Chapter 85

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Part-85

Aaj ka sooraj apne saath ek nayi khoj ko leke aanewala hai.........koi bhi nayi janta ki is khoj ka anth kya hoga.......lekin kehte hai khoj ho to jo bhi kismat me likha hota hai wahi miljata hai.........Aaj Kashish bhi apne sindoor ke rang ki khoj me janewali hai.......Subaah subaah taiyaar hoke kashish prerna ke pass jati hai jo mandir me pooja kar rahi hoti hai....

Prerna: taiyaar ho gayi.yeh le aarti.........

Kashish jake aarti leti hai...........

Kashish: mama muje aapke aashirwad ki zaroorat hai...........aaj main Sujal ki talash me ja rahi hoon........muje aashirwad dijiye ki main apne kam me safal hoo.........

Kashish zuk ke Prerna ka aashirwad leti hai......

Prerna: mera aashirwad to hamesha tumhare saath hai........tu jis khoj me ja rahi hai bhagwan kare tuje safalta mile.......kyunki is khoj se ek patni ko apna pati aur ek maa ko apna beta mil jayega.........

Kashish: main apne sindoor ki kasam khati hoon ki main jab tak Sujal ko wapas nahi lati tab tak main chain se nahi bethungi.............

Jab Kripa aur Charu aate hai.......

Kripa: Mama main chalti hoon aaj meri ek important meeting hai...........

Kashish: charu tum.........agar tumhe koi kaam na ho to tum mere saath chalogi...........

Charu: jee bhabhi....

Kashish: Mama ab hum chalte hai......raat ko shayad dair ho jaye..is liye aap pareshan mat hona.......mere saath Charu hai na...........

Prerna; thik hai lekin sambhal ke jana.......

Charu: mama main hoon na.........bye........

Kashish: bye mama.............

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Kashish aur Charu woh kuldevta ke mandir wali jagah pe aate hai............

Charu: bhabhi.hum yaha to aa gaye lekin ab hum Bhaiyaa ko kaise dhundhenge..........

Kashish: yeh tasvir hai na sab se jake main puchungi........

Charu: thik hai chaliye.........

Kashish aur Charu pura din Sujal ki tasvir leke use dhundhte rehte hai.......ab sham ke char baj gaye hai...........

Charu: bhabhi......aise to kuch nahi hoga........

Kashish: nahi Charu.......aise koshish karne se to kuch baat banegi na..........

Charu: yeh koshish nahi pagalpan hai............aise to woh hume kabhi nahi milenge.............

Kashish: Charu.........tere liye yeh pagalpan hoga lekin mere liye yeh ab mera junoon hai.........main ab wapas nahi laut sakti..........

Charu: to aap kya chahti hai...ki hum aise sadak pe pure din bhatkate rahe........yaha pe her ek insaan se hum do do bar puch chuke hai..........ab kuch baki reh gaya hai..........

Kashish: tu muje kamzor bana rahi hai......tu ghar ja .........muje tumhari zaroorat nahi....main akeli hi Sujal ko dhundh lungi........
 

Charu: mera yeh matlab nahi tha..........aap muje galat samaj rahi hai......yaha aise dhundhne se achcha hai ki hum tv pe yeh khabar de........

Kashish: tumhe yeh sahi lagta hai to tum Anjali ke pass jake khabar do.......lekin main yaha pe her jagah pe main puchungi.......tum jao Charu........

Charu: lekin aap......

Kashish: maine kaha ki tum jao.......main akeli hi kafi hoon........ab tum jao.........Akshat bhi ghar laut raha hoga.......

Charu: jaisa aap chahe..........main taxi se ja rahi hoon aap sham ko driver ke saath aa jana.............

Kashish: thik hai.........

Charu chali jati hai aur Kashish phir se Sujal ko dhundhne lagti hai..........

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rab ne mere jo mujhase kahi woh baat hai mere hothon pe (ab sham se leke raat ho gayi hai)

jinmein basa hai tu woh lakeeren hai mere haathon mein (ab sadak bhi khali hone lagi hai)

aakhir thaam le haath mera na chhodungi saath tera (abhi bhi Kashish haath me tasvir leke use dhundh rahi hoti hai)

in baajuon mein jannat hai meri seene se mujhko laga lo sanam (sab log baatien kar rahe hote hai ki koi pagal hai)

tum pyar kitna karte ho hamse yeh aaj hamko bata do sanam (Kashish bina kuch kahe waha se chali jati jai)

meri aarzoo tu hai sanam tere pyar ki mujhko kasam (Kashish Sujal ki tasvir ko sine se lagati hai)

vaada hai vaada tujhase yeh vaada dil na dukhaaungi tera kabhi (Kashish ki aankhoin se aanshu girne lagte hai)

teri khushi ki khaatir o jaanam tujhpe luta dungi yeh zindagi (Kashish apne aanshu poch ke phir se chalne lagti hai)

meri har vafaa tere liye dil ki har duaan tere liye (Kashish aise hi sujal ke khayaloin me chalne lagti hai)

rab ne mere jo mujhase kahi woh baat hai mere hothon pe (jab driver kashish se kehta hai ki ghar se phone tha ki ab aapko ghar lautna hai)

jinmein basa hai tu woh lakeeren hai mere haathon mein (kashish car me beth jati hai)

aakhir thaam le haath mera na chhodungi saath tera (kashish khidki se ek bar phir se wapas dekhti hai)

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Kashish ghar phunchke sidhe apne kamre me chali jati hai..............Kashish aaine ke samne khadi hoke ro rahi hoti hai,,,,,,,,,

Kashish: dekha Sujal........aaj main phir se har gayi.......koi nahi sath deta........tum bhi to nahi ho muje sambhal ne ke liye........Sujal tum kab wapas aaoge...........mujse ab roya bhi nahi jata........jante ho sare aanshu bhi ab to khatam ho gaye hai..........ghar wapas aati hoon to Mama ki aankhin apne bete ko dhundh rahi hai.........ek bhai apne bhai ka intzaar kar raha hai aur main...........Sujal tumhe mera intzaar bhi dikhai nahi deta........ek bar bhi tum mere bare me nahi soch rahe ki main kaisi hoon..........kis tarah se jee rahi hoo.........bolo ab......chup kyun ho........

Sujal: Kashish.......

Kashish ko aise lagta hai jaise Sujal use pukar raha hai......

Kashish mud ke sujal ko dekhti hai...........

Sujal: sab se jyada tumhari fikar hai is liye to wapas aa raha hoon......ab yeh mat puchna ki kab.........kyunki yeh main bhi nahi janta lekin janta hoon to yeh ki ab muje tumhare pass aana hai........kyunki tumhare aanshu se muje dard hota hai.......Kashish ab aur nahi........bas kuch aur din.........tum aise har nahi sakti.........tum to meri himmat ho......tum tut gayi to main har jaunga............aur tum to kabhi apne Sujal ko harta nahi dekh sakti.......ab batao banogi meri himmat........
 

Kashish: haa Sujal......main to hoon hi tumhari himmat........main nahi tutungi kyunki tutte to woh hai jo aasha me jite hai aur muje to vishwas hai ki tum mere pass aaoge.......main tumhara intzar karungi......main her pal tumhara intzar karungi...........

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chalo chalke dekhte hai ki Sujal ka kya haal hai.......Sujal bahar beth ke Chaand ko dekh raha hota hai..........jab Rano aati hai........

Rano: kya dekh rahe hai.......

Sujal: us chand ko........

Rano: woh kitna khunsurat hai na.......sabse jyada........

Sujal: nahi.....is chand me bhi daag hoge lekin koi hai jo bedaag hai.........meri Kashish........isse kayi jyada khubsurat........

Rano: woh sach me chaand se bhi jyada khubsurat hai....matlab pari ki tarah..........

Sujal: haa bilkul meri Pari hai woh.........sirf pankh hi nahi........

Rano: agar pankh hote to.....

Sujal; to kahi woh muje chod ke udd jati to......

Rano: aise koi thoda kisi ko chod ke jata hai.......

Sujal; tum nahi samjogi tum bahot choti ho.........

Aurat: rano tum jake so jao bahot dair ho gayi......

Rano sone chali jati hai......

Sujal; bahot pyari bachi hai.......

Aurat: haa.........choti hai is liye baatein bhi nadan karti hai........

Sujal: bache hote hi hai masoom.......

Aurat: aap ko bache bahot pasand hai......kitne bache hai aapko........

Sujal: ek bhi nahi........aaj hota to kareeban che mahine ko ho gaya hota.......kuch mahino pehle humne apna bacha kho diya.......

Aurat: main samaj sakti hoon koi baat nahi bhagwan ke ghar dair hai andher nahi........

Sujal: nahi ab Kashish kabhi dubara maa nahi ban sakti........

Aurat: yeh sab to kehte rehte hai...meri dua hai ki tumhare ghar bhi aisi hi beti hogi.......

Sujal: kash aapki baat sach ho jaye........

Aurat: ab tum andar jake so jao......kal se tum thodi thodi dair chalna aur phir tum thik ho jaoge.......ab chale......

Sujal andar jake so jata hai.

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subaah Kashish taiyaar hoke neeche aati hai.........jaha pe sab hote hai.......

Anjali: to phir se ja rahi ho......

Kashish: ab piche nahi mud sakti........is liye muje aage badhna hoga........

Kripa: thik hai main saath chalti hoon........

Akshat: aise paglo ki tarah dhudhne se kuch nahi hoga........

Kashish: main tumhare bhai ko wapas leke aaungi.....

Akshat: aap pagal ho gayi hai kyunki mare huye log wapas nahi aate...........Sujalbhaiyaa mar chuke hai.........woh kabhi wapas nahi aayenge.......aap jitni jaldi jan ke utna aapke liye achcha hai........ab aapka pati kabhi nahi aayega........

Kashish: Charu.......ise kaho yaha se chala jaye....main aisa kuch keh doon jise ise bura lage.........ise tum yaha se le jao kyunki yeh khud nahi janta ki yeh kya keh raha hai.................
 

Charu Akshat ko leke office ke liye nikal jati hai............

Angad: Kashish......

Kashish: nahi Angad........muje kuch nahi sunna..........ab tum bhi yahi soch rahe honge jo abhi abhi Akshat ne kaha.........

Angad: Kashish.......tumne bhi muje aisa samaj liya...........lagta hai tum muje kabhi samaj hi nahi payi......I am Sorry.......

Kashish: mafi to muje mangni chahiye.....maine anjane me kya bol gayi.......lekin main abhi bahot pareshan hoon......muje akela chod do........

Kripa: her muskil me hum dono ne tumhara aur Sujal ka saath diya hai ab tum keh rahi ho ki hum piche hat jaye........nahi Kashish hum tumhare saath aisa nahi kar sakte.......

Kashish: to ab tumhe batao main kya karoon.........jab apne hi saath chod de to paraye ka kya bharosha karna.........

Angad: tum rona bandha karo aur chalo apne kamre me.........agar Mama ne sun liya to bahot dukhi hogi.........

Angad aur Kripa Kashish ko leke andar jate hai....

Kashish: mera yakeen karo.........main jooth nahi bol rahi...........Sujal zinda hai.......koi to meri baat pe yakeen karo.......main Sujal ke bare me jooth nahi bol sakti....main kaise Akshat se kahoon ki uska bhai zinda hai.......main pagal nahi hoon,.........sujal muje sapne me aake roz kehta hai ki woh wapas aayega.......abhi bhi yakeen nahi karenge aap log.......

Angad: Kashish....muje aur Kripa dono ko tumpe aur tumhare pyaar pe pura yakeen hai...........hum jante hai ki tum kabhi Sujal ko leke jooth nahi bol sakti..........agar tum keh rahi ho ki Sujal wapas aayega to hume tum pe yakeen hai........lekin aise rone se kuch nahi hoga....akshat gusse me hai chota hai is liye kuch bhi keh diya..........lekin uski baatoin ko dil se nahi lagate.........
 

Kripa: ab yeh aanshu poch aur jaldi se taiyaar ho ja aaj main tere saath chalungi.........

Kashish: nahi tum is halat me kahi nahi jaogi.......samji....aur kuch dino bad tumahra office jana bhi bandh.......

Kripa: lekin main to abhi......

Kashish: kaha na main kuch nahi sunna chahti......main akele hi ja rahi hoon

Angad: kripa tum gahr ruko Kashish ke saah me jata hoon.........ab tum taiyaar ho jao main neeche tumahra intzaar kar raha hoon..........

Kashish: thik hai main abhi aayi...............

Kashish aur Angad pura din talash karte rehte hai.................

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Sham ka waqt hota hai sab log ghar aa gaye hote hai Angad aur Kashish aate hai..........Kashish Akshat ki aur dekhti hai aur apne kamre me jane lagti hai.......

Akshat: bhabhi.........

Kashish: muje kuch nahi sunna Akshat.........mama ghar pe hi hai......

Akshat: muje maff nahi karenge..........muje meri galti ka ehsaas hai......muje aapse aise baat nahi akrni chahiye thi........muje maff kar dijiye...meri galti ho gayi.........

Kashish: maine tumhe maff kiya ........lekin Akshat tumne mere bare nahi socha uska muje koi afsoos nahi lekin tum apne bhai ko bhi........kam se kam unke liye to..........shayad lagta hai mere pyaar me hi kami reh gayi.........maine koi aisa kaam kiya ho to muje maff kar dena........
 

Akshat: nahi bhabhi......aap kyun mafi mang rahi hai mafi to muje magni chahiye.........galti maine ki hai.........aapka saath dene ke bajaye........I am sorry Bhabhi............

 
Kashish: chote galti karte hai to bado ka hakk banta hai unhe maff karne ka......is liye muje koi sikayat nahi.......lekin aainda kabhi aisa sochna bhi mat.........agar tum aisa sochoge to bahar wale ka kya kasoor.........ab aaj se koi Sujal ko dhundhne nahi jayega.........kyunki woh kabhi bhi aa jayega........main kal se hi naye project ke liye office aa rahi hoon.........abhi main thak gayi hoon main chalti hoon........

Akshat: thank u bhabhi.............

Kashish: good night.......subaah taiyaar rehna office ke liye.........

Akshat: jee bhabhi.........

Sab log apne apne kamre me chale jate hai........

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dusre din Kashish office me jati hai.........Kashish apni office me kaam kar rahi hoti hai jab Angad aata hai........

Angad: kya main andar aa sakta hoon.......

Kashish: Angad tum andar aa chuke ho..........

Angad: mazak kar raha hoon..........muje tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai.........

Kashish: haa kaho........

Angad: ek buri khabar hai.......hamare pass sirf saat din hai tendar bharne ke liye aur is ke liye bank se paisa laena bahot zaroori hai..........

Kashish: kya sirf saat din.........aisa kaise ho sakta hai.......saat din me ab kya hoga......

Angad: Tushar bahot kuch kar sakta hai........

Kashish: maine kaha na ki muje uski madad nahi chahiye........

Angad: main to sirf tumhe bata raha hoon..........Kashish maine hamesha tumhe sahi rai di hai aaj bhi yahi kahunga ki Tushar ki baat man lene me hi hamari bhalai hai.........

Kashish: nahi Angad isse pehle muje kuch waqt do sochne ka...........

Angad: thik hai......main chalta hoon.....yeh rahi file.....ise padh lena......

Kashsih: thik hai.........

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Dopahar ko Anjali aur Kashish lunch pe jate hai..........

Anjali: kaisa chal raha hai Sujal ka project........

Kashish: pata nahi.......

Anjali: kya matlab pata nahi..........

Kashish: pehle saath chuta........ab hosla tut raha hai.....mere pass sirf saat din hai......muje bank se loan lene me aur bank muje loan nahi de rahi.........

Anjali; tumne kya socha hai........

Kashish: pata nahi.........

AnjalI: sab thik ho jayega......chalo wapas chalte hai.......meri ek meeting hai.........

Kashish: chalo.......

Anjali aur kashish jane lagte hai jab koi Kashish ka haath pakadta hai..........Kashish mud ke dekhti hai to Rishi hota hai...........Kashish zor se Rishi ko thapad marti hai........

Kashish: ek bar thapad khane ke bad bhi nahi sudhre......tumse bada besharm maine aaj tak nahi dekha......haath lagane ki jururat bhi mat karna ......haath tod ke rakh dungi......maine tumse kitni bar kaha hai ki muje chune ki koshish mat karna........yeh hakk sirf mere pati Sujal ka hai...........

Rishi: kaisa pati jo mar gaya hai.......suna aap logo ne yeh mare huye pati ki baat kar rahi hai.......

Kashish: mera pati zinda hai........aur yeh main tumhe batake rahungi.......agli bar yeh thapad main nahi Sujal marega........aur aisa marega ki zindagi bhar uthne ke kabil nahi rahoge.........chalo Anjali........

Anjali aur Kashish jane lagte hai.........

Anjali: kashish ruk kyun gayi....chalo.......

Kashish: Anjali.......kyun musibat her waqt ek saath aati hai.............

Anjali: shayad ise hi zindagi kehte hai.........

Kashish: lekin mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai....sab to kitne khush hai apni zindagi me.........tumhe dekho kripa ko dekho......sab to khush hai.......main hi.........her waqt......

Anjali; aisa dil chota nahi karte.......tumne kaha na ki Sujal zinda hai......to ab tum hi.....nahi Kashish aisa nahi kehte........abhi khushiyon ka aana baki hai.........itne khushiyaan hogi tumhare pass ki tumhara daman chota pad jayega.........yeh main keh rahi hoon........meri baat hamesha sach hoti hai tum janti ho na.........ab chale.......

Kashish: hmmmmmmmmm

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Dusre din Kashish phir se Bank me jati hai.........

Kashish: aap meri baat samaj kyun nahi rahe........main is project ke liye kaam shuru kar chuki hoon......yeh loan ke liye mera project qualify hota hai......aap kyun muje loan nahi de sakte.........

Manager: humne aapko pehle bhi bata diya hai ki ab hum aapki koi baat nahi man sakte........jab tak Mr. Sujal Garewal the tab baat kuch aur thi.......

Kashish: main Sujal ke wapas aane tak intzaar nahi kar sakti mere pass sirf che din hai.......

Manager: hum log yaha jasbatoin se to paise nahi dete.....kuch niyam hai hamare.....aapko lagta hai woh wapas aayenge lekin kya aap hume koi pakka saboot se sakte hai.....nahi na........I am Sorry......aap mere aur aapka waqt barbad kar rahe hai........

Kashish nirash hoke file leke bahar chali jati hai...............

Kashish: ab kya karoon.........manager ne saff saaf mana kar diya loan dene se........ab to ek hi upay hai Tushar.........nahi main us insaan se ....nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti........koi to rasta hoga........abhi bhi che din hai mere pass........
goodkashish2008-07-24 21:16:40

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Comments (9)

the story is going very interesting..i like the way the story is progressing very much... dear please sujal ko wapas le aao na.. i cannot see kashish suffering... woh bechari..jab bhi sujal ko takleef hothi hai kashish ke dil ko yeh mehsoos hotha hai... aur kashish se yeh bardhast nahii ho rahii hai...i seriously cannot see kashish like this..with so much of pain, so much of tears... i really feel bad for her.. my heart goes out for her... whenever i see her tadping for sujal..agar aise hii chaltha raha tho kashish pagal ho jayegi... she will not be able to take it.... aur upar se woh tushaar and co.. mujhe un par tho bada ghussa aa raha hai.. i'am just waiting for the time jab sujal wapas aayega aur dushmano kii baand bajayega..... waise for the next part i think jab kashish tushaar se mada maang ne jaayegi tho tushaar , kashish se kahega kii kashish usse shaddi kar le.. aur shayad kashish haan bhi keh de.. but i don't want this to happen.. please kuch karo..sujal aur kashish ko mila do.....do post the next part soon..me waiting for it eagerly.. sun_4232008-07-27 10:15:32

16 years ago

WOW...i just love it...u write so good.keep up the good work and continue soon//

16 years ago

Gr88 Part yaar...........bas waiting for sujal and kashish milan

Plz cont........ soon

take care

16 years ago

gr8 part

kashish bichari kitna sahey gi ab plzz sujal ko wapis le aao

contiune soon

16 years ago

Hi Kashish
hope u r fine
Awsome part yara..............bas sujal k kashish se jaldi mila dijiye.......waiting for next part plz post soon..amazing ff yaar..es se pahle humne etni achi ff nahi pari.......keep writing and keep rocking


Take care

16 years ago

wow lovely part ab sujal aur kashish ki milan jaldi se karvado plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

16 years ago

amazing part finally sujal ko hosh agaye hope sujal comes back home soon and sorts all the problems out sujal and rano scene was beautifully written the way sujal described kashish was really good i really liked the way angad and kripa believed kashish and wanted 2 help her

16 years ago

hey nice part kashish..sujal ko jaldi vaapas le aao...hope sujal cumes fast...n wo inn sab [rishi..tushaar..swyam] kii chutti kar de...aur phir he n kashish 2gether woww.......plz continue soon...

16 years ago

wow kashish very well written part...................and really d lines of sujal that "chand me to dag hi..............................." beautiful lines........................and kya thapad th.rishi really desrved that slap.....bt plz bring back sujal...........and continue soon

16 years ago

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