Chapter 18

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PART 17

Raavi rests her head on shiva’s shoulder.

Sh: (seriously) mujhe tab bhi vo darr tha aur aaj bhi vahi darr hai…..

Ra: *rolls her eyes*

Sh: raavi main nhi chahta ki meri wajha se apne parivaar se apni aa se alg ho jaye…..meri aur maami ke beech ki nafrat ek tarf hai….ye cheez kabhi baldal sakti…..maami mujhe bhala bura bolegi hi…kab tak tu unse mere liye ladti rahegi…..mujhe samjh nhi ata ki ye sab kaise khatam hoga….

Ra: (lifts her head and looks at him) ho gya?....bol liya?...ab main bolu?......(shiva slightlynods)…..shiva maine phele bhi kaha tha aaj phir se keh rahi hu…..teri wajha se mere aur maasi ke beech koi daraar nhi aa rahi…main jaanti hu ki maasi tujhe abhi pasand nhi karti sayad kabhi na kar paye……lekin jaise tune mere liya maasi ki batao ko ignore karna suru kar diya…. waise hi maasi ko jab humare baare me pata chale ga na…wo bhi tujhe bhala bura kehna band kar degi………aur shiva uss din vo galat thi….isliye maine unhe aise bola tha….

Sh: (concerned) phir bhi chipkali…..

Ra: (hugs him from side)phir bhi kuch nhhi…..tu tension mat le…..maasi ko samhaalne ki zimmedari meri thi na…toh bas…

Shiva smiles and pecks her forehead. Raavi again rests her head on shoulder. Both sat for there for sometime before leaving.

SCENE: same day; late afternoon; pandya niwas

Suman asks dhara to call gautum, shiva and dev from store and asks krish to call raavi as she wants to discuss something important. All of them arrive and settle themselves in th drawing room.

Su: dekho…inndono(dev-rishita) ki shaadi toh aise hi ho gyi….na kisi ko bula paye na kuch dhum dham kar paye…..toh main chahti hu ki inn dono ka (dev-rishita ka)suspension kara diya jaye……

All: *😕😕confused*

Sh: (confused)maa…suspension?

Su: hota hai hota hai…shaadi ke baad….

Dh: (getting what suman wants to say) reception!!...

Su: hn hn vahi….ab dekho logo ke ghar me khaaya hai toh khilana bhi toh padega na….

Ga: bata toh sahi hai maa…..

Su: (excited) hn….toh kal hi rakhte hai….

Ra: (retorts) par kaki itni jaldi…..

Su: (sarcastic) toh kya raavi beta teri shaadi ka intejaar kare……

Ra: 😳😳

Sh: *chocks*

Dev & ri: 🤭🤭

Ga & su: 😦😦

Kr & dh: 🧐🧐

Su: (pating shiva back) aee shiva kya hua?

Dev: (teasing) hn shiva kya hua….tujhe hasi aani chaiye..yahan tera reaction toh aisa hai jaise teri shadi baat ho rhi ho……

Sh: 🤬🤬……..*hit dev on his head*

Ga: kya tum dono bacho ki tarha har kate kar rahe ho….bahut kaam hai?

Su: aee raavi….samay kam hai toh tu dhara ki madad kar dena……saru che?

Ra: ji kaki…..

Su: chalo phir sab tayaariyan karo……

Raavi, rishita and dhara decides to go to shopping immediately whereas shiva, dev and gautum takes care of other arrangments.

Everyone returns home by 8 in evening. Dhara, raavi and rishita shows the things they brought to all.

Ri: (picking up a t-shirt) aur ye hai-

Ra: (snatching it) shiva ke liye…..(excited)

Rishita gets what raavi gonna do. Raavi goes him and gives a bright sheepish smile. Shiva internally rolls his eyes thinking ‘shanti se nhi de sakti thi kya akele me’. He plasters his angry mode on his face warna chipkali ke marwane ke pure plans hai.

Ra: (smiling) thank you gift….10th anniversary ka…(shiva 🙄)….tujhe yaad hai jab bachan tune mera dress kharab kiya tha aur phir dev ne tujhe chillaya tha……ussi din humari  dushmani aur iss family se meri closeness ki starting hui thi...le..le

Sh: *steps one step forward and glares her*

Ra: (innocently) nhi leni toh mat le na…ye sher jaisi badi badi ankhe kare darane ki jaroorat nhi hai…..

Shiva takes the shirt, drops it down and cleans the floor by his foot using it. Everyone around😲😲.

Sh: (sarcastic) t-shirt bahut achi hai……ghar pe pocha maarne ke kaam aayegi….tujhe na khush rehne ka ek aur mantra deta hu….mujhse pange lena band karde…warna main tujhe ache se bata dunga ki pange lete kaise hai…samjh le….

Saying this shiva leaves, everyone 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️. Dhara leaves to kitchen for preparation of dinner and guatum retires to his room.

Ri: kya yaar raavi….tumne kyu shiva ko gussa dillaya?....secret rakhne ke liye aise gussa dillana jaroori nhi hota yaar…..

Dev: inn dono ka kaam hi yahi hai……jab nafrat karte the tab bhi ye haal tha…ab pyaar karte hai tohbhi kuch nhi badala……

Ra: (smiles) gussa hua hai….par mujhe manana aata hai……yeh bandar mujhse jayada derr naraj nhi reh sakta……

Dev and rishita smiles at her confidence.

Elsewhere, shiva sits on the bench on the terrace huffing. ‘this chipkali is such a tease…didn’t she know that I like shirts not t-shirt…still she brought that for me….it had been 3 months relationship…10 yrs of superficial enemity…..still’ he thought. This time shiva is annoyed from chipkali. He decides to talk to her the next day.

SCENE: next day; morning

Next morning, even after dhara’s nth calls shiva and krish didn’t wakeup. She goes to them and splashes a bucket full water over them.

Sh: (getting up with jerk) aahhh…..(looks at dhara with 😫) kya Bhabhi itni jaldi utha diya……

Kr: hn Bhabhi…..abhi toh mera aur deepika ka dance baaki saath…

Dh & sh: 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀

Dh: time ka hosh bhi hai tumhe…..9 bajne waale hai…..aree sharam karo…bhai ki reception hai aaj….kitna kaam hai

Sh: aree Bhabhi….aap tension matlo….(getting up from thecot) sab kuch ho jaaye ga……

Suddenly someone knocks the gate. Dhara opens the door and finds person standing with courier.

Man: ma’am ye shiva pandya ka courier hai……

Dh: ji…do min….(goes inside) shiva…dekh tera kuch samaan aaya hai receive karle….

Sh: (confused) mera? Pann Bhabhi maine toh kuch mangvaya hi nhi…..sayad kisine bheja ho

Dh: acha….dekh le……

Sh: ji….

Shiva goes to the door recives the courier. He sits on the cot and opens it. as he opens the box, he gets aww sturck. A beautiful black shirt with white chequers giving definition of perfection for wardrobe. Then his phone beeps. He picks it up and reads the message. A smile creeps on his hace as he reads the message.

Dh: (coming from kitchen)kaisa parcel tha shiva?....

Sh: (smiling) kuch nhi Bhabhi…vo..voh mera dost hai na ek jo ahemdabad shift hi gya tha job ke liye….usne gift bheja hai…

Dh: (comes to him) acha dikha…(sees the shirt)..wah shiva kitni achi shirt hai….voh bhi tere favourite colour…..ekdum tere type ki…..mast choice hai tere dost ki……

Shiva smiles and again seesthe message in his phone which reads.

Mere pyaare bhoothnath…

tujhe ab tak parcel mil chuka hoga..nhi mila to jake puch dhara di se...

I know tu naaraj hai kyunki tujhe laga ki mujhe tera taste nhi pta……

but let me tell you ki main teri

Sirf teri girlfriend nhi balki teri bachpan ki dushman bhi hu…..aur mere hisaab se

Main sirf tujhe jaanti hi nhi balki samjhti bhi hu…

Mujhe pta hai tujhe t-shirt bikul pasand nhi hai….

Main toh bas aise hi majak kar rahi thi…..

Aur rahi baat iss shirt ki jo maine bheji hai it’s a gift, humare 10 saal pure hone ka……

Toh isse shaanti se bina kisi na-nuks ke rakh le……samjha?

I Love You my bandar💖💖

He turns his gaze to the shirt and smiles.

SCENE: same day; late afternoon

Gautum and shiva were working in the store when dhara and raavi come there.

Dh: chalo gaumbi…..

Ga:  hn chal…..

Sh: (confused) aree parkahan jaa rahe ho…..?

Dh: aree kuch arrangements dekhni hai…….hum bas 20-25 min me aa jayenge…..tab tak raavi yahan hai tere saath….

Sh: 😲😲(internally🤩🤩)…..Bhabhi yeh yahan nhi rehe gi……

Dh: (ordering) vo yahan hi rehegi….koi agr magr nhi……na koi ladai

Ra: 😁😁

Dhara and gaumbi leave. Shiva pulls raavi inside the shop so that no one sees them. He cages her b/w wall and his arms.

Sh: (leaning close to her)badi hasi aa rahi hai tujhe….

Ra: (kisses on his cheek)tu bhi hasle…..

Sh: 😄😄

Ra: shirt kaisi lagi?……(curiously)

Sh: (putting her behind her ears) bikul teri jaisi….beautiful…..

Ra: (blushes)…(pushes him) jayada romance nhi sujh raha tujhe…..hum dukaan pe hai….

Sh: (acting)…….(irritated) ae mami ki behn ki beti….tu yahan ruk toh gyi par mera dimag khaane ki koi jaroorat nhi hai….samjhi?......

Ra: (acting)…….(innocently) maine kahan kuch kaha….tu apna kaam kar…..

After this both laughs at their actics. Shiva goes back to his work whereas raavi sits at a corner surfing her phone. as some stock arrives, shiva starts unloading it. He removes his shirt which makes raavi stare at him. she just couldn’t take of her eyes. Then only, a costumer comes asking for refined wheat flour (maida). Raavi indicates shiva that she would handle the costumer. She by mistake gives rice flour to the person as still she was busy tadofying shiva. shiva observes this and before the person could leave, shiva changes it.Raavi bits her tongue for the mistake whereas shiva glares.

Sh: (smirking)maida aur chawal kea ate me antar nhi pta….aur tu dukaan dekhegi…..

Ra: (gritting her teeth) mujhe antar pata hai….vo toh main bas…..

Sh: (raising his eyebrow) bas…?

Ra: kuch nhi

Sh: (evily smiling) maan le na chipkali ki main tujhe distract karta hu…….mujhe aise dekhke tujhse control nhi hota…(says as he wear his shirt)

Raavi gets irritated. She snatches the packet of flour and throws a handful of it on shiva. Shiva 😠 and raavi🤣. Raavi runs as shiva tries to do the same with her but he catches her in a min and pins her.

Ra: (nervously) shi..shiva kya kar rha hai?....koi dekh-

Sh: koi nhi dekhega….hum andar ke side hai….(husky tone) aur main badlale rah ahu chipkali….

Saying this shiva takes flour in his hand and traces it on her hand.Raavi closes her eyes feeling his touch. Shiva smiles seeing the effect of himon her. he leans down and rubs his cheeks with hers one by one. Raavi clutcheshis shirt tightly looking down. Shiva lifts her head and make her look at him.both of their eyes had desire. Both slowly lean to each other and as their lips were about to touch, ‘shiva-raavi kya rahe ho dono’ calls out dhara.

so guys...finally next part complete kar diya with 4 recreates (kaki itni jaldi, pre-wedding shirt gifting, post wedding shirt gifting and aata romance)...hope you liked it.....last part ke liye marna mat......kyunki secret jaane ki baari shiva ki pyaari bhabhi dhara aur krish ki hai......do review and give your suggestions😊😊😊

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