Chapter 7

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After travelling for some more time they finally reached the temple,it was already dark and the stars twinkled.There were many pilgrims and suitable arrangements were done for their stay.
There were special huge tents meant for special guests and rajkumari nivedita was one of them.
Her soldiers had already arranged another big tent for the princes.
Raksha:Nivi,hum mandir pahunch gaye hain.Zara dekhein ki un dono rajkumaaron ki haalat ab kaisi hai.
Nivi(to her soldiers):Tum jaakar jaldi se vaidji ko bulaao.
Then both the girls rush to the princes.
Veer(in a tired tone):Dharam...dekho hum mandir pahuncj gaye hain..ab tumhe kuch nahi hoga..tum theek ho jaaoge..dharam(veer had tears in his eyes)
Raksha:Veer...rajkumar dharam theek ho jaayenge..jaldi se inhe tamboo mein le kar jaana hoga..
Veer:Haan main abhi ise..(He tries to climb down from the bullock cart but raksha stops him)
Raksha:Veer,abhi tumhari haalat bhi kuch theel nahi hai...(to the soldiers)dono rajkumaron ko inke tamboo tak le jaane mein madad kijiye.
Both the princes are literally carried to their tants.
Raksha searches for nivi:Nivi...nivi..(to herself)ab ye kahan chali gayee.
Then raksha finds nivi standing in front of the hanumaan idol in the temple holding the morpankh.
Nivi:Hey bajran bali..in dono rajkumaaron ko jald hi theek kar dijiye..inhone humaare liye apni jaan khatre mein daali..agar inhe kuch ho gaya to hum khudko...
Raksha(interrupting):To ye khudko kabhi maaf nahi kar paayegi.Haan hanumanji..chahe is duniya mein kisi ke saath bhi bura ho nivi saara aarop khud par hi le leti hai.kyun?
Nivi:Nahi raksha..agar dharam ya rajkumar veer ko kuch ho gaya to is baar sach mein hum khudko koi badi saja de denge.
Raksha:Nivi,tum jeejaji ke liye kitna sochti ho par phir bhi kisi aur se shaadi ki baatein karti ho,kyun?
Bachpan se tumne sapno ke rajkumar ke baare mein socha,aur jab vo tumhe rajkumar dharam ke roop mein mila to tum unko bhoolna chahti ho.
Nivi:Raksha,hum kuch nahi chahte.Hum bas itna jaante hain ki agar humaari shaadi rajkumar harsh se nahi hui to awadhi ko harsh ke rajya se khatra hai.
Raksha:Yaani tumhari shaadi awadhi ko khatre se bachaane ke liye kiya gaya ek samjhauta hai.
Nivi(IGNORING RAKSHA):Chalo,chalkar dekhta hain ki dono rajkumar ki tabeeyat ab kaisi hai.
They move on to the tents of the princes.
The vaidji was already over with the check up of the princes.
Vaidji:Rajkumari ji ye dono ab theek hain.(poining to veer)ye abhi so rahe hain..jab ye jagein to inhe thodi der ke liye bahar tehlne ke liy zarror le jaayega..inke paanw ke liye behtar hoga..aur inko(pointing to dharam)ab tak hosh nahi aaya hai..raat bhar inke maathe par ye lep lagaate rehiyega,to ye jaldi behtar ho jaayenge.
Nivi:Shukriya vaidji.
Then nivi sits next to dharam an applies the lep on his forehead with the warmth of love and affection clearly seen on her beautifully carved face.
Raksha:Nivi tum raat bhar yahin rukna chahogi...theek hai main chalti hoon..zaroorat pade to bula lena.
Nivi(staring at dharam's face):Theek hai
soon the time passed and it was almost dawn,raksha came to the princes' tent
Raksha:Tum soi to nahi hogi..raat bhar jeejaji ke maathe par lep jo lagaana tha..kyun?
Nivi:Ye yahan zindagi aur maut se lad rahein hain aur hum so jaayein aisa kaise ho sakta hai?
Raksha:Nivi tum mujhe to taane nahi maar rahi na?kyunki main to raat bhar aaram se so rahi thi,kyunki mujhe bhagwaan par,jeejaji par,tum par aur haan veer par poora bharosa hai ki in dono ko kuch nahi hoga.
Veer:Kya kaha gussail..tumhe mujhpe bharosa hai?
Raksha(surprised):Tum..tum kab jage..
Veer:Jab se is tamboo mein halla machaate tum andar aaye.
Nivi smiles..
Veer:Dharam..dharam..kaisa hai?
Nivi:Ve theek ho jaaayenge aap chinta mat kijiye.
Veer;Usko ab tak hosh nahi aaya?
Nivi:Nahi..par
but before she could finsh her sentence veer rushed out of his bed towards dharam but as his leg was injured he almost fell on the floor but raksha holded him and gave him support to go to dharam.
Veer:Rajkumari ji..ab aap jaaiye main dharam ko sambhaal loonga.
Nivi:Nahi vaidji ne aapko kaha hai k aapke jagte hi aap tehalne jaayenge..raksha rajkumar veer ko tehlne le kar jaayo.
Raksha:Main...nivi main.ise kahin le kar nahin jaaongi.
Veer:Aur main bhi dharam ke saath baithna chahta hoon.
Nivi:Rajkumar veer..aapko jaana hoga agar nahi gaye to aapki haalaat aur bigad jaayegi..aur ye baat dharam ko bhi pasand nahi aayegi..aap jab tak tehalkar aayenge tabtak dharam ko hosh aa jayega..aap chinta na karein hum hain naa...
Raksha:Chinta usse nahi mujhe karni hai..main iske saath jaakar khudko beemar nahi katna chahti..
Nivi:Raksha tumse koi pooch nahi raha hai..ye humaara hukm hai.
Raksha and veer reluctantly leave for their walk..veer hald his arms on raksha's shoulders to get support..they moved to a deserted kind of area..away from the people so that it was easier for veer to walk.
Raksha:Kitne bhaari ho tum ...par aakhir kaar tumhe mere sahaare ki zaroorat pad hi gayee..kyn?
Veer:Bhaari to tum bhi kaum nahi ho..aur main rajkumari ji ke kehne par tumhaare saath aaya hoon.
Raksha:To mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai akdoo logon ko kandha dene ka.samjhe?
Veer:He bhagwaan kis gussail se paala pada hai mera.
Raksha hears this and starts walking at a faster rate..such that veer is unable to cope up with her speed and thus looses his balance and falls on raksha.
The both of them fall straight on the ground.
They have an eye lock and for the first time veer notices how good looking raksha was.Her dusky face had those expressive doe like eyes..her face showed immense confidence..and courage.she was as beautiful as rose but rose have thorns too.and dats wat veer probably liked about raksha.
Raksha:Ab utho bhi..kya din bhar yun hi mere upar lete rahoge?
Veer(breaking his glare):Uthta hoon...
then both of them stand up and veer finds a string wooden cane.
Veer:Ab main tumhare nahi is laathi ke sahare aage badhoonga.
Raksha:Shukriya..pehle to itna bhari wajan mujhpar girta hai aur phir maafi bhi nahi maangni aati.
Veer:Maafi...galti tumhari hai..tum hi itni tez chal rahi thi..
Raksha:Tum to ho hi akdoo...ab main wapas ja rahi hoon..tum tehalte raho.
In the tent dharam regained conciousness and was taken aback to see the most mesmerizing face ,in the world ,prayng to the god.She was holding dharam's hand and he didnt bother to lossen his grip over her soft hand.
Dharam:Nivedita..
Nivi(opens her eyes):Dharam, tum theek to ho naa..ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari..
Dharam:Hum theek hain..aap yahan..veer kahan hai
Nivi:rajkumar veer bahar tehalne gaye hain.
Dharam(looking into her sleep depriven eyes):Aap raat bhar soin nahi
Nivi:Ji vo vaidji ne kaha tha ki raat bhar aapko lep lagayein to ...
Dharam:aapne humare liye kitna kuch kiya hai..shukriya.
Nivi(putting her finger on dharam's lips):Shshh.... isme koi shukriya ki baat hi nahi hai..aapne humaari jaan bachai aur hum aapke liye raat bhar jag bhi nahi sakte?
Dharam:Aap....jaisa jeevan saathi jisko milega vo naujavan bahut khushnaseeb hoga.
Nivi(thinking to herself):Par aap jaisa jeevan saathi paakar to hum khudko khush naseeb manenge.
Suddenly raksha enters..
Raksha:Nivi us veer ko to main..
arey jeeja..mera matlab rajkumar dharam aapko hosh aa gaya.
Dharam:Hume to kuch aisa hi lagta hai.
Dharam and nivi smile.
Veer enters the tent,
Veer:Raksha tum kisi ki raksha karne laayak nahi ho..
(suddenly)dharam..kaise ho..tum..tumhe hosh aa gaya..
Raksha:Hum teeno ko to aisa hi lagta hai,tumhara nahi pata.
Veer:Tumse kisne poocha..
Raksha:Tumhe dikhta nahi hai ki rajkumar dharam ko hosh aaya bhi hai ya nahi?
Nivi:Achcha aur tumhe kitna dikhta hai raksha?
Raksha:A...VO....Chalo nivi hume mandir jaakar pooja bhi karni hai..
Nivi stands up to leave forgetting that her hand was in dharam's hand grasped tightly...
And as she starts to walk towards raksha..her hands,still in dharam's, doesnt allow her to move forward..she turns back embarassed to find dharam holding her hand tightly..
Veer(sees this):Dharam..rajkumari ji ka haat galti se tumhaare haat mein aa gaya..ab inhe jaane do..
Dharam hurriedly loosens his grip and nivi rushes to raksha but before going out of the tent she looks back to give an affectionate look at dharam who very lovingly stared at her...
sorry for ne spelling mistakes and lack of gud language
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thanks...well u all can call me nandini dats my name

16 years ago

soz i was not able to comment on ure other 2...well i read it n just one wrd WOOOOW ...ure realli talented do continue

16 years ago

that was gr8 yaar sorry couldn't comment on last one but they were mind blowin keep it up gr8. hiri

16 years ago

ur doubts will b cleared if u read part6 of my ff

16 years ago

Hey Pretty-Mugdha ... sorry yaar I don't know ur name.. anywaysNice FF I like the way u introduces both girls at a time and that short suspense of disguise was cute... I liked ur pairs and Part 4 is very cute.....I liked that dialogue of Charu : "Bewakoofi aur bahduri ki seema bahut patli hai par inke beech zammen aasman ka antar hai." Good relationship between DV and Charu... awwww Veer-Raksha's Knok-jhok at last in Nivi's room was also cuteHey what about that bad smell thing..... is there any suspense in it?

16 years ago

Hiya Pretty_mugdha, ur gtting pretty gd at dis ..cheers

16 years ago

Hey Pretty_mugdha Waw!! loved this part of the story too.... do contineu aandhanika39631.2391898148

16 years ago

hey pretty_mughda ur story is very nice .....keep writing

16 years ago

guyz please comment ...hope u liked this part

16 years ago

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