Chapter 12

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hey guys....her is part 11....almost similar to what happened in show just few changes.......tum sab jayada bore na ho isliye ek hi part pura likh diya...😁😁....enjoy.....

PART 11

(in show, pandya went kuldevta mandir after marriage but here they will go to somnaath mandir 25km away.)

SCENE: next day; morning; outside pandya niwas.

Pandyas are all set to go to the somnaath temple. suman decides to stay back at home because of her health. All four brother takes their bike. Shiva was waiting for raavi but doesn’t let it come out. He keeps checking phone time to time. Krish notices this and asks ‘kya hua shiva…phone me kya dekh rha hai…..kisika intezaar hai kya?…’. shiva being lost replies ‘hn’ but realises it in a second and continues saying ‘tere shaant hone ka ....... hoga….’ mockingly to cover up. Gaura shakes their head at this. Suddenly, he hears her voice. his heart jumped with joy but he need to keep up his angry look. Raavi came running as she thought that was late. Raavi asks that was she late to which dhara says no. raavi looks dhara and rishita from head to toe and compliments them saying ‘aree wah…..aap dono kitne mast lag rahe ho…’. ‘aur tum bhi kisi se kam nhi lag rahi ho’rishita compliments raavi. Raavi wore yellow saree with pink blouse (same dressas in kawar yatra time…..I think that one gives a girlish look…….all others woresame dress as in the kidnapping kaand). Shiva looks her from head to toe. She looked beautiful, just like a pretty angel. ‘hn bilkul…..chipkali toh chipkaliyoon ki beauty queen lagegi na….’said shiva used his unique way to compliment his chipkali. Raavi knows this unique way of his but what she could do is to smirks in front of family. ‘acha chalo derr ho rahi hai…….raavi tu krish ke saath aaja….’ says dhara. Raavi wants to oppose but can’t. shiva also doesn’t like the idea but he too can’t do anything. But krish immediately retorts ‘aree nhi Bhabhi…..25 km hai 25metre nhi….. abhi seekhi hai bike….upar se raavi baaki ladkiyoon ki tarha dieting wali toh hai nhi….’. shiva chuckles at krish’s comment whereas raavi glares them. ‘shiva ek kaam kar..tu raavi ko le ja….aaj kal vaise bhi tum dono ek team me rehne lage ho…..’says krish teasingly to which shivi looks angrily at him. they tried their level best not to show their happiness. ‘ab raavi tu hi decide kar kiske saath jayegi? Shiva ya krish’ asks gaumbi. Raavi wants choose shiva happily but she need to act here too. raavi, being drama queen, says ‘gaumbi mujhe shiva se ladne ka koi shauk nhi hai….par apne haath pairr bhi pyaare hai mujhe….isliye main shiva ke saath hi chali jaungi….’. Shiva mentally comments raavi ‘nautanki…’. ‘aee chipkali….main tujhe apne sath leke jaunga!!! Impossible…..’says shiva continuing what raavi started. Raavi retorts ‘acha…..ab toh main tere hi saath jaungi….dekhti hu kaise rokta hai tumujhe’ and start going towards be. ‘aeee’says shiva to which raavi replies ‘B…..rehnede shiva…. ladkiyoon ki tarha nakhre mat kar…..aur kaunsa main pheli baar baith rahi hu…’ and sits behind him without even asking, of course in the eyes of family otherwise they had maje aa gaya wali feeling. But how easily can shiva let his chipkali win in front of his family, so he retorts ‘tu na jaya-’but gets cut by gautum. Gautum, who is fed by shivi tom and jerry fight, says ‘bas karo tum dono……raavi shiva ke saath aayegi aur ye final hai…..’. all get to their bikes and leaves for mandir. But shiva’s bike stops in 2 seconds due to some problem. Shivi gets off the bike and starts checking the bike. Dazzling sun starts troubling him which didn’t get unnoticed by raavi. She immediately shadows him with her pallu.Shiva looks at her lovingly. Raavi sees him staring her and dramatically says ‘mujhe pata hai ki main somnaath ki sabse sundar ladki hu aur aaj main bahut achi lag rahi hu….par apna dhyaan bike thik karne me laga……dhoop me mujhe apni skin tan nhi karwani…’ and pouts makingshiva chuckle. Shiva shakes his head at his nautanki gf and gets back to the work. He fixes the bike and both leaves for the temple.

Shivi enjoys their bike ride with cool breeze and warm atmosphere. They rarely get chance to go on bike rides as for the world they are still arch enemies. Raavi was lost in the air passing through her face when shiva suddenly stops his bike making raavi fall on him. Raavi lift her head to find a car blocking their way and goon coming out of it. two bikes come from back side and surrounds them. Raavi gets frightened and clutches shiva shoulder tightly. Shiva, knowing the fear, places his hand on raavi and gestures her to get down. Raavi obliges. Shiva getting furious asks ‘kitne me khareedi? ’.The goon, being confused asks ‘kya?’.‘tere baap ne ye sadak..’ retorts shiva being sarcastic. ‘agr ek ek ko hatane pe aaya na, toh gaadi chalene laayak nhi rahe ga’ says shiva as he steps forward towards the goon but raavi stops him saying ‘rehne de na shiva…..kyun inn logo se uljh raha hai…..’. shiva looks at her and says ‘tujhe mujhpe bharosha hai ya nhi?’ which raavi answers ‘khud se bhi jayada hai….par shiva inkepaas guns ya churi bhi ho sakti’ and looks him with fear. Shiva cups hisface and says ‘tu darr matt….inn jaiso ko niptana aata hai mujhe….’. one of the goon takes out a rod and comes towards shiva. ‘shiva hattt’ shouts raavi and shiva turns but before he could do anything the goon hits shiva’s head. Shiva stumbles and hold his head. The goon again tries to hit him but shiva attack him back. But other goon hits him again, making him unconscious. Raavi panics. Shiva falls on ground. ‘shiva uth….uth na please..shiva uth.shiva……shiva’ says raavi as she tries to wake him up. Two goons pulls raavi and hits her on her head making her unconscious.They put shivi in the car and drive off.

Goons take shivi to their location. as they stop the car, raavi gets jerk and is to fall but shiva, who gained his consciousness a few second ago, places his hand saving her. As helooks raavi, he finds her glaring at him. ‘kabse jagane ki kosish kar rahi hu tujhe….pann tu toh kumbhkaran ki tarha hilne ko hi tayaar nhi tha….(panics)tujhe pat  bhikya hua hai humare saath’ says raavi.‘aee gadhedi chup reh behosh log baat nhi karte…’ retorts shiva. Goons take them out and drag them to the room inside. ‘aee…haath kya bandh rakhe hai…..himat hai toh khol na’ says shiva trying to freehimself. The goon tightens his grip saying ‘aeee……Zayada mat bol samjha’ to which shiva retorts ‘abee aee-’ but raavi cuts him saying ‘bas kar shiva….kitna kaha tha ki mat uljh inn logo se…..lekin nhi tujhe toh singham banna tha….ab ye jaikaant ke gunde hume kacha chaba jayenge…..’. ‘gunda ji’ says raavi as she turns tothe goon holding her. Raavi continues saying ‘nhi vo mujhe aapka naam nhi pata na isliye……dekhiye aap logo ne galt insaan ko utha liya hai….aap please hume chod do…’. ‘aae ladki chup reh ekdum…’ retorts the goon and pushes her but shiva comes in between not letting her fall (shiva’s hands are still tied but somehow he manages to getout of the hold of goon and save ravi from falling). ‘aee…tammez me reh samjha..’ shouts shiva being angry at the goonsbut raavi calms him down saying ‘shiva shaant ho ja na…..please ……..(to goons) dekhiye agr aapko paise chahiye toh vonhi hai humare paas par ek kiraane ki dukaan hai…..agr aapko do kilo daal,chaawal, ata kuch chaiye toh vo hu bhijwa sakte hai…..’. shiva looks her indisbelief. ‘hey somnaath kitni badi dobi hai ye’ thinks shiva. ‘aee chipkali…aata daal hi kyun….isko sabun, isko shampoo, usko tel sabko puch’ says shiva being sarcastic. Raavi, proofing her dobiness, retorts ‘kya bol raha hai shiva…agr tel leke inhonehum jala diya toh ………..tel nhi hai humare paas’. Shiva rolls his eye at her but soon he finds that all goons were a bit distracted with raavi talk. He uses the opportunities and hits the goon using his legs. But goons hit him back andshiva couldn’t do anything as his hands were tied. Goons tie them to the chair.‘chalo ab boss ko inform kar dete hai’ says one of the goons and all leaves. ‘shiva inn logo ne hume kyun kidnap kiya hai? Humne kisika kya bigada….’ asks raavi worried. Shiva sighs. ‘isse acha toh tu krish ke saath jaati…..kam se kam mere saath yahan fasti toh nhi…..’says shiva being tensed to which raavi replies ‘hn hn….tu toh aise bol raha hai jaise teri kidnapping ki baat sun kar meri jaan nhi nikalti….haina?’ and tears rolls down her eyes. Shiva moves close to raavi using the chair. ‘tu darna mat raavi…..hmm?’ says shiva in assuring voice. raavi smiles and replies ‘jab tak tu mere saath hai na mujhe kisi baat ka darr nhi hai’. shiva smiles at her confidence on him.shiva starts moving his legs in order to loosen the rope and he finally open it. Raavi too tries to open the rope. She suddenly sees a lizard there. she screams and puts her head on his shoulder requeting him to drive it away. Shiva chuckles seeing this.

(Pandyas and janardan's part: krish gets a call from his friend andcomes to know about shivi’s kidnapping. He rushes to temple and tells everyone. Pandyas ends up suspecting janardan. Rishita asks them to find truth first then belame her father. Everyone agrees. Rishita and dhara returns to home whereas dev, gautum, krish rushes to janardan’s house for confrontation. There, they finds janardan talking to someone over call. Krish secretly listen to him and finds that shivi are kidnap by him only and he is going there only. They decides to follow. Whereas janardan decides to go to the location as the goon told him that they kidnapped a girl with shiva instead of dev. He don’t know that pandya brother’s are following him. Rishita and dhara reaches home.Prafulla sees them but doesn’t find raavi so decides to go pandya niwas. In pandya niwas, dhara tells suman about shivi’s kidnapping and prafulla overhears. She creates a scene resulting in a heated agreement b/w suman and prafulla.)

Due to raavi’s sceam, a goon comes to check them. He comes close to them. Seeing raavi resting her head on shiva’s shoulder, the goon teases raavi and touches her shoulder making her sit straight. Shiva’s blood boils seeing this. Shiva hits th goon using his leg. By this time, his hands also got free. He unties himself and starts beating the goon but more goons come there. shiva starts fitghting with all. ‘aeee….agr ab tune haath chalaya na…..toh goli chala ke iska bheja udda dunga…..’ says a goon to shiva as he points gun towards raavi. Shiva stops immediately seeing this. Another goon hits him and again ties him to chair. Just then he gets call from his boss. Shiva comes to know about that it was janardan as the goon by mistakes his name. goons leave the place and gives information to janardan. Shiva-raavi again try to free themselves. But in this process, raavi’s pallu falls off her shoulder. Shiva removes his gaze from her whereas she starts crying because of this. Shiva looks at her and blinks his eyes in assurance. He comes near her using his chair. He leans down, holds her pallu form his teeth and drag it upwards. Finally, he adjusts it on her shoulder. He again looks away trying not to make her uncomfortable. Raavi smiles at him. his each and every activity makes her to fall more and more for him. he is such a gentleman. She pecks his cheek giving him a little shock. ‘gadhedi….iss situation me bhi tujhe romance sujh raha hai….’ says shiva trying to angry but it was visible that he is dancing inside. Raavi frowns at this and says ‘acha….bol tohaise raha hai jaise tujhe acha na laga ho’ making a pout. Shiva chuckles.Suddenly shiva gets an idea. He asks raavi to open his hand using her teeth. A tfirst raavi rejected the idea, but then she feels that it is the only way.Shiva pushes her chair making her fall. Ravi moves forward and starts her work.

After lots of effort raavi finally opens shiva’s hand. Shiva frees himself. ‘jaldi kar shiva mujhe bhi khol….’ says raavi. But shiva doesn’treact he just looked at raavi with tensed face and leaves the place. Raavi calls him but by that time he has gone. ‘ye shiva kahan chala gya…..mujhe khola bhi nhi……’ says raavi to herself being confused by shiva’s gesture. She was not able to understand why shiva left her alone. A thought comes to her mind saying ‘shiva mujhe akela chodke bhaag gya’

precap- bandar and chipkali in jungle...

so guys.....how is it?.....I know last ka cliffhander padke gaali dene ka man kar raha hoga😁....par suspense zaroori hai.......and half must be thinki ki show ki tarha MU kara di......chalo next part me dekhte hai kya hoga😁😁😁...and feelin like to tag today..so let's tag

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