Chapter 84

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Part-84

Kashish office se ghar aati hai jaha pe Prerna uska intzaar kar rahi hoti hai.........

Prerna: kya baat hai beta.........aaj dair kar di......

Kashish: woh kal to chuti hai aur phir ek file ko aaj hi submit karna tha to dair ho gayi........i am soory meri waje se aapko bhi taklif huyi.........

Prerna: chup kar warna ek dungi.........ab chal khana khale........

Kashish: nahi Mama.........bhukh nahi.......woh sham ko kuch office me khaya tha..........aap so jaiye........agar muje bhukh lagegi to main kha lungi........waise mama aapko kal ka din to yaad hai na......

Prerna: kal ka din.....haa muje yaad hai........kal Kripa aur uske bache ki liye tune jagrata rakhi hai na..........maine sab rishtedaro aur dosto ke yaha pe phone karke bata diya hai...........

Kashish: thik hai......aapne Tulsiaaunti aur Prachi ko.......

Prerna: haa Tulsi ko kuch kaam hai is liye woh shaam ko aayegi lekin Prachi aur Neev subaah aajayenge kaam me haath batane ke liye........

Kashish: thik hai.......main chalti hoon...........

Prerna: good night......

Kashish: good night mama..........

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Dusri aur Sujal neend me bhi woh aakhri din ke sapne dekhta hai........aur woh kuch mehsoos kar raha hota hai........maathe se pasina chut raha hota hai.........

Rano: maa jaldi chalo......woh sehri babu ko pata nahi kya ho gaya hai........

Aurat: kya baat hai........chal main dekhti hoon....tu jake vedji ko bula la.........

Rano: abhi aayi main.........

Rano vedji ke ghar daudi jati hai......

Aurat: kuch nahi hoga beta tumhe abhi vedji aate hi honge..........

Woh aurat Sujal ke sir pe thande pani ka kapda rakhti hai jab Rano vedji ke saath aati hai...........vedji use dekh rahe the ...........

Kashish apne kamre me kapde badal ke sone ja rahi thi jab uska dil bechen ho jata hai...............Kashish kamre se bahar aake dekhti hai lekin koi nahi hota........

Kashish: pata nahi.........yeh kaisi aahat hai.........lagta hai koi toofan aanewala hai....lekin aaj se pehle aisi tez hawa ki aawaz nahi suni.......aisa lagta hai ki yeh hawaiye muje kuch kehna chahti hai..........hey bhagwan muje kuch samaj me nahi aata ki tum kya ishare karke muje batana chahte ho.........muje kuch samaj nahi aata...............

Vedji: dekhiye behenji......yeh bilkul thik hai......inhe kabhi bhi hosh aa sakta hai.........

Aurat: yeh bar bar kisi ka naam pukarta hai......

Vedji: shayad apni patni ke bare me hoga........aisi halat me aisa hota hai........

jab Sujal apni aankhein kholta hai........

Sujal(screams): Kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........

Kashish ki jaise jaan nikal gayi ho..................

Kashish chalne jati hai lekin Kashish ka dupatta sidiyon pe fas jata hai.........

 
Kashish: Sujalllllll...............

Kashish ki saasien tez ho jati hai..........Kashish wahi pe khadi reh jati hai..........

Vedji: beta..........tumhara naam kya hai.......kaha ke rehnewale ho tum.......

Sujal: main.........main Sujal Garewal............Delhi se............main yaha kaise........

Aurat: pichle teen mahino se tum gehri neend me the.............

Sujal; kya teen mahineeeeeeee............muje jana hoga Kashish mera intzaar kar rahi hogi.....

Aurat: kaun hai yeh kashish............................aap neend me bhi bar bar uska naam le rahe the......

Sujal: mera pyaar......meri patni.......meri zindagi Kashish..........muje abhi jana hoga........pata nahi yeh teen mahine kaise gujare hoge usne.........

Sujal chalne ke liye khada hota hai lekin uth nahi pa raha hota........

Sujal: main chal kyun nahi sakta.........mere pairo me bahot dard ho raha hai......

Vedji: tum teen mahine tak nahi chale is liye.........roz thodi thodi koshish karoge to tum phir se pehle ki tarah ho jaoge..........

Sujal: yaha pe koi phone hai.....muje apne parivar ko batana hoga ki main zinda hoon.......

Aurat: yaha pe koi phone nahi milega tumhe.............seher jane ke liye bhi bus aur phone tumhe pass wale gaav se milega......filhal tumhare liye aaram karna hi zaroori hai.......

Sujal: lekin mera ghar jana zaroori hai.....aap samaj nahi rahi......Kashish mere bigar nahi reh sakti........

Vedji: ab jab itna intzaar kiya waha kuch din aur sahi.........ab tum aaram karo main tumhe kal dekhne aaunga...........

Sujal: sukhriya aap sab ka........

Aurat: hamare yaha mehman bhagwan hota hai.......tumhe bhukh lagi hogi........main khana leke aati hoon................

Vedji wapas ghar chale jate hai aur Aurat aur rano rasoi karne lagte hai..........

Sujal: Kashish.........tum rona mat........tumhara Sujal bahot jald tumhare pass aajayega.........bahot jald hum phir se ek saath hoge..........aur yeh mera tumse vaada hai.................

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Kashish neeche aake khurshi pe beth ke apni zindagi ke bare me soch rahi hoti hai........

Kashish: kitne khel khele zindagi ne Sujal hamare saath........hamari zindagi ko hi ek khel banake rakh diya hai upperwale ne.....aaj main kripa kw liye bahot khush hoon aur main janti hoon ki tum bhi Angad ke liye kitne khush ho......Sujal aaj hamara bacha hota to woh kitna bada ho gaya hota na....lekin ab to bacha bhi nahi raha aur tum bhi........ab main thak gayi hoon roj roj ke khel khelte khelte.....ab chain ki saans lena chahti hoon tumhari baahoin....ab main tumhare pass aana chahti hoon.........ab mujse yeh duri bardasat nahi hoti...............
 

Jab Kashish ko lagta hai ki darwaze ki aur aahat huyi........

Sujal: Kashish...............

Kashish Sujal ki aur dekhti hi reh jati hai.........

 
Kashish: Sujal tum..........

Sujal: Kashish.........mujse tumhari aankhoin me aanshu nahi dikhai dete..........main tumse is tarah nahi dekh sakta.........tum ro mat.......main bahot jald tumhare pass wapas aa raha hoon...........main kahi nahi gaya.........main aaj bhi tumhare pass hoon........tumne muje kahi nahi khoya..........main vaada karta hoon ki main wapas laut ke aaunga.......mera intzaar karna........main aaunga tumhare liye.........

Kashish: haa Sujal main tumhara intzaar karungi.....laut aao mere pass.............laut aao meri zindagi me mera Sujal banke...........
 

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Subaah main Kashish taiyaar hoke neeche aati hai...........jaha pe Neev aur prachi aaye huye hote hai.........

Prachi: kaisi hai Bhabhi aap..........

Kashish: sab thik hai.........tu bata kaisi ho.......ghar pe sab kaise hai..........

Prachi: sab thik hai..........aaj to khushi ka din hai......kripabhabhi ab maa bannewali hai.......

Kashish: haa.........aaj ka din main kaise bhool sakti hoon....pichle saal to tumhare bhaiyaa the to.......

Prachi: bhabhi aaj kya hai.........aap kuch chupa rahi ho.........

Kashish: nahi koi baat nahi..........chalo chalte hai.....sab intzaar kar rahe hai......

Sab log hall me beth ke baatein kar rahe hote hai...........

Kashish: kya baat hai Neev aaj kal tum bade chup chup rehte ho....

Neev: aisi koi baat nahi Bhabhi......woh bas kaam badh gaya hai.......

Kashsih: kam ke chakar me hamari prachi ko mat bhool jana...........

Neev: jee Bhabhi.........

Anjali: Kashish.....tumne Panditjee ko to bula diya hai na......
Kashish: jee........woh waqt pe aa jayenge..........

Kashish kuch sochne lagti hai......

Angad: kya baat hai kis soch me kho gayi..........

Kashish: kuch nahi...........aaj tumme se kisi ko yaad nahi aaj kaun sa din hai...

Kripa: aaj kya khaas hai.....muje to kuch yaad nahi........

Kashish: kripa tum bhi........khair chodo na .....

Jab darwaze ki ghanti bajti hai..........

Charu: main jake dekhti hoon..........

Charu jake darwaza kholti hai waha pe ek aadmi hota hai.........

Charu: jee aap kaun.........

Person: jee main designer Raj Singhania ke waha se ........yeh gift Mrs. Kashish Garewal ke liye.......

Charu: ek minute.........Kashishbhabhi aapke liye parsal hai.......

Kashish: mere liye............aap kaun ....aur yeh parsal kisne bheja hai..........

Person: main Raj Singhania ke Boutique se hoon......aaj se kareeban Char Mahine pehle Sujalsir waha pe aaye the..........Rajsir ke kuch kaam ke silsile me.......jab unhe yeh dress bahot pasand aaya tha ......lekin aapke pati chahte the ki iski delivary aaj hi ho..........Happy Birthday Mam.........

Kashish: kisne kaha.....aapne abhi aisa kaha na ki mere pati Sujal ne yeh.....

Person: haa mam........aapke pati hi the woh Sujal Garewal..unhe main achchi tarah se janta hoon lekin aap is tarah se kyun muje dekh rahi hai.......kuch hua hai..........

Charu: jo nahi hona chahiye woh hua hai.......Sujalbhaiyaa ab is duniya me nahi rahe.....

Person: I am so sorry Mam.....muje nahi pata tha........

Kashish: koi baat nahi..................aap ja sakte hai..........thank you...........

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Anjali: I am sorry kashish...........hum bhool gaye ki aaj tumhara janamdin hai.......

Kripa: hume maff kar de Kashsih.........

Kashish: dekha.....kitni ajeeb baat hai na ki aapko mera janamdin yaad nahi raha........aaj ka din aapko yaad nahi tha lekin Sujal ko yaad tha............woh aaj yaha pe na hoke bhi muje apne hisse ki khushi de gaye.....woh aaj bhi apna sara farz nibha raha hai.......Sujal aaj bhi apna vaada nibha raha hai ..........usne mujse vaada kiya tha ki har janamdin ke din woh sabse pehle muje wish karega aur aaj dekhiye woh sach ho gaya........aaj muje yakeen ho gaya hai ki woh muje chod ke kahi nahi gaya.......ab muje yakeen ho gaya hai ki woh zinda hai...............Angad hamara Sujal kahi nahi gaya.........usne mujse khud kaha hai ki woh wapas aayega..............aur dekha aaj to unhone saboot bhi bhej diya...........yeh tohfa keh raha hai ki woh bahot jald wapas aayenge..................woh wapas aayega mere liye........main uska intzaar karungi..........

Kashish woh tohfa kholti hai jisme ek bahot hi khubsurat sa dress hota hai aur ek khat bhi hota hai..........Kashish us khat ko dekh kar puri tarah se tut jati hai.........Kripa woh khat ko apne haath me leke padhti hai.......

Kripa:

Meri pyari biwi Kashish,

aaj to tum bahot khush hogi aur hona bhi chahiye......aakhir tumhara janamdin jo hai........bahot bahot mubarak ho aaj ke din.........bhagwan kare tumhe meri umar bhi lag jaye.........waise mera surprize pasand aaya na tumhe.......muje achchi tarah se yaad hai ki pichli bar bhi tumne isi rang ka dress pehna tha aur jisme tum bahot khubsurat lag rahi thi.......main aaj bhi tumhe isi rang main dekhna chahta hoon.........Kashish aaj main jo baat tumse karne ja raha hoon woh kabhi maine shayad nahi ki hai tumse...........main tumhe dil se sukhriya karna chahta hoon muje meri zindagi lauta ne ke liye.......jab main us cancer se thik ho gaya tab se dil me ek darr sa beth gaya hai......tumse durr hone ka.......lekin maut ka koi bharosha nahi hota.....lekin agar muje kabhi bhi kuch ho jaye to tum jina nahi chodogi............kashish jana to her kisi ko hai ek din lekin tum kabhi bhi apni zindagi jina nahi chodogi..................main tumse durr hoke bhi tumhare kareeb rahunga..........tumhare dil main......tumhari rooh main......hamara pyaar to aisa hai ki marke bhi nahi marega........main chahta hoon ki tum woh her khushi manao jo mere hote huye tum manati thi..............kyunki kisi ke jane se zindagi to nahi rukhti..........is waqt tumhe mujpe bahot gussa aa raha hoga ki main aisi kyun baatein kar raha hoon........kyunki kabhi bhi aisi koi baat nahi jo maine tumse chupayi ho...yeh ek hi baat thi jo main kabhi tumse keh nahi sakta is liye kagaz pe likh raha hoon........Kashish tum meri zindagi ho aaj agar yeh Sujal hai to sirf Kashish ki waje se..........main apne aap ko tumhare bigar jine ka soch bhi nahi sakta.......ab tum rona mat shuru karna kyunki main tumhe chod ke kahi nahi janewala.......aur yeh mera vaada hai.......hamesha tumhare shaath rahunga.......aankh bandh karke muje mehsoos kar lena.........ab main tumhe apni baatoin se aur bore nahi karunga.............kyunki main sham ko jaldi se ghar aa raha hoon......aur abhi to muje hamare bache unke bacho ki shaadiyaan dekhni hai tumhare saath........aur haa ek baat aur aaj sham ko maine ek party rakhi hai jisme tumhe yahi dress pehnni hai......ab ek achchi si smile ke saath muje phone nahi karogi.............muje pata hai ki tum phone karke yahi kahogi ki Sujal iski kya zaroorat thi to iski bahot zaroorat thi kyunki main apni pyari biwi ke chehre pe woh hasi dekhna chahta hoon.............aur haa yaad rakhna main tumse bahot pyar karta hoon...........I love you kashish........ab wahi bethi mat rehna main tumhare phone ka intzaar kar raha hoon......bye jaan....

Tumhara aur sirf tumhara pati Sujal

Kashish woh khat me Sujal ke haath ke akhar dekhti hai aur tut jati hai.....

Kashish:Sujallllllllllllll.............kyun kiya tumne aisa....kaha phone karoon main tumhe......main bhi to tumhari aawaz ko sunne ke liye tadap rahi hoon......kyun kiya mujse itna pyaar...........kyun Sujallllllll..........meri sawal ka jawab do.......main deti hoon tumse tumhare sawal ka jawab........I love u Sujal............i love u.............

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Kashish woh khat ko apne haath me leke rone lagti hai.........abhi bhi woh sari baatein uske kano me gunj rahi hoti hai.........jab darwaza khula hone pe bahar ki tez hawa andar aane lagti hai sab udne lagta hai ......Sujal ki tasvir se woh harmala neeche gir jati hai..........sab log use dekhte hi reh jate hai.....Akshat jake woh harmala wapas rakhne hi ja raha hota hai.....

Kashish: ruk jao....

Akshat: Bhabhi......

Kashish: nahi Akshat.......aaj muje yakeen ho gaya hai ki woh zinda hai.......woh mere saath hai.............woh yahi hai mere pass..........

Kashish Sujal ki woh tasvir apne sine se laga ke woh dress aur khat leke andar chali jati hai..............

Kripa: yeh sab kya ho raha hai........hum aaj ka din bhool gaye...........

Angad: humse bahot badi galti ho gayi ........hume to Sujal ke jane ke bad kashish ka aur khayal rakhna chahiye tha lekin........

Kripa: nahi Angad..........Kashish ka khayal sirf Sujal hi rakh sakta hai........ab muje Kashish ki baatoin pe yakeen hone laga hai ki Sujal zinda hai.......

Akshat: bhabhi aap bhi........kabhi kahi suna hai ki marnewale wapas aaye ho.......yeh sab Kashishbhabhi ka wahem hai........

Anjali: ek patni ke liye pati ka hona wahem nahi hota.......woh uski aahat se use dhundh leti hai.........

Akshat: aap logo jo karna hai karo......main keh raha hoon ki isme sirf aur sirf hum sab ka dil hi tutega.........bahot kar ke hum Bhabhi ko yaha tak laye hai phir se woh ab umeed laga bethi hai..........

Kripa: umeed bhi apno se hi hum karte hai..........

Kavya: Akshat........jab umeed tutegi tab ki tab dekhenge.......is waqt to Kashish khush hai.....shayad isi umeed pe woh apni zindagi nikal de....

Akshat: aap ko jo thik lage woh kijiye..........main kisi ko kuch nahi kahuga........

Angad: ab tumhara gussa thanda ho gaya ho to hum kaam kare.........

sab log kaam karne lag jate hai..........

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Sham ka waqt hota hai Anjali aur Kripa Kashish ke kamre me aate hai............Kashish abhi bhi taiyaar huye bina bethi hoti hai.........kashish ke pass abhi bhi woh dress pada hua hota hai........

Anjali: Kashish......abhi tak taiyaar nahi huyi............

Kashish: jee kuch kaha tumne ..........

Kripa: kis soch me padi ho......

Kashish: kuch nahi.........mera dil yeh keh raha hai ki muje yeh dress pehna chahiye kyunki Sujal aisa chahta tha lekin phir hamara yeh samaj kya kahega..........kya main unke sawal ke jawab de paungi............

AnjalI; tumhe kya karna hai yeh tum apne dil se socho........yeh mat socho ki duniya kya kahegi.........agar tumhe yakeen hai ki Sujal tumhare saath hai to hum sab tumhare saath hai.......

Kripa: aur tum kab se dusro ke bare me sochne lagi......tum to hamesha se Sujal ke bare me pehle sochti thi na to ab kya hua...........nahi Kashsih aaj tum yeh dress pehnogi kyunki Sujal aisa chahta hai........ab jaldi se taiyaar ho jao neeche sab tumhara intzaar kar rahe hai..........

Kashish: tum sahi keh rahi ho.......kya yeh duniya mere bare me sochti hai............nahi na to main kyun inke bare me sochu...........ab tum neeche jao main taiyaar hoke aati hoon..........

Anjali: jaldi aana...........

Kashish woh dress pehen ke wash rom se bahar aati hai........

 
Kashish: maine yeh rang pehen ke achcha kiya ki nahi woh main nahi janti .........lekin tumhari khushi ke liye main kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar hoon .............logo ki so baatein sunne ke liye bhi.....

kashish dressing table pe jake taiyar hone lagti hai jab uski nazar Sujal ki tasvir pe jati hai.........

 
Kashish: aaj bataoge nahi kaisi lag rahi hoon.........janti hoon yahi kahonge ki mujpe to her kuch bhi achcha lagta hai lekin tumhare muh se apni tarif sunna muje achcha lagta hai..........ab main chalti hoon neeche sab mera intzaar kar rahe honge..............

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Kashish woh dress pehen ke neeche aa rahi hoti hai jab sab use gur ke dekh rahe hote hai.........Tushar, swayam aur Rishi kashish ko dekhte hi reh jate hai.............

 
Rishi: Bhai ek baat kahoon..........agar aapko Kashish pasand na ho to muje bahot pasand hai.......dekhiye to sahi uski aur.....

Swayam: waise baat to sahi hai.....she is beautiful......

Tushar: tum dono apni bakwas bandh karoge.........abhi mera badla pura nahi hua..........

Kashish bina kuch kahe Anjali aur Charu ke pass jake khadi ho jati hai...........aisa lag raha tha ki abhi Kashish ki aankhoin se aanshu behne lagenge..............

Kripa: bahot pyari lag rahi ho........janamdin ki bahot bahot badhai.....

Anjali: kya baat hai kuch pareshan lag rahi hai.......

Kashish: sab log aise dekh raha hai ki......

Aurat 1: kya zamana aa gaya hai.........sharam hi nahi aaj kal...........

Aurat 2: are yahi logo se to kalyug ki shururat hoti hai.........aaj kal dharm ka to kuch raha hi nahi..........

Aurat 3: dekho to sahi kya saj dhaj ke aayi hai.........pati ko mare abhi teen mahine hi nahi huye ki.......yahi to hai na Sujal ki widhwa.......sharam jaisi koi haya hi nahi bachi.........

Kashish ka jaise hosh hi ud jata hai..............

Aurat 1: Kashish naam hai na.........Prernajee kya yahi sanskar diye hai aapne apni bahu me..........

Prerna: jee woh.....abhi bachi hai...........Kashish jake kapde badal ke aao..........

Anjali: kyun jake yeh kapde badle.........kya galti ki hai.........

Aurat 2: itna sawarna ise shobha nahi deta.........widhwa ki zindagi me koi rang nahi hote.........

Charu: kyun aapki beti to pichle mahine hi mar gayi thi to aap to itni sajke aayi hai.......

Aurat 3: kyunki widhwa ke liye hamare samaj me alag riwaz hai aur yahi sadiyon se chala aa raha hai.........

Kashish: main nahi manti aise riwaz ko....bahot hi khokhle kisam ke riwaz hai......aaj main yeh rang nahi pehen sakti kyunki mera pati mere saath nahi...........kya pati ke chale jane ke bad kyun hum aurat ko jine ka hakk nahi........aaj aap sab log mere pe is liye ungli utha rahe hai na ki meri maang me sindoor nahi......gale me mangalsutra nahi.......to aaj main aapki yahi khawaish bhi puri kar deti hoon.......

Kashish jake Sindoor haath me leti hai............
 

Kashish: matarani muje shakti dena..

Kashish maathe me sindoor bhar deti hai aur maa ke pass pade mangalsutra ko haath me leke use pehen leti hai........

sab log Kashish ko dekhte hi reh jate hai ki yeh kya kiya usne.........

Aurat 1: yeh tumne kya kiya.........dharam ka apman kar diya is ne to.......ise ab hamare samaj me jine ka koi hakk nahi banta......

Kripa: aap hote kaun hai hume samaj ke riwaz shikhane wale.......

Aurat 1: hum se hi yeh samaj chalta hai......aagar isi samaj me rehna hai to hamare riwaz ke mutabi rehna hoga......

Kripa: lekin........

Kashish: bolne de ise Kripa aaj.........aaj main sab ke muh hamesha ke liye bandh kar dena chahti hoon.........bahot seh liya maine aapki batein ab bardast nahi hota........

Aurat 3: yeh ladki pagal ho gayi hai........

Kashish: haa main pagal ho gayi hoon........apne pati ka intzaar karna pagalpan hai to haa muje yeh pagalpan manzoor hai...........ab to mujpe koi ungli nahi uthayega na........aaj meri maang me bhi sindoor hai......mere gale me bhi mangalsutra hai......... aap logo ki tarah...........ab kisi ko kuch kehna hai.....haa aapko kuch kehna hai......aap ne muje widhwa kaha tha na........aap sun lijiye main Sujal ki widhwa nahi hoon.........main sujal ki patni hoon.........mera pati mara nahi.........woh zinda hai......muje vishwas hai ki Sujal zaroor wapas aayega.........aur aaj se main Suhagan ki zindagi jiungi........suna aap logo ne........aaj main suhagan hoon ........main woh sab kuch karungi jo ek patni apne pati ke liye karti hai.......main aaj aap sab se vaada karti hoon ki main Sujal ko wapas isi jagah pe laungi........isi jagah woh phir se mere saath saat phere lega.....aur yeh Kashish Sujal Garewal ka vaada hai............

Kashish daud ke apne kamre me chali jati hai........sab log jaise abhi bhi manne ko taiyaar hi nahi the ki abhi kya hau.......

Kashish: Sujal.......maine jo kiya woh thik kiya na,,,,,,,,tum mere saath hona.......muje tumhari bahot zaroorat hai.........main tumhe dhundh ke laungi.........i promise you that.......hum phir se ek honge.........hum phir se jiyenge ek saath............

 
goodkashish2008-07-19 18:17:56

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hi Kashish

hope u r fine there...plz jaldi post karo next part .............I love u r ff next part pa besabri se intezaar hai ..........Bapanah pyaar hai aaja Tera intezaar hai aaja O bapanah pyaar hai aaja tera intezaar hai aaja

hope u will post soon

take care

16 years ago

sujal ko hosh aagaya thts really good....plzzz unite sujal and kashish soon i cant see kashish like tht....i will be waiting for next update....

16 years ago

awesome part. happy that sujal wl b with kash soon. and she wl prove all the stupid people wrong.

16 years ago

ita a very nice part.kashish has taken a nice decision........................................................and d letter part was very cute...........and how they ppl could forget her birthday....................................and finally sujal is back to his senses.........and now i m waiting eagerly for his back.....and d day wen kashish will able to prove herself right ,,dat sujal is stil alive.plz continue soon

16 years ago


Hi Kashis

Great part yaar..u did a very good job......humne aapka ff part 1st se part 84 tak para ..its awsome yara......jitni tareef kare kam he hai... love never die ..Mohabbat hamesha jinda rahti hai..Suajl aur kashis ke beech jo rishta hai wahi sacchi mohabbat hai its true love....

Waiting for next part plz yaar jaldi se contine kar dijiye naa..warna aapko goli mar denge..lekin phir yeh bhi sochte hain agar aapko goli mardi ..to phir aise writer kahan milegi..aur writer se jada u r so nice aur aap jaise lgon ki es duniay ko bahut zaroorat hai....nahi yaar hum aapko goli nahi maar sakte..acha pyari kashish jaldi se post kar dijiye naa next part.........


best regard and take care
byeajnabi_sahil2008-07-21 08:46:33

16 years ago

awsome part yaar...plz continue soon..ab aur intezaar nahi hota, sacchi mohabbat esi ko kahte hain jo sujal aur kashish ke beech hai..it was very nice part yara.....jaldi contine karo yaar warna maar paregi..ha ha ha

16 years ago

awesome part.....................................finally sujal hosh main agaya hai ab woh jaldi se kashish ky pass wapas ajaye ..................................kashish ne tu sab ki bolti band kardi yaar kia kia nai kaha uss ne..........................con't soon

16 years ago

fantastic part kashish ne kiya jawab diye awesome,

aur sabse achi baat sujal ko hosh aagaya ab jaldi se usee kashish se milado

continue soon

16 years ago

superb part !!! Sujal bas jaldi se wapis ajaye ab !!

16 years ago

OMG it was just awesome yaar!!!!!!!sujal ko hosh ah gaya!!!!!!!i am so happy! i thought maybe he forgot everything! but that didnt happend! he remembers everything!!!!!i am so happy! and kya jawaab diya kash ne!!!!!but how could they forgot her b'day!!!!! i felt SAD about that!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!!!!

16 years ago

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