo rhim... but who is the lucky girl..???
manvi : i dont know...
jeevika : your best friend is in love and you dont know who the girl is... strange...
manvi : i didnt ask him bcos i dont want to know...
jeevika : but why...???
manvi : because i.. i.. l
jeevika : bcos i what...???
manvi : bcos i dont care...
jeevika : think about it manvi... good night sweet dreams...
jeevika left the room left her questions didnt leave manvi's mind even for a nanosecond... why didnt she care about the girl virat loves...??? why didnt she want to talk about it...??? why...??? why does virat being in love with any other girl affects her...??? why is she sad...??? why isnt she happy for virat...??? what was wrong with her...???
there virat was cursing himself... why did he made that silly plan...??? why did he spoil everything...??? if he hadnt made that plan, manvi would have been absolutely fine... everything would have been the way it should be... he wouldnt have lost her.. but because of his silly plan he had messed up so many lives - his, manvi's, and prem's. he had unknowingly made everyone suffer especiallly manvi... she was loving a guy who had hurted her so much, a guy who has ruined her life, a guy who has messed up her life which once seemed like a fairytale to her, a guy who broke her heart beyond repair, a guy who loved and hurted her at the same time... a guy who made her every dream break and shatter and turned her life into a nightmare...
why do you still love me manvi...??? why...??? you are suppose to hate me...!!! you cannot love me... it will only hurt you more manvi... you will not love me... you have to hate me...!!! you have to go away from me...!!!! you have to manvi... i can give you nothing... i only gave you tears and pain... please hate me partner so that you can love prem.. he really loves you and he is very lucky because at the end he will have you for ever and ever... only a day back i promised prem to reunite you and him but i am already going weak... your love is making me weak... the love in your eyes is making me break my promise... please dont come near me manvi because if i come close to you again, i wont be able to step back... i wont be able to leave you again... i wont be able to see you going away from me.. i wont be able to see you with prem... dont make it difficult for me... i have tried really hard to let you go but your love is forcing the possessive virat to come back... i am afraid what if i become possessive about you again... i would probably set the whole world on fire if i didnt get you... i dont want you to become my obsession again... i want you to be happy and you cannot be happy with me because i hurted you... please manvi... please hate your chep... hate me soo much that you dont ever feel the need to see my face...
please god ... please my manvi well soon... i dont want her live this fake life... i dont want her to love a man like me... make me manvi remember everything... please dot play with her.. she will break down... i am helpless thats why i am asking for your help.. else i would heve done anything and everything for the well being of my ded futiya...
virat : hello
manvi : partner...
virat : manvi... why are you crying...??? is everything okk...??? speak up manvi...
manvi : i need you... please come here virat...
virat : i am coming partner...
manvi : please make it fast...
virat : i am coming... stop crying...
manvi : hmm...
manvi : partner...
virat : manvi... why are you crying...??? is everything okk...??? speak up manvi...
manvi : i need you... please come here virat...
virat : i am coming partner...
manvi : please make it fast...
virat : i am coming... stop crying...
manvi : hmm...
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Amazing. Just read all chapters. AMAZING!! Plz pm me nxt time
11 years ago
wow!!!!!! that was so beyond awesome:)👏 i loooved it to core:)😳 i hope virat tell her about his feelings...:)😉 lovely...romantic...and intense update...:) thnx alot 4 story:)😳 thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗
11 years ago
Great update.. Intense emotions of Virat.. Loved it..
11 years ago
Haash..finaly u update. .nice update. .virat's feeling are dercribe so nicely. .thanks 4 pm. .Continue soon
11 years ago
thank you preeti... thank you once again for the compliment... love u for that... 😃
11 years ago
Wow!!! I'm so happy you updated!!Superb update!! Loved it!!!Virat's feelings were described beautifully!!!Can't wait 4 ur next update!!!Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!
11 years ago
Am I dreaming *PINCH MY SELF* nope I'm wide awake Finally you updated awesome update loved it hope Manvi realises soon loved it continue soon and do pm me
11 years ago
thank god u came back and it was nice update
11 years ago
hey afet a long break u have updated tis story.i loved it.virat is sad tat he couldn't express his love.continue soon pls PM me.
11 years ago
dont no where should i begin and what should i write, it is nothing new for me...I mean i know that you are an amzing writer and this ff and this part shows this once again..so thank you for the pm , cant wait to read more of this ff
11 years ago