Chapter 9

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Jerri Javid

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Hey guys thanks for the great comments again, I'm sorry that I'm late but have loads on my plate at the moment- here's the next chapter:

Chapter 6

"Maam, Mr Khanna wants to see you" the peon informs Kripa. Kripa turns to look for Aaliyah- still glued to the phone, oh well. Kripa smiles and takes the elavator up to the 5th floor, Dilip uncles floor. She knocks on the door and slowly opens it up. His chair once again is faced to look outside at the magnificent view, as per usual

"You know Uncle, every time I come into this office you're always looking out there- I wonder how you get any of your work done" asked Kripa
Then she hears a different vice, 'this wasn't Dilip uncle'
"Mmmm… I don't think I like the name 'uncle', isn't that a little old for me?" says the voice
"Your not uncle dilip!" accused Kripa to the back of the chair

"and your not-" the chair swung around the guy looked at the girl in front of him and gasped "You!"

*****

"You!" said Angad and Kripa in unison
"What on Earth are you doing here?" asked a suspicious Angad, 'mmm, maybe she had found out that he had that album releasing soon and was after him!'
"Shame on you!" shouted Kripa to 'Mr Khan,' he was cheat and a fraud, he was cheating on Aaliyah "Did you come to see Aaliyah?"

"Umm, in a way, yeh" answered Angad who is completely confused.
"Disgusting" shouted Kripa "You should be ashamed of your self, coming to see Aaliyah and two weeks ago I wake up in your room!"
"Funny, about that, I didn't once hear a thanks" shouts back Angad
"Thanks! Thanks for what?! I wake up in your clothes, in your bed and at your apartment. And you expect me to say thanks. I am not going to let you get away that easily, lying to Aaliyah!" accuses Kripa.

"Hey, hey. What the-? I mean what are you on about miss? You vanish that day and then surprisingly I see you here today! Are you here for a story? I'm telling you.  Your not getting away with anything" and Angad takes hold of Kripa's hand and walks her near the door of the office.

*****

A jolt of electricity goes through Kripa as Angad holds her arm, she looks up to see his reaction. He seems all to busy dragging her to the door. Kripa struggles and then finally frees her arm from Angads grasp.
"Where on Earth do you think you're taking me?" asks an annoyed Kripa.
"The police obviously!" says Angad.
"Huh? I should take you to the police coming here in the office and sitting in uncle Dilip's chair! I bet you think all of this will be yours when you marry Aaliyah!" Kripa shouts her conspiracy theory.

"Why would I want to marry my sister? Ewww!" says a disgusted Angad.
"What?!" says a completely confused Kripa.

*****

Aaliyah looks at her brother's office, she couldn't believe he was finally back. Excited about her brothers return to the office Aaliyah enters the room and had a double take. In the middle of the office are Kripa and Angad glaring at each other and Angad holding Kripa's hand. What was going on here?

Angad and Kripa jump apart as soon as they realise that Aaliyah is in the office. Aaliyah jumps towards them and gives Angad a kiss on the cheek and turns to Kripa "Angad I see you've meet my best friend Kripa Sharma and Kripa I see you've met my brother Angad Khanna"
"What?!" Angad and Kripa say in unison

Kripa turns to look at Angad-her boss. Oh crap how was she going to get out of this mess?! But this Angad had lied to her, he had said that that his name was Mr Khan. Kripa's mind goes back to the day that she had looked at the pictures in Aaliyah's purse, so Kripa had thought- but he had said.

Then something slowly came back to her, the words that Aaliyah had told her about her brother. Kripa composed herself and stuck out her hand and said "Mr Khanna, it's a pleasure to meet you"
Pleasure my ***, thought Angad. This Kripa was saying all the right words but she had that look on her face, the look which said she would break his legs if she could.

Angad glared at the girl in front of him, she was wearing a black suit, with a shirt to her knees and her hair was out- like on the day he had found her. He hadn't known her name and all this time he called her 'that girl' so her name was Kripa, he had been expecting his sisters best friend not this girl. Angad took Kripa's hand and said "Pleasures all mine"

*****

"Hello! Remember me? Aaliyah!!" Asked an annoyed Aaliyah as Kripa and Angad seemed to forget her. "Oh yeh Kripa, did I tell you bhai is really jealous of you! In our house we mention your name more than his"
"Come on Aaliyah- I mean not-" said Angad and was cut off by Aaliyah .
"Oh yeh what did you call Kripa, Bhai?" said Aaliyah

'Oh no' thought Angad 'Aaliyah couldn't just tell!'
"Oh common Aaliyah, I'm sure Miss Sharma doesn't have time for-"
This time Angad was interrupted by Kripa who replied "No, I have all the time in the world Mr Khanna. So Aaliyah- what were you?"

Angad tried to change the subject but his plan didn't seem to be working, nothing could stop Aaliyah and her motor mouth
"Bhai was saying that.. what was it again.. mmm… u were a doughnut eating…mmm, I can't remember. Oh yeh you were a doughnut eating saddo" Aaliyah told Kripa

Kripa's eyes flashed at Angad and then to add fire Aaliyah added "Oh no it wasn't that!"
Angad let out a sigh thinking that his sister was letting him off, only to have Aaliyah to follow up with " it was a very fat doughnut eating saddo, right bhai? Didn't you call Kripa a fat doughnut eating saddo?" Aaliyah asked Angad.

*****

Angad took in gulp of air and looked from Aaliyah's questioning looks to Kripa's outrage. Kripa's eyes were flashing and if he didn't get himself out of it, it looked like Kripa was ready to skin him alive!

*****

okay and here's the promo:

"Know him! I hate him!" Kripa told Angad "I hate Josh Malhotra and always will!"
"Please Kripa just this one deal, act civally with him, please Kripa" asked Angad
"Fine" said Kripa adamantely and walked into the boardroom to watch Josh's presentation.

okay that's all for now and stay tuned for the next part, there will be a HUGE suprise, to add to the fire I'm gonna post a promo in the middle of the week.
Jerri
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Comments (16)

hey it was beyond awsomme pls con asap i cant wait its driving me nuts

17 years ago

just read ur fic. its gr8. continue soon

17 years ago

wow...tht was soo totally awesum!!! keep it up

17 years ago

Awesome promo, I am dying for the nxt part... cnt wait to read it!!!

17 years ago


oh no problem I just thought there are two josh

17 years ago

[QUOTE=dostokedost]okay first of all i really like your ff but one confusion on first page it says josh Malhotra but on page ten it say
"Know him! I hate him!" Kripa told Angad "I hate Josh Kumar and always will!"
josh kunar
any ways take oyur time but conti soon [/QUOTE]hehe blooper, sorry i'm gonna correct that now

17 years ago

okay first of all i really like your ff but one confusion on first page it says josh Malhotra but on page ten it say "Know him! I hate him!" Kripa told Angad "I hate Josh Kumar and always will!" josh kunar any ways take oyur time but conti soon

17 years ago


Here's the Promo I promised:
"Your ideas are wrong Mr Josh!" shouted Kripa at Josh's presentation
"Wanna say that to my face!" said Josh, equally if not, more angry.
All 10 heads of marketing in the boardroom held their breath as Kripa walked up to Josh- nose to nose and then suddenly-----------
there was collective intake of breath in the
conference room and slowly whispers. Subconciuosly Angad stood up angryily and pushed back his seat.Okay, okay I know I am mean leaving you guys hanging but believe me the next chapter will shock and amaze many of you! I will try and update soon- but at the moment I have a very heavy workload-although next week onwards I have much more free time. So I hope you guys can understand if I am late with the update for this week.Jerri
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17 years ago

wow i just read it verry nice pl conti soon

17 years ago

im suprised kripa didnt beat him up.. i no i wouldve skinned him and eaten him in 10 secs if i were in her place who is josh.. cant wait to find out why she hates him cant wait for the promo.. continue sooon

17 years ago

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