Chapter 2

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Part 2: will you be my Girl Friend??



Krisha were returning from her couching classes when shefound Rey standing at the road side.

Kriya: Hi... Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Rey: kisika intzaar...

Kriya: intazaar?? Kiska?

Rey: kisi khas ka...

Kriya: aap ka ghar iss taraf hai?

Rey: nahi... kisiko kuch kehne jaa raha hun.

Kriya: oh...

Rey: suno... tum meri Girlfriend banogi?

Kriya: kya? Kya bak rahe ho aap? R u crazy??

Rey: of course I m... just for u only!

Kriya: stop this nonsense! Sharon, let's go.

Rey: are... Kriya suno toh. I know tum kya soch rahi ho... par Kriyayahi sach hai that I love u... I really love u Kriya...

Kriya: I don't like jokes!

Rey: its not a joke! It's the truth... think about it han...!

Kriya: aap...

Suddenly they saw their skul teacher and they proceeded inopposite way.

Next Day (School Bus)

Rey: principal ne agar kal k bare me pucha toh kya bologi?

Kriya: yahi... k khali rasta tha, hum akele aa rahe the tohbhaiya ne saath diya.

Rey: wow! Superb! But don't say bhaiya... I think u care forme.

Kriya: bhaiya nahi toh kya saiyan bolun?

Rey: han wo chalega...!

Kriya makes an O face and Rey winks smiling.

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Days passed. Reyaansh tried his best to make Kriya fall forhim. But it wasn't too easy.

One day (school canteen)

Kriya and Sharon are sitting as usual. Rey comes with a packof chocolates.

Sharon: dekh Kriya... tere liye kya mast chocolates aa rahehain yaar...

Kriya; shut up Sharon, bakwas band kar... mujhe nahi chahiyechocolate woclate.

Rey comes to them.

Rey: Hi girls!

Sharon: hi!

Kriya tries to avoid him.

Rey takes the chocolate and gives it to Sharon.

Rey: lo Sharon.. yeh tumhare liye.

Sharon: mere liye? Thnx!

Kriya looks at them surprised. Rey watches her expression.

Rey: Sharon... tumhe nahi lagta kuch zal raha hai???

Sharon: jal raha hai? kya?

She then sees Rey looking at Kriya.

Sharon: I think u r right! Smell toh mujhe b aa rahi hai.kyun Kriya???

She stands up.

Kriya: mujhe koi smell nahi aa rahi hai... main jaa rahi hun.Tu chocolate kha.

She leaves. ShaRey laughs and have a high-five.

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Kriya is sitting in the park.

Kriya: khud ko samajhte kya hain? Honge wo smart... par main bkacchi khiladi nahi hun. Itni jaldi haath nahi aane wali. Bade aaye zal rahahai kuch... main nahi jalti kisise.!

Rey: toh mene kab kaha k tum zal rahi thi?

Kriya looks aside and shocks seeing Rey sitting beside her.

Kriya: aap... Yahan kya kar rahe ho???

Rey: oh hello! Yeh tumhari private property nahi hai k mainnahi aa sakta.

Kriya: mujhe aapse baat nahi karni.

Rey: mujhe karni hai.

Kriya: par mujhe nahi karni na...

She stood up and about to go when Rey hold her hand and dragher. She was exactly oh his lap!

Kriya: Reyaansh... Reyaansh kya kar rahe ho chodo mujhe... koidekh lega.

Rey: dekhne do.

Kriya: Reyaansh plz leave me koi aa jayega.

Rey: aane do... waise bhi, tum toh bahana banane me expert hona...

Kriya tries her best to be free but she was in a stronghold. Rey smiled mischievously and left her. She looks into his eyes and getslost in it, Rey smiled.

Rey: ab hume koi nahi dekhega??

Kriya gets her senses back and stands straight.

Rey: waise... kal picnic par toh aa rahi ho na???

Kriya: picnic?

Rey: han..

Kriya: dekhungi.

She was about to go.

Rey: Kriya!

She stops.

Rey: I Love You!

She smiles unknowingly and leaves.

Rey: kab tak Kriya? Kabtak dabaogi apni feelings? Kabhi nakabhi toh... bologi hi.

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PICNIC

Sharon: Kriya jaldi kar... late ho jayenge.

Kriya: han tu chal main aati hun.

Sharon leaves.

Kriya: acha khasa picnic pea aye the, patanahi ye museumdekhne ka idea kise sujh gya... sara mazaa kirkira...!

After sometimes bus leaves. Kriya comes running out of tent.

Kriya: hi! Stop ruko mere liye!

Then Rey comes.

Rey: shit! Main phirse late ho gaya!

Both look at each other.

Rey: bus toh chut gayi!

Kriya: nahi.. hum chut gaye hain!

Rey: ab kya Karen?

Kriya: rasta dhunte hain.

Rey: han chalo.

Kriya: alag alag dhunde jaldi mil jayega.

Rey: lekin agar hum kho gaye toh?

Kriya: ek sec...

She takes out wool from her bag.

Rey: yeh kya hai?

Kriya: iska end aap pakdo, ek main pakadti hun. Alag alag jaatehain, jise rastsa mila wo dusre ko pukarega, aur hum khoenge b nahi!

Rey; wow! What an idea! Lets do it.

They goes in opposite direction. After sometime, Kriya getsbump with an elephant and shouts. Rey hears it and runs to her direction. Both runsand gets bump to each other.

Rey: kya hua?

Kriya: kya? Kuch b toh nahi.

Rey: toh chikhi kyun?

Kriya: main??? Nahi toh!

Rey: Kriya, jhoot mat bolo.

Kriya: main jhoot nahi bol rahi hun. Sach yeh hai k aapakele darr rahe the issliye daudte hue chale aaye.

Rey: oh madam! Dar main nahi tum rahi thi!

Kriya: oye hello! Main kisise nahi darti. Apna khayal khudrakh sakti hun.

Rey: acha? Yeh baat? Toh thik hai. rakho apna khayal. Main jaaraha hun.

Kriya: haan toh jao na. mujhe b koi zarurat nahi hai aapki.

Rey: fine! I m going!

They go in different direction and throw the wool they werehaving. After a while it starts darkening and raining.

Kriya: pata nahi main itna akadti kyun hun! Reyaansh sejhagda kar ke apne pair par khud hi kulhadi maar di maine. Ab toh andhera honelaga hai, barish bhi badh rahi hai, aur dar bhi!

Then she hears some sounds of wild animals. She startscrying in fear. Suddenly she feels something on her shoulder. She turns andabout to shout when he keeps his other hand on her mouth. And that's Rey!

Rey: ssshhh! Chillana mat! Main hun.

Kriya haves a breath of relief and hugs him tightly crying.

Kriya: acha hua Reyaansh, jo aap aa gaye... main bht dar gayithi... mujhe laga main...

Rey: Kriya, Kriya relax! Main hun na... don't cry.

Kriya: par... (she looks at him) hum toh alag alag raste gayethe na? phir aap yaha kaise?

Rey: main janta tha k aisa hi kuch hone wala hai... isliyemain tumhare piche piche hi aa raha tha.

Kriya: apko pata tha??? Kaise?

Rey: bus... aise hi!

Kriya: nahi Reyaansh! Aise hi nahi... batayiye aapko kaise patatha? Kaise jante the aap? Kaise jante ho aap mujhe..., itni achi tarah se..?

Rey: Kriya...

Rey: come on Reyaansh! Tell me! Why???

Rey: because I love u!!! kyunki pyar karta hun main tumse! Sayadapni zaan se bhi jyada! I love u Kriya... I really love u very much!

 They had a long eye lock,lost into each other's eyes.. Rey was looking into her eyes with love and careand Kriya was looking into his eyes with love and happiness. The rain made themoment more romantic!

Their eye lock was broken by the bus horn.

Kriya: lagta hai sab log aa gaye.

She was going when he hold her hand.

Rey: apna zawaab toh deti jao.

She tries to free her hand.

Rey comes close.

Rey: jabtak tum zawaab nahi deti, main haath nahi chodunga.(she looks at him) main chodunga nahi Kriya.

Kriya: wo... main...

Rey: tum kya??

Kriya: wo...

Rey: bolo...

Kriya: Reyaansh main...

Rey: Kriya tum???

Kriya: main b aapse pyar karti hun. I Love You Too!!!

He left her hand in happiness and she ran away!


to be continued...

15th May 2014

tried my best! hope u like it... waiting for your opinions guys!


sorry for typos!! 

 

Love,

Shirisha.


Link to Part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3983043?pn=9

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finally rey try his best to get kriya attention but it difficult and not that easy some howrey had made her anger by give chocolate to sharon and kriya left that p[lace in fume and to calm her down rey went behind it... and finally had a talk and he some howconvenience her to came for school picnic and they were left along as both of them hadmissed their bus and some how said their feeling to each other... do continue soon and pm me

10 years ago

finally rey try his best to get kriya attention but it difficult and not that easy some howrey had made her anger by give chocolate to sharon and kriya left that p[lace in fume and to calm her down rey went behind it... and finally had a talk and he some howconvenience her to came for school picnic and they were left along as both of them hadmissed their bus and some how said their feeling to each other... do continue soon and pm me

10 years ago

great update... pm me wen u update next

10 years ago

great update... pm me wen u update next

10 years ago

nice updtfina;ly rey made kriya to confesstnx fr pm

10 years ago

nice updtfina;ly rey made kriya to confesstnx fr pm

10 years ago

Hey u dn't send pm frm ur pm id anymre? I dint gt the pm

10 years ago

Wow just awesome.i loved the update so very much.continue soon

10 years ago

Hey u dn't send pm frm ur pm id anymre? I dint gt the pm

10 years ago

resunresAwww uh updated haahhh... Finallyyy*Hugs* Shirishooo... ❤️coming to the update... hayeee Superbbbrey ka propose karne ke style ke to *KYA KEHNA..*Road ke beech main hi asking girlfriend bangogi?? 😲Next day Kriya ka reaction bindaasssBhaiya nahi to kya Saiyaan 👏 n Rey the besharam usme bhi okay...the canteen scene was too cute... *Kuch jal raha hai* 😆The picnic scene... wasss awsssuummm... and Confesssiooonnn.. 😳😳😳plzz plzz plzz plzzz update sooon..
Dewdrops.ShaKun2014-05-15 22:49:50

10 years ago

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