Chapter 5

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ANANYA ROY

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26/01/2005

Republic Day.

Major Gen. Negi aye hain.

Tiranga lahraya unhone..Officers ki salaami li.



Raj,Naina,Sujaat, Manohar,Gautam..Jasbeer...sabhi shaamil hai is jalse me..

baki officers ki family bhi aai hai is function me.


2 officers ko chhod k sab k dost aur rishtedar aye hain.

Raj aur Naina k.

Naina Maj. Gen. Negi k sath baithi hai lunch pe..


Raj waha se guzar raha tha..


Maj. Gen. Negi ne bula lia.."Raj ..why don't you join us?"

Raj thoda hasitate karne laga..

Maj. Gen. Negi--come on..


Raj baitha unke sath..


Maj.Gen. Negi--kyaa baat hai Major..apke parivar se koi nahi aya?

Raj--actually..aj k din mere parents bahut se NGO aur school se bulava ata hai..Guest banne k lia..isi lia..

Naina idhar udhar dekh rahi thi..


Raj ne jaan bujh kar Naina ko pinch kia..


Raj--waise main akela to akela nahi aaj k din.. Captain Darbar k ghar se bhi to koi nahi aya hai...

Naina--maine aapko kuchh bola tha k apki family se koi aya kyon nahi?aap mujhe kyon hit kar rahe hain Sir?


Raj--maine sirf ek normal bat ki thi....aap to naraz ho gai..


Naina ne khud par kabu kia...she realised that she had over reacted..


achanak Naina ka mobile baja..

Naina door gai phone attend karne k lia..


Negi--Major..Naina se kabhi uski family ko lekar baat nahi karna.. isko order nahi..request samjhiye..

Raj ko bahut ajeeb laga...


Negi--pichhle 6 saal se main hi Naina ka sab kuchh hoon..uski maa..uska baap..


Raj--baki ki baat bata dijiye..I promise..main kisi ko kuchh nahi bataoonga...

Negi--jaise k tumko malum nahi hai kuchh..Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Son of Raja Jagat Singh Shekhawat.




Raj chair se geerne wala tha...


Negi--relax...main to tumko dekhte hi pehchaan gaya tha...6 saal pahle tum Captain Shekhawat the.. Naina se tumhari shadi bhi honewali thi..but badluck.. Naina shadi k din bhaag gai..



Raj--yaa..mujhe aur mere parivar ko sab k samne beizzat kar k.. apne maa baap k bare me bhi nahi socha usne..


Negi--humesha jo dikhta hai waisa hota nahi..29 March,'99..Naina bhaag aai thi mere paas..Pune.. tab main Pune Army Base me tha.. Brigadier tha tab.. woh kis wajah se bhaagi thi..mujhe malum hai..
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Raj--koi bhi wajah ho..kisi ko hak nahi banta..k kisi ki itni badi beizzati kare..

Negi--Naina meri beti ki saheli hai..6 saal se meri do betian hai..I feel pity for Naina...



Raj--she doesn't deserve that...



Negi--She deserves more Major..trust me..pyar karna aur pyar k lia apna sab kuchh is tarha qurbaan karna..koi Naina se sikhe..apni puri zindagi daaon par laga di usne...Darbar saab ko hak tha k woh apni beti ko roke..unko kya yeh hak bhi tha k kisi aur k bete ki zindagi is tarha barbad kar de?



Raj--woh Muslim ladka?



Negi--yes..Arbaaz Ali Ibrahim..Naina ne bataya tha..he was a brilliant student..par us ladke ki zindagi barbad kar di Darbar saab ne...Naina ne akhribar suna tha Arbaaz k bare me..k woh andhere raaste ki taraf gaya hai..

Raj--Police ne usko chhod nahi dia tha?


Negi--kyaa fark padta hai Major?zindagi par yeh badnuma daag le kar kyaa woh ladka asani se jee pata humare is samaj me?



Raj--Naina akhri baar kab mili thi usse?

Negi--6 saal pahle..Naina bhaagi to thi usse milne k lia..par...ladke ne milne se hi inkaar kar dia..ladke ka baap is sadme ko jhel nahi paya..heart fail ho gaya unka..



Raj--sad..



Negi--log kahte hai k Arbaaz criminal ban gaya hai...par aisa koi police station nahi jaha par Naina ne chhaanbeen nahi ki Arbaaz k lia..par Arbaaz ki koi khabar nahi mili..Naina Arbaaz ki maa se bhi mili thi...sab kuchh bataya..k usike dad ne police ko bheja tha..woh aurat samjhi nahi Naina ka dard.. beizzat kar k nikaal dia ghar se..


Raj--pathetic...


Negi--tum jante ho Major..Naina ne Army kyon join ki?



Raj--kyon?

Negi--ho sakta hai k Arbaaz ne kisi terrorist gang ko join kar lia hai.... Naina Arbaaz ko dhundhna chahti hai..agar mil jaye..to sarkari gavah banana chahti hai Arbaaz ko..ta k Arbaaz ko kum se kum saza ho..aur fir Arbaaz apne ghar wapas ja sake..



Raj--Naina aise ek khwab k pichhe hai jo kabhi sach nahi ho sakta... ek terrorist yaa to jail me sadta hai..yaa marta hai..yaa fir ghumnaami k andhere me dafan ho jata hai...


Negi--maine bhi yehi samjhaya tha Naina ko..k jo woh chahti hai.. kabhi pura nahi ho sakta..par Naina haar nahi maanegi..


Raj--Naina ko pata hai k uske baap ne uska shraaddh kia hai?

Negi--pata hai...par kahti hai k ..pyaar usne kia.. to is pyaar ki jo bhi zimmedari hogi woh pura karne k lia taiyar hai woh..agar tumhara Naina par gussa hona jayez hai..to Naina ne jo kia..woh bhi ghalat nahi hai..Naina ne to phone kar k sab bataya tha tumko...



Raj--yaa..that true..

Negi--achha Raj..agar Naina chup chaap tumse shadi kar leti..aur baad me tumko yeh sab pata chalta..kyaa uske lia tumhare dil me koi izzat rahe jati?



Raj thodi der khamosh raha...fir puchha,"ab Naina kyaa karegi?"

Negi--don't worry..apna farz woh imaandari se nibhayegi...is mamle me khari hai meri beti.


Naina wapas aai phone attend kar k..

Naina--khana khaa lia aaplogone??


Negi--apka intezar kar rahe the..



Naina baith gai...


but Naina ko bahut uneasy feel hua..

Raj ghurta ja raha hai usko...bar bar..




Raj ko ek baat maanni padegi....Naina aur kuchh bhi ho.. dhokhebaaz nahi...



Raj k andar se kisine kaha,
"Raj..nahi..tujhe pata hai k tu kya kar raha hai?tu Naina se impress ho raha hai..nahi Raj,,,nahi...Naina sirf dukh de sakti hai..nahi..Naina par se apna dhyaan hata..Raj..be carefull..Raj, she is Naina..woh Naina jo shadi se bhaagi thi...."

Raj kaha sun raha hai kisi ki baat..woh to sirf Naina ko dekh raha hai..dekhta hi ja raha hai.


yakkudimag2008-08-03 03:40:45

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Comments (9)

hey anu, plzzz do update soon

16 years ago

wowwww super.... awsome mr. negi & raj convo gud

16 years ago

wonderful aur who last line "gurte he ja raha hai" that was awesome

16 years ago

Mr.Negi is very nice!!! Raj is getting attract to Naina....bad...Raj apne andar ke awaz ko sun!!!Waise Raj attract hone se kya hoga??Naina ko bhi to kuch hona chahiye....warna woh toh kabhi bhi Raj ka dil tod sakti hai aur usse dukh de sakti hai!!! Waise Nain ke parents ne agar Arbaaz ko phasane ki jagah Naina ko rokne mein concentrate karte toh yeh sab na hota!!!! And yes...ummm...it was nice but I am woried about Raj!!!!

16 years ago

finally caught up wid ur fic..........d last two parts wer awesome..........plzz updt soon .... lipi

16 years ago

wowwwwww wowwwwww its marvellous..... the whole convo ws brilliant, naina ke liye izzat mere mann mein atleast aur bhi bar gayi, she s an amazing woman....... aur last line ws soooooo subtly romantic, hayeeeeeeee

16 years ago

wowwwwwwww awsome fantastic by the way tomar fic sab samay bapak e hoy superb very nice

16 years ago

hey anu too good ud.....well woh mr negi the jisne naina ko ghar chodne ke baad support kiya...well life me aise bahut kam log hote hai....aur raj toh naina se attract first day se he ho gaya tha........well raj ko sab sach pata chal gaya ......acha hua.....

16 years ago

wow di...it was a faaaaaaaaaaaaaaabulous part.....last line was damn good...every line of dialogue was suuuuuuperb..enjoyed alot...thankuu sooo much di for this marvelous part

16 years ago

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