Shaleen - Kaveri {KarMi} • |AT#5| Yes Meri Jaan! ❤️ - Page 13

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

Yesterday and today's episodes were brilliant. Confession was so beautiful & straightforward❤️

Yesterday the commando calmed down Monami but it was the lover who gripped her tightly.Pushed her behind him so she wouldnt get hurt,covered her head so that she doesnt get accidently hit by any falling rocks.

Today it was only the lover who was present.He understood without her saying that she was feeling cold. He was worried that she would fall sick. From lighting a fire to giving her brandy,his jacket and rubbing her arms,he tried everything.

For KarMi chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye ,kitna bhi suppress karna chaahe,baat hamesha confession par hi aa jaati hai.

Monami understood that he may never say the words but he did care for her beyond anything. She wanted to question him why he was doing all this if he didnt love her.

For Karan,his whole world was in his arms today.

He gripped her so tightly,so that not even air passes through them.

His confession was ❤️❤️❤️.

She was his heartbeat,the light lighting up all his dark corners, the hope in the dark,reason of his living.

Main tumhse bahut zyaada paar karta huin.I really ,really love you.❤️

Wish Monami would have heard jo woh kabse sunna chahti thi usse.


Brilliant use of tujhe kitna chahne lage and their BG.❤️❤️❤️


Lovely analysis bro❤️


That hug was something different, for the first time in their journey i felt that he is afraid, afraid of loosing her. He is hurt cause he can’t handle all these emotions, he is hurt that he never got a chance to say what he is feeling.


I wanted to write an analysis for niyati bro and I tried but I couldn’t so I am writing this 👇


Kehna toh kab se chahte the hum wo baat,

Par na jaane kyun kam pad jaate the alfaaz,

Dhoondh lete the jab wo shabd, jo bayan kar sake hamara dard,

Tab kyun sath chod jaata tha yeh waqt,

Jaante hain padh lete ho tum hamari khamoshiyan bhi,

Par fir bhi jo chupa hai iss dil mein karna chahte hai use hum bayaan ki,

Tum andheron mein roshni bankar aaye the,

Iss toote hue dil ko tum hi toh dhadakna sikhaaye the,

Aaj humne har wo shabd kaha tha jo tumne hamari khamoshi mein suna tha,

Fir kyun tum ab sun na paaye jab hamara har lafz uss khamoshi ki aawaz bana tha….

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Posted: 2 years ago

Man, my heart melted after today's episode. It was... it was beautiful! Gosh, was it perfect.

'Sun rahi hoon. Jo shayad... Jo shayad tum kabhi nahi bolne waale.'

Monami doesn't need words to understand Karan.

The way Karan engulfed her in his arms. Oh man, that hug was just... it was everything.

The way Karan was desperate to warm her up, not even thinking about it because protecting her, taking care of her wasn't a choice. It was a need. A habit. One he'd never let go of.

That pain in Karan's eyes, when Monami said 'I know tum ab bhi nahi chahte' because this was his doing! His fault that the one being he loved the most, the reason his heart was beating for, thought that he didn't love her.
The acceptance and pain in Monami's eyes, because he'd never accept his love, never let her in his life, never let her close to him.

'Pata hai? Jab maut saamne khadi hoti hai, na, tab zindagi ki ahmiyat samajh mein aati hai. Aur main sabse zyaada zinda tab hota hoon, Monami, jab tumhaare saath hota hoon.'

The truth about their relationship. Monami isn't just his love. She is the reason his heart beats. She is the reason he wants to live. She is his jaan, and that's not just a term of endearment anymore.

The pain in his eyes when he said 'Tumhaare pyaar ko thukraana meri majboori thi. Par meri sabse badhi galti bhi.' It isn't just Monami for whom the rejection is a painful memory. The way he hugged her just a little tighter as if assuring himself that she was there. He had a chance to fix his mistake.

Loved how everything turned silent when Karan said 'Main tumse...' as if everything paused in that moment, eager to hear Karan Shergill confess his love, and then how everything picked up in a much more jolly tone after he had completed it, as if everything was rejoicing in it.

The fear and pain of losing her as he yelled her name when she was unconscious. The panic, the fear.


1. That relief in his eyes, though when he heard Faizi's voice. I love their frienship.

2. Waise, toh mujhe Aneesh ke baare mein kuch bhi kehna achha nahi lagta apne pyaare pyaare Moran post mein, par even when Monami was unconscious because of him, he was more concerned about how Karan had survived rather than Monami.

Edited by NoeticLife - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Lovely analysis bro❤️


That hug was something different, for the first time in their journey i felt that he is afraid, afraid of loosing her. He is hurt cause he can’t handle all these emotions, he is hurt that he never got a chance to say what he is feeling.


I wanted to write an analysis for niyati bro and I tried but I couldn’t so I am writing this 👇


Kehna toh kab se chahte the hum wo baat,

Par na jaane kyun kam pad jaate the alfaaz,

Dhoondh lete the jab wo shabd, jo bayan kar sake hamara dard,

Tab kyun sath chod jaata tha yeh waqt,

Jaante hain padh lete ho tum hamari khamoshiyan bhi,

Par fir bhi jo chupa hai iss dil mein karna chahte hai use hum bayaan ki,

Tum andheron mein roshni bankar aaye the,

Iss toote hue dil ko tum hi toh dhadakna sikhaaye the,

Aaj humne har wo shabd kaha tha jo tumne hamari khamoshi mein suna tha,

Fir kyun tum ab sun na paaye jab hamara har lafz uss khamoshi ki aawaz bana tha….

Kya likha hai! I love it. I wish I could write half as well. Too good!!

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Kya likha hai! I love it. I wish I could write half as well. Too good!!


Tumhari writing ke saamne toh kuch bhi nahin hai yeh😂


Loved your analysis❤️ Episode ko humesha better banata hai😍

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Posted: 2 years ago


Waise mere mind mein ek Monami ki taraf se bhi aa raha hai😂

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Waise mere mind mein ek Monami ki taraf se bhi aa raha hai😂

I wanna hear! Uh... read. But you get the point.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Man, my heart melted after today's episode. It was... it was beautiful! Gosh, was it perfect.

'Sun rahi hoon. Jo shayad... Jo shayad tum kabhi nahi bolne waale.'

Monami doesn't need words to understand Karan.

The way Karan engulfed her in his arms. Oh man, that hug was just... it was everything.

The way Karan was desperate to warm her up, not even thinking about it because protecting her, taking care of her wasn't a choice. It was a need. A habit. One he'd never let go of.

That pain in Karan's eyes, when Monami said 'I know tum ab bhi nahi chahte' because this was his doing! His fault that the one being he loved the most, the reason his heart was beating for, thought that he didn't love her.
The acceptance and pain in Monami's eyes, because he'd never accept his love, never let her in his life, never let her close to him.

'Pata hai? Jab maut saamne khadi hoti hai, na, tab zindagi ki ahmiyat samajh mein aati hai. Aur main sabse zyaada zinda tab hota hoon, Monami, jab tumhaare saath hota hoon.'

The truth about their relationship. Monami isn't just his love. She is the reason his heart beats. She is the reason he wants to live. She is his jaan, and that's not just a term of endearment anymore.

The pain in his eyes when he said 'Tumhaare pyaar ko thukraana meri majboori thi. Par meri sabse badhi galti bhi.' It isn't just Monami for whom the rejection is a painful memory. The way he hugged her just a little tighter as if assuring himself that she was there. He had a chance to fix his mistake.

Loved how everything turned silent when Karan said 'Main tumse...' as if everything paused in that moment, eager to hear Karan Shergill confess his love, and then how everything picked up in a much more jolly tone after he had completed it, as if everything was rejoicing in it.

The fear and pain of losing her as he yelled her name when she was unconscious. The panic, the fear.


1. That relief in his eyes, though when he heard Faizi's voice. I love their frienship.

2. Waise, toh mujhe Aneesh ke baare mein kuch bhi kehna achha nahi lagta apne pyaare pyaare Moran post mein, par even when Monami was unconscious because of him, he was more concerned about how Karan had survived rather than Monami.

I think aneech is in love with karan.😂😂😂

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

I think aneech is in love with karan.😂😂😂

Bas yahi bacha tha.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Only thing which I found silly in the episode was Karan not knowing what is hypothermia..

yeh toh yaar commandos ko pata hi hota hai..aisi toh koi medical term nahi thi..😂

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