Chapter 15

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now the next part
In the singhgadh valley..
After some time dharam and nivi had stopped their nok-jhok but veer and raksha still continued
Raksha:Tumse achcha to vo harsh hai..kam se kam...
Veer(interrupting):Agar itna hi pasand hai to tum hi shaadi kyun nahi kar letin usse
Raksha(really angry):Main kisi ladke se kabhi shaadi nahi karoongi
Veer:To yahin ruk jao tumhare laayak kain janwar mil jaayenge..unse shaadi kar lena
Dharam:BAS!Humme yahan ladayian nahin karni hai
Nivi:Dharam theek keh raha hai..humme shiv yatra ke liye nikalna hoga.
both raksha and veer were silent and surprised at the way their very own friends changed their mood.
Dharam:Nivi kya tum ye kapde pehan kar yatra mein jaaogi..
Veer:Dharam...mujhe lagta hai ki hume vesh badalna padega..nahin to yatra mein log humme pehchaan lenge
Dharam:Tum theek keh rahe ho veer..aage ek gaanv hai wahin jaakar hum vesh badal sakte hain
Raksha:Par hum kya vesh dhaaran karenge
Veer:Dharam aur bhabhi banenge pati-patni,main unka chota bhia aur tum humaari dasi...
Raksha didnt get right words to speak anything
Dharam(smiles):Nahin humare paas ek yojna hai..
Then he tells his plan to all four..after hearing to his idea veer holds a dissapointing look on his face and raksha bursted out in laugter
Veer:Nahin..nahin main aisa kaise kar sakta hoon
Raksha:Tumhe to karna hi padega
Nivi:raksha veer ko pareshaan karna band karo.Dharam kya koi aur raasta nahin hai?
dHARAM:Nahi veer is baar humari baat maan lo.
After some persuading lines from d veer agress to follow the plan
They go to the nearby village and then to a dress shop..now they were ready with their new get-up
DISGUISE
Dharam-as an old man with grey hair and beard(imagine dharam as the vaidji in the show)
Nivi-as an old woman and dharam's wife,grey hair(imagine sia as an old woman in the show)
Veer:as a newly wed wife,daughter-in-law of dharam and nivi(imagine the bhavishyavani scene in the show)
Raksha:as dharam and nivi's son,veer's hubby,a black moustache and a turban(imagine shera as the nai in the show)
Dharam(in a trembling old voice):chalo us mandir mein chalte hain..yatra wahin se shuru hogi
Veer:Haan chalo..
and he moves ahead of the rest three
Dharam holds him back
Dharam:Veer tum bhool gaye..tum humaari bahu ho..yun besharmon ki tarah aage-aage kaise jaa sakti ho..
Dharam brings veer back to raksha and tals her:Tum apni bahu ko apne se door nahin jaane doge
Raksha(smiles):Ji pitaji
Veer felt so very embarresed and angry but he had to do it.
All four of them joined the yatra people near the temple...after walking for some hours all the pilgrims stopped near a kali mandir to spend their night..it was sunset already
DV and RN were on the way to their tent when a middle-aged woman came to them
Woman:Namaste mera naam riti hai..main bachpan se is yatra mein jaati hoon..aap logon ko pehle nahi dekha?
Nivi:Vo darasal hum...
Riti(interrupting):Arrey yye kya aapne apne maang mein sindoor nahi bhara..(turnong to dharam)aap dono ko dekhkar lagta hai ki aapki shaadi ko 40-50 saal to ho hi gayein honge phir bhi aap inko sindoor nahin lagaate
Dharam went speechless over the talks of this uninvited woman
chaliye kaali mandir mein jaakar maaji(pointing to nivi)ko sindoor laga dijiyega..aur ye dono kaun hain?
Dharam:Ye hai humaara beta(pointing to raksha)mahesh aur ye humaari bahu-sapna
riti:Nayi..nayi shaadi hui hai..kyun?
Raksha:Ji(in manly voice)
Riti:Main to sapna ke ghoonghat se hi samajh gay thi..sach kitni susheel bahu mili hai aapko..verna aajkal koi apne budhe maa baap ka khayal thodi hi rakhta hai..achcha aap kali mandir jaiye main abh aati hoon
After riti leaves
Veer:Kya aurat thi
Raksha:Chup raho sapna...nai nai dulhan ko yun zyaada baatein nahin karni chahiye.
Veer:Raksha main tumhe..
Dharam(teasingly):Apne pati ko izzat do sapna beti....
Nivi:Ab mandir chalein..
Veer was very thankful to have nivi helpping him out of these teasingly tricky situations
iN THE TEMPLE
dHARAM took the sindoor from the aarti plate and was about to put it in nivi's maang but she stopped him
Nivi:Nahin hum abhi bhale hi duniya ke saamne shaadi shuda hain par bhagwaan ke saamne jhoot nahi bol sakte
dharam understands her and nivi applies the sindoor by herself
While on the other side
Raksha:Sapna aao main bhi tumhe sinddor laga doon
Veer:Iski koi zaroorat nahin hai...swami ji main theek hoon
Raksha:Meri pyari patni sapna kya tumhe apne pati ki lambi umr nahin chahiye?
Veer:Agar itna hi shauk hai to khud ko hi sindoor laga lijiye na....swammi
Riti:Pati parmeshwar hota hai sapna beti
Both raksha and veer were surpeised to find this woman standing just next to them but before they could give any replies riti continued
Riti:Chaliy mahesh bhaiya sapna ko sindoor lagao
Raksha happily applies sindoor to veer who had to apply all his acting talents to look happy
Now the pilgrims had to spend their night in 2-3 huge tentsfor men and the same no.of tents for the women
So the ladies were on one side and gents on the other..
dharam and nivi made to their resp.tents
when raksha started miving to the ladies tent she was stopped by a teenaged girl(TG)
TG:Arrey...kahan ghusse chale jaa rahe ho..yahan purshon ka aana mana hai..yahan sirf aurtein jaa saktin hain
Raksha:Isliye to andar jaana hai mujhe..
TG(SURPRISED AND ANGRY):Besharam...maa..maa dekho ye aadmi aurton ke tambu mein jaana chahta hai
Raksha almost fainted to find riti standing in front of her
Riti:Mahesh tum..tum aisi giri hui harkat kar sakte ho maine nahi socha tha..
Rkasha:Dekhiy mujhse..main..darasal..
Suddenly veer appeared from behind he was seeing all this for a while now
Veer:Kyun ji..aap ko sharam nahin aati..(sob)ek patni ke hote huai aisi nichi harkatein karte ho
Raksha(angry):Chup raho..tum ab baat ko aage mat badhao main keh..
Veer(interrupting):Dekhiye..maine aapko maaf kar diya ab aap pitaji ke paas chale jaiye
Raksha:Maafi nahin maangi maine..samjhi!
Both dharam and nivi come out of their tents and are taken aback to find the other two fighting
Dharam:Arey sapna..dekho beti ab shaant ho jayo(he moves close to veer)..sapna jaao apni maa ke paas jao..
Nivi:Chalo bahu rani..itni ladai karna sahi nahi
So veer goes along with nivi and raksha with dharam
hope u lykd it..please comment
 next update will be tomorrow pretty_mugdha2008-07-21 00:19:46

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Comments (9)

lol haha it was funni....pls upload sooooon good update omg veer n nivi in one room n dharam n raksha ...i wonder what will happen pls uplaod soonheaven princess2008-07-20 14:59:10

16 years ago

I loved it.. hilarious.. I CANT WAIT for next part.. update fast please

16 years ago

don't cry i'm sure everybody love your part toooooooo much will comment i found this part hilarious it's veryyyyyy funny i was laughing while reading.


esha

16 years ago

hello guyz please send ur comments yaar.....
i would like to know if u found this part funny or not

16 years ago

sorry guyz i'll not be able to update today due to certain personal problems next update on monday..vaise bhi aaj rt ka b'day hai so u can enjoy it...

16 years ago



lool...okies...cnt wait to see wha happens next...fnx shweetie! xxx

16 years ago

yeah. when raksha will be with dharam, then atleast she would be safe. it isn't easy for a girl to stay in men's tent.
hilarious one. very nice

16 years ago

brilliant.
Just wish Dharam really would hv put the sindoor on Nivi's forehead.
Waiting for the next update.

16 years ago

omg omg....dts sooo funi!...i cudnt stop laufin.......reali gd part! fnk hun...but dharam n raksha in 1 tent...Veer n Nivi in da otha...it shud be da otha way around...haha .... wah a good way to start ma morning...read ur fanfic...plzzzzz update sooooon xxxxxx

16 years ago

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