Chapter 14
Thank you for everyone who commented...that was very inspiring...
Now first here i want clear some things
Aaisha you said tshamita it will be more than 7...my fanfic deserves more...lol i am ek_sweetladki..not tshamita..i think u misunderstood me for someone else...
And Rima791...you are right my Fanfic is based in Chicago...but when i was updating mine...i was reading someone elses...and got too carried away and said GOA...and after i updated mine i realized it..and then had the whole bus trip and all..so didnt get to change it...but assume its just some beach in Chicago which is hard to believe but...hey its all about imagination right?? lol...but i am glad u paid attention to this tiny detail...it shows u really like my Fanfic...
OK SO HERE IS PART 15 on page 15!!
Its time for Summit and Kumkum's date....
Summit knocks on the door dressed in casual pants and shirt as per Kumkum's instruction...
Kumkum opens her door...and Blushes when she sees..Summit completely shocked with his mouth open starring at Kumkum from top to bottom...who is wearing this:
As Kumkum being the Sanskari girl..would have never wore such a HOT outfit...
Kumkum: Summit!! Summit!! SUMITTTTT...she yells really loudly bringing Summit back from his Dream Land...
Summit: Oh yea...Sorry...i was just...Kumkum you look soo hottt...and gives her a kiss on her cheek...
Kumkum cant stop blushing...she pushes him away...Summit we need to go...
Summit: No i think we should stay in here...with a mischevious grin...
Kumkum uses all her force pushing Summit out the door...Summit cant get his eyes of Kumkum and neither can all the other guys around her...
Kumkum didnt have any specific place planned for the date...she just wanted to spend some quality time with Summit so she wanted to go dancing and have a romantic dinner and watching the sunset with Summit at the beach....sooooooo romantic right?
Soo Summit takes her dancing at a Spanish Club...and Summit and Kumkum have a blast dancing to Salsa...and then Summit takes her to a beach Restuarant and has a private Deck booked all for them...Kumkum and Summit are having Dinner while Summit is putting his hands under his pants pocket trying to find something...
Kumkum: Summit are you ok?
Summit: Yes...Oh yea...i am...i am fine...Found it!
Kumkum: Found it? Wat are you talking about...
Summit: Oh nothing...soo the salsa club was fun..
Kumkum: Yea..it was...
Summit: Now stands up and goes in front of Kumkum and gets on his knee...and opens up a ring box(yes guys...its exactly what u think it is)
Kumkum is all taken back and is holding her breathe...
Summit: Kumkum since the first day we met...i knew that you were the ONE for me...Your angelic face your simplicity and your smile i fell in love the first time i saw you...There is no one in the this world that i care about more than you...because of you i cant stop smiling...you have just made my life brighter and i want to fill your life with happiness just like you have mine...so please complete my life and marry me??
Kumkum now has tears in her eyes....she is touched by Summit's words and is soooooooo happy to have found true love....She whispers Yes...and Summit lights up pulling her into a tight HUG....they stand like that for what seems like hours....they slowly pull away and Summit finally puts a ring on her finger...and it looks like this:
simple yet breath taking just like her...
The both then take a walk on the beach hand in hand while watching the sunset...
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Wait did u forget Angad and Kripa?? yes!! its their day out too...and Kripa isnt dressed any less hotter than Kumkum...
Kripa is wearing what Ash is wearing in this pic...and Angad is wearing what Hritik is wearing...
Angad looks at Kripa...is really mesmerized but tries to act cool...
Angad: Hm...not bad...
Kripa who was trying to knock Angad out of his senses is surprised at his reaction...Not bad??...Please i look Hott...
Angad: Says you?? Please Krips you dont know what Hott is...
Kripa: Oh really?? but i know for sure that Hott isnt you...
Angad: Do i smell something burning....Ssssshhh...oucch Jealous...
Kripa gives him a Mean glare while Angad smiles wickedly....
Kripa: I dont have time for this...we better get going...
Angad: Couldnt think of a come back? You girls are just soo dumb all you care about is Make Up...if u spend half the time you spend on making yourself FAKE...on Studying...you...
Kripa: Ohh please stop giving me a lecture DAD!! Pulls Angad out the room...
Angad who is almost about to trip straightens himself out...gets dragged by her out..
Kripa has decided to go Scubba Diving...as she loves water...and has always wanted to do try Scubba Diving...Angad loves water too...and is just as exited...they both get to the middle of the ocean with a trainer and are all exited to go in...
Kripa gets into the water first and then Angad...the trainer starts explaning things to them...while Angad starts playing with Kripa in the water...
Kripa: Stop it Angad...wat are you doing?
Angad: Huh?? i dont kno wat u talking about...
Kripa: Oh please...i know u too well...
Angad: Do you now Miss. Kripa Bajaj...
Kripa: Angad...i am trying to listen...just stop it!!
Angad: Stop accusing me!! i am not doing anything!!
Kripa turns around to smack him when she sees he is not even close to her...(Angad moved away after teasing her for a bit..and he wasnt the one touching her...but who was touching her than??? before i tell you...Kripa freaks out..yelling SHARK!! SHARK!! SHARK...
The trainer and Angad both look at her shocked and than see that there nothing but little fishes around Kripa...Kripa who was over whelmed started assuming the worst...she swims closer to Angad and hugs him tight not letting him go...Angad who is worried for Kripa is always really glad she wouldnt let go of him...the whole scubba diving was canceled and they were back on the boat heading back to the beach and Kripa still wouldnt let go of Angad...
They reach the beach and
Angad : Kripa are you ok?
Kripa is now getting back to herself replies: Yea...i think soo..
Angad: Good coz i dont want to carry u to your room...you are too fat..and starts laughing...
Kripa: Hits him on his shoulder and Angad picks her up in his arms and brings her to her room and places her on the bed...when he turns to..
Kripa holds his arm....Dont leave...
Angad smiles looking at such an innocent face: Cant control himself and kisses her forehead..I am not going anywhere...just let me grab some fresh clothes for u...before u catch a cold...and gives her some fresh clothes to change into..while he goes into the bathroom to change himself...
When he comes out...Kripa is all ready and on the phone on her bed...
Kripa: Yea and plus some pasta...can u please hurry?? Ok thanks...
Angad: Hey wat u doing?
Kripa: Ordered us some food...all this work out made me really hungry...
Angad: Work out? please...i was the one who was being worked out...carrying u and stuff...gosh u fatty..u shouldnt eat at all...said teasingly making her mad..but to his surprise she just smiles...
Kripa: Maybe i should eat more...so u get a better work out...
Angad: Is loving this sweet side of Kripa...lately he has only seen her being mean...but now she is being her bubbly self again...and he is just happy she is back...
The food comes and they both eat happily...then they order a movie and spend the evening relaxing...
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Next Episode: Couples champing out at the beach....do the guys bother girls? Do Kavya and Summit notice Prem, Mukti, Angad and Kripa's behavior...Does Angad finally tell Kripa he loves her?? Wait and Find out...
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Comments (8)
i8 really cant wait for u to continue i really likes this fanfic
17 years ago
grt part im a new reader this is a wicked fanfic plz continue
17 years ago
yea! tht was a awesome part! i wanted kripa and angad to express their love..but i guess thts happening in the next part...plz continue i can't wait!
17 years ago
you part was: G-R-E-A-T, MIND BLOWING, AMAZING ONE OF THE BEST ...... your ff is one of my favourits... and you are also my on of the best writer plz continue soon.... i just love it!.... dieing to read the next part.... Love Aisha
17 years ago
[QUOTE=ek_sweetladki] Thank you for everyone who commented...that was very inspiring... Now first here i want clear some things Aaisha you said tshamita it will be more than 7...my fanfic deserves more...lol i am ek_sweetladki..not tshamita..i think u misunderstood me for someone else... oops... sry ek_sweetladki.... but i meant you and yes i wrote 7... was in hurry so by mistake i wrote 8
17 years ago
kewl..i luvd it!! contiue sssoooonn
17 years ago
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17 years ago
great part !!!! but u didnt writea bout pm o well had fun wit ak!! summit gettin a lil outa hand is he.lol ab propose karliya na tho line pai lag jayega.lol cont sooonn
17 years ago