Kill me if I 'm not posting my feedback within 24 hours. . I do deserve that🤢
Shaurya join his business..rajiv motive is not clear to me.why he introduce mehek to their business associates,where Shaurya is not ready for it..shruti here also she like shaurya and have fellings for him wow..hope soon shaurya find out all the truth and he himself come out the puzzle that he created by own..shaurya is ready go back to his home and meet his wife.. waiting for next part update soon..
Haa...late lateef is here. FYI..I haven't read the latest updated chapter. Will read it soon , for sure.
I know it is really unfair to not give a feedback, meanwhile you thoroughly enjoyed reading . Honestly, I didn't write to give a feedback for namesake. I wanted it to be brief , something that would match the dimensions of your sincere efforts.
As I have mentioned and as always, I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all the chapters.
From Mehak getting to know about Shaurya's secret, her confrontation with his mother, meeting with the lawyer, her helplessness, his uneasiness, their banter at his home, his brutal action..(omg that could never be justified, never ever),. Her day at the gurudwara, meeting old friend, Shaurya's confused and mixed mindset. That was indeed a rally of roller coasters.
I was really shook and numb, as I read Mehak's reactions when his secrets were revealed. That was class apart. And blowing whistles for the way she walked from their so called wedding night.
I was on the edge of my seat as I continued to read the next chapters, until the second last chapter that literally pulled me out. It took me a while to come out of it. With baited breath I was looking forward that he would reconsider his decision and withdraw from his brutal act. But Alas..he didn't and it just broke my heart.
If I could relate to the characters and their emotions so precisely then the credit goes to you dear exceptionally talented writer.
I had in my mind, a plethora of words of appreciation , while I read each and every chapter word to word. But at present when I'm supposed to put them in a platter, I'm speechless.
Thankyou for your brilliant narrative, well enough to entertain your readers.
You have a place in our hearts and you have truly earned through your writing and sincere efforts.
Thankyou dearest.
Looking forward to experience the next rollercoaster.
Until then, take care and happy writing ❤️🤗
Haa...late lateef is here. FYI..I haven't read the latest updated chapter. Will read it soon , for sure.
I know it is really unfair to not give a feedback, meanwhile you thoroughly enjoyed reading . Honestly, I didn't write to give a feedback for namesake. I wanted it to be brief , something that would match the dimensions of your sincere efforts.
As I have mentioned and as always, I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all the chapters.
From Mehak getting to know about Shaurya's secret, her confrontation with his mother, meeting with the lawyer, her helplessness, his uneasiness, their banter at his home, his brutal action..(omg that could never be justified, never ever),. Her day at the gurudwara, meeting old friend, Shaurya's confused and mixed mindset. That was indeed a rally of roller coasters.
I was really shook and numb, as I read Mehak's reactions when his secrets were revealed. That was class apart. And blowing whistles for the way she walked from their so called wedding night.
I was on the edge of my seat as I continued to read the next chapters, until the second last chapter that literally pulled me out. It took me a while to come out of it. With baited breath I was looking forward that he would reconsider his decision and withdraw from his brutal act. But Alas..he didn't and it just broke my heart.
If I could relate to the characters and their emotions so precisely then the credit goes to you dear exceptionally talented writer.
I had in my mind, a plethora of words of appreciation , while I read each and every chapter word to word. But at present when I'm supposed to put them in a platter, I'm speechless.
Thankyou for your brilliant narrative, well enough to entertain your readers.
You have a place in our hearts and you have truly earned through your writing and sincere efforts.
Thankyou dearest.
Looking forward to experience the next rollercoaster.
Until then, take care and happy writing ❤️🤗
Thank you Shinu..🤗🤗🤗🤗💖💖💖💖
Apologies for the delay in response but I could not really form an immediate response after reading this.
There is nothing more heartening or reassuring than reading such lovely and heartfelt words. Thank you so much for that!
Please do read the last chapter too and let me know what you think. As always I need your feedback story-wise. Do let me know if you think it's been stretched too much or getting boring 😑😑 as otherwise, I'll just continue with my own line of thinking. I need a jolt sometimes to bring myself back from the glom and doom 🙄😊
Thank you again. I'll be back with the next chapter soon.
Please update
Will do soon dear. This weekend was a bit busy or I would have updated on Saturday. But I'm on it. Should have something by tomorrow.
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Read the latest updated chapter 🥳
Yep yet another beautifully penned chapter.
A deep insight into the business man Shaurya's life.
Though Mehak was physically absent, every conversation were ideally linked to her.
Loved how you have portrayed Shaurya's puzzled thoughts.
Though surrounded by many, he is lonely. Unanimously wandering soul, betrayed by his own deeds and actions.
He is sinking already. Let's see whether he would end up drowning or rescued by someone ( someone whose heart and soul has been butchered badly by him).
Thoroughly enjoying the story. You are doing a commendable job. And no room for self doubt ..please.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Take care and happy writing 💗❤️
Here again...
Read the latest updated chapter 🥳
Yep yet another beautifully penned chapter.
A deep insight into the business man Shaurya's life.
Though Mehak was physically absent, every conversation were ideally linked to her.
Loved how you have portrayed Shaurya's puzzled thoughts.
Though surrounded by many, he is lonely. Unanimously wandering soul, betrayed by his own deeds and actions.
He is sinking already. Let's see whether he would end up drowning or rescued by someone ( someone whose heart and soul has been butchered badly by him).
Thoroughly enjoying the story. You are doing a commendable job. And no room for self doubt ..please.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Take care and happy writing 💗❤️
Thank you dear 
Again, I cannot express how much your words hearten me. Enough to say it's set my mind to ease after days. 
Thanks again. I'll get in the next chapter as soon as I can.😊🤗
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