Chapter 31

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ANANYA ROY

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19th October,2005..

0900hrs se 1400 hrs tak..Naina ka class tha..

Raj aaj Cadets ko Jungle ki taraf le gaya hai..war time strategy aur coding & signal ko sikhane k lia..

Naina 1430 baje lauti quarter..almost bhaag kar... kyonki Col. Kukreja ki meeting thi Maj.Gen Bhagat k saath..

kahi meeting khatam ho gai aur Kukreja k saamne Naina gai..to Kukreja wahi ghatia coffee peela peela k..Naina ki haalat tight kar dega..

Naina Academic section se almost bhaag kar hi Quarter ki taraf aai..

aakar ..pahle usne khana banaya..aur fir nahane gai..

Raj k Mobile par phone kia..k kab tak ayega woh.. Raj se jawab mila..k agle din subha..

abhi cadets ko Raj Jungle me Base Camp banana aur resources collect karna sikha raha hai..

Naina ne phone rakh dia..fir khana khaane baithi..

shaam k 5 baje..

Naina..notes bana rahi thi achanak.. baahar Orderly aayaa..

Naina--kyaa baat hai?

Orderly--Jee..yeh Courier aayaa hai aapke lia..

kaafi bada sa box aayaa hai...

Naina--OK..tum jaao..

Orderly ko bhej kar..Naina andar aai..

darwaza bandh kia..

aur fir usne nikala ek Metal Detector..apne kit bag se..

aas paas k jo situation hai..ho hi sakta hai..k andar bomb ho..yaa RDX..chance kaun le..?

chalo..check kar hi lete hai...

Naina ne box k aas paas Metal Detector ghumaya..

but ek jagah par jaakar.."beep .beep" sound aane lagi...

zaroor kuchh to hai...

Naina ne socha ab kyaa karegi?

kisiko bulaye yaa na bulaye...agar bula kar dekha..k kuchh   bhi nahi hai..to?  khamokha hairani ho jaayegi ..par agar kuchh nikla bhi to..Naina par charges lag sakte hai..Naina ka time kuchh achha nahi  chal raha hai.. Tharki Kukreja mauka haath se jaane nahi dega..apna impression jamaane k lia.. khud hi enquiry me fansayega..aur khud hi benefit of doubt par chhodega..

30 minute tak Naina..box k aas paas ghumti hi rahi..par andar se kisi timer ki awaz nahi aai..

aur fir himmat kar k Naina ne box ko open kia..

aur jo dikha usme...

Naina..ne khud ko kaha,"darling..bahut zada akalmand banti ho na..achha hai..tumhare lia yehi thik hai..you deserve it.."

Box me..badam,akhrot,pista,kishmish,aur  mithai k dabbe..aur alag se ek box me..laal rang ka suhaag ka joda..saath me matching ornaments..kaano ki baali,choodian..haar..paayal,ankho k lia kaajal, hontho  k lia laali..sab kuchh.. aur saath me ek parcha..

 

 

"pehla Karwa Chauth hai......solaah sringaar kar k hi manana..aur usdin baalo me gajra bhi lagana..aur mahendi bhi bhej rahi hoon.. kisi se keh kar lagva lena..aur pura din bina paani peea yeh vrat karna hai..to jo sara khana bheja hai..subha 4 baje uth kar usko khaa lena.."
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

Naina ne dekha..sab kuchh..ab tak uski zindagi me.. yeh sab bakheda nahi tha..par ab to shaadi ho gai hai uski..hmm..pehla vrat to rakhna hi padega.. par sab se pahle Naina ne Mita Devi ko phone kia..

Mumbai k Shekhawat's Residence  me phone ki awaaz..

"Maalkin..Bahujee ka phone hai.."

Mita ne phone recieve kia..

Naina--jee..Pranam..

Mita--jeeti raho..aur sada suhgan raho..

Naina--aapne itne keemti zebraat yuh hi courier bhejen..kyon?

Mita--main khud aanaa chaahti thi.. Bahu.. par.. mauka  mila hi nahi..aur fir tum dono zaroori kaam se gaye ho Dehradun..

Naina--jee..achha..mere Papa se baat hui ??..main bahut dino se phone nahi kar pai..

Mita--haa..bilkul..kal hi unka phone aayaa tha..woh thik hai..actually jab se tum dono ki shaadi hui hai.. tab se hi unki tabiyat kuchh zada hi achhi ho gai hai..

Naina--jee..yeh to achhi baat hai..aur ghar par sab thik thaak?Dady kaise hain?

Mita--achhe hain..aur unko Election k lia ticket bhi mil rahi hai..

Naina--achhi baat hai..well woh Election ladenge.. yeh  baat main jaanti thi..

Mita samajh gai..k zaroor ..kuchh aisi baatein Raj aur Jagat k bich hui hai..jo Naina k kaano tak pahuch chuki hai..kyonki Naina k awaz se zara si narazgi ka pata chala ..

Mita--dekho beti..jo hua usme Raj ka koi dosh nahi..

Naina--main jaanti hoon..Raj ko..aap chinta naa kare..uspar bharosa hai mujhe..mujhe Rajveer se koi shikayat nahi..infact kaun karta hai ek bhaagi hui ladki se shaadi..?

Mita--tum naraz ho ..saaf pata chal raha hai Bahu..   dekho..agar tum yeh sochti ho..k Raj ne tumko sharminda karne k lia..aisa kuchh nahi hai..

Naina--jee nahi main aisa kuchh bhi nahi sochti..

Mita--mujhe batane to do..k Raj actually tumhare bare me kyaa sochta hai...

fir Mita ne sab kuchh bataya..Raj jab ghar aayaa tha..tab Raj ki haalat kyaa thi..Raj ka dard ..uski tadap..bar bar Naina k dard ko apne dil me mehsoos karna..Raj ka paagalon ki tarha rona..sab kuchh Mita ne bataya Naina ko..

Naina--jee..main samjhi..

Mita--dekho..Bahu..wajah koi bhi rahi ho..is baat se tum inkaar kar nahi sakti k tum dono ne hi zindagi k  6 saal aise hi barbad kar die hain..isme koi  shak nahi k..Raj aur tum..ek dusre k lia hi bane the..isi lia dekho na..tum dono ka rishta aakhir jud hi gaya..

Naina--main jaanti hoon..

Mita--aur..meri rai me..tumhare lia Raj se behtar koi tha nahi..naa hi Raj k lia tum se behtar koi ho sakti hai,to..ek Saas ban kar nahi...ek Maa ban kar bhi nahi..ek aurat k hisab se..main tumko ek baat kahungi..isko gaanth baandh lena..

Naina--jee..Uniform me gaanth baandhne ki jagah hi nahi hai..

Mita--ok..apne dimag me yeh baat bitha lo..k..Raj ko samjho..jisdin puri tarha usko samajh jaaogi.. usdin tum samjhogi k..asal me.. tumne kisko paayaa hai..Raj samajh chuka hai..tumhari ahmiat..par abhi tak tum Raj ahmiat samajh nahi paai..

Naina--koshish karungi..aur haa..bich bich me aapko disturb zaroor karungi k..Karwa Chauth ki Puja kaise karni hai..

Mita--zaroor karna..

Naina--achha..Mummy..main phonne rakhti hoon.. bahut zada thak gai hoon..

Mita--ok..aaraam karo..aur haa..apna aur Raj ka khayal rakhna..

Naina--jee..

Naina ne phone rakh dia..

aur fir us bade se box ko Naina ne chhupa dia.. almari me..aise ..taa k Rajveer ki nazar naa pade waha par..

fir shaam ko fir se notes banane baithi..aur raat k 10 baje dinner kia..

aur bistar me aa kar chup chaap so gai..

Raj to aaj raat ko lautega hi nahi..

gehri neend me kho gai Naina...

raat k 2 baje Raj ka phone aayaa..

Naina--hmm..bolo..

Raj--arre yaar..kuchh to khayal karo..k main duty me hoon..aise sexy andaaz se bolo ki..k "bolo"..admi ki to bolti hi bandh ho jaayegi..na!!

Naina--hmmm..

Naina neend me hi baatein kar rahi hai..aur lambi lambi saanse chhod rahi hai....

Raj--Naina main mar jaaoonga..please..yuh thandi aahen mat bharo..yaar.. kaha hum log ......jaayenge Switzerland.. par nahi.. yeha bhej dia humko..

Naina--haa..huummm..Raj,...

Raj--ok..tum so jaao..kal baat karta  hoon tumse..

Naina--ummm..

Raj--I love you..

Naina--ummm..

Raj--ok..bye..

Naina--ummm..

Raj ne line cut kar dia..

subha..7 baje Raj lauta Quarter me..

Naina ka first half me class nahi tha..

woh to ghode bech kar so rahi thi..

Raj ne bell bajaya..

ek baar..2 baar..3 baar..

Raj(man hi man)--isko kyaa hua?saat janam k neend ka quota ek hi din me complete kar rahi hai kya?

"Naina..kyaa hua..darwaza kholo..yaar..mere paas chaabi bhi nahi hai.. hello....Naina.."

Raj darwaza peetne laga..

Naina ab jaag gai...

Naina ne darwaza khola..Raj saamne khada  tha..

Naina k baal bikhre hue the..ankho me abhi tak neend..nighty idhar ki udhar ho gai thi..

thodi der pahle Raj ko bahut zada gussa aayaa tha Naina k upar..

par abhi Raj ka saaraa gussa paani paani ho gaya..

puri raat k drill k baad..

cadets k lia 24 hrs ki recovery leave sanction ki jaa chuki hai..Raj k lia bhi..

achanak Orderly aayaa..

Naina k lia message tha.."Class schedulled at 1500 hrs is cancelled.Next Class will be held on tomorrow at 1000 hrs."

Raj ne message recieve kia..

Naina abhi bhi neend me..ankhe bandh hai..

Raj ne usko goad me utha kar..fir se bistar me leta dia..

fir...darwaza bandh kia Raj ne..

Raj ne apne shoes utaare..aur fir uniform..

Raj Naina k upar geera..

Naina ko smootch karne laga Raj..

Naina response karne k haalat me nahi thi..

woh gehri neend me thi..

Raj--Naina..utho..Naina..

Raj ne fir se Naina ko  smootch kia..

Raj ko aisa laga k..Naina ne uski baat maan li... kyonki Naina k muh se cigarette ki badboo nahi aa rahi thi..

Raj ne ek aur baar Naina ko smootch kia..

Naina--huufffmmmm..aaaa..

Raj--sorry..pura paseena paseena ho chuka hoon.. abhi nahake ata hoon..

Naina--umm..nahi..aise hi raho na...yeh smell mujhe achhi lag rahi hai..

Raj--what?

Naina--umm..

Naina ki ankhe bandh thi...usi haalat me Naina ne Raj ko apni taraf khinch lia..

zameen par..Raj ki baniyan..Naina ki nighty..aur baaki k saare kapde ek ek kar k geerne lage..

Raj hi saare kapde ek ek kar k utaar raha tha....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yakkudimag2008-08-03 05:49:57

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are yaar..pura din bhukhe reh kar..Vrat rakhna.. itna aasaan nahi..achhe achho ki haalat tight ho jaati hai..

and last scene hmmm..mujhe maalum tha..pasand aayega..
aur abhi to..hot scenes aur milenge..
aur Mita se Naina ne jis tarha baat ki..ghalat tha..par..Naina ka gussa bhi jaayez hai..agar sasoor aisa kaam kare aur saas usi sasoor ka gungaan kare..achhe achho ki sulagh jaati hai..

16 years ago

Thanks for that long explanation..i got my answer expect one...does naina love rajveer??

MIta devi unlike her husband is very caring....when she said so many things to naina all naina did was just hmm hmm..what yaar naina doesn't speak when she has too....i guess she didn't have any effect about what mita devi said...
Why is naina so reluctant to keep vrath for such a darling husband...i really feel she doesn't know how to be happy......i feel sad for raj....i have never seen(read) her telling him that she loves him nor action say so...why??Sharing a bed with him doesn't mean she loves him..that too she doesn't do full heartedly ...i feel raj forces her sometimes..
Naina's character is very hard for me to relate to or even understand....but i just love raj's character ..he is a perfect husband material...he loves naina so much...it's so easy for anyone to see...does naina realize this??I know my post is little anti-naina type but i cant help..sorry..got carried away
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16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! Raj jungle mein gaya hai!!!! Bechari Naina!!! Usko Kukreja ke darr se bhagte rehna padh raha hai!!!!! Naina ne box ko metal detector se check kiya!!!!! Isko bolte hai khoda pahad aur nikla chuha!!!!! Naina ne sahi kaha khudko!!!! Bahut akalmand samjhti hai khudko!!!!! I enjoyed the metal detector scene!!!! Par usne jo Kukreja ke baare mein socha woh galat nahi tha!!! Kukreja aisa kar sakta hai!!!! Naina ki saas ne uske liye sargi bheji hai!!!! Toh kya Naina vrat nahi rakhna chahti kya?? She is keeing it pretty reluctantly!!!! Naina bhi naa!!! Kisi se kaise baat karti hai!!!!! Apni saas se ish tarah baat kar rahi thi!!!! Unhone ne toh kitne armaano se apne bahu k liye sab kuch bhej rahi thi aur Naina!!!! Waise Naina ki saas hai kaafi samajhdar!!! Sab kuch samaj gayi!!!!! Accha huya unhone Naina ko Raj ka dard uski tadap uske baare mein sab kuch bata diya Naina ko!!!!! Ab toh woh thoda sa samjhe!!!!! Naina ka dialogue ke uniform mein gaath bandhne ki jagah nahi hoti was too good!!!!! Raj bechara Naina ko kitna miss kar raha hai!!!!! Waha se usko call kar raha hai raat ke 2.00 a.m.aur Madam hai ki neend mein hi hai aur theek se baat bhi nahi kii!!!!! Bechara raat mei dhang se soh bhi nahi paaya hoga!!!!!! Naina ne subah bhi itni der se darwaza khola!!!!! Lagta hai kayi raaton ki neend ek saath puri kar rahi thi!!!!!! Naina ko dekhte hi saara gussa gayab ho gaya!!!!! Waah!!!! Aate hi shuru ho gaya Raj!!!! Kya baat hai!!!!! Accha huya Naina ne Raj ki baat maanli aur cigarette nahi pee!!!!! Naina bhi ab pura Raj ka saath deti hai!!!!!! Haan pura din ki chutti mili hai uska pura faida uthayenge!!!!! The end portion was too hot!!!!! Keep it up!!!!

16 years ago

bahut hi accha update tha....... enjoyed that metal detector wala scene.....ha ha ha and really lovely saa-bahu convo........... and the RN part at end ws mmmmmmmmmmm wow as always. as a whole, awesome update........ in short love ur fic as always and the updates are amazing as always!!

16 years ago


waqt k saath..insaan k andar kuchh desires paida hoti hai..mental and physical..jinke pure naa hone se..insaan me bahut zada frustration sa aa jata hai..jo sehat k lia bilkul thik nahi..

Raj aur Naina..is phase se guzar chuke hai..ab tak unki sehat geer rahi thi..
ab dono ki tabiyat sudhar rahi hai..
aur Kukreja ko Gabbar bolna..sahi hai..
but yeh sure nahi hai..k Gabbar nachaayega kisko?
kisko bolega.."ee chhamia..naacho..tum dono ka bahut nain matakka chal raha hai.."
Raj ko yaa Naina ko?I am not sure..
aur Naina bhi insaan hai..yaar..koi kasam to khaa nahi rakhi usne..k kabhi bhi kisi taraha k physical relation me involved nahi hogi..aur Raj to uska pati hai..kab tak usse door rahegi?

aur Raj EMA k baare me bol raha hai..kisko usko vakei me darr hai..double shift se..aur ek to itna loyal hai Naina ki taraf..tab bhi Naina usko take k bhao nahi puchhti..aur agar EMA kia..to Naina uski puri tarha se band baja degi..
but don't worry..Raj and Naina will be fine..yakkudimag39620.2715509259

16 years ago


Arbaaz ka Lucknow me us base me hona..Naina k lia sar dard ki wajah zaroor ban sakta tha..kyonki interrogation cell me agar Arbaaz ne bol dia k Naina k saath uska rishta kaisa tha..Naina could be in deep trouble..that is why..to be in the safe side..she wanted Arbaaz to taken away from the base..

Raj ne jab Naina ko ulta sidha kaha..tab haa..kuchh wajah aisi thi..k Naina Raj k saath..she slept with her..

Naina kumzor to padi..but apne dad se promise bhi kar k aai thi..
aur fir..Raj ka is tarha usko approach karna..Naina pighal zaroor gai thi..

and interrogation cell me Arbaaz ne jo kuchh sunaya Naina ..ko uske baad..Naina se yeh ummeed karna bhi bekaar hai..k Naina ko ab koi humdardi hogi Aabaaz se..

after all..Naina me ek practical insaan bhi hai..jo ab yeh chaahti hai..k uski bhi zindagi kuchh asaan ho..kab tak registaan me paani k lia bhaagti firegi?

16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! They did not get leave for Navaratri and Durga Puja!!!!Too bad!!!! Bechari Naina!!!!Dono se pareshan!!!!! Raj Naina ka saga pati hai!!!!! Sautela pati bhi hota hai kya!!!!! Raj is very naughty!!!!! Bechari Naina roz kitna tired ho jati hai!!!!!! Raj bhi naa!!! Kaise baat kar raha hai!!!Sarkar!!! Aur Urdu bhi bol raha hai!!!!! Naina toh uski baat sun hi nahi rahi hai!!!!!!Aur aise hi jawab diye jaa rahi hai!!!! Naina bhi naa!!! Usko itni cigarrettes nahi peeni chahiye!!!!! Raj ne sahi kaha!!!! Naina wakai mein pagal ho gayi hai!!!! Cadets ko sab kuch ek saath padha degi!!!!! Wow!!! Naina achanak romantic ho gayi aur Raj ke saath dance karne lagi aur gaana gane lagi!!!!!! This scene was very nice!!!! Raj bhi naa!!! Pure gaane ka kachumbar bana diya!!!! Aur Naina ko daatne laga aur jhagaadne laga!!!!!! Naina bhi naa ........ kya jawab deti hai!!!!!!! Naina bathroom mein gaana gane lagi!!!! Raj ne kya naam rakha uska!!!!! Lata Bhosle!!!! Lata Mangeshkar and Asha Bhosle remixed!!!!! Naina ne bhi kya gaana gaya!!!! Sahi kaha usne!!!! Raj ko toh bas Naina ko daatne ka bahana chahiye!!!!! Naina ne bulaya tab bhi Raj ko shararat hi sujta hai!!!!! Andar jane ka bahana chahiye usko!!!!! Raj grumbles so much!!! He is too funny!!! Pati nahi Library attendant!!!! Begam Saheba!!! Haa Raj shaadi ki hai ab yeh sab toh karna padega!!!!! All in one banna padega!!!!! Raj ne phir tana maara!!! Naina ne bhi khub kaha!!!!!! Raj ne khud offer kiya kapde sukhane ko!!!Thats so sweet!!!!! The song was very apt!!!!! Great choice!!!!! Par Naina ko pasand nahi aaya!!!! Naina chhod sakti hai toh chhodti kyun nahi hai smoking!!!!!! DMA aur DYWL ka new full form is very interesting!!!!! Naina ne isbaar Raj ka acchi tarah se saath diya!!!!!! Usse kaafi uksa rahi thi!!!!! I loved their love making!!!! Par Naina ka yeh kya wala concept kya hai is umar mein nahi

16 years ago

Hi!! I have just finished reading this fic of yours.Awesome.update soon.

16 years ago

Bahut hot update tha. Raj ko har waqt bus romance hi soojhta hai. Naina bhi na kisi se is tarah baat ki jaa sakti hai. Raj ki mom se aise baat kar rahi thi. Vo behari apni bahu k liye itna kuch itne armaano se bhej rahi thi aur vo. Vrat rakh paayegi vo bina paani k. Aur Naian ka vo dila ki unifrom me gath badhane ki jagah nahi hoti hai too good. Raj bechara Naina ko kitna miss karta hai isiliye raat me 2:00 a.m. par cal karta hai par madam aur un ki neend. Bechara raat me dhang se so bhi nahi paaya hoga. Isiliye to aate hi shuru ho gaya. update soon.

16 years ago

hot update awsome too good plz continue soon

16 years ago

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