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Ch 51 is here!!

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Ch 52 is published :)

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Guess I need to create a siggy. Coz it has become my usual thing to be late with my fbs.


Apologies again...🤗


I liked it , won't suffice. It would be an understatement.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading both the chapters.

The second last one was indeed very sweet. Loaded with surprises, a beautiful amalgamation of every emotion.❤️

Started my day with the latest updated chapter.

Oh good lord , what a gifted writer you are. Can't really come out of it. Aah each expression just sweeps me out of my reality. Especially, during their conversation , as he put forth his conditions.

Well nowadays when I read from word to word, I keep pondering, how could I pen a note of appreciation.

There is more in store, the dark secrets of the sinful night, his past relationship and many more about which I'm absolutely unaware.

No matter what, I'm loving it . You are doing a fantastic job and keep doing the same❤️


Until then, will keep wondering about their telepathic connection. Hope he offers his heart along with the glass of water.😉


Take care and happy writing. ❤️

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Originally posted by: dwriter

Guess I need to create a siggy. Coz it has become my usual thing to be late with my fbs.


Apologies again...🤗


I liked it , won't suffice. It would be an understatement.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading both the chapters.

The second last one was indeed very sweet. Loaded with surprises, a beautiful amalgamation of every emotion.❤️

Started my day with the latest updated chapter.

Oh good lord , what a gifted writer you are. Can't really come out of it. Aah each expression just sweeps me out of my reality. Especially, during their conversation , as he put forth his conditions.

Well nowadays when I read from word to word, I keep pondering, how could I pen a note of appreciation.

There is more in store, the dark secrets of the sinful night, his past relationship and many more about which I'm absolutely unaware.

No matter what, I'm loving it . You are doing a fantastic job and keep doing the same❤️


Until then, will keep wondering about their telepathic connection. Hope he offers his heart along with the glass of water.😉


Take care and happy writing. ❤️


Ah…thank you dearie😍. Thrilled as always to read your feedback, my forever cheerleader 🤩🤗🤗

To be honest, I am realising how hard it is to keep the same feel of the story chapter after chapter 😳. Some days I am totally out of context and have to remind myself where I left. The story is proving very emotionally demanding iykwim. Both SK and Mahek are intense characters and it’s hard to keep up with them 😣😢😢

It’s a new lesson, that’s all I can say. I hope I can keep up to the end.

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Ch 53 is here. Interesting chapter, I'd suggest reading it before coming at me with chappals 🤔smiley24

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Here again, with a bunch of flowers you see😊💐



Well, this must be one of my rare feedbacks which I have given on time. Precisely instant feedback.

As always I loved it. Applauds for the narrative and the creative mind to think out of the box and serve it elegantly on a platter. 👏

Undoubtedly that was shocking. But that shows how vulnerable she is or she has been turned to. Shaurya paying for all of his misdeeds. Quite like that.

But the struggle is real and mutual.I do remember one of my previous statements, where I quoted about the same. They are in this together, either they would sink or swim back to the shore.


Waiting patiently for the next.

Thankyou so much for this one🤗

Take care and happy writing.

You are doing a fab job🤗

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Originally posted by: dwriter

Here again, with a bunch of flowers you see😊💐



Well, this must be one of my rare feedbacks which I have given on time. Precisely instant feedback.

As always I loved it. Applauds for the narrative and the creative mind to think out of the box and serve it elegantly on a platter. 👏

Undoubtedly that was shocking. But that shows how vulnerable she is or she has been turned to. Shaurya paying for all of his misdeeds. Quite like that.

But the struggle is real and mutual.I do remember one of my previous statements, where I quoted about the same. They are in this together, either they would sink or swim back to the shore.


Waiting patiently for the next.

Thankyou so much for this one🤗

Take care and happy writing.

You are doing a fab job🤗


OMG, thank you dear 🤗🤗💖💖💖

So happy to see you have an insight into the characters to appreciate the direction this is going. I must say not many can claim it, it was a disappointing chapter for many 👎🏽😞

Anyway, it's getting clear I am not a writer for the masses. People's tastes are set and anything outside of a typical kind of storyline is unwelcome. I am going to finish this book and meanwhile work on the next idea. I am looking for a milder storyline this time, but then again that meddlesome part of me might just throw a spanner in the wheel. Let's see how it goes. Fingers crossed :)

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Posted: 2 years ago

Please update wants to know mehrya revelation & exploration...and how you unrevel the truth...

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The next chapter is here :)

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Apologies for the delay again..


Such a beautiful chapter it was ❤️

Loved it word to word.

Well it could be the calm before storm or after storm.

Will have to wait n watch.

I have a strong feeling that the mysterious person could be Vicky( if he has recovered), or his close acquaintance.

A new mess, for the duo who are still struggling to get out of their own messy puddle.

Will be eagerly waiting for the next.



And regarding the masses. You are indeed a very talented writer. Everyone does love your work. Your readers are emotionally invested in the characters and story, so it must be difficult for them to see the protagonists suffer. That itself shows the impact of your writing. That's the other side.

You are too good.

So no room for any disappointment.

Take care and happy writing ❤️

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