Chapter 11

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heya guys (and girls), I will be ceasing my stories soon. Why? I hear all you ask, and the very simple answer is that 'all good things must reach an end'.

So, I've got to speed up the story a little

In the Heritage house, every one is quiet. The atmosphere is dead and manasvi sits in front of the Krishna idol, she stares into krishna's eyes all day long. 'Manasvi, beta. Khana ka lo. Satya ab nahin hai…….please beta' Shakuntala bursts out into tears and tries to shake manasvi, this has no impact on manasvi.

Gunvanti is lying on her bed, she has been made unconscious using sedatives. Every time she opens her eyes, she reacts wildly and begins to scream out for Vishaka.

Two days have passed since the deaths of Vishaka and Satya, every one is still recovering from the shock.

Arjun is sitting in at the police station trying to find the where abouts of bhoomi. 'Inspector, I can't believe that you can't locate her! She's my wife! Its been 2 days now. I want you to look into my brother's death and please try and find my wife.' Arjun's voice becomes louder and louder, Keshav holds onto Arjun and pacifies him.

As Arjun and Keshav walk out of the police station, they see Suraj walking towards them. 'Arjun, I want to tell you some thing very important. Please listen to me.' Arjun continues to stare at Suraj, his nostrils start to flare up. 'how dare you try and talk to me. Soon you will be in jail, what do you think? Huh? I know you have a hand in Suraj bahiyya's death. I'll never forgive you. I hate you, and always will.' Arjun walks past suraj, Suraj has a look of annoyance on his face.

'suraj, you know what Arjun's going through right now. I think its better if you stay away from him.' Keshav follows Arjun. 'Keshav! Jab baat tumhari behan ki hai, tum phir bhi suna nahi chahate' Keshav stops walking and looks back at Suraj, 'Bhoomi? Tum kya jante ho ?' Keshav's heart starts to beat faster and faster. Suraj starts to retell the happenings of the shopping mall. Keshav starts to cry and kneels down on the floor 'Bhoomi, bhoomi, voh kitne taqleef mein hogi. She never harmed a fly, why is this happening to her?' Keshav puts his hands over his face, and continues to cry.
'Keshav, I promise you, I'll find her. Don't worry, you take care of Arjun and his family'

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Arjun is sitting hopelessly in his room, tears start to roll down his cheeks, 'Bhaiyya, why did you leave me? You were my elder brother, you guided me, who will guide me now? How will I find Bhoomi? She must be so scared. I can't find her any where. The two people I loved the most have left me……………….' Wiping his tears, Arjun stands up and starts to leave his room when he is stopped by Shefali.

'Arjun, you have to be strong. You are the only strength for Manasvi bhabi. As for Bhoomika, every one is trying their best.' Shefali wipes Arjun's face and hugs Arjun, 'Arjun, everything will be fine, I'm with you'.

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Bhoomi is tied to a chair in a dark room. 'I have to get out of here, but how?' Bhoomi's mouth is tied, she starts to move her wrist, just then some one walks in, Bhoomi pretends to be asleep. One of the men shout 'hey, I think she's fainted. Shefali madam told us to keep her awake. Quick, untie her. Throw her in some cold water' The men start to untie Bhoomi, they carry her out of the room. One man carries bhoomi to a distant pond, he puts Bhoomi down and tries to put some water in a pot.

Seeing this opportunity, Bhoomi gets up and starts to run, she runs so fast. The man sees her running and tries to stop her, but she's gone to far ahead. 'oi!!!!! Ladkhi, stop, I'll kill you when I get you.'. Bhoomi continues to run, blood starts to drip from her foot. She approaches a road and hides behind a tree. She tries to get her breath back, when the man running behind her grabs her, he slaps her and pushes her to the ground.

A car stops on the road, Suraj steps out of the car and punches the man standing next to Bhoomi. (guys I'm going to skip the fighting scene)

Bhoomi is hiding behind a tree, and continues to cry. Suraj places his hand on Bhoomi's shoulder and places his jacket over Bhoomi. Bhoomi turns around to face Suraj and gives him a hug. 'Suraj bhaiyya, main….maine…..' Words have difficulty coming out of Bhoomi's mouth, Suraj smiles and strokes Bhoomi's hair 'Bhoomika, lets go. Don't worry, I'm here now. You called me brother right?' Bhoomi looks up at Suraj and nods 'well, you're my sister. So listen to your brother and stop crying. I know shefali's behind this. I'll make sure she doesn't trouble you again'

Right guys, this part was a bit boring, but it was necessary in the story, the next part will see Arjun and Bhoomi reunited, and some fire works will burn,lol. The part will be better I promise.

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Comments (17)

bubbles plz plz con t it soooooooooooooon

18 years ago

yes....bubbles please continue...

18 years ago

bubbles please continue soon pretty please everyone is dying to read your next part

18 years ago

Hey Bubbles Please continue ur imagination!!

18 years ago

OHHH.But when will u post the last(most probably)part of the fic?

19 years ago

hey guys, i'm not going any where, i'm here,lol.

19 years ago

Bubbles we will really miss u and ur fics.

19 years ago

bubbles we will miss you

19 years ago

hey guys!!!!! I'm soooooooooooooooooo sorry. firstly, i didn't know where my fan fiction was,lol. You guys are toooo sweet, thanks for the great response. i was on my vacations, which will be ending in a few days. The course i'm studying is hard work, and i'm very busy. i hate to break it to you all, but unfortunately i won't be writing any more. actually, since you guys have been soooo kind, i may just round up the fan fiction in a nice way. A special treat for all my friends on this forum. once again, i'm very very sorry. love ya guys bubbles

19 years ago

Hey bubbles WHERE ARE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU?????????????????WHEN WILL U POST THE NEXT PART??????????????

19 years ago

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