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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond


Kabhi tera bejijak kehna,

Toh kabhie tera sason ka thamna,

Kabhie meri shikayat taaro sa karna,

Toh kabhie yun khamoshi sa meri raah takna,


Kabhi tera rait sa banjaar hona,

Toh kabhie ojal boonda ban mera angaan main barasna .

Kabhie ektak nighaon sa mujha takna ,

Toh kabhie mujha dekh tera halke sa sharmana,

Kabhie raango ki khwahish karna,

Toh kabhie andhero ki kamana karna,

Tumse kab hui, kaisa hui yeh na main janta hu na mujha hain jaana haa bas itna hain kehna ki haar pal iss dil na hain bas tumha hi chaha.


Ise hi shayad pyaar kehte hai, ya saccha intezar kehte hai,

Jo koi na samjhe wo tum samajh gaye the,

Shayad wohi pal tha jab hum tere ho gaye the,

Jis raah par ab tak akele chale ispar tumhe jab paaya,

Yeh dil shaayad tabhi tumhare pyaar mein gawaya,

Joh mere apne na pehchana wo tumne jaan liya tha,

Haan wohi woh pal tha jab maine khudko tera maan liya tha,

Tum woh khwaahish bankar aaye the zindagi mein,

Ki koi toh ho iss duniya mein aisa jo samjhe chupa hai joh dil mein,

Mere liye jab tum unse lade the jinse mera jeet paana mushkil tha,

Yaad hai mujhe wohi woh lamha jis mein mere dil ne tera naam kaha tha…

Edited by Rani_Sahiba - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: peacenfun

Pata kar ke sharr karna link

Would love to read

Likhna toh nahi aata achha mujhe but samajh aati hai the depth & beauty of poetry


Mera I can't really analyse fictional characters like you all main baas poems aur comedy sketches likhti hun.😂😂😂

I guess we all are balanced out .🤗😂

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Posted: 2 years ago

I loved the confession scene, bahut kam words mein bhi sab kuchh bol gaye dono aisa laga❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Ayeshu, how are you feeling now?

slightly better..aankhein dard kar rahi hai toh itna active nahi ho pa rahi .

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Ise hi shayad pyaar kehte hai, ya saccha intezar kehte hai,

Koi koi na samjhe wo tum samajh gaye the,

Shayad wohi pal tha jab hum tere ho gaye the,

Jis raah par ab tak akele chale ispat tumhe jab paaya,

Yeh dil shaayad tabhi tumhare pyaar mein gawaya,

Joh mere apne na pehchana wo tumne jaan liya tha,

Haan wohi woh pal tha jab maine khudko tera maan liya tha,

Tum woh khwaahish bankar aaye the zindagi mein,

Ki koi toh ho iss duniya mein aisa jo samjhe chupa hai joh dil,

Mere liye jab tum unse lade the jinse mera jeet paana mushkil tha,

Yaad hai mujhe wohi woh lamha jis mein mere dil ne tera naam kaha tha…

Oyy don't write as karan 😂😂😂😂.

That's my job .

Your multi talented mera paas ek hi character hain don't steal .😂😂😂

Ab ek monu ki taraf sa bhi likh de.😁😁😁😂😂😂

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

slightly better..aankhein dard kar rahi hai toh itna active nahi ho pa rahi .

Take care dear❤️🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Oyy don't write as karan 😂😂😂😂.

That's my job .

Your multi talented mera paas ek hi character hain don't steal .😂😂😂

Ab ek monu ki taraf sa bhi likh de.😁😁😁😂😂😂


Yeh Monu ki side se hi reply tha😂😂

Use pyaar ka ehsaas kab hua stupid fir se padh samajh aayega😂

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Ise hi shayad pyaar kehte hai, ya saccha intezar kehte hai,

Koi koi na samjhe wo tum samajh gaye the,

Shayad wohi pal tha jab hum tere ho gaye the,

Jis raah par ab tak akele chale ispat tumhe jab paaya,

Yeh dil shaayad tabhi tumhare pyaar mein gawaya,

Joh mere apne na pehchana wo tumne jaan liya tha,

Haan wohi woh pal tha jab maine khudko tera maan liya tha,

Tum woh khwaahish bankar aaye the zindagi mein,

Ki koi toh ho iss duniya mein aisa jo samjhe chupa hai joh dil,

Mere liye jab tum unse lade the jinse mera jeet paana mushkil tha,

Yaad hai mujhe wohi woh lamha jis mein mere dil ne tera naam kaha tha…


Amazing 👏

This poem is so beautiful! Specially the first three lines...

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Yeh Monu ki side se hi reply tha😂😂

Use pyaar ka ehsaas kab hua stupid fir se padh samajh aayega😂

Haa ab aaya main iska response deti hun🤗🤗🤗😂😂😂

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: peacenfun

I loved the confession scene, bahut kam words mein bhi sab kuchh bol gaye dono aisa laga❤️

Monami aur Karan bin kahe hi sab kuch keh dete hain. Unka pyaar, ek doosre ke liye care, respect, eyes se aur unke actions se clear ho jaati hain. Monami doesn't need words to understand Karan's feelings.

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