Chapter 16

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In the ladies' tents..
Veer(whispering):Bhabhi main iss tamboo mein kaise reh sakta hoon?
Nivi(smiling):Tum chinta mat karo hum hain naa.Tumhe kisi prakaar ki pareshaani nahi hone denge..aakhir tum humaare devar jo ho.
Veer felt so very relaxed after hearing to the comforting words of his bhabhi.
Riti:Sapna..main jaanti hoon ki tum apne pati ki harkaton ki wajah se pareshaan ho..par is yatra mein jaakar sab theek ho jaayega
Veer(muttering):Tum jab tak yahan rahogi to kuch bhi theek kaise hoga..
Riti:Kuch kaha?
Veer:Nahin...main kahan kuch kehti hoon..mein to ek achchi bahu ki tarah apni maa ki baat manti hoon
Riti:Sach maji kya bahu paayi hai aapne..achcha ab hum sab is reshmi chadar par kadhai(embroidery)karenge..aur shiv mandir pahunch kar shivji ko chadayenge
It was a very huge silk cloth and each woman was given the job to embroider in her divided portion
Riti:Ye kaam jaldi-jaldi khatam karke humme aarti bhi karni hai.
Veer sat next to nivedita
Veer(WHISPER):Mujhse ye sab nahi hoga...maine aaj tak aisa koi kaam nahi kiya...par aap bhi to ye sab nahi jaanti hongi kyun?
Nivi(smiles):Humme kadhai karni aati hai..
Veer(surprised):ACHCHA
Everyone looked at veer....being a newly wed wife he was not supposed to speak and here he almost screamed
Riti:Kya huha...sapna itni tez chillayi kyun..
Veer:Ji..vo..main...maaji
Nivi:Vo baat ye hai ki haan..sapna ko sui chubh gayi
Riti:Theek se aur dhyan se kaam karo sapna
All of them resumed their work again
Veer:Is riti ko to main aaj sabak zaroor sikhaoonga..
Nivi was busy doing her job...veer thought"kitna khushnaseeb hai mera bhai...bhabhi ko rajkumari hone ka na koi ghamand hai na hi koi akad..aur ek mere swami hain..vo gussail...na jaane kahan se meri zindagi mein aa gayi...mere jeevan ko itna khubsoorat bana diya...usko dekhe bina neend bhi to nahi aati.... ye main kya soch raha hoon...raksha..nahi nahi
Suddenly veer was shaken with a tremendous force..which was enough to bring him back to his real self
Nivi(whispers):Veer jaldi apna kaam khatam karo
Veer:Mujhe to sui mein dhaga ghusana bhi nahi aata
Riti:sapna jaldi kaam khatam karo..aarti bhi to karni hai
Nivi:Aap log jaaiye ye jaldi hi kaam khatam karke aati hai
When all the women leave..nivi immediately gets back to work..she finishes veer's part of embroidery too.She was fast yet the work done was fabulous
Veer was surprised to see this
Veer:Shukriya bhabhi ji
Nivi:Shukriya ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..chalo ab aarti ke liye chalte hain..wahin jaakar dharam aur raksha se mil payenge
When veer and nivi were busy in the embroidery..dharam and raksha had to face their share of problems
Everyone in the men's tent were asked to tie a pagdi around his given pair..unfortunately raksha had to tie the pagdi around a fat sleepy man as she was paired with him
Raksha:Dharam mujhe pagdi bandhni nahi aati
Dharam:Raksha jab vo aadmi tumhe pagdi bandhega to seekh lena ki pagdi kaise bandhi jaati hai
Raksha:Theek hai
Then she went to the fat man(fm)
raksha:pehle aap pagdi baandh dijiye phir main..
FM:Nahin pehle tumhari baari hai
Raksha:Pehle meri nahin aapki baari hai
FM:Main kyun..tum pehle mujhe pagdi bandho.
Raksha:main nahin banhdhoonga pagdi
both of them were almost shouting..
One of the pilgrims said"Arrey mahesh tum chhote ho..maan lo inki baat"
Raksha:Par..
Dharam:mahesh beta baandh do pagdi
Raksha gave a shocked look to dharam but he gave an assured"main hoon na"kind of smile
so she started trying hard with the turban tying project
all the men were done and had left for the aarti
now only dharam,raksha and the fat man were left
the man was snoring and raksha had tied the turban perfectly well but the problem was that her hand was also tied along with it
Dharam laughed at this
raksha:yahan mujhe paseene aa rahein hain aur aap hain  ki
Dharam:shhh...chinta mat karo main abhi sab theek kar deta hoon.
within a few moments her hands were free and dharam had tied the turban around that man
Raksha:aapne pagdi bandhna kahan se seekha?
dharam(TEASINGLY):Veer se..tumhe bhi seekhna hai kya?
Raksha:Rajkumar dharam..pareshaan mat kijiye
both of them eft for the aarti
In the kaali temple..the pandit had begun narrating kali mata's story
DV and RN were very happy to meet each other
Raksha:Nivi poocho mat ki us tamboo mein mera kya haal hua.
Veer:Dharam..mujhe nahin lagta ki har ladki ko kadhai ka kaam aata hoga..kyun?(he was staring at raksha)
Dharam:Ab bas bhi karo veer
then he moved towards nivi
Dharam:Aapko veer ne zyada pareshaan to nahi kiya naa
Raksha:Akdoo hai..pareshaan to karega hi naa
VEER frowned
nivi:raksha(waved her to keep silent,veer smiled)nahin dharam ,veer to ek susheel bahu hai
veer's smile dissapeared and raksha laughed
Nivi:raksha ne to aapko pareshaan..
Dharam:nahin nahin..bilkul bhi nahin...chalie hum thodi der ke liye madir ke peeche wale talaab ke paas jakar baithein.
riti who had heard the last line came to raksha and veer and said"In dono ki jodi to swarg se ban ke aayi hai.Boodhe ho gaye par dil mein pyaar ab bhi jawaan hai"
Veer:haan...
panditji still continuing:aur mata kaali ne bhagwaan shiv ko hi...."
riti:pata nahin jab se tum  logon se milin hoon..tumse ek apnapan jhalkta hai
raksha(mutters):aur hum jab se tumhe milein hain bas dar sa lagta hai
near the pond
nivi:aaj koi khaas baat thi ki yahan le aaye
dharam:jab tumhara saath ho to har baat hi khaas ho jaati hai..
nivi:dharam..humme dar lagta hai
dharam:kis baat ka
nivi:yahi ki kahin is jeevan ke raaste mein tumhara saath na choot jaaye
dharam:hum tumhe ye vaada to nahin kar sakte ki poori zindagi tumhara haath thamenge..par haan  tumhare dukh mein tumhe kabhi akela nahin hone denge.
Nivi(smiles):aaj hum bahut khush hain dharam..aaj jee karta hai ki hum jhoomein naachein gaayein..
she tries to run forward but something stopped her to do so..she turned back to find that her chunni was entangled in dharams kada(mens' bangle)
she comes back to the smiling dharam and tries to untangle her chunni..she was very close to dharam
he could smell the beautiful fragrance of jasmine from her body..
he was staring at this fair beuty and admiring her each move to untangle the chunni
when nivi also looked up to her prince charming..for a moment her hands stopped..everything seemed to have come to a stand still..both of them wanted to just look into each other's eyes but suddenly a loud shout of "jai kali maa" from the temple brought them back to their senses
nivi successfully untangled her chunni
dharam:ab humme wapsa chalna chahiye
nivi:ji..par jaane se pehle ek baat kehni thi
dharam:kaho
nivi:humme nahin pata tha ki aapko humari chunni itni pasand hai ki khud hi apne kade par baandh liya
dharam:kya matlab?
Nivi:matlab ye ki humme maloom hai ki humaari chunni aapke kade mein phansi nahi thi balki aapne hi use apne kade mein baandha tha
Dharam:vo...nivi..darasal...
nivi(smiles):chaliye sab intezaar kar rahe honge..
menwhile in the temple
riti was busy explaining VR on  how to have a successful marriage..
veer yawned and raksha almost fell on him(she was too sleepy to balance herself)
riti:ek patni ko kabhi apne pati ka saath nahi chodna chahiye..iska matlab ye nahi ki pati apni patni ka saath chod de..
but then riti's daughter arrived"ma..chaliye aarti karni hai"
riti left,suddenly VR felt fresh again
and the panditji was nararating kali mata's story"...kali maa ke roop ko...."
veer:aaj main is aurat ko nahin chodoonga
raksha:waise ye kya keh rahi thi..shaayad humesha saath nibhane ki baatein
veer:mujhe is aurat ko sabak sikhana hai..kuch to socho
raksha:sochti hoon...
pandit in the background"us daitya ne dharti par tabahi macha di thi..sab us se darte the...."
veer:aaj amavas ki raat hai
raksha(understanding what veer meant):aur amavas ki raat mein to bahut hi andhera hota hai
veer:aise andhere mein jungle mein kabhi nahin jaana chahiye..verna
raksha(smiling):verna...to tum bhi wahi soch rahe ho jo main soch rahi hoon
veer:haan..to kaho do gi mera saath
raksha:chaho to zindagi bhar ka
veer:kya kaha
raksha:kuch bhi to nahi..main tumhare saath hoon
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Comments (8)

wowwww.....luvlyyyyyyyyy update didi................

16 years ago



Very good yaar....

when is the next update gonna be??

16 years ago

[thanx guyz..i wanted to highlight VN relation..and yes i did wanna show dat a rajkumari can b smart +dharam needs to learn a lot from his luv guru veer

16 years ago

awww.... really cute scene between dharam and nivi...

and veer's and raksha nok-kokes lolz....

contineu soon

16 years ago

I loved it.. eager to know wht mischief Veer and Raksha are planning I love Nivi

16 years ago

aww taht was realli cute....do update soon.love reading ure fan fic wens the next update..

16 years ago

i just lived loved Dharam and Nivi part.You have managed to make her so intelligent.Dharam is just the perfect lover boy.
Raksha and Veer scene was also brilliant.But the one i loved was how veer praised his'bhabi'

16 years ago

loool..dts well shweet...fnx love...dts propa cheered me up! Nivi is veri clever...nt ur ordinary princess...cnt wait for ur nxt part xxx

16 years ago

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