Chapter 17
Duyuus
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part 16..continuation.. R- [thn he insists] to phir chaliye, vaise bhi mei usi taraf se office jaane vala tha,T-accha [n they agress 2 go].......[in the car tulsi sits in the front n pari n archta at the back...so after driving a distance rahul tries to adjusts the mirror so he can see pari's face clearly...n then tulsi says] T- are bas bas beta mandir aagaya?[whn tulsi,pari n archita comes out of the car, rahul also comes out n says to tulsi]R- daadi[hesitatingly]kya main? aap sab ke saath mandir aa sakta hoon? [tulsi looks at him n smiles n thinks]T- lagta hai larka sanskari hai...[thn she says 2 rahul] haan haan beta aao[ thn all of them goes to mandir, n when every1 were praying pari n rahul were standing beside each other n pari n rahul closed their eyes..but suddenly rahul opened his eyes..n looks at pari n thinks]R- kehte hai ki agar bhagwan se sacche dil se kuch maango to mil jaata hai[thn he again looks at god's statue n thinks]R- bhagwan aaj mere paas sab kuch hote hue bhi, kuch khali khali saa hai...main jisse chaahta hoon bas uska pyar mujhe dilwade..[then a pundit comes]Pandit- prashad..[every1 opens their eyes n takes the prashad..[aftr tht every1 were just coming out of the mandir...suddenly at a small distance some boys passes a comment on archita, all of them looks at the boys..n rahul was just about to bash them up but tulsi stops him] T- jaane de rahul...inn logo ke saath larne se koi faida nahi..Archita- haan rahul, daadi sahi keh rahi hai...lets go,[and the boys laughs at them..but rahul tries to keep himself calm..n whn the reaches near their car suddenly one of them comments on pari....n this time rahul turns around n in a blind rage he bashes up the boys.. very badly] tulsi n pari..rahul chod do unko....[but he do not listens to any1, sudenly he see a cocnut vendor is cutting a coconut..he goes n grabs the tool from his hand n was about to kill the guy, pari thn comes quickly with tears in her eyes n completely scared she holds rahul's wrist from side..n then sudenly rahul looks in2 her eyes..pari do not say anything nor rahul but he understands tht pari wants to stop him...n many people gathers them the boys were just trying to run away..n the police reaches at the spot.]police- ye sab kya ho raha hai..? [those boys]- sahab? sahab bachaiye? ye humme maar dega..[as rahul was holding the weapon][police, was about to question rahul then tulsi n pari speaks in between...]P- [gathering some courage but still tears r flowing from her eyes] inspector inhone kuch nahi kiya...ye larke hume ched rahe the..isiliye rahul ne inhe maara..[police]- dekhiye? inko humaare saath police staion chalna parega...[tulsi] are hum aap se keh rahe hai naa iss larke ne kuch nahi kiya...vo gunde larkiyon ko ched rahe the....[police]- dekhiye madam?? ye sab police dekhegi ki kiski galati thi.. yuun saare aam raste pe larai jhagra karne vaale ko hum aise hi nahi chod sakte...[thn rahul interuptts] R- rehene dijiye daadi..main police station chalne ke liye taiyaar hoon[thn he looks at pari] mujhe kuch nahi hoga...[pari n archita were standing 2gether archita was looking tensend while tears were not stoping to come out of pari's eyes]....n thn tulsi says[ rahul tu fikr mat karna hum jaldi kuch karte hai] n then police takes rahul n those boys inside van to police station. ....................................
[part 16 ends] duyus39166.5782291667
Comments (2)
thanx 4 ur compliment dear
17 years ago
I guess u r a vry gud scriptwriter U cn sure get some space in Ektaz camp Cnt wait for d nxt part.
17 years ago