Chapter 11
Chapter 8
Angad laughed and remembered that day, he was seething in the beginning that they had kissed but he realised that it was a prank, it left him thoroughly confused. He was later told that Josh and Kripa were best friends, they had gone to university together and had practically grown up together, and infact their closeness had scared him. Angad zoomed back to the present time and looked around, the clock struck 12 and he realised he was late for office once again, he quickly gathered his bag and belongings and made mad dash for the door.
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Whilst somewhere else we someone else also engrossed in the past, the silhouette turns around and we see Aaliyah, a little boy grabs her hand, she looks down at the cute three year old child and bends down to hear what he is about to say.
"Mama, mama. Papa is home, he said he already ate and now he's taking me out, bye mama"
Aaliyah kissed her sons cheek and replied "Have a good time Alekh beta and be good for daddy"
With that the little but runs out of the room and she is left looking after him and remembering the past
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Flashback
Aaliyah at Khanna house and her brother raving on and on about Kripa and Josh "And he's gross, absolutely gross. I mean the guy is a flirt I just cant believe that he is Kripa's friend and do you know what he said? He said apparently they had a past that if by 25 they weren't married then they would marry each other!"
Aaliyah lets out a heavy sigh and looked at her brother and finally says something "You know bro I think you have a thing for Kripa and as for her relationship with Josh, Well… it's sort of cute"
Angad let out a wrenching noise yet Aaliyah carried on " Seriously bhai, they've known each other for a long time- if they wanted to be together then they would probably married with kids by now, obviously they're just good friends. Kripa is a pretty girl and confident girl and Josh-he's a handsome cool guy if they want to be together let then"
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But very soon Aaliyah and Josh were working together more and more. The more Aaliyah met Josh the more she admired him for his skills and his passion for his job and before everyone knew it they were going out. Aaliyah had definitely had boyfriends before but with Josh it was different, it was better.
Aaliyah was completely fine with there relationship that Kripa and Josh had shared and infact it had made her and Josh's relationship that much stronger
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Aaliyah zoomed to the present and she looked around her bedroom, on the back wall was a huge picture of Josh and her on their wedding day and near it was one of her, Josh and Alekh when he was born at the hospital, she thought she looked hideous but Josh had always said that he loved that picture, she looked beautiful- but now things had changed, Josh rarely complemented her, forget love. Aaliyah looked at the clock and realised that it was 3, she had work to do and she'd better get on with it.
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Now we zoom into a large house with flowers all around and we see a a lady coming out of her lexus and steping on to out- she's wearing a sari and then the sari-clad lady makes her way into the house
The lady enters the house and the camera zooms to her face and we see Kripa, a beautiful yet worn out Kripa. Gayatri looked at Kripa enter the house, she looked completely worn out, she had been working all day on her cousins sangeet and the approaching wedding.
"Kripa beta, Aastha wanted you to pick her up from that trip" said Suryaban.
"Paar Surya-Kripa is so tired-" intercepted Gayatri.
"No problem mama" said Kripa, she smiled and walked out of the door that seconds ealier that she had walked through.
"Don't forget-" shouted her bhabhi
"I know bhabhi!" shouted back Kripa even before her bhabi could complete her whole sentence.
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Kripa stood in the playground and looked around at all the other couples waiting for their children to come out of the bus, and here she was alone, all alone. 'No' she stopped herself at her own self pitying and waited for the children to pile out of the bus
"Bua!!!" shouted the little girl and ran towards Kripa and gave her a huge hug.
"I missed you bua" said the little girl
"I missed you too beta. So shall we go, mama is waiting for you at home and Shaam bhai has been telling me how naughty your getting" Kripa said and held the little girls hands and turned around.
"MAMA!" shouted a voice behind her. Kripa turned and looked down at her shaytaan, Aastha! She had been trying to hide behind a statue
"Mama, you forgot me! You love Sur more than me" shouted Aastha and turned around angry.
Kripa looked at Sur and winked. She came forward and said "How could I forget my shaytaan, huh?"
"Mama!" whined Aastha.
"I brought ice cream" added Kripa.
"mama I love you, and I missed you this (opening her arms wide), no this (opening her arms wider) much. You're the best mama" said Aastha.
"I know" said a self confident Kripa and picked Aastha up and said "no need to butter me up dear".
She took 5 year old Sur's hand and 3 yr old Aastha's hand the 3 of them went to the car to retrieve there ice creams.
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Kripa watched Sur and Aastha eating ice cream and smiled. There was a 2 and a half year gap between them, but they were so close. Shaam's daughter Sur was a duplicate of him in the beginning- sweet, shy and reserved, but the more her and Aastha grew up. The more shaytaani Sur did- following Aastha's footsteps. They were cousins but acted more like sisters and were very close. Kripa only hoped that they would stay like this.
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Kripa herself never had a sister but when she met Aaliyah at the age of 19, her and Aaliyah had gotten on so well, like sisters. The love between them was so strong that Kripa had thought it would never break, but it had. And the day there friendship broke was the same day that she was shattered and had left, no body wanted her, nobody needed her and no body had come after her.
Now she had made a life for herself, she had the job of her dreams and most importantly she had Aastha. Aastha was the only thing that had her moving on in life after she had left Angad, Aastha has been the only thing that she's been living for.
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At first Kripa had gone to the new job, but knowing she was pregnant she had taken a break for a while. Now an international events manager- the best in her league at the age of only 25 Kripa was well known all over the world and envied even more.
Kripa would take Aastha with her when she had an event to prepare for but soon Aastha had tired and told Kripa that she wanted them to go home to nana and nani. So every so often they would come home, Kripa would get to relax and Aastha would do her shaytaani's with Sur.
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"Mama, mama!" shouted Aastha, snapping Kripa out of her day dreams
"Yep beta" asked Kripa
"Mama. Sur didi said that can we go to the sangeet tonight?"
"Yeh sure beta" answered Kripa
"But no baby sitter. Please mama. We want to have fun and enjoy. We're going to dance on Tulsi mausi's wedding" Aastha informed her
"Alright then no baby sitter. But you have to be on your best behaviour!" said Kripa
"I'm a good girl mama" Aastha informed Kripa
"Oh yeah" said Kripa sarcastically and rolled her eyes.
Sur and Kripa laughed whilst Aastha looked mad.
"Chal mujaain akela chordeh, meh aap seh baat nahin karti" said Aastha turning to face the opposite way.
Kripa held her ears and said "No talking to me? not even for chocolate?"
Aastha looked up and hugged her mom "You're the best mom in the whole world"
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So a big secret is out now that aastha is Angad and Kripa's daughter- but now we are left to find out why Angad and Kripa split up? But why is angad out of the picture? does angad know about his daughter? and what will happen next? will they meet?
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Here's a precap:
"Look aa gaayah" says Aaliyah and notices Alekh approach the table
"Mama, mama look I made a new fwend!" says Alekh
"Meh bhi dekun tumharah friend" asks Angad
"Sure"says Alekh and steps aside
and we see a beautiful girl all dressed up in a pink frock and chewing her thumb
"Wow kitni pyaari bachi hain!" says Naina
"Aap ka naam kya hain beta?"asks Dilip
"..."
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Who will the little girl be? how will the Khanna's react and wil Angad and Kripa finally meet?
Okay guys Laksyha and Krishna Tulsi are only in my fan fic for special appearances, only there for one or 2 chapters.
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Awesome Part Continue soon
17 years ago
great part...OMG i just love ur fan fic candyprincess39183.7018171296
17 years ago
Hey guys I'm back, okay thanls for the great comments, to answer a few questions yes very soon I will be showing some more flashbacks of Angad and Kripa and all will be revealed. Stay tuned for the next 2 chapters cos soon I'm gona make Angad and Kripa meet- yet more suspense continues. I'm gonna update tommorow sometime so stay tuned and thanks for all the great comments guys Jerri starcity39183.7025
17 years ago
Awesome part... i had a feeling aastha wud be angad n kripas daughter.... i wonder wat happened between all of them???
17 years ago
fab part!!! omg, im pretty sure its aashta...but it might be sur...ooo, its sur...lol...aashta and sur are sho cute n adorable!! eek, ure killing me man, reveal it all soon... why did a-k split up... so kripa left the house, im guessing she was blamed for something she didnt do...well, duh, lol, and how come josh doesnt love aaliya teh same way anymore? wonder what happened...maybe it has to do with kripa, cuz they were close friends... ooo, i cant wait, are u gonna have flashbacks of a-k getting together, and of course teh split up lol, continue soon
17 years ago
nice part.. eveyrthing is still a mystery.. its really good.. aww sur and aastha are cute.. i knew aastha was her daughter.. hmm i m wondering how they split up too.. r u gonna have parts where u hsow the flashbacks of them together or something? mansi
17 years ago
omg i knew itt but why is angad out!!! does he know.. did he suspect kripa?? omg hope he didnt cuz thats hard to forgive... umm im thinking he didnt believe kripa for somethingand for a secaliyah didnt either... riteee are aliyah and josh having trouble in tehre martial life?? maybe then i can guess continue soooonn
17 years ago
WOW..awsome yaar..ur the best!!!!!!!!..love it!!! cont soon
17 years ago
well, i edited it... so u can read it!!!
17 years ago
Yep hun, I know too me a while to continue but hey it's the holidays and I got whole month off- i'm getting lasier by the day, lol and ur the first to reply and definately edit so I get an idea of what my readers thinkJerri
17 years ago