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Posted: 2 years ago

Shauryas behaviour is so harsh.. because of him mehek is unwell..it's high time you should unfold the story gradually.. continue soon..

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Posted: 2 years ago

Shaurya is a moron of the highest order. The two Khanna brothers have ruined Mehek completely and have brought her almost to the brink of death. I dnt even feel an ounce of pity for him.

Just want Mehek to get well n get out of there. She hz her qualifications n she doesn't need her dadajiz wealth sh hz done enough for the family. N nw its her turn to be happy. Even if it means breaking away from all the toxic people in her life. Let them clear up their own mess.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

Shaurya is a moron of the highest order. The two Khanna brothers have ruined Mehek completely and have brought her almost to the brink of death. I dnt even feel an ounce of pity for him.

Just want Mehek to get well n get out of there. She hz her qualifications n she doesn't need her dadajiz wealth sh hz done enough for the family. N nw its her turn to be happy. Even if it means breaking away from all the toxic people in her life. Let them clear up their own mess.


Yep, SK is a legit pain in the ass. The next chapter is here though and it might jolt you. Have a look and let me know 😃

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Posted: 2 years ago

Ch 49 is here. I hope you enjoy it. I deffo enjoyed writing it😉😀😀

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: monalidp

Next chapter is available (ch 48.)

Chapter 48..



Yet another beautifully written chapter. Though it was quite an emotional chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed reading. In particular, the way you play with words to portray the characters feeling in its true form.

My heart literally danced in pleasure. The pleasure of experiencing something which is not far from reality. All the visuals flickering in and out, I couldn't help but appreciate the cinematography. Yep...I could visualise every single word.

Shaurya being a mere spectactor and silently watching others. "The grass is always greener on the other side"...and in his case it is cent percent true.

His reactions as always, was unpredictable. He can't control his deeds and actions, atleast for now, when he is guilty.

Neither of them could easily get out of this maze. Either they both would be free or both would be bound to suffer.


Let's see how and when?.😳

Thankyou so much for the update dear.

Would be here after reading the next 😊


p .s.. couldn't find your story under #mehrya. Not sure whether it's a technical glitch. Please look into it.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: dwriter

Chapter 48..



Yet another beautifully written chapter. Though it was quite an emotional chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed reading. In particular, the way you play with words to portray the characters feeling in its true form.

My heart literally danced in pleasure. The pleasure of experiencing something which is not far from reality. All the visuals flickering in and out, I couldn't help but appreciate the cinematography. Yep...I could visualise every single word.

Shaurya being a mere spectactor and silently watching others. "The grass is always greener on the other side"...and in his case it is cent percent true.

His reactions as always, was unpredictable. He can't control his deeds and actions, atleast for now, when he is guilty.

Neither of them could easily get out of this maze. Either they both would be free or both would be bound to suffer.


Let's see how and when?.😳

Thankyou so much for the update dear.

Would be here after reading the next 😊


p .s.. couldn't find your story under #mehrya. Not sure whether it's a technical glitch. Please look into it.


thanks dear, again such encouraging feedback ❤️❤️🤗🤗
Yes I’ve I untagged it as mehrya as I think the story is not a typical mehrya story any longer. Don’t get me wrong but people who come for mehrya have certain expectations and if they are not fulfilled they get impatient. I get many comments. That is why I wanted to change the character names before but again the current readers wanted to go on as it is. Anyway, I am not sure this story anymore qualifies as a mehrya story. Yet if you guys are reading it, that’s really a great morale booster for me 🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Continue soon..don't upset your readers and do continue the others side as mehrya story 🙏🙏..

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Posted: 2 years ago

Next chapter is here.

Ch 50. It's something I hope everyone was waiting for. Let me know how you like it :)

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Posted: 2 years ago

Apologies for being MIA and not being regular with my feedback.


Hearty congratulations for hitting 50. Bravo👏


Read the last two chapters back to back. And I absolutely loved them. When Shaurya proposed with the annulment, I was like ok, good . Though I'm a hopeless mehrya admirer , I was over the moon thinking that she will be free.

But you surprised me again with Mehek's reaction. Blowing whistles again for her Badass attitude .

What's even more surprising is that even after 50 chapters the story is still fresh, unpredictable and intriguing.

Thankyou so much 🤗

Waiting patiently to read the next one.

Take care and happy writing ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: dwriter

Apologies for being MIA and not being regular with my feedback.


Hearty congratulations for hitting 50. Bravo👏


Read the last two chapters back to back. And I absolutely loved them. When Shaurya proposed with the annulment, I was like ok, good . Though I'm a hopeless mehrya admirer , I was over the moon thinking that she will be free.

But you surprised me again with Mehek's reaction. Blowing whistles again for her Badass attitude .

What's even more surprising is that even after 50 chapters the story is still fresh, unpredictable and intriguing.

Thankyou so much 🤗

Waiting patiently to read the next one.

Take care and happy writing ❤️


Thank you Shinu, chuffed to see your feedback again smiley31 smiley31 .

Looks like the new job is keeping you busy. Take it easy and hope you are able to pop up here more often 😊💖💖

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