Aftershocks - A ZDMN -Two Shot- Updated - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Aishagokhale

I just loved the way u written faizi and sanju's anger.......

jaldi update karo.....plz pm me


Thank you so much! I will tag you when I update.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks a lot

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: spatika

Awesome 👍

Continue soon


Thanks so much!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Golden_Ginni

That was spine chilling

I totally justify the action of Faizi & Sanju & if Karan really they should react to it in the same way

Well I disagree to Mrs Batra being overprotective & emotional covering up his entire mess just like this Sid deserves to be punished

I believe Monami would need a shock jolt to understand this entire thing & now Sid & MONAMI both will understand their mistakes

Waiting for more

Keep writing ✍️


Thank you so much, I love long replies.

As for Mrs. Batra I always thought she did not know where her actions were leading. Karan could foresee that breaking one rule will lead to breaking another and then it is the domino effect.

Monami is getting a shock alright, that is a promise.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShahHiteshi2414

Story is amazing. Your writing is very impressive


thanks a lot

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Spine chilling I felt so much sadness

U agve depicted exactly what i felt ...

Even I have heard these comments that I am cold ..but I can't comprehend love at first sight , love within a few meetings, u can feel a connect which u can explore ,but without knowing understanding love 🥺🧐

Honor loyalty respect are very valuable

I adore the trio friendship

I want to see the trainees and especially mona to understand how much imp rules and discipline are ..

Waiting ...

Please tag me when u update


Well there is more sadness to come so apologize in advance. Monami and Sid are in for a shock soon.


People need to understand that emotions are personal and can not be generalized.

Thank you so much for the wonderful reply.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: shivi.1512

Wow..

That was intense..

Hope karan thik ho jaye..

Situation jyada critical na ho.

Please continue soon..

It is critical, lets just say things will get worse before they get better.


Thanks for the reply.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

I hope Karan gets well soon. I am assuming Dr Monami's medical expertise will come in handy. Monami has been slightly disappointing for me (even in yesterday's episode). She did the same thing Karan was doing; judging without knowing the facts or even trying to know for that matter.

Looking forward to the next chapter on Monami's guilt trip as well as Karan's realization that he may have gone overboard with Sid's punishment.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Plz update soon....

I hope Karan thik ho....aur recruits ko pata chale acadamy aur training ki seriousness.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I hope karan would be safe... Really felt bad for him... He is so misunderstood here...

Continue soon❤

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