hello TASians ...how r u all ?? so u all must be exicited to see me...na...u shud be ...cz im gonna update my next chappie😊... before tht thanks for all ur comments...and likes...it is very encouraging for a first timer like me😃😳...
ok nw i will stop giving bhashan ...and let my story speak a volumes...


MY FAVOURITE PART :

this  time

he calls her princess and apne haath ko uske shoulders pe rakhna holding her protectively  and assuring himself tht she is fine...

and the winner is ...
kulsum_virman
second time your the winner ...congo ..!!! 😃

congo  👏 ...party time for u na ???
congratzzz...🥳🥳🥳

so here goes an update dedicated tokulsum_virman..enjoy dear ...😃😃

Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 18...

Virat in calm voice n... maanvi irritated voice...😆

Virat and manvi reach 19 # cross...

V : manvi ...get up...ghar nhi jana hai kya?? Yahi sone ka plan toh nhi ??

M : virat don't  be so mean ...2 min...aur pls..

V : hey princess get up ...hum last stop par pahunch chuke hai ...aur toh aur driver aur conducter bhi utar gaye hai bus se...!!...maanvi utho ...ghar nhi jana kya??😕

M : viraattt...so mean  of u!!!??? iska badla mai jarur lungi!!!😡

V : ok ..jaisey tumhari marzi ...filhaal ghar chalo ... Tumhare ghar pe sab pareshaan ho rahe hongey...😕

M : nhi honge...virat..maine unhe call karke bata diya tha ki mujhe late ho jayega...uske baad hi meri mobile ki battery khatam ho gayi...😡 (still in mood to sleep)

V : ok fyn ...toh ur highness...kya hum aap ke permission se...iss empty bus se utar sakte hai???😕😕😆

M : uhmmhmm...(still closing eyes..)😆

Virat gets up ...and turns to give hand for maanvi ..and sees her sleeping ...

V : arey ye toh phirse so gyi!!!! Maaannnvviii...shakes her up...😕

M : nw her sleep is gone...viraaattt ...dikhta nhi hai kya ki mai so ri hu??😡

V : but princess ye sone ki jagah dikhti hai tumhe??? 😕(questioning in calm voice with lifting his one eye brow)

M : uhhh  k fyn chalo...badla jarur lungi mai!!!😡

They get down n start walking ...towards ..choudary nivaas ...it ws little far from the 19 # cross bus stand...

They wer walking...ooopss srry oly virat was walking manvi was toh sleep walking with open eyes with support of virat...!!!🤣

V : manvi bas thodi der aur...bas tumhara ghar aa jayega tab tak thik se chal lo

M : virat shut up ..!! jis din tum mere condition mai honge na tab tumhe pata chalega!!😡

V :ok ok srry princess... he turned to see her...but he saw something else ...the goose bums on her hand ..she ws feeling cold ...😲

V : maanvi tumhe thand lag rahi hai kya??     M: nhi viraat!!! (she said no cz she knew if she wud say a yess thn he wud gv her ..his jacket ...and thn he will start feeling cold...so she didn't want him to suffer in cold)😳

V : ha ..vo dikh raha hai mujhe... 😡(she looks up to him...) tum sach kyu nhi bolti??(confused) He stops ...n removes his jacket and makes her wear it...😳

M: virat tumhe thand lag jayegi...  V :isiliye tumne kaha ki tumhe thand nhi lag ri hai ...😡

M :hmm...        V :manvi ek baat acche se dimaag mai daal lo ..agar tum thik ho ...toh hi mai thik hu ...warna mai bhi bimaar !! samjhi??😕

M : haa haaa...samaj gyi !! par abhi tumhe bhi thand lag sakti hai ??  😡

V : haa par...     M : (maanvi hugs him syd ways pulling him closer to her ) ab thand dono ko nhi lagey gi!!😳

V : virat smiles... intelligent princess... (kisses her forehead😳😳)

They walk for another five mins...n they reach choudary nivaas... it was 11 : 20 pm (maanvi acting a bit shy -shy, quiet ..n not bold...she is acting like jeevika in the show...😳)

V :yeh lo maanvi tumhari manzil aa gyi...    M : hmm...byee... kal office subah kitne baje??

V : ...hmm kal koi khass kam nhi hai so 11.00 am wud be fyn I guess...😛

M : hmm ok ...byee...and she goes near the gate...comes back ...

V :kya hua??😕   M: good night.. ..bolna bhul gayi...

V :good night...(smiles) ... she goes near the gate...comes back ...again...

V : ab kya hua????? 😕  M: jacket dena bhul gyi...(she removes the jacket and gives him)

V : ye tum kal bhi toh de sakti thi...   He keeps it in his hand      M: koi baat nhi ...she goes near the gate...and turns...and signals him to wait...    she runs inside the villa...and cums again to him...

V : rukne kyu bola?? 😕  M: (she shows the car keys...) ye car keys ...car mai jana...transport nhi milegi...and smiles...😊. (to this gesture of maanvi virat was completely overwhelmed..nt like he ws gonna cry n all😆😆 ..but he felt her love for him...)

he took the car keys... srry nt took... maanvi forcibily kept the car keys in his hand...😆

V :iski kya jarurat hai maanvi..     M: jarurat hai ...chup ...kuch nhi sunna mujhe u r taking the keys thts it...!🥱

Virat was really very touched by this ...he ws admiring her...n ws smiling...

M : ...car lo n  drive home ...aur ha pahuchte hi call karna mat bhulna...she smiles...and turned to go  but virat stops her...by catching her wrist...

M : ab kya hua??? 😕    Virat pulls her wrist...and she dashes on his chest ...he moves his  hand to her waist ...and he kisses her forehead...she just looks down ..and blushes...☺️

V : thns...(she looks up to meet his gaze ..with confused look😕) nt fr the keys... for coming in my life...thns to you...😳

She blushes hard now☺️☺️☺️☺️...virat leanes in and kisses her cheek ... he ws about to tell her something...but she not able to bare more... pushes him..n runs off... insyd the villa n closes the villa main door...!!

V : areeyy mai toh bas  gud night ...hehhe 😆😆..pagal ladki ... (and a pair of eyes wer watching virat n maanvi all this tym near the choudary nivas...)

He takes the car n leaves...to vadhera mansion...

Here maanvi climbs the stairs to her room as fast as possible...to reach her room...but stops seeing a figure in front of her...

M : (stammering) tumm ...tumm...aa ...abhi tak ...soo...soye nhi??😲😲

D : nhi di..mai kaisey so sakta ho?? Jab meri jawaan di ghar ke bahar ho?? Pata hai kitni tension ho rahi thi mujhe😆😆...(suppressing his laughter) Mai bas sone hi ja raha tha...ye dekhne ke baad ki aap sahi haatho mai hai...😈.(smiles wickedly)

(remember na ...??  tht dabbo is KARAN WAHI ?? forgot awat?? view pg 60 then )

M : daabbee!! Tu ...kehh ..kehna ...kkk ...kya chahata hai??

D : di mai yeh kehna chahata hu ki ..apko...mere hone wale jiju ke saath ... sahi salamat dekhne ke baad ...mai sone hi ja raha tha...😃 (smiles)  (yes dabba was the person seeing virat n maanvi😆😆😉)

M : dabbe ...meri jaann...mera bhai...tu toh mera sabse pyara bhai hai na!! Bol na ki tu kisi ko nhi btayega!! Bol na!!!😃😳...(buttering him...)

D: kyu di ?? isme bura hi kya hai ?? virat accha hai !! iss ghar mai sabko pasand hai... toh kyu nhi😕😕

M : accha matlab tu nhi manega??😡     D : nhi ...

M : thik hai phir ...mai bhi  Riddhima ke barey mein sab ko bata dungi !!

D: DIII!! Nhi plss..pls... plsss..plss mat batana di mai aapke pair padhta hu..plss..di...😭

M : hmm...thik hai ..bol ..tune kuch dekha??? 😆     D : ha di !! bahut kuch ... (smiles) mera matlab hai nhi di kuch nhi...😕😕

M : gr8 ..!! mai sochungi ..kya karna hai..she pushes him away from her bedroom door..and she enters n locks the door...

D : (from outside) dii pls mat batana...😭      M: tu meko aise pakaye ga toh... mai bata dungi...!!😕😕

D : bye di..good night...in sweet buttering voice😆 ( and he leaves from there...)

MANVI POV

Yaar bach gyi tu maanvi ...thnk god...dabba tha agar koi aur hota na toh ..tera toh murder hi ho jata!! 😆hehehe...anyhow dabba ne dekha kya ...jab mujhe virat ke kiss kia?? Dekha hoga toh??😲😲 ...Toh kya maanvi forehead pe hi toh kiss kia tha !! chalta hai ...waisey bhi mere paas bhi batane ke liye bahut kuch hai 😲😆😆!!!thank god ke mujhe riddhima ka naam yaad aa gya warna toh meri band baj jati😕...!!!Anyhow chill kar maanvi...change kar le aur viraat ke phone ka intezaaar kar...😃😳

She runs to take a shower..changes into her shorts..and loose pink colour tee... and hops into the soft soft..bed of hers...staring her phone...for virats call...she waits for nearly 20 mins...and after tht she gets a msg...

M : msg itni raat ko??😕 Kon kar sakta hai???... Viratt? Virat ne mssg kyu kia?? Maine usey call karne bola tha na...she opens the msg...

" mai ghar pahunch gaya princess...good night ..."

M :abhi iski khabar leti hu...!! 😡😡 She calls virat ...

Virat was all set to sleep...    areyyy princess ka call...??!!  Picks up the call...

V : princess soyi nhi abhi tak??😲

M : virat tumne mujhe txt kyu kia?? 😡Maine tumhe call karne bola tha na...?😡

V : im srry ..vo mujhe laga ...ki  tum so gyi isiliye ..i didn't want to distrb u...😊

M : mai kaisey so sakti thi virat ...?? Ye jane bina ki tum ghar safely pahunche ya nhi ...tumhe meri chinta hai ...par mai tumhari chinta nhi kar sakti kya??😕

V : oh ..toh miss..manvi choudary ..mere liye pareshaan hue ja ri thi...mere call ka intezaar kar ri thi...!!

M : haa aur nhi toh kya?? ...with this she bit her tounge...😛

V :ooohh ...toh tum ...accha chodo ..mai tumhare gaal lal se aur maroon nhi karana chahata😳😆

M : thns for tht...!!!    

V :but im sure ..tum ussey se bhi burey shade mai blush kar ri ho..!😆😆

M : hmmm... Ok gud nyt..raat bahut ho chuki hai ...byee..😕

V :ya...bye ...n good night...(both didn't cut the call with this ...maanvi was waitng fr virat to cut d call n virat for maanvi)...hey princess...u ther??😕

M : yep...bolo...   V: I LOVE YOU...  M : hmmm ..i knw..  V : kya hmm ..?? jawab do !!!   M : hmm...😕

V : maanvi jawab do !!   she was blushing in all shades..ever possible...☺️    

M : hmmm..

V : princesss...im nt gonna cut the call until u reply...

M : (in one breath) I LOVE YOU gud nyt...😆

Cuts the call...

V : areyy...kat bhi diya!!!!😆  yeh ladki mujhe pagal bana degi fr sure...!!

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