*The boat sinks *- Mehrya SS

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Pheww.. bringing up this one to challenge myself.

Stories inspired from songs.

Been hearing this song on loop , so my humble attempt to create something. Will try to post regularly, probably few sentences a day.


(Mehak a voice therapist meets Shaurya a journalist, who have been diagnosed with vocal cord paralysis. After an initial tiff, the two of them gets acquainted well. Mehak tried her best to manage a vulnerable Shaurya, precisely a 28 year old who lost the control over his vocals all of a sudden. Rather opting for surgery, she urged him to wait patiently. After one long year, he gets back his voice . But things take a different turn now)



Part 1


"Sheher Samander Ye Dil Ka

Sheher Samander

Do Kashtiyaan Thi Tairti

Yahaan Banke Hum Safar "


Those long strands of hair traced her jawline. Unlike all those calm evenings, the waves danced frantically today. She could see a boat sinking there, right in front of her blurred eyes. It was symbolically her heart, sinking deep down the sea. She looked at him through her lashes, he looked calm ,yet lost in deep thoughts. He could no longer converse with the waves. Though he got back his voice, he couldn't utter a word .The earnest efforts of this woman to reunite him with his lost love, got him here.










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Posted: 1 years ago
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Kya baat👏the fluid flow & force of emotions that are about to unfold,as if standing on edge of sleeping volcano, oblivious to how powerful or dangerous consequences will passionately transpire soon 👏

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This looks new, refreshing and intriguing.

Many congratulations on your new adventure.

Sending much love

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OMG Shinu ...that already has me salivating 😳😆

What a glimpse...waiting eagerly for more❤️

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