hello TASians ...how r u all ?? so u all must be exicited to see me...na...u shud be ...cz im gonna update my next chappie😊... before tht thanks for all ur comments...and likes...it is very encouraging for a first timer like me😃😳... i know i wasnt gonna update par wat to do IF is tooo addictive 😆
ok nw i will stop giving bhashan ...and let my story speak a volumes...


MY FAVOURITE PART :

this  time
haa di ..mai aapko mere hone waale jiju ke saath sahi dekh ke sone hi wala tha...!!!

and the winner is ...
kulsum_virman
third time your the winner ...congo ..!!! 😃 kya guess karti ho yaar 😆 😉  i hope u continue guessing like this ... i knw tujhe yeh baat hazam nahi ho rahi but you are the winner yaar

congo  👏 ...party time for u na ??? 
congratzzz...🥳🥳🥳

so here goes an update dedicated to kulsum_virman..enjoy dear ...😃😃

Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 19...

Next morn...

Virat was sleeping...his phone rang...

V : hello (in sleepy tone..)🥱

K : hmm...lagta hai raat ...kafi chain se guzri...😕

V : (hearing his voice...his sleep was all gone)...karan...!!

K : kya pehchana hai!! Waisey ..kal raat ko tho bacha liya apni item ko...par aagey se kaisey bachayega??

V :tumhari himmat kaisey hui ussey item bulane ki???tum apne aap ko samajte kya ho??😲

K: shant vadhera ..shant.. itna gussa accha nhi ...kahi mai tumhara gussa manvi par na nikaal du... kal toh tujhe ek warning dene ke liye call kia tha...par ab se no warning...oly action ...bachayega na apni item ko??? toh bacha lena!! Dekhte hai ...tu kya kar sakta hai??? Kal toh sirf trailor tha...😆😆

V :karan pls...😕manvi ko iske bich mat lao...pls... tumhari dushmani mere saath hai toh tum ussey kyu bich mai laa rahe ho ???

K : maine tujhe pehle hi iss ka jawab de chuka hu  ki mujhe tujhe tadapte hue dekhna hai ...so maanvi ko tujhse durr karke hi mai tujhe tadapte hue dekh sakta hu...😃!! Aur ha...maanvi ka haal puch lena...aaj kahi phir se..truck se na takra gayi ho...!!!😆  Bye...

V :heelooo?? Hello karan...damn...maanvi ...maanvi ko call karta hu...!! 😲

He calls maanvi ...

V :maanvi phone uthaooo...!!! Commn pic up the call damn it..😕😕

He tries again...

V :maanvi itni der kyu kar ri ho?? Uthaooo ...kahi karan ne jo kaha vo sach tho nhi..!! (he ws just gonna jump out of his bed)😲😲😲 bt to his relief ...

M : ha bolo...virat...!!😊

V : maanvi itna derr kyu lagaya phone uthane ko ?? mai darr gaya pata hai.. (though he was much relifed hearing her voice but he was tensed😳)

M : areey mai ...vo ...uhmm...chodo na kuch kaam tha kya??

V :maanvi maine pucha ..ki tumne itna tym kyu lagaya ??

M : virat kuch nhi chodo na...😵(irritated a bit )   

V :manvi batao...abhi  ...      she gets irritated  and blurts out...

M : MAI SHOWER MAI THI!!! (bites her lips...)

V : oh...thik hai..!! (he calmed himself down)  😳

M: oh thik hai..bass?? mujhe laga tum meri taang khichoge..u r unpredictable!!! (she hits her head...)😆😆 (n thts it she gave the chance to be flirty )

V :oh so tum chahati ho ki mai tumhari taang khinchu...!!... hmmm...so tum shower mai thi uhhh ...mere bina vo bhi ...??!! 😆😆😆 🤣 (he smiled )

M : uhhh!!!(shocked) ...(blushing tone)virat...kya  keh rahe ho... tumhe pata bhi hai??

V : yapzzz ...bahut acche se...!!  😆     M : tum besharam hote ja rahe ho ...!!! 

V : aur tum laal...  M: uhhh??😕

V : blush ki wajah se...!! 😳     

M : hmm...actually nt red..maroon...n she blushes more n smiles...n lets out a small laugh... ☺️

V: ohh..so mera itna gehra asar hota hai tumpe.??  

M : ovisly DUMBO!!  😕        V : aisey kyu ?? (sounding silly)🤔

M : coz I LOVE YOU dimwit...!!! (n she bit her tounge) ...

V : uhhh yesss.. finally u said it first ...!!! I love u 2...princess... 😃😃

M : aaahh...    V :maanvi kya hua... (tensed) 😕

M : towel khisak...(in a funny way bangs her head to the wall near her cz she knew wat ws coming her way...)🤣🤣🤣  uhh kuch nhi...tum bolo... 🤔

V : (smirks)😉 maanvi ...sambhalo yaar ..pyar mai itne bhi mat kho jao..ki tumhara..towe...

M : SHUT UP vadhera...dare u speak one word😡😡 ... besharam...bye 😃

V :bye princesss...😊

She cuts the call immediately...and runs to shower...again..

V :crazy girl...smiles😃...and reality strikes him...karan ...ka kya karoon?? Kahi vo maanvi ko ...nhi viraat vo maanvi ko kuch nhi kar sakta...tu bas confidence rakh ...sab thik hai ...tu kuch galat nhi hone dega...!!   ryt ...mai kuch galat  nhi hone dunga...!! 😊😊

He goes for change...and reaches office...

Suchi (receptionist)  : good mrng sir...!!

V :good mrng ...maanvi aayi ??

S :no sir..

V :ok ..aaye toh cabin mai aane bolna k...

S :sure sir...

It ws 1:00 pm...and there ws no sign of maanvi...he calld up suchi frm his cabin...

V :maanvi aayi?? 😕       S : no sir...      V : hmm k...

V :yeh maanvi kaha reh gyi yaar...kahi...😲😲 ..nhi aisa nhi ho sakta...

He got scared ...the thought of losing her shivers his soul..he panicked he ws damn scared ...he had an blank expression...he picks up phone to call maanvi ...and

M : im srryyy  ... Srryyy.. srryyy... srryyy... srryyy... Srryyy ..im sooo srry ..vo traffic mai atak gyi thi ...😕

Im really very srry virat im late...!! (she ws huffing puffing...breathing heavily...) she entered his cabin...

Virat gets up frm his chair..and walks towards her...maanvi thought " le maanvi ab toh tu gayi ..ye tujhpe baras padega.."

He comes and hugs her tightly ...to feel her presence...to console himself tht she ws fine n with him 😕 😳 ...manvi ws already breathing heavily ..due to running ...and cz of his bone breaking hug...she ws crushed more😕 😆...she managed to say..

M :virat...dard ho raha hai...(uneasy)b😕

V :uhhh ...im sorry maanvi (with her voice he came back from his shock ) im srry maanvi ...dard ho raha hai kya?? Did I hurt u???😕 im so srry ...

M : it's k virat ...   V : maanvi kaha thi tum yar?? Tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya aaj...ek call toh kar deti

M :virat traffic..(puppy face😭)..im sryy ...i knw ke tum tensed the par mere phone ki battery dead ho gyi thi ...im so srry...(slight tears😭😭)

V : maanvi ...its k... evn im so srry fr hurting u...thoda jyada tight  hug kar diya na...!😕

M : it is k virat ..i understand ke tum tensed the... ...ahh ye sab chodo batao ...kyu bulaya tha..??😲

V : arey tumhe kuch dena tha...      M : kya ??  

V : aankhe bandh ...no cheating 😃    M : ok ... ..

V : no cheating k...     M :   ya I get it vadhera...!!!!😆😆

Virat quickly goes near his table ...removes something from a box ..hides it behind ..and comes back again...to maanvi...

V : so ready ??       M : uhhhmphhh  ...

V :kholo aapni aankhe...😊

M : kaha hai gift???... Mujhe toh nhi dikhai de raha!!! 

V : u dimwit maine tume abhi tak gift diya hi nhi... 😆

M : toh aankhe kyu kholne boli...??😕

V : shut up yaa kitna baat karti ho ...shhhshhh     M: hmmm...😕

(both looking in each others eyes...n lost) look look - hawa hawa...

V : maanvi tum ...meri life ka sabse important hissa ho ...so iss important hisse ko ..meri taraf se ek chhota sa...kimti toufa...with this he slides the bracelet into her hand 😳...(still looking at each other...maanvi didn't evn hv glance at the bracelet she didn't evn realize him sliding the bracelet...she ws lost in his words...😃😃😳)

M : thns...         V : par ek baar toufe ko toh dekh lo...😆  

M : (she comes back from her trance )ohhh  haan...kaha hai toufa??( innocently...)

Virat laughs slightly...and says lifiting her wrist... "yaha"...she is nw awestruck...it ws a beautiful diamond bracelet...😳😳😳

M : virat yehh...she looks upto him ...this is beautiful...thnk u...she sees the bracelet again and tears form in her eyes...😭

V :aaayy stop no tears...       M : hmm...   they hug...maanvi had her hands around his neck and virat around her waist...they were hugging... Whn virat aparted but their forheads wer touching...😳😳

ok so thats it ... stay tuned to Virman FF : Tere Aane Se ...

NOTE : 

the diamond bracelet ... 

ab jaldi se cmmnt karo...warna meko black mailing start karni padegi ... 😉

ufff...this was quiet BIG ...!!!now TASians ...hit likes ...😉 do leave you opinions important for me.. participate in the game guyzz...other wise shud i stop it ???anyhow now meet you all with my next promo or update dnt knw ..jo bhi hoga..till then take care and keep loving me the way u used to...!!!

lavanya_sweet2013-11-02 11:30:46