Chapter 14

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Navya

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Guys... u should seriously thank for updating today...😉 As said before Friday is my regular day of updating, but we have a holiday tomorrow bcz of Prophet's bday, that's the reason y i'm updating today! @Virika11: Ofcourse I'm a commz student lol, that's y i always talk abt Business in my update😆 ---------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter: 14
Virika asusual were playing their daily dose of Tom nd Jerry. It's their speciality that whenever they run, they're always bound to fall on top of other😃 This time Jeevika fell on top of Viren in the couch.
Jeevika: Didn't u stop ur crazy behaviour even now? All that's over now. Y are u still making fun of me with that silly mistake of mine!
Viren: Shhh... [covered her lips with his index finger, draped his hand, through her nd drew her close...]
Jeevika: V..vi
Viren: I said Shh... [drew her closer, this time, approached her lips, was so close, just then he was again interuppted, this time by Jeevika itself]
She pushed him backwards, woke up.
Jeevika: Ahaan, [clapped her hands] Keep ur silly trick with urself Mr.Businessman😃
Viren: Kya hai Jeevika, tu bhi na... ek toh yaha ki log toh mujhe romance karne nahi dete aur tum bhi unn logon ke tarah hogaye! Haad hogaye tumhari! [folded his arms]
Jeevika: First of all, tell sorry to me!
Viren: [grimaced] For What?
Jeevika: Kya what-pot?😆 For calling me Aga-bhai, [turned to other side folding her arms]
Viren: Why should i tell sorry? It's ur name! Ur ''original name''! Yaad nahi... [came towards , drew his arm across her shoulders] Chalo... let's go to FB!
Jeevika: Fb? Oh ya, i just logged out recently!
Viren: Idiot? FB= FLASHBACK! Jeevika embarrased!
[Flash back: One fine morning, Viren and his family came to Jeevika's house with their marriage brocker. Their car stopped infront of the house, Jeevika who is oblivious to her surroundings, was busy reading B-wood Magazine! When she turned around, she saw a group of ppl staring at her, she threw the book down nd ran to her room😆
Jeevika's parents welcomed them home, they had a lot of convo. Viren's eyes searched for Jeevika. Finally he found her, hiding behind the curtain. He winked at her secretly, to which she replied sticking her tongue out😛 From that moment, he understood she's nt a normal girl.
J's Mom: Arre Jeevika, sharma kyun rahi hoon, Aaja, inn logon ko chaay de doh!
Jeevika came forward with the tea, she gave the tea to everyone with a smiling face, and the moment she reached Viren's side, her smile changed into a deep glare. She constantly glared at him, nd poured the tea purposely on his pants!
Jeevika: Oops, i'm really sorry!
Viren: It's ok! I guess u didn't do it purposely! [winked at her]
Jeevika: [thinking: He's 100 times wicked than me] Oyye.. ji, please don't underestimate me... [crying expression]
J's dad: Our daughter is a bit emotional!
Mom: Beta, take Viren to the washroom, it's better to wipe off the stain fast, otherwise it'll always remain there.
Jeevika: [rolled her eyes] Should i really need to do this Maa?
Mom: [grimmed] Ofcourse Beta!
She toke him to the washroom.
Viren: By the way, ur really smart, i was really nervous thinking whether u'll be shy, not of my types, but I was totally wrong!
Jeevika: Oh, ya , it would be better, if u find another girl that suits u!
Viren: [chuckled] That's a good joke!
Jeevika: I was serious, nd Mr. how much do u want? I'll give u my whole salary but just tell my family, that u didn't like me, I mean just tell something bad about me!
Viren: But i never have any bad to tell abt u!
Jeevika:Ugh! Look Mr. I don't think, u'll ever be happy marrying me, cz I'm a doc, i'll have to spent my whole day at the clinic. 2. I'm too childish for a guy like u 3...
Viren: Tum jho bhi ho, mere liye teek ho!
Jeevika: Hey, I'm warning u ok, if u...
Viren: [walked forward] If u... complete karo na...
Jeevika: [blocked by washroom wall] If u...
Viren kept one of his hand on the wall : Waise, what was ur name?
Jeevika: As if, u didn't hear my name before?
Viren: Phir bhi...
Jeevika: Agabhai Meenakumari Meenakshi Kamakshi Manmohini Shanthabhai...
Viren:😲 Ok, so Miss. Aga... Whatever, If i'm planning to marry, then i'll be marrying u and noone else, even ur parents can't change Mr.Viren Vadhera's decision! [turned to go]
Jeevika: Ur gonna screw ur life, maarying me!
Viren: Thnxx for the warning Miss. Agabhai!
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Viren: So, how was the flashback?
Jeevika: Ha ha very funny [shrugged off]
Viren: But Jeevika, if I would've followed ur suggestion, then it would 've been a great loss 4 u. I mean u purposely would've lost a perfect romantic husband like me!
Jeevika: Oh, is it? Patha nahi tha mujhe!
Viren: But jo bhi ho, just imagine, I got scared by ur warning, decided not to marry u, then I seriously would've lost a beautiful and a childish yet sweet wife like u! All thanks to me, my decision to marry u, and only u was firm!
Jeevika was over-whelmed to hear this. Viren went to the balcony.
Jeevika: Virenji...
Viren: Sedhi baat no bakwaas... clear hai!😉
Jeevika: [irritated] What the hell, Viren, whenever i try to respect u, u just get around on my nerves.
Viren: Jeevika, u just don't need to freak out to tell something, just tell me the matter, without any Ji-'s cz I know that u'll never call me like that! And most importantly, it doesn't suit ur personality.
Jeevika: [gave him a backhug] I know... but still... I want to...
Viren:Ok so now , which soap ru gonna try on me? Lux or Camay?
Jeevika: [hell-irritated] lux? Is that ok with u? If not, i'll buy another soap , that suits ur standard!
She was about to leave, but Viren held her arm and drew her closer to him!
Viren: Ithni nakhre, it doesn't suit u Mrs.Vadhera.
Jeevika blushing
Viren: Oh god, ur blushing. I s this true?
Jeevika: [punched him] Shut up Viren! Actually i just wanna tell u that... ''I...''
Viren: Hmm... u just want to tell that, u love me and u presence had influenced u, u really feel sorry for behaving rudely to me at the first place, but now u loves me more than anything. I'm ur all in all. Am i right Jeevika?
Jeevika was totally taken back.
Jeevika: Aapko kaise patha?
Viren: Jeevika, I'm ur husband! I can even figure out ur small change in expression.
Jeevika: Then y didn't u tell this before, I needn't have to worry like this!
Viren: Ahaan, so it's my fault. I've cleared my part before itself. Now it's u who is pending to reveal ur feelings?
Jeevika: [smiling] Now that's done!
Viren: What do u mean by ''done''? Hello, i told those sentences instead of u, nd by the way I was sure of the fact , that u love me like hell, but ur scared to reveal it, just checking how u're gonna present it. But frankly speaking Jeevika, ur presenting is just below average. I'm givin u a D+.
Jeevika: [jaw dropped] Hello, this isn't any Annual Exam, that u can grade me according to my performance! I just wished to reveal my feelings to u.
Viren: [teasing way] U reveal ur feelings like this, in this way!
Jeevika: Th n u better explain it to me 'Love Guru'?
Viren: Are u sure? Bardaash kar paogi!
Jeevika: Why not?
He gazed, turned her to the other side, nuzzled her neck. She started gettin nervous. He carried her in his arms, laid her on the bed, gave a sweet peck on her lips. Jeevika, ur my life, ur destiny, ur my aim, ur my ulitimate. I love u. Dekha!
Jeevika: [tears rolled down from her cheek, she hugged him tightly] I love u Viren. I love u!
Viren: [hugged her back] Love u.. Now where were we?
Jeevika's eyes met his. She smiled back nd escaped from there!
Viren: Not again, but still, ur presentation isn't that good!
Jeevika: I'll bear it Viren😉
In the hospital
Asha: Wow dude, ur husband is 10 times brilliant than u!
Jeevika: Ya, over-brilliant! I just can't imagine y the hell , he keeps on rattling that my presentation was bad!
A patient who is resting on the bed: Guess, u haven't opened urself !
Jeevika: [went towards her] Aunty? Aapki surgery kal hai na? To so jao! Tomorrow is a big day 4 u.
Patient: Beta, u 've got such a caring husband, nd u can't reveal ur feeling to him. Too bad!
Jeevika: Par, i've already confessed my feelings.. He's nt satisfied. It isn't my problem.
P: Maybe he wished to hear more from u.
Jeevika reached home, she was asusual late, Asha husband dropped her home. SHe kept her bag on the table.
''I really don't know y Viren, but everyone supports u like nothing. Aapko ithni hi fan following, but u itself tell me na, what more do i need to tell u. [sneezed] Jawab do na? Viren?''
She went to the washroom, found the lights on...
''Why aren't u answering me? U've made me fall into a great trouble!''
No response. She knocked the door, but the door opened, she found him missing.
''Viren, aap?, Y didn't he reach home, till now?'' She tried calling him, but he his phone was switched off. She started gettin nervous. She checked the time, it was 11:30pm!
-Navya-
shobrakapooor2013-01-23 10:00:31

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friday has come but where is the update...can't wait more now...continue soon dear...

11 years ago

wow friday ...!!! Hahahahahahaha now we'll get an update

11 years ago

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11 years ago

haaye finally friday has comewaiting for UPDATE!!!

11 years ago

Friday on the waay!! Cant waait

11 years ago

hope we're getting un update tomorrow :) caNT wait!

11 years ago

plz meand good story :)

11 years ago

awesome updatey did u stop heredo udpate soon and PM me please

11 years ago

Waiting Friday aa jaaa😭

11 years ago

Its getting interesting now. Waiting for the next part..

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