Chapter 14

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Veer and raksha are shocked to see maharaj ms standing in front of them.
Veer:Maharaj...aap..yahan...vo hum asal...mein..
MS(SMILE):Aaj humme pata chala ki humaari beti nivedita kitni badi ho gayi hai..bina kuch batayye vo is shaadi ke liye taiyaar ho gayi.Usne humme ek baar bhi rajkumar dharam ke baare mein nahi bataaya.
Veer and raksha were still shocked at the way the king was behaving
MS:hum jaan gaye hain ki nivedita sirf dharam ko pasand karti hain...
Then he shows them the bag that raksha gave veer the last night..
Raksha and veer gasp
Actually the bag had the letters written by nivi (addressed to dharam) which she was writing and striking out the other day.
MS:Hum ek maharj hone ke saath saath ek pita bhi hain..aur hum apni beti ki khushiyon par koi aanch nahi aane denge.
Veer:ye...aapko kahan se mila?(pointing to the bag)
MS:Humaare mahal ke pooja ghar se
Veer(slaps his forehead):Main aaj subah wahan gaya tha..aur is thaile ko vahin...
Raksha(interrupting):Bhool gaye..kyun..veer tum itna bhoolte kyun ho..kyu tumme bilkul dimaag nahi hai...itni zarrori cheez tum(she stops as she realizes that the king was still standing there)
MS(SMILING):Ab bataiye ki hum ye shaadi kaise rokein?Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye hum apni beti ki zindagi kharaab nahi kar sakte.
Both veer and raksha give a smile
Veer:To suniye...
He narrates his whole plan to MS and raksha
On the other hand dharam was in the main hall meeting people and trying hard to look happy
His eyes were now searching for the person he needed the most..veer
After some time veer arrived
Dharam:Veer kahan the tum itni der tak?
Veer:Main raksha ke saath tha..kyun?
Dharam:Raksha ke saath..(smiling)kya baat hai..aajkal vo tumhe kuch zyaada hi achchi lagti hai
Veer:Dharam bakwaas band karo.
Dharam:Ab hum bakwaas kar rahein hain...aur tum jab mere aur nivi ke baare mein itna kuch kehte the tab?
Veer:Tum dono ki baat kuch aur hai...main khudko bhavishya mein raksha ke saath nahi dekh sakta...
Dharam:Bhavishya to humara aur nivi ka bhi ek nahi hai..
Veer:Dharam....tumhe charu chacha ne purab disha ke singhgadh naamak khadi(valley) par bulaaya hai..vo tumse rakshak tabeez ke baare mein kuch batana chahte the..tum jao main yahan mahamantri ko sambhalta hoon.
Dharam:Veer...itni zaroori baat tum humme ab bata rahe ho?
Veer:Ab jayo bhi dharam..varna bahut der ho jaayegi
Dharam:Hum abhi nikalte hain..
anyways he didnt want to see nivi getting married to harsh..he left immediately to the given place without letting anyone else know about it.
In nivi's room
Nivi(to her maid):Tumne raksha ko kahin dekha?
Maid:Ji nahin rajkumari
Nivi:Pata nahin kahan chali gayi
Suddenly two men enterd nivi's room and one of them hit the maid so that she went unconcious...
Before nivi could call out for help she was gagged and the men kidnapped her away....
The mandap was ready and harsh was sitting in it,the bride was called
Nivi's mother,SUMITRA, went to nivi's room to find the unconcious maid
Worried she shoutd"nivedita..nivedita..."
After hearing this noise the king and guards came in
MS:kya hua maharani?
sumitra(crying):Nivedita kahin nahi nazar aa rahi hai
THE MAID was brought back to conciousness
Maid:Rajkumari ji ko kuch daku utha kar le gaye...
MS and sumitra(together):KYA!!!!
MS(to the guards):Tum log bahar kya kar rahe the?
Soldiers:maharaj darwaaze se koi andar nahi aaya tha hum yahin bahar pehra de rahe the...
MS:To ve log khidki se aaye honge..
Sumitra:Hey bhgwaan ab is shaadi ka kya hoga..humari beti ka kya hoga....
MS:Ab to ye shaadi tab tak nahi ho sakti jab tak nivedita ka pata nahin chal jaata..
So the marriage is called off
Meanwhile nivi was being carried by one of the men on his horse..
After running their horses for some time they came to an adrupt stop(they had reached singhgadh valley) there was dharam standing in front of them with his sword and a challenging look on his face
Dharam(shouting):Nivi ko chod do warna jaan se maar daloonga..
The men climb down from the horses but nivi was still being holded tight by one of the men..
Dharam:Humne kaha na nivi ko chod do varna sach mein jaan ganwa baithoge..
Then one of the men removed his cover from his face..
"Kya veer ko pehchana nahi"
Then the other man removed his cover..it was none other than raksha..
The gag from nivi's face was removed..
Nivi:Raksha...veer tum dono..aisa kyun...
Veer:Bhabhi ye sab maharaj MS ki marzi se ho raha hai..agar hum aisa nahi karte to aapki shaadi kaise tootti
Nivi:Pitaji..pitaji ne ye sab karwaya..
Raksha:Haan nivi maharaj ko tumhare aur dharam ke baare mein sab pata chal gaya aur unhone hi humme ye sab karne mein madad ki verna kya humare rajya ke sainik aryanagar ke sainikon ki tarah kamzor hain jo ek rajkumari ki raksha nahi kar sakte..
Veer:Dekho gussail...aryanagar ke sainik hi nahi wahan ke rajkumaaron mein bhi bahut dum hai
Raksha:Achcha mujhe to rajkumaron mein sirf akad hi nazar aati hai..akdoo
Veer:gussail..tum ab kuch zyaada bol rahi ho
Raksha:Main zyaada bol rahin hoon to tum kaunsa maunvrat dhaaran kiye ho....
Dharam:Veer ab ye behas band bhi karo aur batayo ki tumne hume singhghad kyun bulaaya ..charu chacha to nazar nahi aa rahe.
Veer:Vo abhi aa rahein hai..aur agar main tumhe wahan se bhejta nahin to humaari yojna kamyaab kaise hoti..
Charusena arrives
Charu:Tum charon..yahan...(after looking at nivi and her bridal dress)achcha to veer tumne dharam ko rajkumari ji se mila hi diya..
Nivi and dharam both blush..
Charu:Main yahan bas itna kehne aaya hoon ki rakshak tabbez ki chaabhi ko koi churana chahta hai,aur..
Raksha:Ye rakshak tabeez kya hai?
Veer:Tumhe isse kya humesha beech mein bolti ho raksha kabhi to..
Dharam shows a hand to veer asking him to stop speaking now
Charu:Rakshak tabbez mein aryanagar aur awadhi dono hi rajyon ke sabhi gupt sthanon ka naksha chipa hai..kaha jaata hai ki in gupt sthaanon mein khazaana,pauranik ydhdh ritiyan,aur kain aise pauranik hathiyaar hain jinhe humne aaj tak nahin dekha
Dharam:Aryanagar aur awadhi dono rajyon ka?
Veer:Aap humme sab theek se samjhaiye.
Charu:Dekho,aryanagar aur awadhi kain sadiyon se ek doosre ke mitr rahein hain...ek baar aryanagar ke maharaj gajvardhan aur awadhi ke maharaj kameshwarsingh ne milkar apne rajyon ke gupt sthanon ka naksha banakar usse rakshak tabeez mein rakh diya..
ye tabeez kahan hai yeh koi nahin jaanta..agar ye tabeez kisi galat haathon mein pad gayin to in dono rajyon ke kain bhed bhi khul saktein hain..
Dharam:To kya pitaji ne kabhi in sthanon ko nahin khoja?
Charu:Nahin..ek bhavishyavani ke anusaar agar in gupt sthanon ko khoja jaaye to awadhi aur aryanagar ke rishton mein darar aa jaayegi aur dono rajya ek doosre ka vinaash kar denge
Veer:To aap chahte hain ki hum ye pata lagayein ki ye tabeez ki chabhi kaun dhoondh raha hai.
Charu:Haan..humme ye pata chala hai ki shiv mandir ki yatra mein hi vo chor chipa hua hai
DV:Aap chinta mat kijiye hum sab sambhal lenge
Charu:Tabhi to tum dono ke pass aya tha,theek hai ab chalta hoon maharaj ko meri zaroorat hogi.
Charu leaves wishing them all the best
Dharam:Nivi kya soch rahi ho?
Nivi:Yahi ki humme kitna achcha mauka mila hai apne rajya ki raksha karne ka
Dharam:Tum kahin nahi jaayogi
Nivi:Kyun kya tumhe humpar bharosa nahi hai?
Dharam:Tumpar bharosa hai par un choron par nahin...aur waise bhi tum ho to ek rajkumari hi naa..tumse ye sab nahi ho ga
Nivi:Tum humme nahin jaante dharam hum awadhi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain
Dharam:Pata hai..pata hai..par tum sirf humaari musibatein badhaogi..jab dekhho(immitating nivi)dharam bachayo..raksha bachao..koi bhi bachao...(back to normal)bas yahi chillati rahogi
Veer(to raksha):Ye dono bhi ab shuru ho gaye
Raksha:Ye dono BHI ka matlab
Veer:Matlab ki tum bhi to baat baat mein dharam ki tarah gussa karti ho..gussail
Raksha:Pehli baat rajkumar dharam ko zyada gussa nahi aata..aur doosri ki agar tum nivi ki tarah akdoge to gussa to aayega hi..akdoo
Veer:Na main akdta hoon aur na bhabhi..samjhi..
Raksha:Nahin ,nahin samjhi...tum jaise logon se to main kuch samajhna hi nahin chahti
Veer:Naasamajh logon ko samjhane ka mujhe bhi koi shauk nahin hai
Raksha:to phir......
Both the couples were busy with their nok-jhok
In awadhi..
AV:Ye dv kahan chale gaye
MS:un dono ko humne bheja hai...humme unpar poora bharosa hai..ve dono nivedita ko sahi salaamat wapas le aayenge..aap befikr rahiye humare sainik bhi gaye hain unke saath
MS smiles...
hope u lykd dis part and didnt get bored with the hisory classes of charu regarding the tabeez...u know its important to set a suitable background for the story to move on..the next part will be funny and romantic..i'll update it tomorrow..
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loved it yaar keep ot up you get freat ideas day by day nanz gr8


esha

16 years ago

Fantasche!!!

I'm so happy for Dharam and Nivi

And then again the nok-joke of Veer and Raksha... lolz...but this time dharam tooo..... hahaha

Ps continue soon....

16 years ago

aw!
i loved the part when both pairs where busy discussing their own matters
vr plan was good

16 years ago

thanx u so much...well hindi is not my mother tounge either...still i'll try to make the language easier

16 years ago

i am EAGERLY WAITING for your update

16 years ago

wooow...lovved it! veer is veri clever! loved da whole plan, VR to kidnap nivi n nivi's dad knowing and understandin his daughter...so shwweet! the history class frm charu was nesscary although a bit of a mouth ful for me...(im guju...so it takes me sum time to read hindi).... cnt wait for da nxt part! xxx

16 years ago

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