Speechless.. π.
What a beauty of words...its so poetic..you are really great writer.π.How beautifully written the emotions of first love for both of them.Thru your story..u r giving real justice to Mehrya chemistry, while reading your stories I was like..watching, feeling them in front of me..You are actually a very sentimental, emotional, lovable n pure person..that is why you can think n creat such a beautiful stories..I love u for this...Pls keep writing...you are amazing person..With LoveManasvi
Originally posted by: kamali870
Thanks a lot updating this chapter Shinu, reading this story even I'm felt magical, super talented you're especially expressing Shaurya and Mehak povs π³.
This is long chapter for you, for Mehryan like me this is choti chapterπ.All these things like I'm watching Mehrya in real. Love filled chaptersFinally hogayaπ€£ i mean Mehak love confessionsAnd the Mehrya's previous hugβΊοΈThank you for the pm Shinu.Precap -holiπ³Please another update jaldi dho na ok
Thanks for the much awaited update Shinu πππ
I just loved it... N u hv beautifully written the feelings of mehrya they are going throughπππShaurya too caught by his nanz n ma... It was cute leg pulling session of shaurya. N on other side mehek is in her dream land. πMehek was cursing her why she didnt talk in temple... But their meeting in park was so lovely which finally made to confess her feelings... Awww n their hugIt was totally mehrillicious update shinu... I have one request...we all have seen desperate shaurya... But i really wanna c desperate mehek here... Is it possible here... I guess so it is possible. Do consider it if it is possible in this storyπI am eagerly waiting for next... Continue soon please... πThanks for the PMπ
Originally posted by: Haseena2020
Shinu darling thanks for updating this. I woke up in morning and read it first before starting my morning chores. It was super so sweet lovely as how Mehak fall in love with Shaurya and how our Khanna is waiting patiently for heryo confess her love. The entire chapter is mind blowing... Their temple encounter and after work meet up is very beautiful... I really appreciate your efforts to translate the dialogue from Hindi to English word by word. A dummy like me really need that. and i truly appreciate it. continue soon my dear. thanks for making our Sunday happy.
Originally posted by: friendlyghost08
Thank you so much for the long awaited update..
Beautifully written π
I like the way of your describing the environment of each scene...ππΌ
Shaurya's breakfast table part with nanz and karuna ma was really good...
The love birds spend time with each other under the tree and forget about the time..and their parting scene is really cute..
Omg mehek's confession was really amazing...the way she said "mujhe na ho gaya hai"... i was just laughing reading this..π
Enjoyed reading the chapter...
Thanks for the pm...please continue soon
Originally posted by: Chandana2010
Hay cutie pie update dedi tumne π₯³
thanks a lot muaaahh π
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Awesome update shinu π
beautifully described her feelings finally she gave name her feelings as a Love Now she wants to tells him but this judai makes them more restless
finally she gain some courage to tells him his happiness now no boundaries Awesome buddy Loved it
n waiting for holi update that means 21st wooow so excited
continue soon
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