Chapter 15

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After walking away from Prithvi, Kripa unfortunately bumped into Angad.
A- Hey, is everything alright?
For the first time Kripa couldn't tell if his concern was real or a pretense. She stared in his brown eyes hoping to figure it out, but she couldn't.
Angad watched her look directly into his eyes, she was trying to figure something out or something. He wondered what Prithvi told her, all he knew was whatever he did say to her couldn't be good. Angad could see she seemed sad.

A- Kripa, I said is everything okay?
Then Angad saw a tear fall out of her eye. She quickly cleared it with her hand, hoping Angad wouldn't see it.
A- Tell me what happened at least
K- Angad, you can stop all this drama now, Prithvi already told me about your guys's bet
A- Bet?
Angad noticed how calm her voice was, but at the same time it was full of pain.
K- You forgot already Angad? Remember you challenged Prithvi that you can get us to break-up and I date you and in return Prithvi challenged that he would keep me........well, I guess you won, congratulations, but now you can stop this act.
Kripa was walking away when Angad grabbed her arm and pulled her back.

A- Damn it Kripa, at least listen to my side before you make all these assumptions and crap!
Angad saw Kripa's calm voice now shift to an angry one.
K- Fine Angad, say it, say there never was a bet, that you and Prithvi had no such conversation!
A- Fine, I admit we did, but that was before I actually got to know you--
K- You know Angad, it didn't hurt me knowing Prithvi was apart of that bet as much as it did knowing you were in it. I guess I expected too much from you, I'm sorry!

Kripa this time walked away. Angad banged his hand on the locker near him, only hurting himself.
A- Ouch!

Later that day after football practice, everyone had gone home. Angad and Prithvi were the last ones.
P- Angad, you've been giving me that evil stare all day, why don't' you just say what's on your mind.
A- Why the **** did you tell Kripa all that ****!?
P- Simple, I told you it wasn't over after you won that stupid bet, so that was my comeback.
A- Prithvi, I'm done with this stupid game
P- Of coarse you are, since you were the one that won last right?
A- God your such a freaking---
P- Oh shut up, I really don't care what you think about me
A- I'm out of here

Angad got his bag and left. Prithvi was behind him.
Prithvi saw Kripa, she had also gotten out of soccer practice. Kripa saw both of them coming her way, she knew both of them spotted her.
A- Hey Kripa, wait up!
Kripa quickly looked around, she had to get away, straight on her right was the girl's bathroom, she walked straight towards it.
Prithvi and Angad both stood in front of the bathroom.
A- Why are you waiting for her?
P- Why are you?
A- Because she's my girlfriend, now why are you waiting for her?
P- Because she's my ex-girlfriend
A- Key word "ex"
P- Whatever, why is she taking so long
A- I dunno, erm...you want to go in and see?
P- In your dreams, why dont' you go see
A- You'd like that wouldn't you?
P- Shut up
A- Fine, I'll go see
P- No, you just want to get to her first!
A- Whatever
Angad and Prithvi both walked into the bathroom
K- Don't shut the----

Before Kripa could finish the door was closed.
P- Don't shut the what?
K- The door you idiots, the door is locked from the outside
Angad turned around and pulled on the door, it was definitely locked.
P- Oh move over Barbie, let me do it
A- Be my guest
Prithvi put all his might and tried to open the door, when he failed, he smiled to hide his embarrassment.
A- Whose Barbie now?
K- Both of you just shut up!

Prithvi whispered to Angad
P- She's kind of hot headed isn't she?
A- I know, tell me about it

Angad took out his cell phone but then frowned.
A- Mine has no signal, what about your guys?
Kripa took hers out of her back pocket
K- No signal
Prithvi looked at his.
P- No signal and no battery
Kripa sighed.


Kripa started banging on the door hoping someone will hear her. After fifteen minutes she gave up.
K- We're stuck....
P- Yeah, erm Kripa, we kind of figured that out fifteen minutes ago...
K- Oh shut up! This is all your fault, if you and Angad hadn't followed me for no reason!
A- Kripa, I have to talk to you, why do you have to be so immature and play the avoid game with me, huh?
K- I'd rather be immature by playing the avoid game then talking to you any day!
P- Burn!
AK- SHUT UP!
A- You know what Kripa, talk to me when your ready to hear my side, okay?
K- Angad, I don't want to waste more time on you then I already have, got it!
A- Go to **** then!

Kripa and Angad were both furious with the other. Prithvi felt uncomfortable. He really didn't care they were fighting, but why did they have to do it around him.

Two hours passed. Angad was bored, Kripa was just sitting around, and Prithvi couldn't sit still.

P- God, this is just great, wait till my dad finds out about this, he'll sue this stupid school!
A- Sure, but in order for him to sue the school, your going to have to explain to him how you landed in the girl's bathroom first
P- Oh shut up Angad, we're all in this situation because of you in the first place!
A- Oh yeah, I dragged you in here, didn't I?
P- Well if you didn't have your eye on Kripa since you came to this school, then Kripa and I wouldn't have anything to do with you, Kripa and I wouldn't break up and Kripa and you wouldn't' date, meaning we wouldn't have ever been in this mess
K- Oh shut up Prithvi, it's your fault as much as Angad's!
P- But it was all Angads's idea, so you see Angad is at more fault
A- Sorry Pritz, you can have her back, if I knew she was a handful then I would have never taken her from you
Kripa was really hurt by that comment. She felt like crying, but she got control over herself.
K- oh my god I hate you so much! Go jump in a river and never come back!
The next couple of minutes was nothing but awkward silence for Prithvi.


P- So how long are we going to be here?
A- Probably till tomorrow morning when the janitor comes in here to clean it...
P- oh......why don't we get a couch in the boy's bathroom
A- I dunno
P- Their bathroom smells good too
A- Yeah, ours smells like pee and sweat 24/7
Silence once again occurred until Angad and Prithvi both started talking again.
P- ..............You know that nerd, whats his name, Rachmand Saya
A- Oh yeah, the dude on the other schools' football team
P- Yeah, some other dude is subbing for him b/c of his arm, he's doing quarterback--
A- Is the dude good
P- From what I hear, he's really good, but get this
A- What?
P- He's cockeyed
Angad and Prithvi both laughed when their eyes fell on Kripa who was angrily and annoyingly staring back at them, Prithvi sealed his lips while Angad rolled his eyes.

K- Don't roll your eyes at me!
A- Don't tell me what to do
K- I'm not telling you what to do, I'm telling you what not to do!
A- Oh, okay, with what authority?
K- Oh my god, your such an uhggg, I can't believe I ever dated you!
A- Same here, God knows what I ever saw in you!
P- okay......erm.....break it up you two
K- Wow Prithvi, for the first time ever you've given me good advice, lets break up Angad
A- Oh hun, we were threw a long time ago
K- Good!
A- Good!
K- Fine!
A- Fine!
P- Oh boy, it's going to be a long night......

Okay so this story is going to take a turn from this point....I think, lol. Sorry for not following along with teh gym lockdown, I couldn't get it to fit, so instead I made it a bathroom lockdown. I hope you liked it, I'm going to start picking up the pace of this fan fic b/c I think it's going to slow, do share your opinion. If you liked the part then Plz comment!!! Thx for the all the comments b4 too!

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Comments (27)

awsome part these boys r too much cont soon

17 years ago

awww just read it.... love prithvi's character.... and angad adn kripa are just adorable.... haha the bathroom lockdown scene was really cute.... adn funny.... love alina

17 years ago


lol, I know mostly everyone dislikes him. I can't believe you were up at that time! It snowed where you live, where do you live? I wish I had a snow day, uhgg....jealous. lol. thank you!
Thanks everyone for those incredible comments! After I finish my homework I'll try to post a part, sorry for da delay.

17 years ago

Awee i just read your fan fic & its soo good... I think pritivi's a cutie haha im prolly the only one who thinks that but yeah and A and K are adorable=) well its like 4:17AM here but i had to read all of your fan fic pretty addicting stuff haha & plus its snowing here like crazy so theres no school tomorrow so i read your fan fic:P which was awesome continue soon

17 years ago

hey ur talking abt liking.....i luved this part...i hope it was longer too......it was awesome....plz continue soon

17 years ago

plz continue soon ur ff roxs!

17 years ago

For some reason i just couldn't stop laughing at angad and prithvi's convo.. Awsome part di !!!

17 years ago

its so hilarious and fun to read

17 years ago

i just read the whole thing and it's good!!!!!!i love it!! it's funny, romantic, and interseting!!! continue soon, Nalni

17 years ago

that was a funny part and sad that ak broke up

17 years ago

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