Chapter 16

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part 16 with the continuation of part 15..dekho main tumhara bhai hoon agar koi prob hai..[he indirectly points rahul], ya kisi "se" problem hai, to tum mujhe bata sakti ho???[pari then thinks n looks at joydeep]...[this part ends] [same scene]
[pari looks at joydeep n then she says]P-joydeep pata nahi, main tumhe kaise kahoon..[thn she smiles] i think main rahul ko pasand karne lagi hoon..J- kyaa? shobha bua jaanti hai iss bare mein[he asks with curiosity][then suddenly pari looks at joydeep n the smile goes from her face n she becomes tensed] actually joydeep,main khud ye baat der se samjhi hoon..are abhi to main ye bhi nahi jaanti ki rahul mujhe pasand karta hai ya nahi..iss waqt tum sirf ye keh sakte ho ki meri feelings ek tarfa hai[then she says with more tension,wid tears in her eyes but still the tears didn't touched her cheeks,n joydeep understands the whole situation]main sach keh rahi hoon joydeep,iss tarah maine kabhi kisi ke liye feel nahi kiya,jis tarah rahul ke liye feel kar rahi hoon..[joydeep, then smiles at pari, and takes his hands gently n says] tumhe mujhe explaination dene ki zarroorat nahi pari, main sab samajh gaya hoon..iss waqt tum rahul aur apne ristey ko mazboot banao..shobha bua ko abhi kuch batane ki zaroorat nahi[then pari smiles,n whn he was about to leave..pari says from the back..]joydeep, tum bhoomi se bohot payar karte ho naa[then he gets bit upset n looks back at pari n says]pyar karna,aur pyar pana...dono alag baatein hai pari[thn he leaves the terrace,n pari looks at him]...[next morning pari was going to mandir wid archita n tulsi dadi..they were just going to sit in the car whn rahul suddenly arrives..three of them looks at him]Tulsi- are rahul beta tum? itne subhe? R- haan dadi..[n smiles] vo mihir sir se kuch kaam tha mujhe..kuch files leni thi, isliye [archita thn interupts] rahul tumhe mihir dadu ne bataya nahi[ rahul wid curiosity looks at archita n tulsi] kyaa nahi bataya? [Thn tulsi interupts] vo kya hai beta..achanak mihir,aur karan ko kal hi kuch zaroori kaam ke liye banglore jaana padha..[rahul with ohh achha type reaction but he do not say anything]T- lekin beta unhone tumhe bataya nahi tha iss bare mein...[then rahul looks at tulsi n says] nahi daddi ho sakta hai jaldi jaldi mein inform karna bhool gaye[ whn he was saying this his eyes were on pari n pari was this time looking at him with smile to]R- vaise dadi aap log kahaan jaa rahe hai itne subhe(2)..T- haan beta vo hum mandir jaa rahe the..R[then smiles n says] Are aaiye naa?[n looks at pari] main aap logo ko chod deta hoon,T- nahi nahi beta? hum chale jaaeynge? R- lagta hai aap ke liye main abhi bhi ajnabee hoon[n he constantly looks at pari n speaks to tulsi] [tulsi smiles] are nahi beta aisi koi baat nahi hai[thn he looks at tulsi again] R- [thn he insists] to phir chaliye, vaise bhi mei usi taraf se office jaane vala tha,T-accha [n they agress 2 go]....part is not ended here i am going to continue this part further.dur 2 some reason i can't complete it now but just after some time i will do it..enjoy reading it!!! duyus39166.5749305556

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Great Waiting 4 u to continue

17 years ago

Great fanfic dear. Excellent work. Hats off 2 u. . I l b waitin eagerly for d next part. Newayz keep it up.

17 years ago

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