||The Other Side - Ch 75 - 18/06/23 || - Page 16

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: dwriter

My dearest...

I'm extremely guilt ridden abd can't gather enough words you see.

Life has been a complete mess all these days.

Let's not talk about it .


Now coming to the main point. Long and delayed fb for two brilliant chapters.

This won't be as long and detailed, like my previous ones. ( 90% of my brain reseved for work..pardon me)

Honestly loved both the chapters , word to word irrespective of the twists.

Glad that she herself planned to punish the culprit.

Unlike other readers , I'm not sure whether Shaurya has made his entry. It could be someone else. Will be happy if I'm proved wrong. 😆. You are a pro in bringing out surprising twists and turns, so anything is possible.


Thoroughly enjoyed reading.


And can't wait to read the next.

Mehrya FFs are my lifeline these days.


Thankyou so much. 🤗

Take care and happy writing ❤️


Hey no worries dear. And thanks for taking the time to give your feedback. In fact, I was thinking if I should just update to Wattpad and leave it at that. You are reading there anyway, you can leave a comment there or vote that way it's much less fuss about writing long feedback. Work is always there and nowadays it always bogs me down as well. I think it would be much less hassle for you to leave a short comment on Wattpad than write elaborate feedback here.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hey Monali,

I think with shine and JB comments on this page increase our forum activity a lil .... well personally whattpad is just another platform but this forum is kinda our virtual home....i read these comments offline for your stories or some other writers and i can feel the warmth....maybe its just me but you should go for elaborate comments girl ........not everyone is Lucky and creative like you to get long lovely feedbacks 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: monalidp


I am still working on it, dear. Diwali has been hectic and I haven't been able to sit down to write😒 I am hoping I'll be able to upload something in a day or two.

How have you been? I hope your Diwali was full of fun festivities 🤗🤗

okay...... keep updating whenever time permits ✨❤️
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Hey Monali,

I think with shine and JB comments on this page increase our forum activity a lil .... well personally whattpad is just another platform but this forum is kinda our virtual home....i read these comments offline for your stories or some other writers and i can feel the warmth....maybe its just me but you should go for elaborate comments girl ........not everyone is Lucky and creative like you to get long lovely feedbacks 🤗

Dil ki baat❤️

Love you Moonlight 🤗❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Teh next chapter is available now. Enjoy :)

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice chapter..Shaurya now moved forward to Ananya..now he wanted Mehek's only & keep fantasies...hope Shaurya soon open up with mehek wholeheartedly & we seen our majnum khanna who is head over hill with his princess mehek only..Shaurya is such a player who did all of this secretly and even hired Steve to keep an eye on mehek just the SK thinks..shaurya well known how to keep clam his princess..he skillfully used dadaji..at first mehek is angry to seen shaurya and his dominance over her that's why she is rude to him..i think she is hurt and couldn't control her fellings before him..hope mehek sorted out the misunderstanding soon and give eachother another chance for the baby sake...it's all depends on mehek..want to see adamant mehek and shaurya bear it all..they are going back home together hope soo..waiting for next chapter continue soon..❤🙏✌

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Posted: 2 years ago

Im so angry with Shaurya n still want to gv him a thrashing. Bt the other part of me went yaaay as soon as he made an entry.😆


Kya mast plan banaya to satkao that cockroach. Wish Mehek had time to gv him a few well deserved punches. 🤢

N nw Shaurya baba is back to his old excuse of dadaji to manao wifey. Hope mehek gvs him a hard time. Wt happened to the annulment papers. Did the moron file them? 🤬😒 It actually took him a lath frm Ananya to realize his love. 🙄 Iska kuch nahi ho sakta. 🤬😤

Also waiting for the 2nd rat's end.😉

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Posted: 1 years ago

Hi Monali,

Hope everything is fine at your end 🙂

Its been long but I have not seen any activity at your end so just wondering if all is well??☹️🥺

I hope you are doing well and will return soon to your amazing readers 🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

Sorry to keep you waiting dear. As you know, things have been not-so-rosy lately. I'll post as soon as I can. 🤗🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago

New chapter posted as a new year's gift 🤗🤗

Enjoy!

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