Chapter 1

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Character Sketch

 


  Reyaansh Singhania


Age: 17


Std: 11th


Hobbies: Dance and Basket Ball


BFF: Swayam Sekhawat


Nature: Flirty


  Kriya Ghai


Age: 16


Std: 10th


Hobby: Only Dance


BFF: No one yet...


Nature: Simple


Part 1: Jab They Met

Swayam: kehte hain zindagi kisike liye nahi rukti. Par hume bahut kuch sikha jaati hai. 25 saal... can u believe it? 25 saal baad milne jaa rahe hain hum unse.

Sharon: han... yahin hi nahi hota ki.. 25 saal bith chuke hain.

Abhay: par aap kisse milne ja rhe ho?

Sway: wahi jinhone hame pyar karna sikhaya...

Uday: kya matlab?

Sharon: bahut lambi kahani hai.

Abhay: hume sunni hai.

Swyam: Toh suno... ek anokhi.., The Hate Love Story...

Uday: hate love story??? Yeh kaisa title hai?

 Sharon: jaisi story hai... sabse unique, bilkul unhi ki tarah...

Abhay: yeh story aapke dil k baht karib lagti hai, kya un logon k milne k piche aap dono ka haath tha?

SwaRon looks at each other and smiles.

Swayam: haath toh tha.. lekin milne k piche nahi... Sayad alag hone k piche...

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25 years ago

A school bus comes and stops. All the students inside are shouting and chilling. A girl climbs up. She perhaps she was the new admission. She had a different attitude which makes her different from others. When she comes all becomes silent and starts glaring at her. She was nervous as it was her first day at school. There was no seat blank for her so she went backside and stood up there only. The bus started but there ws a silence continued. Suddenly the bus braked and she fell upon someone who was sitting on the side seat. She was so scared that she closed her eyes and holds anything she found tightly. When she opened her eyes, she found a handsome face looking at her. His one hand was over her waist and other on her cheek (perhaps trying to protect her). Her one hand was round his neck and other holding his shirt tightly. She looked in his eyes, it was as deep as ocean and his face was so cute. He looks into her eyes, it was something most beautiful he had ever seen with a charming face. Their eye lock was broke by the bus horn. She got up asap and he let her to. A boy comes.

Boy: "REY!" u r ok?

Rey:  ah.. Swayam... yes m ok!

All comes out of the bus. The girl was going when rey was continuously looking at her. To his surprise, she turned back and smiled. He smiled back and she left.

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Sharon: aise mile the school k sabse memorable love birds. "REY and KRIA"...

Abhay: par inki love story suru kaise hui?

Swayam: itni jaldi nahi... love toh sayad pehle se hi tha. Bas dono jaan nahi paaye. Aur story... wo suru hui nafrat se...

Uday: kya??

Sharon: kaha tha na... Hate Love Story!

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Prayer Class

Kria comes and all other girls makes her stand at the first of the row coz her height was short. She stood and looked front. There was a guy staring at her.

Kria(in mind): ye... Kaun hai yeh? Kahin toh dekha hai.. par kahan? Soch kria soch! Come on!! Oh yah! Yeh toh wahi hai jiske upar main bus me gir gayi thi... kya naam hai... han. Rey!

Rey(in mind): yeh mujhe dekhkar itni confuse kyun hai? subah toh mile the, itni jaldi bhul gayi? Bhul gayi toh bhul jaye. Mujhe kya?? Waise naam kya hai iska? Come on rey, kuch bhi ho... tu itni tension kyun le rha hai?

Lunch Break

Kria was looking here and there. She was alone and need company. A girl comes.

Girl: hello!

Kria: hi!

Girl: hae, I m Sharon... Sharon Rai Prakash. M ur class mate.

Kria: Kria, Kria Ghai...

Sharon: so... friends?

Kria: friends. Lunch kar len/

Sharon: han... tum chalo main aati hun.

She leaves. Sharon looks aside. There was Rey standing. She ups her thumb saying him done and he replied with d same.

Rey: Kria...

He smiles.

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Rey and his friends are sitting in the canteen.

Vicky: yaar tum logon ko wo ladki yaad hai... subah wali?

Nilesh: kaun subah wali?

Amar: kahin tu us bus wali k bare me toh nahi bol rha?

Vicky: han han wahi wahi...

Swaym:(in a teasing tone) acha??? Wo jo Rey k upar gir gayi thi???

Rey glares at him.

Bharat: a vickky... Kahin tu uske saath time pass karne k bare me toh nahi soch raha na???

Amar: time pass kya? Yeh toh sala line mar raha hai uspe.

Nilesh: waise ladki hai toh different... try karte hai... kya bolte ho?

Rey: stop it yaar guys! Nayi hai wo. Aur phir... abhi sirf 8th me hai kria aur tum log...

Swayam: ek sec, ek sec, kya bola tu?? 8th me hai kaun???

Rey: kria!

Swayam: kya bat hai Rey, pehle hi din uska naam pata kar liya??

Rey: aisa kuch nahi hai Swayam...

Vicky: kuch hai ki nahi mujhe nahi pata... par Rey yaar... plz tu mere liye use pata de na yaar plz..

Rey: Vicky, tu pagal ho gaya hai.

Vicky: come on Rey, tut oh aisi chizon me expert hai na yaar... plz...

Rey: Vicky...

Vicky: tu mere liye itna nahi kar sakta?

Rey: chal.., koshish karta hun.

Vicky: rey... u r d best!

Rey: I know!!

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Abhay: ab yeh kya kahani hai?

Swayam: yeh toh nahi maloom. Par isse Rey aur Kria ko kareeb aane ka mauka mila. Ek dusre ko janne ka mauka mila. Kahin na kahin sayad they were falling for each other...  par...

Uday: par kya?

Sharon: wo dono hi ye sab except karne ko taiyaar nahi the. Ya sayad wo abtak itne mature nahi the ki apni feelings samajh payen. Kria khush thi, use Rey ek saccha dost ban kar mila tha.

Swayam: aur Rey, dost toh wo tha... par asli maksat wo bhula nahi tha. Use Kria ko Vicky k liye set karna tha. Koshis toh usne kai baar ki par... pata nahi kyun lekin nahi kar paya...

Sharon: waqt bitta gaya. Ek din Vicky ne Rey ko sawaal kar hi dia.

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Vicky: mujhe tujhse yeh umeed nahi thi Rey.

Rey: kya?

Vicky: itna time chala gaya, par teri taraf se ek bhi + point nahi aaya jisse me kria k kareeb ja sakun.

Rey: Vicky main koshish kar raha hun na...

Vicky: rehna de. Tu mujhe bewakoof nahi bana sakta kyun hum sab jante hain k ye sab tere bayen haath ka khel hai.

Rey: stop it Vicky. Maine kaha na main koshish kar rha hun...

Vicky: of course tu apni taraf se poori koshis kar raha hai. lekin mere liye nahi, apne liye.

Rey: what?

Vicky: sach toh yeh hai Rey k Kriya k saath tu apni setting karna chahta hai.

Rey: what nonsense?

Nil: I think... Vicky sahi keh rha hai.

Rey: nilesh...

Amar: han Rey... warna itna lamba interval toh tune pehle kabhi nahi liya.

Rey: pehle nahi liya that doesn't mean ab bhi nahi lunga... try to understand guys!

Bharat: understand kar rahe hai iss liye toh bol rahe hain. Come on Rey, hum tere dost hain, humse kya chipana? Accept it.

Rey: kya bol rahe ho tum log yaar guys...

Swayam: Rey, agar dhooaan utha hai, toh matlab kahin na kahin aag toh lagi hi hai.

Rey: swayam tu bhi??? Kamse kam tut oh mera yakin kar.

Vicky: ab ye dikhawa karne ki koi zarurat nahi Rey... sach kya hai, yeh sabko pata hai.

Rey looks everybody all eyes were telling one thing only, what Vicky said. His BFF, whom he believed the most,  swayam. He too had questions in his eyes. Rey took a long breath.

Rey: ok. Fine. Kuch na ho kar bhi agar tum logon ko lagta hai na ki kuch hai... toh thik hai. ek mahina. Sirf ek mahine k andar, Kria meri bahon me hogi. Mujhse apne pyar ka izhaar karegi. Sirf 1 mahine me, Rey ki Jaal me Kria Phasegi...

to be continued...

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10 years ago

Awesome concept
1st part was superbcan U please use smaller fonts? Large fonts don't look good.. :)

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