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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: MomoShivi_Fan

Kahsish awesome Chapter I'm loving it please continue soon yaar. Thank you so much


Thanks Ammu. I am happy that you liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: KashishJ


Thanks Maya. Glad you liked it

@ bold 1 : Usually people fall in love and have a hard time convincing parents. But here marriage is fixed and Mehrya has to convince each other that they are doing the right thing. So ho gayi na Ajab si Kahani.๐Ÿ˜› wow wat an analysis๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ superb dear..I'm seriously in luv wid the title nd the analysis nd of course uโค๏ธ
@ bold 2 : I can't imagine Svetlana without a glass of fine. She will play a pivotal role in Mehrya love track ๐Ÿ˜‰ she has to definetly play ryt otherwise she can't b svetlana๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Res...Iam really sorry kashish ๐Ÿ˜ญ


very well written chapter kashish...
Harish has some bad intentions...and mahek has already smelled it
hope at least she can share fears with KK ...

love their chatting sessions...just have fears this sessions may not create any Mu's in between them ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

waiting for the next update ...๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Shamrouz


very well written chapter kashish...
Harish has some bad intentions...and mahek has already smelled it
hope at least she can share fears with KK ...

love their chatting sessions...just have fears this sessions may not create any Mu's in between them ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

waiting for the next update ...๐Ÿ˜ณ



Thanks Shams.
@ bold : Chatting sessions will soon come to an end. It's a suspense whether Mehek will end it or Shaurya will do the honours ๐Ÿ˜‰ . Heart break ke baad shaayad online se gayab ho gayega ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

You made my day. Thanks Maya๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: KashishJ


You made my day. Thanks Maya๐Ÿ˜ƒ


๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Kash...that was 'Fantabulous'!! Super Hugs to you Kash ๐Ÿค—

I read all the three chapters in one go today...mind blowing...awesome...

You have conceptualized the KK-MS relationship really well...actually I am very disappointed with the CVs as they have not done justice to this online relationship in the show, it had plenty of potential ...but you my dear has used it really well - I loved it that Shaurya had been chatting to Mehak all this time as KK and knows her better than in person, I loved his secret crush on her, And I loved your Mehak independent and Karuna's admirer, loved her honesty and boldness, so I am sure when she comes to know about Harish's real intentions she will stand by Shaurya ...oh, I can keep writing...
Waiting for your next update...

Luv,
Patsy
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: -Patsy-

Kash...that was 'Fantabulous'!! Super Hugs to you Kash ๐Ÿค—


I read all the three chapters in one go today...mind blowing...awesome...

You have conceptualized the KK-MS relationship really well...actually I am very disappointed with the CVs as they have not done justice to this online relationship in the show, it had plenty of potential ...but you my dear has used it really well - I loved it that Shaurya had been chatting to Mehak all this time as KK and knows her better than in person, I loved his secret crush on her, And I loved your Mehak independent and Karuna's admirer, loved her honesty and boldness, so I am sure when she comes to know about Harish's real intentions she will stand by Shaurya ...oh, I can keep writing...
Waiting for your next update...

Luv,
Patsy


Thanks Patsy. I am so happy that you like it
Keep reading and posting your feedbacks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Friends,

Another brief episode of Ajab Si Kahani Hamari.

Sorry , No cute Mehrya Scenes๐Ÿ˜” .

Here you will get to see a rare mother- daughter duo. Few new characters are introduced. Hope you like it. Please provide your feedback & comments

BR, Kash


Chapter 4

Harish was on phone. He looked so happy and relaxed that Mehek knew he was talking to his Dadi , Her PD. He informed her about Mehek's engagement and asked her to be with them very soon. " Hari Beta, so quick? Is everything ok? " PD enquired. "Definitely Dadi. It is a very good alliance and then I thought Shub kaam mein deri kyun (why to delay a good deed)" he lied. PD thanked God and blessed them all. "Hari , hope you informed, Meera ?" she asked. When Harish didn't reply she said "Beta, You can't deny that Meera is Mehek's mother. It is our courtesy that we inform her .Leave it to her wish whether she chose to attend or not.". "Ji Dadiji, I will do the needful" he agreed.


Harish sat on dining table with confused look. He can't disobey his Dadi and he didn't want Meera to come to function. Media will be more interested in Meera's presence in Sharma house and bring skeletons out of closet than covering Mehek's engagement. There will be a high chance that Nehal's story may resurface , quoting & questing that broken marriages creates wild spirited, troubled children. Mehek was serving him food. She was always adamant that she prepared her dad's breakfast. She noticed his tension as he didn't touch his plate. "Dad, is everything fine? ". "No, Mehek. Beta, your PD wants to invite Meera for function. I am not sure how to do it", Harish shared his concern. Mehek quickly read his thoughts. It was too painful for him to face Mom. Besides she knew the way media will relay it. All his plans to side track Nehal's incident will fail. "Dad, don't worry. I will take care of it. I will meet her", Mehek consoled. "No Mehek . I can't burden you with it" Harish swiftly disagreed. He knew very well how much Mehek disliked her mother."C'mon dad. I will manage. I am big girl now. I will be married soon. I should learn to tackle such situations. Else I won't be able to help Shaurya to drive our company to success. Trust me, I have learned a lot from you. I will manage it" she assured. "You are my strength, Mehek. Never stop being that" he kissed hand. She was consoled when her dad enjoyed his breakfast and praised her skills.In her mind, she was planning her visit to Mrs Meera Sharma.

"Hi Shauryaji, Busy?" she asked over phone. "A bit but tell me, Mehek", Shaurya acted a bit pricey. "Can you spare few hours in the afternoon? I need to be somewhere and feel it will be better if you could accompany me. Can you please come with me?" she requested. Shaurya could never have rejected any of her wishes. He immediately said yes and cancelled all his afternoon appointments.

Mehek was giving him directions while he drove. She had their engagement invitation card so he understood that they were going to invite someone.

S:"How far is it ?"

M:"Few more minutes and we are there"

When Shaurya didn't ask any further questions, Mehek thought it is fair to fill him in.

M: " We are going meet my mother. You may know her as famous singer Meera Sharma"


Shaurya was shocked to hear it. As Harish's left hand , he knew all family secrets. Additionally as KK , he knew how much Mehek disliked her mother. He couldn't believe that Mehek was personally going to invite her , that too accompanied by her fiance. May be she wanted to let bygones be bygones and start afresh. Highly unlikely but still he hoped.

Finally they reached, "Meera Nivas". It was a beautiful house with small rose garden infront. "She always loved roses. Dad ensured that the small garden behind our house were just for roses. I always wonder why he still keeps it as such " Mehek said to Shaurya. "May be he still loves her" Shaurya countered. Mehek glared at him and pushed the calling bell with extra force. A slim girl of same age as Mehek opened that door. She was shocked to see Mehek and blurted "Oh Mehek. It's you. I can't believe, it's you. Ma will be so happy to see you". Mehek simply stood there and greeted mechanically, "Hi Sonal. Good to see". Sonal turned her head and saw Shaurya."Hey Shaurya. What a pleasant surprise!!!." She went ahead and hugged him. Mehek felt pang of jealousy but she masked it. Sonal invited them inside and went to call Meera. "So... you know her. You both seemed to be pretty close", Mehek said faking disinterest. "She works with Ma. Ma considers all her staff as family. Sonal frequently comes home. You can say we are good friends", Shaurya said. He had no idea that it made Mehek so mad. She felt like screaming after knowing that Sonal was close to both Karunaji and him. They heard Meera approaching and stood up. Shaurya could make out that Meeraji was no stereotype mother who would have eagerly hugged and kissed her long lost kid. Sonal has often referred to her foster-mom as a free-spirited lady who gave her all freedom. Extremely different to the conventional & traditional environment of Sharma house.

Meera: "Well , well , well. So it is indeed you. Finally the dazzling princess came to visit the wicked witch mother."

Mehek: "Hello Mom, good to see you too."

Meera: Who is this handsome man ?

Sonal: " Ma, That's Shaurya Khanna. Karuna Madam's son" . Sonal interrupted before Mehek could reply.

Meera: "Oh , the same Shaurie on whom you have a crush"

Sonal and Mehek both glared at Meera. Shaurya turned pink and could feel sparks flying on air. Meera simply brushed it and laughed.

Meera: "I wonder what he is doing with Mehek"

Mehek: "Universe has conspired him to be my soon to be husband. We are getting engaged this Saturday"

Sonal face fell but she quickly congratulated them. Meera and Mehek faced each other sternly.

Meera: "Oh poor boy. I feel sorry for you. She is just like Harish, my ex. It will be so difficult for you live with her"

Mehek: "He is with dad for past few years. They know each other pretty well."

Meera: "Still you agreed to marry her? I wonder why?"

Shaurya was speechless. He wanted to tell that bcoz he loved her but he couldn't. He jus managed to smiled at Meera. As if reading his eyes , she smiled back

Meera: "You must be deeply in love with her. In that case , all the best my boy" she turned to Mehek " Be nice to him, Mehku. You are lucky to have him". Mehek winced , she hated when Meera called her petname.

Mehek took the invitation and gave it to her.

Mehek:"Mom, I would like to inform you that we are getting engaged this Saturday. I earnestly request you to avoid your presence in this auspicious occasion."

Sonal and Shaurya were startled by the rude behaviour of Mehek. Meera just laughed loudly.

Shaurya:"Mehek, what non-sense is this? This is no way to behave to your mother"

Sonal:"This is the limit ,Mehek"

Meera : "Oh , c'mon guys. Be a sport. I will be damned if Harish Sharma's daughter came here to invite me. Sharmas just want to inform me and ensure that I stay out of it."

Mehek: "I am not just his daughter, I am your daughter too. If you have any intention to bless us , you can do it now". She touched her feet and Meera kept her hand on her head. For a moment Shaurya felt, that Meera's face showed some emotions.

Meera:"Be happy Mehku."

Mehek: "I guess that's it. I won't waste more precious time of yours. Bye Mom" Mehek moved out of the house. Shaurya couldn't leave without apologizing to Meeraji

Shaurya: " Ma'am, I am extremely sorry for all this. I had no clue about it. I want to apologize on her behalf"

Meera: "Don't be silly dear. I know her very well. She is hurt. Her anger is justifiable." she looked at him intensely "I am happy for Mehek. Take good care of her. Harish has chosen well. His always had good choice. See me for example" she humoured. But she bid adieu to him quickly and went upstairs.

Shaurya:"I am sorry Sonal."

Sonal: "It's not your fault, Shaurya. Mehek never cared about Ma, although Ma loves her a lot. Ma won't show but I know she is really hurt."

Shaurya left after having few more words with Sonal.

Mehek was waiting near his car.

M: "What took you so long?"

S:"My wish. I was playing chess with Sonal. Like you care. You never bother to share your intentions with me"

Mehek threw a confusing look at him.

S:"That was really rude, Mehek. She is your mother. It won't cost much to show some respect to her"

M:"If I had no respect for her , I would have done this over phone. If I had no respect for her then I would not have come here with you."

S:"Since you have considered all this , you could have just broken the news to her in a more civil way. You have hurt them, Mehek"

Mehek's intention was that, to inform her mother in a civil way & take her blessing. However Sonal & Shaurya's friendship, news about Sonal's crush on him and her mother's constant teasing pushed her over the edge.

M:" Don't you dare judge me, Mr. Khanna. How I behave to that women is entirely my personal business. If you are too hurt and want to stay back to console your friend Sonal then be my guest, I will take a taxi and leave"

They both realized that amidst the road , Mehek was shouting at Shaurya on top of her voice. She quickly felt ashamed. Her upbringing had taught her to control her emotions and behave properly in public. She couldn't believe that she had let her guard down with Shaurya, especially with Shaurya. God!!!. Why is he affecting her so much? She opened her mouth to apologize but he shushed her by demanding her to get in the car. Shaurya was furious too.

Meera was watching it all from her studio window. Though not clear but she could hear them to understand the scenario. She was good at reading people. Few minutes with Shaurya and she knew that he was in love with Mehek. She was anxious about Mehek. However now after witnessing, Mehek's anger, especially her possessiveness on him, she realized that Mehek likes him a lot. " Be brave , Mehku. When loves knocks, don't be afraid to let him in. God bless you my child" she blessed her.


Edited by KashishJ - 6 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey kash..
Nice part... So meera and mehak share a estranged relationship...
Ther convo was way to serious...
Sumthing happend in past which must have led this bad way๐Ÿ˜ณ ..
I'm glad mehak is now getting serious abt shaurya...
I really want to see jealous mehak in future ..๐Ÿ˜†
Sonal will do...lol...

Conti soon..
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