Chapter 3

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ANANYA ROY

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SAFAR ( THE JOURNEY)


PART 3



22/11/2003

raat k 1 baje.....


Rohini ki tabiyat ab theek hai...

Naina kamre me aai...night suit pehna usne..aur chup chaap sofa par so gayi. Naina bhi sone ka bahana kar rahi hai..udhar Raj bhi jaag kar sone ka naatak kar raha hai..Naina jab Maa k paas thi tab Ritu ka phone aya tha.


Raj--Hello...


Ritu--Biwi ghar pahuch gayi tumhari?

Raj--Ritu??

Ritu--shukar hai..meri awaz nahi bhoole tum..toh main kyaa keh rahi thi?? Haan..Naina ghar pahuch gayi?

Raj--haa..kyon..aisi kyaa baat ho gayi..?

Ritu--nahi..aaj..usko bahut kuchh sunne ko mila mujhse...

Raj--What?

Ritu--maine dekha..tum usko market me chhod kar chale gaye..woh kisika intezar kar rahi thi...maine bhi mauke ka poora faida uthaya...aisi jali kati sunaai hai usko...ek pal k lia toh main bhi nervous ho gayi thi..k kahi agar usne suicide attempt kar lia..aur mera naam lia..toh main toh gayi...

Raj--Ritu..aaj ek baat dhyaan se sun lo..humare gharwale humari shaadi k bare me soch rahe the..personally..mujhe koi interest nahi tha tum me..isi lia.. logo k saamne yeh jatana bandh kar do..k maine tumhare saath jeene marne ki kasam khaa kar tum ko dhokha dia hai..maine kabhi tumse pyaar nahi kia..


Ritu--Naina se kia tha pyaar?

Raj--Haa..maine Naina se hi pyaar kia tha...main Naina se hi pyaar karta hoon ...varna is puri duniya me koi kuchh bhi kare..kisi bhi haal me rahe.. mujhe kyaa?Agar Naina se pyaar nahi hota..toh usse shaadi nahi karta ..

Ritu--Naina ki zindagi abad karne k lia tumne meri zindagi barbad kar di...

Raj--tumhari zindagi barbad kaha hai?aisa toh nahi k..humari sagai tooti thi.. infact sagai hui hi nahi..shaadi k mandap me bhi chhod kar nahi bhaga tha tumko..aur agar tum sochti ho k Naina ki zindagi bachane k lia maine yeh sab kia.,..toh tumko toh samajh jana chahie..jab Naina aur tumhari zindagi me se kisi ek ko choose karna tha..maine Naina ko choona...toh zaahir si baat hai.. meri zindagi me humesha se Naina ki ehmiat thi..and I am very much thankful to God that I got married with Naina ,not with you..meri toh zindagi barbad ho jaati..

Ritu--Raj...tum jaante nahi main kyaa kar sakti hoon..Naina ko humare beech me se hatane k lia...

Raj--kaan khol kar ek baat aur sun lo...agar..Naina se kabhi koi badtameezi tumne fir se ki...toh tumhari haalat main bigaad doonga..

Ritu--I will kill her..I can kill that bitch...

Raj--Shut up..and..usko ek kharonch bhi aai ..toh main tumse jaan se maar daloonga..and that's a promise..



Raj ne phone rakh dia...gusse se uska dimaag jal raha tha....Naina ne kuchh nahi bataya..iska matlab toh yehi nikalta hai..k ..ise pahle bhi Ritu ne mauka dekh kar bahut kuchh kaha hai Naina ko..



Raj bistar se utha...Naina deewar ki taraf mudh kar soyi thi...actually woh ro rahi thi...bina awaz kie ro rahi thi...kuchh der baad Naina ne mehsoos kia k uske paas aakar koi khada hai...Naina uth kar baithi,...Raj se uski nazre mili.. Naina k ankho se abhi tak ansoon tapak rahe hain..naak laal ho chuki hai.. ankhe toh pahle se hi laal ho chuki thi..

Raj bahut der tak Naina ko dekhta raha..Naina buri tarha se ro rahi hai...

Raj--Main kaun hoon?

Naina  chauk gayi...Raj ki awaz me gussa hai..


Raj--Main kaun hoon?batao..


Naina--Raj..

Raj--malum hai..par tumhare lia kyaa hoon?

Naina--Mere Pati..

Raj--Thanks...tumko yaad hai...

Naina apni ankhon ko apne blanket se saaf karne lagi..

Raj--Pati ka matlab jaanti ho?


Naina--haa...jisse shaadi hoti hai..


Raj--Shaadi ka matlab jaanti ho?


Naina--kyaa kehna chaahte ho?

Raj--Mujhe itna paraya samajhti ho..mujhe malum nahi tha Naina..koi bhi airi ghairi ladki tumko kuchh bhi aakar bol kar chali jaati hai..aur tum chup chaap sun kar chali aati ho!!Aur ghar aakar bhi chup rehti ho..mujhe kuchh nahi batati ho..kyon?

Naina aur zor se rone lagi...

Raj--I swear Naina..agar Ritu abhi mujhe mil jaaye na..toh main uski haalat bigaad doonga..


Naina aur rone lagi...


Raj--arre,tum kyon ro rahi ho?main usko peetne ki baat kar raha hoon,tumko kuchh nahi hoga..Naina..suno...

Naina ka rona bandh nahi ho raha hai....


Raj uske paas baitha...kuchh der usko rone dia Raj ne..aur fir..Naina ko apni taraf modha Raj ne..

Raj--Meri taraf dekho...Naina..

Naina zor se apna sar hilaane lagi...woh Raj ki taraf dekhna nahi chaahti...


Raj--NAINA...LOOK AT ME...

Naina ne dheere dheere Raj ki taraf dekha..

Raj--mujhse humesha doorie kyon banaye rakhti ho?

Naina--haan?

Raj--Mujhse door kyon chali jaati ho?

Naina--nahi...woh..

"shhhh..kuchh mat kehna ab.."yeh keh kar Raj ne Naina k honthon par apna index finger rakha..Naina chauk gayi....Raj pahle bhi uske kareeb aa chuka hai..par..is waqt ki baat kuchh aur hi hai..



Raj ne thoda waqt aur dia..Naina ko sab kuchh samajhne k lia..aur fir..Naina k ansoon pochhe Raj ne..Naina ka chehra Raj k haathon me tha...kuchh der usi chehre ko Raj dekhta raha..Naina ne apni nazre neeche kar li..


Raj ko aisa laga..k Naina ko pasand nahi..Raj ka is tarha kareeb ana,yeh pehli baar nahi hai..jab Raj Naina k kareeb aaya hai..par har baar ek hi baat Raj ne mehsoos kia hai..Naina yeh nahi chaahti.Raj ne jab bhi usko gale se lagaya hai..Naina uski baahon me pighal nahi gayi..bal k..baraf ki tarha jam gayi..Raj k chhoone se Naina ka badan thanda pad jata hai..uska jism sakht ho jata hai..



Raj uth kar jaane laga aur fir usne mehsoos kia,uske haath ko Naina ne pakad rakha hai..Raj chauk gaya..pehli baar Raj ka haath pakda hai Naina  ne ...Naina ki ankho me Raj ne woh dekha jo ab tak dhoondh raha tha Raj.. woh chaahat..woh tadap...


Raj ne Naina ko apni baahon me bhar lia...Naina ne Raj k honthon par kiss kia..aur yeh silsila yehi par nahi rooka..bahut aage tak gaya...


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23/11/2003..


subha jab Raj ki ankhe khuli..Naina uske paas thi...bahut paas...

Naina k gaal par Raj ne kiss kia..Naina neend me muskurai..



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15th December,2003...


Naina k janamdin par Raj ne usko ek painting gift ki..jo Raj ne hi banai hai...




Naina--yeh..tumne banaya hai..mujhe yakeen hai..par kab banaya?

Raj--aisa kyon poochh rahi ho?

Naina--tasveer ko dekh kar nahi lagta k abhi ka hai..aur sab se badi baat..I don't look like a married girl..


Raj--sahi hai..bahut pahle banai gayi tasveer hai..tab toh maine tumse shaadi bhi nahi ki thi...

Naina--iska kyaa matlab?

Raj--ab bhi nahi samjhi?

Naina--nahi...

Raj--iska matlab yeh hai..k tumse shaadi kar k,maine koi ehsaan nahi kia tum par..

Naina--kyaa?

Raj--Us din agar tumhari shaadi ho jaati..main toh..maine bahut pyaar kia tumse..aur..tum kisi aur ki hone jaa rahi thi...

Naina--toh mujhse kaha kyon nahi?

Raj--bata deta toh kyaa karti?

Naina--tumhare saath bhaag jaati...

Raj--kyaa?

Naina--haa...

Raj--main tumhe bhaga kar nahi le jata..


Naina--Ritu ka dil toota is jhamele me..

Raj--dekho..akhri baar bol raha hoon..maine koi pyaar mohabbat ki kasme nahi khaai..k usise..yaar..log bolte the as we belong from the same  caste..I was least interested about her..


Naina--aisi koi baat nahi..par..

Raj--par kyaa?Tum yeh chaahti thi k us Chudhail k saath ..main apni saari zindagi..My God..

Naina--She is beautiful Raj..Chudhail nahi hai woh..

Raj--By nature ..she is a Monster..Witch...

Naina--Agar Ritu ne tumhare muh se aisa keertan sun lia..

Raj--nahi darrta usse...

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21st March,2004


Raj aur Naina k bedroom me ek badi si poster lagi hui hai..




Naina is expecting..sab kuchh theek raha toh September k First week me hi Delivery ho jaayegi..


Naina k k Parents khush..Naveen khush..Raj k parents toh sab se zyada khush..Naveen har hafte ata hai..kuchh naa kuchh lekar hi aata hai..


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15th July,2004..


Naina ki goadbharai.....bahut bada jashan..

Naina--Kya hua?Aise kyaa dekh rahe ho..?

Raj--Sapne kis tarha haqiqat me badalte hain..wahi dekh raha hoon..



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achanak Raj ka dhyaan toota..

10/10/2007
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Naveen--arre..Naina apna phone nahi utha rahi hai..ghar par hi phone karta hoon..


Ghar par phone kar k pata chala..k Naina ghar par nahi hai..phone bhi ghar par chhod gayi hai..Raj ne phone lia Naveen k haath se...


Rohini--Yeh ladki na..isko kitni baar samjhaaoon??

Raj--bata kar nahi gayi?

Rohini--bata kar jaati toh aisa kuchh hota?Jab se usne suna hai..k tum land slide me fanse ho..tab se ..pata nahi usko kyaa ho gaya hai..


Raj--Naina ki tabiyat kaisi hai?Doctor ne kyaa kaha?


Rohini--Doctor k kahne se kyaa hoga?Agar khud hi naa samjhe toh koi kyaa kare?Ek baar hadsa ho chuka hai,usko toh aur bhi savdhaan rehna chahie .. Bhagwan ki kripa hai hum par..k usko doosra bachcha hone wala hai....par usko toh samajhna hai...

Raj--hmm...


Aaj k baat agar ki jaaye..


toh Naina ko 5 maheene 16 din aur 19 ghante ki pregnancy hai..




May,2007..

Rajveer k Chhote Chachu ki maut ho gayi..koi aulad nahi thi unki, unhone shaadi nahi ki thi..unki yehi ichha thi k Raj hi unka antim sanskar kare..


Raj ki saza k din pure honewale the,achhe bartav ka record bhi tha.Is antim sanskar k lia usko Court ne 15 din k Parol par chhoda.Antim Sanskar aur Shraddh k lia.


Rajveer ghar aya tha..Naina k saath tha..humesha Naina uske aas paas rahe.. yehi chaahta tha Raj..ek pal k lia Naina ko chhodna nahi chaahta tha...




July,2007..

Raj jail me hi tha..usko khabar mili..k woh doosri baar Baap bannewala hai.. Naina is two months pregnant...



yakkudimag2008-12-13 11:30:41

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[QUOTE=Shaina_b]Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!==thanks a lot
Naina bhi sone ka natak kar rahi hai aur Raj bhi!!!! ==karna padta hai..
Ritu ne Naina ko bahut kuch sunaya!!!!! How dare she?? ==She is the VAMP
Raj ne bahut accha jawab diya Ritu ko!!!!! ==Raj Hero hai..
Raj ne sahi kaha ke nahi unki sagai huyi thi aur nahi usne Ritu ko mandap mein chhoda tha toh kaise uski zindagi barbaad kardi!!!! ==same answer..Raj Hero hai..Hero kabhi ghalat nahi hota..
Raj ne akhir usse ekh hi diya ke woh Naina se pyaar karta hai aur issi liye usse shaadi ki thi!!!! ==again..Raj Hero hai..
Ritu ne isse pehle bhi bahut kuch kaha hai Naina ko!!!! Kameeni!!!! ==Ritu Vamp hai..toh kameeni hona uske compulsive criteria me included hai..
Naina chup chap roh rahi thi!!!!! ==Poor soul
Raj ne Naina ko samjhaya!!!!! Magar Naina hai ke roye jaa rahi hai!!!! ==haa..Naina me Tulsi ki Atma ghoos gayi thi..
Raj ka kareeb aana Naina ko pasand nahi!!!! Thats sad!!!! ==Sad ..very sad..
Raj jab jaane laga toh Naina ne pehli baar uska haath pakda!!!! Wow!!!!! ==atte baap re...tu badi enjoy kar rahi hai..
Naina ki ankhon mein bhi ab wahi pyaar tha!!!!! Haaiiii!!!! ==dhyaan se..zyada excited mat ho jana...
It was very romantic!!!!! ==hmm...............
Finally they became one!!!! ==It was supposed to be..
Raj ne apni pehle banayi huyi tasveer Naina ko gift kiya uske birthday par!!!!! ==arre..gift toh dena chahie..
Naina ab bhi nahi samjhi!!!! ==Naina ka top floor..hmm..gadbad hai..
Raj ne keh hi diya akhir ke woh pehle se hi Naina se bahut pyaar karta tha!!!! ==yeh toh ek na ek din kehna tha..
Naina ne kaha ki woh bhaag jaati Raj ke saath!!!!! Waah kya baat hai!!!!! ==haa..paagal se shaadi karne se better option tha woh..
Raj ne kaha ke woh Naina ko bhaga kar nahi le jaata!!! Bilkul Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge ke Shahrukh ki tarah bol raha hai!!!! ==Raj aisa bol raha hai.

16 years ago

Hey both parts were really aweome.
Naina ki kashmakash mai samjh sakti hoon par main baat hai ki Raj loves her a lot nad that is enough.
update soon.varshita2008-10-07 05:07:07

16 years ago

thanks..your reply is little bit longer than the previous one..I like it..keep reading..and keep loving my fic..

16 years ago

[QUOTE=kads_8302]hi anu,
how r u.... i am glad that u started a new fic.... again what
to say ur all fics are always nice... toh yeh fic bhi bahut acha lag
raha hai... especially b/c its RN fic by u...==thanks a loti have read all ur fics except
one which is on abhi and akriti...==Read it as early as possible.. so iam one of ur fan ...... b/c u
have written so many fics and all the fics are totally different from
each other.... waise hi is fic ka concept bhi bilkul different hai....==this is about the different plot of different stories mujhe raj ka character bahut acha laga na naina ka bhi... but naina raj
ko abhi bhi aache se samaji nahi hai ... now we will see how u will
make understand naina raj's love... so keep udating safar.... and one
more thing i like the name of fic also ==Naina has her own problem..she is not the reason of Raj's sorrow..
..."SAFAR"...... (Zindangi ka SAFAR hai yeh kaisa safar koi samjha nahi koi jana nahi ...)==WOW..tum toh shaayar ban gayi...
love
kads[/QUOTE]

16 years ago

[QUOTE=prerna1]that was so good==thanks a lot..so naina is expecting second time that was good==that is the best part..
but ye naina itna wierd behave kyou kar rahi hain==There must be a valid reason..
plz continue soon==yes of course [/QUOTE]

16 years ago

wow!!!!!!!!!!superrrrrrrrbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!it was really a gr8 part......d way u described all d parts wer too good

16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!
Naina bhi sone ka natak kar rahi hai aur Raj bhi!!!!
Ritu ne Naina ko bahut kuch sunaya!!!!! How dare she??
Raj ne bahut accha jawab diya Ritu ko!!!!!
Raj ne sahi kaha ke nahi unki sagai huyi thi aur nahi usne Ritu ko mandap mein chhoda tha toh kaise uski zindagi barbaad kardi!!!!
Raj ne akhir usse ekh hi diya ke woh Naina se pyaar karta hai aur issi liye usse shaadi ki thi!!!!
Ritu ne isse pehle bhi bahut kuch kaha hai Naina ko!!!! Kameeni!!!!
Naina chup chap roh rahi thi!!!!!
Raj ne Naina ko samjhaya!!!!! Magar Naina hai ke roye jaa rahi hai!!!!
Raj ka kareeb aana Naina ko pasand nahi!!!! Thats sad!!!!
Raj jab jaane laga toh Naina ne pehli baar uska haath pakda!!!! Wow!!!!!
Naina ki ankhon mein bhi ab wahi pyaar tha!!!!! Haaiiii!!!!
It was very romantic!!!!!
Finally they became one!!!!
Raj ne apni pehle banayi huyi tasveer Naina ko gift kiya uske birthday par!!!!!
Naina ab bhi nahi samjhi!!!!
Raj ne keh hi diya akhir ke woh pehle se hi Naina se bahut pyaar karta tha!!!!
Naina ne kaha ki woh bhaag jaati Raj ke saath!!!!! Waah kya baat hai!!!!!
Raj ne kaha ke woh Naina ko bhaga kar nahi le jaata!!! Bilkul Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge ke Shahrukh ki tarah bol raha hai!!!!
Naina ko abhi bhi Ritu ki padhi hai!!!!! Raj ne bola na ke uske saath usne pyaar ki kasme nahi khayi thhe!!!!!
Raj is right!!!! Ritu is a witch ....a monster!!!!
Kya tareef kar raha hai Raj Ritu ki!!!!!
Naina ki pregnancy se sab kite khush thhe!!!!! Raj ka sapna sach ho raha tha!!!!
Naina is pregnant again!!!!! Thats really good news!!!!
Naina is 5 months 16 days and 19 hours pregnant!!!! Itna precision!!!!!
Naina phir bhi dukhi kyun hai!!!! Usse khush hona chahiye apne bacche ke liye!!!!!
Aur woh kaha chali gayi hai ish haalat mein!!!! Woh apna khayal bhi nahi r

16 years ago

hi anu,
how r u.... i am glad that u started a new fic.... again what
to say ur all fics are always nice... toh yeh fic bhi bahut acha lag
raha hai... especially b/c its RN fic by u... i have read all ur fics except
one which is on abhi and akriti... so iam one of ur fan ...... b/c u
have written so many fics and all the fics are totally different from
each other.... waise hi is fic ka concept bhi bilkul different hai....
mujhe raj ka character bahut acha laga na naina ka bhi... but naina raj
ko abhi bhi aache se samaji nahi hai ... now we will see how u will
make understand naina raj's love... so keep udating safar.... and one
more thing i like the name of fic also
..."SAFAR"...... (Zindangi ka SAFAR hai yeh kaisa safar koi samjha nahi koi jana nahi ...)
love
kads

16 years ago

that was so good
so naina is expecting second time that was good
but ye naina itna wierd behave kyou kar rahi hain
plz continue soon

16 years ago

Awesome part....it was so nice of rajveer to support naina..a perfect husband material..ritu is a witch ..raj is right she is a monster....Oh my god naina is pregnant again..that's a good news but why is this gal still sad..she needs to be happy na..is everything alright b/w RN..why do i feel their rishta is still a compromise 4 naina..hey i am not blaming naina i just had that feeling..so am i wrong?I wish naina had said those three magical words for raj....yyyy2008-10-06 10:29:49

16 years ago

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