Chapter 13
Thank You guys for leaving comments....now here is Part 13 on Page 13 for you....so enjoy it!!
The girls and guys are the beach and its the next morning...the girls are all ready to give the guys their punishment of spending the day with them the way the girls want....Meanwhile back at home...the parents are busy preparing for Summit and Kumkum's engagement party....
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Sooo first its Kavya and Anjali's turn....
Anjali is all ready and Kavya knocks on the door...
Anjali opens the door..While Kavya just stares at her and pushes her into the room...locking the door behind him...with an mischevious grin on his face...
Anjali: Kavya wat do you think you are doing??
Kavya: Spending the day indoor with you...with an evil grin...
Anjali: Pushes him...No Way...we are going SHOPPING!!
Kavya's face turns from a happy guy to a completely sad guy....NO...NO SHOPPING!!!
Anjali: Gives him a glare...i suppose i make the decisions today!
Kavya: Yes...but Anjali you kno i hate shopping....
Anjali: Too bad...now follow me...and yea grab my bag from the bed...as she walks out...Kavya follows like faithful dog...cursing his luck and summit's idea to taking a defeat against the girls...
Anjali: Did you say something??
Kavya: Ofcourse not Angel...
Anjali: Good...now start driving to the mall...
Kavya: Yes MADAM...anything else?
Anjali: NOPE...thats all for now!!..and looks away and smiles to herself... while Kavya is just mad!!
Anjali: Wait...Wait...Kavya take a turn here...
Kavya: No..the directions say we dont take a turn until next two miles...
Anjali: Oh come on...do you trust the directions over me?
Kavya: Of course...you girls dont kno anything about driving or cars or directions...
Anjali: Gives him a mean glare...MAYBE WE DONT...but we can smell Shopping....and i smell shopping here....so take a U turn and come back and make a left...
Kavya: Gives up as Anjali sounded mad...he does what she asks him to dooo....when Kavya pulls up he is shocked as he sees no Mall...or shopping...but bunch of CARS....it was a Car Show...with Cars racing eachother...he looks at Anjali...
Anjali just smiles....and then speaks: I remember when we were in LA you told me how much you would love to be in a Car Race if you had the time...so i found about this morning and decided to bring you here to make your dream come true...
Kavya feels guilty as he was being mad at her for dragging him to shop...but infact she was soooo considerate to remember him saying he loves Cars once and doing something sooo nice for him...he reaches out from his seat and gives her a kiss on her cheek...Thanks Love...thats soooo sweet of you....infact you wanted to go shopping right??...i will buy a brand new car for you...and we will race in that lucky car!!
Anjali gasps with exitment....she loves races too...so her and Kavya both look trough the Car Show....and find a beautiful car to race in...they buy the car...and the car looks like this..
Kavya names it Angel after Anjali and zoom they go the racing track....
Kavya wins multiple Races...while Anjali sits next to him cheering...Noticing a diffrent type of Kavya in him...she loves him this way...and is sooo happy that he is happy....later they have a romantic diner at a Cuban Restuarant and spend the whole night talking into each others arm about thier future together...
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Mukti is all ready and waiting for Prem when he arrives he is shocked to see Mukti dressed like this:
While Prem is dressed like this:
Prem: Where do you think we are going??
Mukti: Mountain Hiking....where else?
Prem: Excuse me? but if u havent noticed we are at the beach and there are no mountains around...
Mukti: Yes there are...there is one only 3 hours away...so you better get changed...
Prem: There is no way in h*** i am driving 3 hours there and back plus mountain hiking...u go change...we are not going there...
Mukti: YES WE ARE!! i decide where to go...so if you want you can come...or you can sit in the room by yourself be bored...
Prem: Fine...go by yourself...i will hang out with the hott girls here...its better than some stupid Mountain Hiking...
Mukti: Fine...the choice is yours...i just have to everyone you didnt pay your punishment....
Prem: No you wouldnt!
Mukti: OH yes i would...now hurry up and get changed i dont have all day...
Prem: Groans and gets changed...they both leave...in the car...I cant believe i am doing this...its all because of you...
Mukti: You whine too much...
Prem: I...I whine??? PLEASE...you are the one who never shuts up...BASANTI...
Mukti: SHUT UP PREM!!!
Prem: ITS UD!
Mukti: No its not...ITS PREM!!!!
Prem: Sticks his tounge out...and then gets embarrased as he know he made a fool out of himself...
Mukti just smiles secretly as his childish behavior....they get there....
Mukti's cell rings and she smiles looking at the caller id...Prem wonders who it might be...when Mukti says: SAMIR??
Samir: Hey Muks!! Where have you been its sooo hard to get in touch with you...
Mukti: Oh i am just out for the weekend at the beach with...
Samir interupts: Ohhh checking out some hott guys!!
Mukti: Hott guys?? please...there are no HOTT GUYS AROUND HERE dont worry...Prem gets a little mad at Mukti's comment as he thinks he is pretty hott!!
Samir: Lol...anyways i called to say thanks to you...for hooking me up with Kaajal...she is a sweetheart...i owe you a big one...
Mukti: SMiles as she is happy to bring them together...Meanwhile Prem is assuming something else...and is really jealous!!...Aww anything for you Samir...
Samir: You are like my best friend!! Kaajal wants to thank you too...but she is out with Jassi...anyways i g2g head to work...call me later...
Mukti: I will call yes as soon as i get back home...samir and mukti hang up when mukti looks at Prem who is all mad...
Prem: Didnt you say you love him?? i say that to Kaajal all the time...
Mukti who knows Prem is trying to make her jealous tries to have a little fun with this...
Mukti: Oh really? I dont say Love you's to people in front of strangers...
Prem: Stranger? i am a stranger?? fine...but i dont mind to confess my love to my love in front of anyone...
Mukti: Is that so?? then why dont you call Kaajal and tell you love her!!
Prem: Ofcourse...i will call my love right now...
Mukti who is assuming Prem is really going to call Kaajal and make a fool of himself is shocked when her phone rings and its none other then PREM...
Mukti looks at Prem all shocked...Prem hangs up the phone and comes really close to her...I dont need a phone to tell her i love her...coz she is right in front of me...Mukti's heart stops for a second...
Prem pulls her to him...and yells...I LOVE YOU BASANTI....and because they were in the mountains...it starts echoing...and Mukti just blushes looking deeply into his eyes...she whispers back....I Love you too...
Prem: I am sorry...i didnt hear you...for the first time BASANTI isnt loud enough when she needs to be...and laughs...Mukti hits him on his shoulder playfully...and yells really loudly...I LOVE YOU TOO PREM!!
They both hug eachother tight and it seems like the time has stopped before them....they ditch climbing the mountain and decide to take a long romantic drive back to the hotel....on the way...Mukti and Prem appologize for their misunderstandings and how Mukti always loved him..but wanted him to say it first...and how Samir and Kaajal are together...Prem tells her he loved her too but was afraid of the pact he made to her brother...and was happy that he had a chance to be with her but when she started ignoring him...he felt hurt...they both kept confessing their love to eachother over and over and just kept talking lovey dovey to eachother....
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Ok guys here was the next part....now on tomorrow episode....
Summit and Kumkum's date....plus does Angad and Kripa confess thier love too???
LEAVE LOTS OF COMMENTS....I AM HOPING FOR ATLEAST 8 TO GET THE NEXT UPDATE....
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Comments (14)
what did i tell you yesterday tshamita, it will be more than 8 ...but you ff deserve more, maybe you doesnt know but your ff is a hit .. plz do continue... Lots Of Love Aisha
17 years ago
plz cont soon..u got ur extra comments u wanted subhag39256.6211921296
17 years ago
hey dear i just read the whole ff and its really good. and funny continue soon.
17 years ago
awesome part ___________ sana
17 years ago
Hey man, I am a silent reader to ur FF. and i really love it. Itz just the best. I will try to comment. U really deserve more than that but I might not be able to comment for every part. But I will try my best. i really loved the way Prem confessed his love. Just waiting for Angad and Krips to confess!!!! Anywayz cont. soon.
17 years ago
First i would like to thanks: X0-PuZen, iluvpulkit,mandy07,subhag,brainychild92,rima791 for leaving lovely comments...really sweet of you guys!! But we havent reached the goal of 8 comments and as we still need 2....so no update until i have 2 more comments!!
17 years ago
hey just caught up i love this fanfic because it has my 3 favorite, world's best, cute looking and adorable couple #1-AK, #2-PM, and #3-SUKU and i had question weren't they in chicago???? or in india???? anywayz lovely ff continue soon
17 years ago
omg that was so cute that call thing and everything... wonder wat kripa is going to make angad do.. and kumkum to summit... continue soonn
17 years ago
that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY they confessed!!! and the way he called his love and mukti's phone rang was too cute!!! i cant wait for angad and kripa now to confess...tooo good!!! i love ur ff.......plz cnt soon!!!!!
17 years ago
omg i luved how Prem confessed his luv dat was so sweet i thought he was actually gonna call kajaal n make a fool outta himself PMz partz had me blushin lik crazy i couldn't stop there sooooooooo cute update soon lukin 4ward 2 AKz confession
17 years ago