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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

... Hum kya kar rahe hain...?


Pata nahi.... Aap logon ki poetry ki tareef karte karte.... Pata nahi kaise rone ke competition pe aa gye🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

10 minute do. Episode se dhoondh dhoondh kar quotes nikaalne hain. Phir ho gaya.


Likh dena kal padhenge abhi toh sone jaa rahe hai 😅


Good night 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: FlyingSprinkles


Pata nahi.... Aap logon ki poetry ki tareef karte karte.... Pata nahi kaise rone ke competition pe aa gye🤣

Aap log mein main nahi aati. I suck at poetry.

Analysis and all toh phir ek baar ke liye logon ko pata nahi kaise pasand aa jaati hai. Shayad... aati hai. I think so.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Aap log mein main nahi aati. I suck at poetry.

Analysis and all toh phir ek baar ke liye logon ko pata nahi kaise pasand aa jaati hai. Shayad... aati hai. I think so.


Tu bohot mast likhti hai ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Likh dena kal padhenge abhi toh sone jaa rahe hai 😅


Good night 🤗


Good Night!

Humari toh phone ki battery 15% hai abhi.... Toh sone ke alawa koi option nahi bacha... Hehe 😆

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: FlyingSprinkles


Good Night!

Humari toh phone ki battery 15% hai abhi.... Toh sone ke alawa koi option nahi bacha... Hehe 😆

Main hi ek yahan bachi hoon kya? Chalo koi na, Karan Shergill ki layers waali post complete karte hain, phir... phir dekhte hain.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Jhooti na toh teri mohabbat thi naa meri waafa,

Bas tu lafzo main keh gaayi aur main chupchap sunta raaha,

Na jaane kitni baatein reh gaayi adhuri ,

Woh waade woh kaasmaein jo maina khudse tha tera liye kiya.

Pyaar toh mujhe bhi tha tumse ,

Paar kambaqt alfaz jazbato ko dhokha de gaaye.

Jin raaho sa tu thi guzaarti,

Uss zameen pai na jaane maina kitna sajde kiya.

Bas tu lazfo main kehti gaayi,

Aur main chupchap sunta raaha.


Edited by Not_James_bond - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Aap log mein main nahi aati. I suck at poetry.

Analysis and all toh phir ek baar ke liye logon ko pata nahi kaise pasand aa jaati hai. Shayad... aati hai. I think so.


It's not like that.... Your poetries and analysis are good....


Atleast from my pov.... And I think others too think that...

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Jhooti na toh teri mohabbat thi naa meri waaha,

Bas tu lafzo main keh gaayi aur main chupchap sunta raaha,

Na jaane kitni baatein reh gaayi adhuri ,

Woh waade woh kaasmaein jo maina khudse tha tera liye kiya.

Pyaar toh mujhe bhi tha tumse ,

Paar kambaqt alfaz jazbato ko dhokha de gaaye.

Jin raaho sa tu thi guzaarti,

Uss zameen pai na jaane maina kitna sajde kiya.

Bas tu lazfo main kehti gaayi,

Aur main chupchap sunta raaha.



Sochte toh hum bhi hai ki thoda dard tumhe bhi hua hoga,

Jab yeh dil tumne yun toda hoga,

Thodi parwaah toh tum bhi karte hoge,

Hamari tarah na sahi par shayad hum par marte hoge,

Tere aankhon mein chipe har jazbat ko padha tha maine,

Par jo dil mein tha wo na kaha kyun tumne,

Kaash jhootha hi sahi hame thoda behla dete,

Pura nahi toh kya adhoora sach hi bata dete..

Edited by Rani_Sahiba - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Sochte toh hum bhi ki thoda dard tumhe bhi hua hoga,

Jab yeh dil tumne yun toda hoga,

Thodi parwaah toh tum bhi karte hoge,

Hamari tarah na sahi par shayad himpat marte hoge,

Tere aankhon mein chipe har jazbat ko padha tha maine,

Par jo dil mein tha wo na kaha kyun tumne,

Kaash jhootha hi sahi hame thoda behla dete,

Pura nahi toh kya adhoora sach hi bata dete..


Beautiful☺️

I want Sid to say this to Sanju....

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