Shinu i am.really sorry...donno know how i missed that u have updated an OS🙄🙄🙄
Another beautiful OS written by you... Perfect description of all.emotions and feelimg that shaurya is experiencing after his act....but u have written it so so well... And he has to accept at the end that he was guilty and cant live without Mehek..😍🤩🥰
Please do keep writing ....we always ready for more🤩🥰
Originally posted by: Mishtilove
Reserved
unreserved....
it was another masterpiece.👍🏼
u should start taking writing seriously and take credits for your exceptional writing.👏
i love you ms. writer, and you know that.❤️
keep writing and be as great as you are.😃
Awww...meri moonlight...😍😚😘😘😘🤗
Am glad that you liked it,....phir bhi itni tareef mat karo yaar...I feel like crying you see..😢❤️
I love you too girl....😊😘🤗😘🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️
Can't thank you enough for your motivation....😢😢😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗
Aur haan....am not great...am just a mango girl..I mean 'aam ladki' 😂😂😛😎
Originally posted by: Haseena2020
Oh my love Shinu... love you so much chellam wait I will read and gv my fb
Hey Shinu thank you so much for this wonderful OS dear. The pain which you delivered through your words the heart talk of Shaurya and the walking down the memory lane of Mehrya intial days on love and marriage episodes is the ones that we all fall badly for it. I missed your writeups badly and now you have written this for me. The way how he reminisces his beautiful days as he keeps telling himself he is not in love but he was just doing his business deals but watching her crying badly really pricked his heart and now he is drunken trying to erase her off his mind but her illusion is still plays around him madly and keep reminding him of her innocense. I will request you to write another one more on Mehak's POV and how she is going through her days. beautful and the longest OS i have ever read stay blessed always my Shinu chellam.
Aww ...my dear Haseena di, am on cloud nine after reading your valuable fb... Thankyou so much di...😊🤗🤗🤗🤗
Can't thank you enough for your kind words of appreciation di... Am glad that I could dedicate something for you and you liked it..😊😍😍
Yes....even I missed my writing business.
@bold: Your wish is my command di. 😊👍. Will definitely work on it trying my best to keep up your expectations.😊
Love you di...and I love it when you are addressing me as chellam...☺️😳
Ohhh my my God..totally speechless..
No words for your amazing writing ability..
What an emotional chapter completely shaurya's POV.
You are fabulous.
Please please write more n more stories.
Awwww... Thankyou so much dear Manasvi fir leaving your valuable fb and these kind words of appreciation..🤗🤗❤️🤗
Thanks a bunch for your motivation...😊🤗.It means a lot.😊🙏
I will try my best to be regular with my stories dear.
Originally posted by: kamali870
👏👏👏👏😁 Such an amazing one shot and you beautifully described from their first meeting to the betrayal. That time i too thought Shaurya has feelings towards Mehak when he felt guilt and hiding their photograph in his pocket but they butchered the love in the name of twist that too un digestible i meant the recipe book.
Your version of how Shaurya undergoing the emotional turmoil after he betrayed her by running away from the marriage and the realisation part he can't leave her👏❤️
Shinu you are pro now in writing 👏😢😄
Thank you for penning down this story😄
Another beautiful creation❤️
Awww...Kamali..😊😚😚🤗🤗🤗
Thanks a lot dear for reading and leaving your valuable fb....😊😚😚😚🤗❤️🤗
Extremely grateful for your kind words of appreciation and motivation dear.😊
Am still a beginner dear....have to learn more.😁
Yep...the recipe book twist was nonsensical. 😂 When the episode got aired ,I was shouting .what the hell!!! 😇😲
Shinu i am.really sorry...donno know how i missed that u have updated an OS🙄🙄🙄
Another beautiful OS written by you... Perfect description of all.emotions and feelimg that shaurya is experiencing after his act....but u have written it so so well... And he has to accept at the end that he was guilty and cant live without Mehek..😍🤩🥰
Please do keep writing ....we always ready for more🤩🥰
Oh my dear...you should never apologize to me..ok.🤗😘😘😘
You are such an ardent reader and I must apologize to you for delaying my updates..😁🙏
Since this is an OS I didn't sent any PMs..😊
Thanks a lot for reading and leaving your valuable fb di..😊 ❤️🤗😚😘💕
Am glad that you liked it and thanks a bunch for your kind words of motivation di..It means a lot..😊🤗🙏
Awesome os
Thanks a bunch for reading and leaving your fb dear Ekta..😊 🤗.It means a lot..😊😊
Aww ...my dear Haseena di, am on cloud nine after reading your valuable fb... Thankyou so much di...😊🤗🤗🤗🤗
Can't thank you enough for your kind words of appreciation di... Am glad that I could dedicate something for you and you liked it..😊😍😍
Yes....even I missed my writing business.
@bold: Your wish is my command di. 😊👍. Will definitely work on it trying my best to keep up your expectations.😊
Love you di...and I love it when you are addressing me as chellam...☺️😳
Ok chellam start working on my request....
Originally posted by: friendlyghost08
Res😛
Unres...
Its a beautiful piece of writing shinu👍👌👏
I am totally in aww after reading this.. how you described the mental turmoil of shaurya Khanna after betraying mehek....
This is really amazing...😍
Keep writing 😘
Awww..Lima behen. 😊😚😚
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your valuable fb...🤗🤗😘😘😘😘
Am glad you liked it..😍🤗
And no need to apologize to this lazy girl...😁
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