Chapter 10

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'what should I do? Shall I call the police? Or should I tell Arjun first? But, the bomb blast…….and bhoomi…………..i……what shall I do?' Suraj is driving furiously on the road, he then decides to talk to Arjun in person.

In the goenka house, people dressed in white are entering and leaving . Suraj's car enters the premises and he is shocked to see the large crowd standing outside the mansion. Suraj gets out of his car and starts to walk towards the goenka house, his heart pounding so loudly that it can be felt in his throat. 'kaun tha factory mein? Aaj tho Sunday hai, factory tho band thi.' Suraj's mind is filled with questions. Just then some one grabs his shoulder.

'tum! Yaha kya dekhne aye ho. Tumhe tho bahut khushi hogi, hain na? Arjun aaj barbad hogaya. Arjun ki takhat mitee mein mil gaye. Main tumhe ander nahi jane do ga!!!' Arjun grabs suraj's arm and pushes him out of the gates. The press reporters come running forward to catch all this on camera. 'Arjun, mere baat suno. Kaun tha bomb blast mein?!' Suuraj yells at Arjun, but Arjun continues to push and hit Suraj. At first Suraj doesn't fight back, but seeing Arjun out of control, Suraj grabs Arjun and pushes him against the wall. Arjun has hatred in his eyes, his face burning with rage, tears start to flow out of Arjun's eyes. 'Arjun, I have complete sympathy, I know that you treat me as your enemy, but I came here for a specific reason. Please listen to me. Calm down.' Arjun looks up at Suraj and pushes him off himself, 'Sympathy? And you! You've destroyed me! My family, I'll kill you and all your coward friends. Want to hurt me? Hit me, hit me……but why my family???' Arjun pounces at Suraj one more time.

'suno!' Before suraj could say anything, Arjun punches him in the cheek, 'Arjun, bhoomi!' Suraj manages to get a few words out of his mouth, his mouth now covered in blood. 'Bhoomi? kya hua bhoomi ko?'. Suraj explains the whole situation to Arjun, and just then shefali arrives. 'yeh kya ho raha hai. Ghar mein kitna kuch ho gaya hai, aur aap dono lar rahe hai. Bhoomi ka phone tha, who is waqt mandir mein puja karne gayi hai. Suraj, she was not kidnapped. Tumhare akhen ka dokha ho ga. That must have been some one else. Chalo arjun, pundit ji bula rehe hai.' Arjun and shefali walk back inside the house.

Suraj is left standing, 'Shefali, I don't know why you're lying. I know that who I saw was bhoomika.'

Inside the Goenka house, everyone is quiet. Shakuntala has tears flowing out of her eyes, she is starring at the picture opposite her. She looks lifeless, with no expression on her face, she continues to have tears flowing down her face. Shefali is standing with Arjun in the door way, Shefali puts her hand on Arjun's arm for reassurance. Gunvati is holding onto Yuvraj and is crying loudly. Mansen is sitting down next to his wife, looking distraught. Baisa is crying quietly, looking at her shattered family.

Two bodies are lying side by side, both are encased in flowers, the pundit is performing the last rites.
Arjun can't bear it any longer, the dead silence, the rituals, the crying…..Arjun runs out of the house, Shefali follows him. 'woh, mere bade bhai nahin the, woh mere pittah the, woh mere dost the. I loved him, he was my life. Why did he leave me? Why? He left me, his wife, his mother and family. What will I do without him? I miss you bhaiyya…..i miss you', Arjun starts to cry and kneels on the floor 'Bhaiyya, please come back, I'll never tell you off, I'll never……please baiyya' Shefali kneels down beside Arjun and holds him in his arms. It starts to rain, both of them are hugging each other, Arjun cries louder and louder, whilst Shefali consoles him 'Arjun, himmat se kam lo. Please be strong, if not for your self, then for manasvi bhabi. Manasvi bhabi is lying in the hospital, she doesn't know what her kismat has in store for her. You are her favourite devar, she believes you, trusts you. For manasvi bhabi…..please, control yourself.'

Keshav is sitting in the hall, he quietly turns to his dad and whispers in his ear, 'baba, bhoomi kaha hai? Usko is bure (bad) waqt mein, yaha hona chahiye.' Baba and keshav both look worried.

The pundit then announces that its time to cremate the bodies. Baisa closes her eyes, she's unable to see the events taking place. 'Manasvi, she doesn't know that when she opens her eyes, her life will be gone. Her satya is no more. Mera beta….mera beta' Shakuntala holds onto her husband and hides her face. She continues to cry.

Both the bodies are carried out of the house. The pundits start to recite the holy words, and lead the family members out of the house.

'VISHAKA!!! VISHAKA…..VISHAKA' As the second body is taken away out of sight, Gunvanti starts to scream louder and louder. 'meri beti, bhagwan, itne badi saza!! Meri phool jaise beti. Vishaka….vishaka' Mansen holds onto Gunvanti, he stops her from running outside, Mansen continues to stare at Vishaka's face, he remembers her child hood and lets out a small tear. Yuvraj is trying hard to stop his tears , his eyes red, he continues to walk out of the house. The holy rituals get louder and louder. 'VISHAKA!!!' Gunvanti falls to the floor.

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Bhoomi is tied to a chair in the dark. She lays unconscious, her hair open and face covered with sweat.
'eh, ladki. Open your eyes! We've got orders to keep you alive.' Water is splashed onto Bhoomi's face, she slowly opens her eyes and takes a few deep breaths.

'tum kaun ho? Please, let me go. Mujhe ghar jana hai.' Bhoomi starts to cry, 'please, mujhe chordo'. The men around her start to laugh and one of them walks forward towards bhoomi, 'mein chordoo? (he laughs)' The man slaps bhoomi, they all start to laugh again, just then a mobile phone rings, 'madam, ladki theek hai. Aap jo bolo vohi ho ga. Waise ladki hai bahut khoobsoorat……..koi baat nahin, kaam ho jaye ga, lekin…hamari fees?' The man puts the phone down and starts to smoke a cigarette, he blows the smoke on to Bhoomi's face. Bhoomi starts to cough, she turns her face away from the guy. 'sun ladki, zada nakre mat dikhana, samaji? Waise, shefali madam ko tumse kaun si dushmani hai?'

Bhoomi hears shefali's name and looks up in horror.

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'how sad.I must go to meet gunvantiji and shakuntalaji. Two deaths in the family and one kidnap! Vishaka was such a lovely girl and satya was a son every maa wishes to have. Manasvi is in intensive care, she'll be devastated when she regains consciousness. I feel so sorry for them. Who could have planned the bomb blast?' Chaiji has tears in her eyes and walks towards suraj, 'beta, Bhoomi tumhari bhabi hai. Yeh tumhara farz hai, you have to find her.'

'chaiji, I don't know who's behind the bomb blast, but I have my suspicions on shefali concerning the kidnap. I'll find bhoomi. She called me bhaiya in the shopping centre, I have to protect my little sister.' Suraj walks out of his house and chaiji smiles to herself 'acha laga suraj, tumne Bhoomi ko apna samja'

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Comments (11)

bubbles u r bored of wat i missed ya hney

19 years ago

yes please..waiting onit....

19 years ago

guys, i'm really sorry about the delay. Its getting a bit boring now. i'll try and write some thing now.

19 years ago

bubbles where r u missing u nd ur fan-fic hney

19 years ago

bubbles how long we have to wait?

19 years ago

hey bubbles we all r waiting for ur fic pls post it soon.just can't wait anymore.

19 years ago

bubbles u rock its really cool i m waiting for d next part hney..it will b so cool nd intresting

19 years ago

brilliant!brilliant! love ur twists.....keep up the good work

19 years ago

Pls solve the probs soon which u r going to create between Arjun & Bhumi.Pls bring Shefali's sacchai in front of Arjun & the condition of Bhumi .PLS DO IT FAST.

19 years ago

why problems....and now why kidnaping...and that's a good twist...vishakha too died? but why mansen is not regreting on his deeds... please continue......

19 years ago

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