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Originally posted by: mineforever
Nowadays they just rush with scenes jaise koi train chhoot rahi ho..flow sab yaha waha hota hai..
Agreed, editing is so choppy 😭
Originally posted by: mineforever
Nowadays they just rush with scenes jaise koi train chhoot rahi ho..flow sab yaha waha hota hai..
Agreed, editing is so choppy 😭
Originally posted by: Not_James_bond
Okk noe mera paas ek aur edition hain do one letter page when karan realises his love.
Uska dil ka haal and how he is feeling after realising and accepting ki he loves monami.
A letter or a diary entry? Because diary entry toh main already plan kar rahi hoon, jo series of drabbles (Emotions Unsaid) wale thread mein rakhoongi.
If it's a letter, toh kis ko address kar ke?
And btw, letter se mujhe ek aur idea aaya. Gaahh!! I have so much to write about...
Idea:
A letter a few years down the line, with Moran, Koezi and SidSa being married, with Karan writing one to his brother...
Originally posted by: NoeticLife
A letter or a diary entry? Because diary entry toh main already plan kar rahi hoon, jo series of drabbles (Emotions Unsaid) wale thread mein rakhoongi.
If it's a letter, toh kis ko address kar ke?
And btw, letter se mujhe ek aur idea aaya. Gaahh!! I have so much to write about...
Idea:
A letter a few years down the line, with Moran, Koezi and SidSa being married, with Karan writing one to his brother...
A diary entry.🤩🤩
Of karan accepting his love.
Originally posted by: Not_James_bond
Okk noe mera paas ek aur edition hain do one letter page when karan realises his love.
Uska dil ka haal and how he is feeling after realising and accepting ki he loves monami.
Yes!!!!
Then one on how he felt when Aneesh came in between
Ye wala zarur likhna, maje aayenge padhne mein🤣🤪
Also diary entry on what Karan felt when
-Monu fainted in cave
-she didnt remember what happened in cave😁
In Monu's defense, uski koi galti nahi hai. Sabse pehle toh use, Sid aur Faizi ko hi dikha tha. In fact, Karan hai slow jo use nahi dikha. Uske alaawa sabko dikh gaya. Aur phir, wo late aaya hai, toh ab bhukto...
How about like after the whole jhagdha at the restaurant? Saari frustrations pyaar ke realization se tab tak ki?
Originally posted by: mineforever
Also diary entry on what Karan felt when
-she didnt remember what happened in cave😁
Yeh wala thoda jaldi likhna if possible, baaki sab se pehle, isko padhne mein bhi bahut maje aayenge🤣
I don't know why I am deriving so much sadistic pleasure in Karan's misery🤪
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