Chapter 4
SAFAR(THE JOURNEY)
PART 4
Naina jaa rahi hai..kyon jaa rahi hai..kis lia jaa rahi hai..usko hosh nahi hai..ab tak sab kuchh theek tha,par jab se yeh pregnancy ki baat saamne aai hai.. Naina apna sara hosh kho chuki hai,ek anajan sa khauff uske mann me ghar bana chuka hai..peechhli baar jab aisa hua..tab Raj ko apni azadi khoni padi ..ab k baar..Raj land slide me fansa hai..jis pal yeh khabar aai Naina k paas.. usne aur kuchh nahi dekha..nikal padi..Raj ki talaash me,par Raj ko dhoondh ne jab baahar nikli..sab gadbad ho gaya..har gali,har road,har theekana ..sab kuchh jaise ulat palat ho gaya...ankho k saamne andhera chhaa gaya..aur anjane kisi raaste ki taraf woh chal padi..
17th August,2004...
Raj Kalka gaya hai...agle din subha lautega..aisa bol kar gaya hai..
Raj ne raat k 8 baje Naina ko phone kia..
Raj--apna khayal rakhna..main kal subha aa jaaoonga..
Naina--kaam khatam ho gaya?
Raj--Haa..aaj shaam ko hi..aaj hi ghar aa sakta tha..par bahut thak gaya hoon..drive kar k ana...mushkil hai..main ata hoon kal...
Naina--shaam ko agar rawana hote..toh..zyada se zyada 10 baj jaate,...
Raj--tum chaahti ho k main ghar aa jaaoon?abhi?
Naina khamosh rahi..
Raj--main kuchh poochh raha hoon..
Naina--jaisa tum theek samjho..bye..
raat k 2 baje achanak ek awaz se Naina ki neend toot gayi..zor se kaanch tootne ki awaz thi woh..Naina darr gayi..uth kar baithi...usne dekha..uski tasveer jo Raj ne banai hui thi..woh geer gayi hai..kisine zor se patak dia hai..
Ritu shuru se jaanti thi..is ghar k logo ki aadat..ghar k kisi naukar ko paise de kar usne duplicate keys banvai thi..Raj k Parents kis waqt sote hain..yeh bhi jaanti hai Ritu,chup chaap ghar k andar aai,aur har kamre ko baahar se bandh kar dia..Naina k kamre me gayi..aur Naina ki tasveer ko dekha usne.. uska dimaag jal gaya..usne deewar se woh frame utaar kar tasveer ko zameen par patak dia..
Naina darr gayi...photo ko utha ne aai..aur us par kisine vaar kia..toote hue kaanch se..Naina ne haath se roka...
Ritu--Raj k saath rahogi??Uski aulad paida karogi??bhool jaao...
Naina--Dekho...maine kuchh nahi kia...
Naina ne zor se pukara.." Mummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.. Dadyyyyyyyyyyyy ...bachao mujhe koi..."
Ritu--koi nahi aayega...
cheekhne ki awaz se Rohini ki neend khul gayi..woh darwaza kholne gayi.. aur dekha darwaza bandh hai...
Arjun--main darwaza todne ki koshish karta hoon,tum Police ko phone karo...
Rohini--Jee...
pal bhar me pure ghar me hulchul...Ritu ne Naina ko hostage bana lia tha.. koi aage nahi jaa pa raha tha..naukar chaakar sab jaag gaye the...
Arjun--Ritu..yeh kyaa hai..chhodo Naina ko...
Rohini--Ritu...woh Maa bannewali hai..us par taras khaao...
Ritu--aaj yeh kissa hi khatam kar doongi..
Arjun--Police se nahi bachogi tum....
Ritu--Apni bahu ko bacha lo..fir baat karna...
Ritu ne kamre ki haalat toh tahes nahes kar di thi...ab usne Naina k haath par khanjar chala dia...khoon k chheeten deewar par jaa kar lag gaye....Naina ne akhri koshish ki..dhakka de kar bhaagna chaha usne....par daurna uske lia mumkin nahi tha...
Police pahuch chuki thi..Ritu Naina ko ghar k baahar lawn me le aai..ghasit te hue...Police warn karne lagi..par koi faida nahi hua..aur fir goli chali...
sab ne dekha..Raj ne goli chalai...Ritu par..kab woh peechhe se aa gaya tha.. Ritu ne nahi dekha..
pahle yeh hadsa..aur fir goli chalne ki awaz...Naina geer padi..
Police k saamne Raj ne goli chalai..Raj ko giraftar kia gaya..Naina ko hospital lekar gaye..
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Naina ka operation karna pada..premature delivery hi karani thi..par Naina jhel nahi paai..
Jab hosh aya..tab Raj ko dhoondha usne..Raj nahi tha..Doctor ne kaha.."be strong.."
Naina--mera Beta yaa Beti?
Doctor--Beti thi..
Naina--thi????
Doctor--bacha nahi paaye usko..
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Doctor ne permission nahi dia Naina ko Court jaane ki..par fir bhi Naina gayi..
29th September,2004..
Raj k khilaaf murder k charges..
Raj--Ritu ko maine maar dala..mujhe is baat ka koi afsos nahi..agar usko nahi maarta..toh Naina ki jaan jaati..
Procecutor--aap unke leg par yaa arms par shoot kar sakte the..
Raj--kyaa hota?zinda rehti..aur fir Naina par humla karti..ho sakta hai..mere bachcha bhi uske nishaane par hota...
bahes hone lagi...par koi nateeja nahi nikla...
Ritu ki Maa ne aise me Case ka rukh badal dia..
"Jab se Naina se Raj ki shaadi hui thi..tab se Ritu jalan k maare sab ka jeena haram kar rahi thi..uska violent nature baahar aa raha tha..jab usne suna..k Naina pregnant hai..tab se woh aur zyada violent ho gayi..maine usko ek Psychriatist k paas treatment k lia bheja..Raj ne goli chalai hai..maanti hoon.. kyonki Ritu ne bahut baar pareshaan kia hai Naina ko..bar bar..Ritu ko zinda chhod dia jata..toh woh fir se humla karti...infact uske is violence se main bhi darrne lagi thi...Mujhe afsos hai..k Ritu ki wajah se Naina k saath yeh sab ho gaya..Raj ne haalaat k haathon majboor hokar goli chalai hai.."
fir bhi,,,Raj ko saza mili..kyonki..Raj ne 4 golian chalai thi....Procecutor ne yeh kaha..k jaha par Ritu k pair me goli chalai jaa sakti thi...waha par Ritu k peeth par 4 goli lagi..haalaat chaahe kuchh bhi ho..it's a case of Murder..
Raj ko 3 saal ki saza hui aur Raj ne khud hi apna jurm kabool kar lia,yeh kaha ..k Ritu ko woh jaan se maarna chaahta tha..Naina aur Raj k beech Ritu bar bar aa rahi thi..
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Raj ko jail le kar jaa rahe hain..haath me hathkadi..
Naina Raj ka haath nahi chhod rahi hai...Raj ko nahi jaane degi...Naina ro rahi hai...Rohini samhaal rahi hai..Naina paagalon ki tarha ro rahi hai.Raj ka haath nahi chhod rahi hai....finally lady Police ne Naina ko chhudaya..
Raj ko jail le gaye...
logon ka kyaa hai?Gossip karne ka koi topic toh chahie...log fir se purani baatein uchhalne lage..wahi purani baatein..
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Pakdandi se Naina guzar rahi hai...ek jagah rook gayi...
"Excuse me..are you alright??" ek Foreign tourist ne poochha...
Naina--Yaa..I am fine..
"Can you tell me where can get a Car to go to Chamba..?"
Naina--yes..here is the way to Shimla Town and Market...you go there..you can contact the ITDC Office also..they will arrange everything...
"Thanks Ma'm.."
Naina--Welcome..
Naina fir se chalne lagi..par usko hosh aya ab...woh ghar par nahi hai..ghar se kyon nikli woh??Raj toh ghar aa bhi gaya hoga..usiko dhoondh raha hoga...Naina yeha kyaa kar rahi hai?achanak usko mazdooron ki baatein sunai di...paas hi me Saw Mill hai..haa..Raj hi maalik hai iska...
Naina gayi udhar...
"Namaste Bibijee.."
Naina--tumhara Beta kaisa hai ?usko toh bukhar tha na?
"Jee??Jee nahi.."
Naina--Main hi kal hi davai de kar gayi usko..
"Bibijee..kyaa bol rahi hain aap??"
Naina--haa..main kal hi toh aai thi..tumhare ghar..fir tumhare Saab k saath main yehi se ghar gayi..
"Kal..?Bibijee...Saab ko jail gaye 3 saal ho gaye hain,kal kaise aa sakte hain. Aap baithie...baithie yeha..main aapko ghar pahuchane ka intezam karta hoon.."
woh admi gaadi ka intezam karne gaya..waapas aya..dekha..Naina waha nahi thi..
Naveen Raj k ghar aya ..Taxi pakad k..
Rohini--Raj kaha hai??
Naveen--aapne kaha ..k Naina ghar pe nahi hai..woh Naina ko dhoondhne gaya hai...mujhse yehi kaha..k Naina ko lekar hi lautega...
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shaam hone hi waali hai..Raj dekh raha hai..har road par..har modh par..par Naina nahi mil rahi hai..
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thanks a lot..I will update soon..
16 years ago
Interesting update...continue soon
16 years ago
[QUOTE=Mahak Sinha] Pata chal gaya ki Ritu kitni badi kameene thi shuru se hi Naina k peeche padi thi aur bus chalta to pata nahi kya kya karti aage aur,accha kiya Raj ne jo maar diya us ko. Raj ko kam saja Ritu ki maa ki wajah se hue na kyounki un ki gavahi Raj k favour me gayi.==Ritu mentally ill thi.Main stream society me rahne laayak nahi thi,uska rehna baaki logo k lia khatra tha.Raj ne usko maar dala..sahi kia yaa ghalat main kuchh nahi kahoongi..par Raj ne kanoon ko apne haathon me lia..jiski saza Raj ko mil rahi hai..aur Court bhi samajh chuki thi k Raj ne haalaat se majboor hokar aisa kia hai..jaisa k Ritu ki Maa ne kaha.. Ye achanak Naina ko kya ho gaya?==Naina ki satak gayi hai.. Kahan chali jaa rahi hai aise vo kisi ko bina bataye?==bata kar jaati toh sab ko pata hota..k kaha gayi hai.,.. Paagal jaise behave kar rahi hai par us ne Tourist ko pata to sahi bataya tha na.==haa..pata sahi bataya..shaayad.. Raj bhi kamal hai ghar aaye bina jaise hi pata chala ki Naina nahi hai ghar me seedhe chala gaya us ko dhoondhne.Naina ko kahin aisa to nahi lag raha hai na ki is baar fir se kuch aisa ho jaayega aur Raj fir se us se kahin door chala jaayega.Us ko abhi bhi lag raha hai ki 3 saal pehle ka waqt chal raha hai beech ki baatein bhool gayi hai vo.Ab jab vo aadmi ghar jaane k liye arrangement karne gaya hai to vo vahan se bhi gayab ho gayi, ye ho kya raha hai?==Naina is suffering from a big trauma..physical and mental ..both.She is not being able to overcome her horrible past..but..Raj will make everything alright..this time nothing bad is going to be happened... update soon.==sure..[/QUOTE]
16 years ago
[QUOTE=Mahak Sinha]Sorry mai late ho gayi Anu.==It's OK..nor problem.. Ye raha is update ka reply.==Thank you.. Naina ne Raj ko sach me lagta hai apne paas aane nahi diya kabhi, us ne apne charon taraf ek khol bana liya hai jis ki wajah se dono k dilon me itni doori aa gayi hai.==Naina toh uneasy feel karegi hi..jis situation me dono ki shaadi hui..normal hai.. Raj us ko ye yakeen dilana chahta hai ki vo humesha us k saath hai par Naina apne khalayon se bahar hi nahi aana chahti hai, pata nahi kyoun.Abhi bhi us ko lagta hai ki Raj ne ehsaan kiya hai us par agar aisa nahi hota to vo kam se kam Ritu k baare me Raj ko batati jaroor ki Ritu ne kaise sab k saamne insult ki us ki.==haa..Naina abhi tak raj ko sab kuchh bejhijhag nahi bata paati.. Accha kiya Raj ne ki Ritu ko clearly samjha diya ki jaisa vo soch rahi hai aisa kuch bhi nahi , na hi vo Ritu se pyaar karta tha na hi shaadi karna chahta tha to Ritu sab k saamne Raj ko sanam bewafa dikhana bund hi kare ab sach me she is brat.==Raj ne sach me achha kia..Ritu ki akal theekaane shaayad aa jaaye.. Naina bhi bus ansoon bahaye jaa rahi hain kuch bolti nahi hain.==Naina became so helpless.. Bolna chahiye na kuch ladna tha Ritu se aur us ko us ki aukaat to yaad dilani thi kam se kam.==Actually..Naina Ritu k temper se darrti hai..shaayad.. Raj ne realise kiya Naina ka dard aur console bhi kiya us ko.==Raj Hero hai..usko aisa hi karna chahie.. Phir apne pyaar ki muhar bhi laga di Naina paraur Naina ne pehli baar Raj ko vo realise karaya jo vo dekhna chahta tha Naina ki aankhon me.==hmm..bahut maza aya hoga tumko..really..I am screwed Naina dubara maa ban ne waali hai too good.==tujhe bahut maza aa raha hai..kyaa baat hai?? Raj ne Naina ko us ki banayi hue Naina ki hi painting gift ki vow g8. Ab pata chala na Naina ko ki Raj pehle se pyaar karta tha Naina se aur us ne Naina par koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai.==Arre..yaar ..Raj Hero hai...aisa kuchh hi karna chahie usko.. Ab ki kuch na ho aisa jaisa last time hua
16 years ago
thanks a lot...I will update soon..
16 years ago
[QUOTE=Shaina_b]Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!==thanks a lot.. Naina ke dil mein darr ghar kar gaya hai jab se woh phir se pregnant huyi hai!!!! ==it is very natural Aisi haalat mein woh Raj ko dhundhne gayi hai!!!! Ab uski ankhon ke saamne adhera hai aur pata nahi woh kis taraf chali gayi!!!! ==Naina ki khisak gayi hai.. Ish haalat mein aise yahan waha jana nahi chahiye tha usse!!!! ==Haa..par Naina ko kaun samjhaaye?? Raj bahar gaya tha aur phone karta hai toh Naina kehti hai agar shaam ko nikalte toh aa jata!!!!! ==Naina ne sach hi kaha... Lagta hai Naina chahti hai ke Raj uske paas jaldi se aa jaye!!!! ==Isn't that obvious?? Raj bhi yeh baat samaj gaya tabhi toh pucch raha hai!!!! ==hmm..Raj Hero hai..uska dimag toh tez hoga hi.. Ritu ne Raj ki banayi huyi tasveer ko dekhkar gusse mein usse patak diya!!!! ==Normal baat hai.. Ish Ritu ko sab kuch pata hai!!!! Woh kitni asani se ghar mein ghus gayi!!!! ==She is the Vamp...Kultaaahhh..hee hee hee hee.. Ritu ne Naina ko pakad rakha hai aur koi kuch nahi kar paa raha hai!!!! O no!!!! ==Naina normal ladki hai..koi superwoman nahi.. Yeh jab tak hero nahi aata koi kuch nahi kar sakta kya?? ==aisi baat nahi hai..Naina ko hostage banaya tha Ritu ne... Ritu ne Naina ke haath par khanjar chala diya magar Naina daur bhi toh nahi sakti ish haalat mein!!!!! ==yaa..very sad and horrible.. Police for a change time pe aayi hai magar kuch kar nahi rahi hai!!!! Useless!!!!! ==yaar..Naina hostage thi..upar se pregnant.. Police risk kaise leti?? Ab police kuch nahi karegi toh Raj ko hi goli chalani padegi naa!!!! ==Raj k aane ka andaza Ritu ko nahi tha..Raj ne peeche se fire kia Ritu par.. Naina ush haalat mein bhi court gayi!!!!!!!! ==kyon nahi jaayegi?Uska pati case me fansa hai..zaroor jaayegi.. Raj ne bhi kabool kar liya!!!! Kya zaroorat thi aise bolne ki ke woh Ritu ko marna chahta tha!!!! ==Raj ne kuchh socha hoga..I don't know.
16 years ago
[QUOTE=*Rajeevian*]awesome.cont soon.......[/QUOTE]..thanks..and of course ..I will continue soon..
16 years ago
[QUOTE=prerna1]too good dear plz continue soon[/QUOTE]thanks a lot..I will update soon..
16 years ago
[QUOTE=sania_58]Awsome too good[/QUOTE]thanks a lot..keep reading..
16 years ago
[QUOTE=Deeya]hey dear... excellent part..==thanks a lotnaina puri paagal hi hai... agar ghar par hoti toh raj se aasani se mil sakti thi.....==ha..Naina ki satak gayi hai.. nyways hope they meet soon... life hasnt been fair to them!!==yes..they had suffered a lot... continue soon==of course..[/QUOTE]
16 years ago