Hola , first two chapters are up ., as I said the beginning is nautankish and the main story starts when abir's surprises starts getting revealed one by one.
I did say I will post the chapters together but it's getting a difficult to take that route so I decided to post them as an when I write , that way I will be able to maintain momentum to my writing enthusiasm too lol 😆
Enjoy !
Chapter 1:- Announcement pe announcement
At Rajvansh Sadan Hall
Maheshwaris have arrived , kunal and kuhu welcome them , they are waiting for mishti, abir and the ,announcement, meanwhile jasmeet is in serious mood to throw some shots.
"yeh toh very good ho gaya ji pehle vo siyappon ki devi humpe bomb girane ke liye bulati thi , ab uska beta bomb gira ne wala hai".
"main toh is baat se hairaan hun ki kunal aur kuhu itni jaldi sab chod ke dubai jaa rahe hai , meenakshi ji is baat se bilkul khush nahi hogi, yeh dono ek baar mishti aur abir ki tarah nahi soch sakte" varsha has her own struggles it seems.
"varsha kunal aur kuhu galat nahi hai , unhe apne faisle lene ki aazaadi milni chahie , aur vo ghar chod ke nahi apne kaam se jaa rahe hai tu chinta mat kar " pacifes badima.
"aur varsha beta, na kuhu mishti jaisi ban sakti hai na mishti kuhu jaisi, na abir kunal jaise ban sakte hai na kunal abir jaise , hamare chaar bacchhe ek dusre se alag hai , alag soch rakhte hai, isiliye toh itne khaas hai." joins bade papa in the conversation.
Jasmeet says to herself "badi badi batein kara lo inse bas, poore show mein aisa bola ki mishti aur kuhu ek jaisi , unke saath hamara vyavhaar ek jaisa aur ab keh rahe hai sab alag hai , sab ek hai ki alag hai , bhai wah rishton ke bhi roop badalte hai"
"kya kahan Jasmeet"
"ahh kuch nahi tayaji, main keh rahi thi ab sab ghumne jaa rahe hai toh main bhi London jaun nannu ke pass ?"
"haa haa bilkul jaiye chachi, vaise bhi yahan reh kar mere kaan hi bhare hain aapne"
"wah ji wah ab yeh bhi sun lo , main kya koi kaam ka mel hun, jo meri baat ko tune apne kaam mein mujhe bhar liya"
"kaan ka mel ...#disgusting chachi"
"tu na rehne de kuhu , tu meri vahin batein kaan mein bharti hai jo tune bhar ni hoti hai , kitni baar kahan tha surrogacy mein mat padh mat padh tune suna kya? Ho gaya na siyappa , ab do saal ke liye khud bhi pregnant nahi ho payegi
Thoda toh dimaag se soch leti.... lekin uske liye bhi ek cheez chahie jo tere pass thoda kam hai , nahi thoda nahi bohot zyada kam hai"
"kya"
"DIMAAG"
"Chachiiiiii"
kunal bursts out in laughter and nods in agreement with jas , kuhu gets mad at him and runs behind him , they go to kitchen area and kuhu picks a vase to throw at him.
"ruko ruko ruko isse pehle tum mera murder kardo mujhe kuch kehna hai" says kunal while controlling his laughter.
"kyaaaa"
There is a slight change in his expression more on the naughty side "aise nahi tum apni aankhein bandh karo pehle"
"mujhe seriously gussa aa raha hai kunal, jasmeet chachi ne sabke saamne meri chop ki aur tum has rahe the"
kunal takes a step forward and this time kuhu senses something different "lekin mujhe kuch kehna hai vo teen words"
"Dekho mujhe koi bakwas nahi sunni tum phele....kya #threewords ...kaunse three words"
he is now dangerously close to her "Vahi jo main kab se kehta chahta tha aur tum kab se sunna chahti ho lekin pehle aankhein bandh karo"
kuhu closes her eyes in anticipation
"I.....I love..........love ...."with every second kuhu's heart beat kept increasing
"I love...............I love #UiimaaPatel "saying so kunal bursts out in laughter again and kuhu looks on in amusement
"kya Hua ab vase utha ke murder nahi karogi ?"
"#LadakuChokro mazaak karna kab se seekh gaya"
"Ammm....abhi abhi kuch din se shayad koi mujh pe gehra asar kar raha hai"
Kuhu asks in suspicious tone 'kaun ?"
Hai ek #Rainbow "
saying so kunal just taps her nose with his finger and runs away, he himself was surprised to the courage he got to say this, kuhu is in extra amusement, for her it was the most romantic gesture kunal has shown to her till date lol.
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Abir and mishti arrive , mishti isn't sure what abir is going to announce , he seem to pretty excited since last two days and whenever she would ask him , he would brush her off saying it's a surprised and will be revealed later,regardless there is one announcement that she also wants to make from her side , meenu too arrives with a very sada hua face , BM tires to greet her but meenu royally ignores and remains mum , when nidhi cracks a stupid joke the only words meenu utters " lohipinini dobi daffod ghar mein mere waaris ke na aane ka maatam manane ke jagah tun khi khi kar ke has rahi ho nidhi, agar dimaag nahi chala sakti toh Zubaan chalana bandh kar do samjhi gayi, agar kuch acha nahi bol sakti toh muh bandh rakho " and the entire atmosphere again goes dull.
"Exactly maa jab kuchh acha nahi bol sakte toh muh bandh hi rakhna chahie "
"Abirrrrrr"
"Anyways mere pass ab aur energy nahi bachi kuch sunne kehne ki ,pichle kuchh dino mein aap bohot kuchh bol chuki keh chuki ab main kahunga aur aapko sunna padega "
"Main sunn rahi hun tumhe lekin tum mujhe kabhi nahi samjhoge"
Abir ignores and moves on , takes the centre stage near that star wala fountain or whatever it is ...all set and excited
"Okay meherbaan kadardaan bohot din se main kuch karne ki try kar raha tha vo finally aaj ho gaya and its time to share the good news ...ready ...1 ...2....3..."
"Ruko abir mujhe kuch kehna hai " says mishti shocking everyone " isse pehle tum kuch kaho main chahti hun main kuch kahun"
"Arey mishti usne pehle baat shuru ki usse bolne de na"
"Its okay badi ma , ladies first , bolo mishti" abir gives a thumbs up to mishti
Mishti is not able to meet eye to eye with anyone , there is a layer of confusion and fear along with strength and confidence in her tone "Main .. main bohot din se ....kuch soch rahi thi , jab se kuhu ke reports negative aaye hai sab bohot pareshan rehte hai ... galti kisi ki nahi hai phir bhi sab isme phas gaye hai, paraya khoon ya apna khoon yeh sab soch soch ke mere sir dard karta hai, kaun sahi kaun galat yeh mujhe ab nahi sochna , mujhe bas itna pata hai agar abir ke sapne ko pura karne ka koi chance hai toh main vo chance ko jaane hi dungi , yeh sab main kisi pressure main aake nahi par apni soch se keh rahi hun...maine doctor se baat ki thi, undone kahan ki agar main treatment karvau toh kuchh chance hai .....main ...maine bohot soch ke yeh decision liya hai ki main fertility treatment ke liye ready hun " says mishti , all the while she tries to be confident but there is still something bugging her, she doesn't know what. Meenu is elated but waiting to see how others react first.
"lekin aisi treatments...bohot painful hoti hai mishti , doctor ne kaha ho ga aur mujhe lagta hai tum dono ko thoda waqt dena chahie chizon ko' badima is shocked and very worried , there is something that is not going down well with her.
"Doctors ne kahan hai aisi treatments kabhi kabhi long term ke liye hoti hai, aaj se shuru karungi toh pata nahi kab tak chalegi, better hai na hum jaldi shuru kare "
"Mishti , yeh sab karne ki zarurat nahi hai , i know tum sab mere liye kar rahi ho , but trust me mere liye karne ki zarurat nahi hai , and I know ki bro ki wajah se adoption card ki band baj gayi hai aur koi agency hamara application approve nahi kar rahi filhaal " abir maintains a calm all the while observing mishti's body language, something is bothering him too.While kunal gives a what have you done look to kuhu and kuhu just passes on a I am sorry look to everyone.
"but will find a way out, and I honestly mean when I say tum mere liye kaafi ho sach mein ho mishti"
"Main yeh sirf tumhare liye nahi khud ke liye bhi karna chahti hun , shayad yeh karke mujhe vo khushi mile jo main dhoondh rahi hun "
"khud ko dard deke kaunsi khushi milegi tujhe mishti? Aur yeh sab dard leke pata chala treatment successful nahi hua toh? Kya chance hai ki treatment successful hogi ? Successful nahi hui toh...tab aur zyada dard aur dukh hoga, yeh kaisa faisla hai ?" badima is just not able to process it.
"Bilkul sahi faisla liya tumne mishti , mujhe pura yakeen tha ki maa ambe tumhe sadbuddhi degi , mera beta toh mere liye nahi sochega lekin mishti zarur sochegi aur sahi sochegi , main vachan deti hun ki main aaj se kabhi bhi abir ke dusri shaadi ki baat nahi uthaungi, tum sahi fiasla lo isiliye tumse Maine vo kathor shabd kahe the, aur mujhe khushi hai ki tum bhi meri tarah aakhri saans tak ladne mein vishwas rakhti ho."
"Mishti aapki tarah nahi hai jisne bachhe ki baat ko haar jeet ka maidan bana rakha hai , aur aap aise vachan mat dijiye, I know for a fact kal mishti ke treatments unsuccessful hue toh ghar se dhakke maar ke bahar aap hi nikalengi...aur main is darr ke saath jee nahi sakta aur mishti ko bhi nahi rehne dunga, ab aapki baton mein koi nahi aane wala maa"
"Abir , main kisi darr ke saath yeh nahi kar rahi main apni khushi aur apni marzi se kar rahi hun , aaj nahi toh kal Hume kuchh sochna toh padega na , jitna jaldi soche utna acha haina aur badi ma kisi ajeeb aadmi ne kahan hai 1% chance ho toh koshish zarur karni chahie aur mein koshish karungi "
"Phas gaya ajeeb aadmi , yeh kahan tha 1% koshish zarur karni chahie , yeh nahi kahan tha koshish karte raho karte raho sar pe tandav karte ho" says abir suppressing his smile
"tum mera mazaak udaa rahe ho abir ?" says an agitated mishti.
"Nahi main keh raha hun ki koshish karne ki hadh hoti hai , health se badhkar aur kuch nahi and I really don't want you to put your health in danger for the mess for which you aren't even responsible"
"Abirrrrr bas karo tum mujhe mere mann ka karne do na " mishti gets very irritated now.
"Mishti calm down relax breathe meditate , breathe in breathe out breathe in breathe out "
... .main bas keh raha hun thodi der ke liye life mein break le lena chahie mishti "
"Hum break le sakte hai lekin life toh chalti hai na abir , aur Hume bhi chalna chahie hai na ?" abir goes tongue tied, haha his angry chorni has used his own words on him and abir isn't left with an answer now , lol they both know how to convince or rather make each other agree lol.
"Acha ok theek hai tumne decision liya hai , tun confident ho toh tum karo lekin main itna keh raha hun tumhe yeh mere liye ya phir khud ke liye bhi karne ki zarurat nahi hai "
"Mishti tu ek baar phir se soch le, mujhe abhi bhi aisa lag raha hai tu khud bhi is baat se poori tarah raazi nahi hai " says badi ma who knows her gudiya raani too well.
"Badi maa , I am fine trust me "
"mishti beta , koi aapko rok nahi raha aap jo karna chahe kar sakti hai hum sab bas ek baar aapko sochne ke liye keh rahe hai, hum sab tumhare saath hai 'says bade papa trying to sum up the narrative for the day.
"Soch soch mein sochte hi reh jaoge , baaki sab se koi umeed nahi hai mishti lekin tum meri hi tarah sochne mein nahi karne mein vishvas rakhti ho , asha karti hun ke jo tumne socha hai vo karne ki himmat bhi tum rakhti ho" meenu pitches in to try her luck once again.
"Theek hai theek hai, mishti ne ek baat kahi aur hum sab is baare mein sochenge okay ? Aur mishti tum bhi sochogi...ab meri baari please mujhe kuch kehna hai " ...says abir who is back to his excited self again.
"Theek hai abir ab tum apna enlargement karo "
"Enlargement nahi maari vaali announcement hota hai "
"Haan haan same same dipherent dipherent"
Abir moves on takes the centre stage near that star wala fountain or whatever it is ...all set and excited
"Okay meherbaan kadardaan ...bohot din se main kuch karne ki try kar raha tha vo finally aaj ho gaya... and its time to share the good news ....are you guys excited ? "
"Yes Gadhedo"
Abir senses a very familiar voice which he hadn't since last five months now but still recognizes it immediately , he has already guessed who it is before he turns back to see and yes he is the youngest teenager of the family....handsome naanu.
Chapter 2:- Unexpected guest , expected twist?
Everyone is excited and happy to see naanu back , it's been so long and they were dearly missing him , the excitement is in the air , menu had tears in her eyes seeing Bapuji back again , they all meet and greet him.Abir kept hugging him for like 15 seconds until naanu asked him to back off now.
"toh yeh tha tera surprise.... hai na abir"
"haan surprise to tha badima lekin yeh mera surprise nahi tha"
"haan cuz yeh mera surprise tha, naanu ne mujhe kal call kar ke bataya tha ki vo aa rahe hain ...maine socha sabko surprise dun....is ghar mein aajkal trend chal raha hai surprises n shocks ka , toh thoda contribution meri taraf se bhi .. "kunal says it with the most sarcastic expressions ever.
"naanu not fair, aapne apne best friend ko bhi nahi bataya" abir frowns.
"mujhe bhi nahi bataya Bapuji, hum aapko lene aa jaate , rishikesh se vapas kaise aaye? train toh bandh thi ?"
"Rishikesh , huh main aisi oldies ke jagah nahi jaata , main ahmedabad gaya tha meenu
the sentence shocks everyone
"Bapuji toh phir aapne ...aapne humse jhoot kyun bola tha ...aap itne mahino se ahmedabad mein kya kar rahe the ?"
"Chill kar raha tha, tum sab chik chik gang se dur, ek mission pe tha "
"Kaisa mission Bapuji "
"Aaaa aa woh mission ne kahan hai apna muh bandh rakhne ko , mission khud chal ke aa raha hai thodi der mein.... tab dekh lena "
"Aapki batein mujhe dara rahi hai Bapuji, ho kya raha hai ambe maa ?"
"Varsha bhabhi yeh toh very good ho gaya , meenakshi ji ko kisi se darr bhi lagta hai .." chuckles Jasmeet.
"Acha okay theek hai , matlab koi aane vala hai theek hai lekin jab tak vo aata hai tab tak mera surprise toh dekh lo"
"Haan haan abir bata bata" says koslu who is super excited seeing his Bapuji back.
Abir moves on takes the centre stage near that star wala fountain or whatever it is ...all set and excited
"Okay meherbaan kadardaan ...bohot din se main kuch karne ki try kar raha tha vo finally aaj ho gaya... and its time to share the good news ....are you guys excited ? "
" 1 ......2......."
"Atul ..........." koslu is so shocked
"Kyaaaa" ...Abir looks back and is surprised to see atul with ahem ahem ...a girl
Others take a few moment to process what's going on , too much is going on at the moment and no one is able to understand, there are in a dilemma whether to be happy or sad or what.
Naanu says something breaking the silence
"Bros aise statue banke kya khade ho , ghar ke asli chirag aur uski better half ka swagat karo"
This news sends wave of happiness amongst others , anticipation in nidhi and shock cum angst in meenu. On naanu's insistence, nidhi does gruh pravesh and welcomes the new vahu in the house.
' nalayak, tujhe ahmedabad bheja tha hero banne ke liye yeh tu kya shaadi kar ke aaya" koslu scolds atul.
" haan ab main vo red pure silk saree aur benba ne jo diamond necklace diya tha vo main kiski shaadi mein pehenugi, is nalayak ne toh shaadi kar li..huh"
"Nidhiiiiiiiii , tumhe bas itni si shikayat thi ke saree aur gehne pehenne ko nahi mileeeee?
Is baat se problem nahi hai ki ghar ka ladka bina kisi ko puchhe kisi ko bulaye bina kuch soche samjhe kisi bhi ladki ko rajvansh khaandaan ki bahu bana ke leke aaya ...YEH PROBLEM NAHI DIKHAYI DETA TUMHE ...." meenu is already upset, irritated and angry with a lot of things and this incident just worked as a perfect ghee to her aag.
"Benba ab ..ab ...voh ladki ko hi bahu bana ke leke ayega na ladke ko bahu thodi bana ke leke ayega ...hai na benba ..."
"Samajh nahi aata ki sach mein bewakoof ho ki bewakoof hone ka natak karti ho...atul sharam aani chahie tumhe aur is ladki ko , kitna manhoos din hai aaj ka"
"Bapuji yeh sab kya ho raha hai kuch toh bataiye na" koslu is clueless.
"mere pet mein itni butterflies udd rahi hai ki main bata nahi sakta...naanu full story bataiye jaldi jaldi ...ismein khurafaati dimag aapka hi hai na hai na" abir is the only one openly expressing his excitement, he even goes and stands near atul and nahi vahu to show his support.
"Relax relax you oldies, zyada excited mat ho , heart attack aa jayega...so puri baat yeh hai ki lockdown se kuch din pehle mujhe atul ka phone aaya tha , usne mujhe bataya usse pyaar ho gaya hai usse shaadi karni hai lekin rajkot nahi aana chahta meenu se darta tha toh maine kahan no problem main aa jaata hun , shaadi karvane ...after all hum hai dilwale , raj aur simran ko milane vaale .... main ahmedabad gaya , in dono ki shaadi karvayi aur agle din lockdown announce ho gaya.... vahan itne cases the nikalna mushkil tha isliye hum ab aa gaye. . aur ...meenu atul ne mujhse puch kar... mere marzi se.... mere saamne shaadi ki hai "
"mere darr se rajkot nahi aaye ? Aisa tumhe ?maine kya keh diya tha atul ?
"Fuuii experience se socha , aap love story ke kitne khilaaf ho , yeh maine dekha hai, kunal bhai aur abir ke liye jo ladkiyaan aap dekhti thi vo mujhe pasand nahi aati thi , bata ke karta toh kar hi nahi pata isiliye......." abir has become very confident now , perks of staying away from benba eh?
"#SmartChokro" ...kuhu looks at kunal and his look is enough to silence her , meanwhile meenu gets a strong urge to slap but controls herself.
"par atul tujhe shaadi karte waqt hamari yaad nahi aayi ?"
"Naa re naa saasuji, yeh toh khi khi kar ke haste haste phere le raha tha" atul gives her what are you saying look.
"nahi mummy vo toh thodi beech mein hasi aa gayi thi par full time aapko hi yaad kar raha tha sachi hai na bolo"
"Haa haa saasuji baad mein yeh itna roya itna roya ke aadhi sabarmati nadi iske aansu se hi bhar gayi haan bolo"
"mera dikra mujhe pata tha ...theek hai theek hai khush raho dono , vaise tum badi sundar lagti ho"
"Sundar toh hogi na maa , gujarati film ki heroine hai meri ....ummm"
"wow #Aweosme ...hamare ghar mein ek heroine rehne vaali hai ...tumhara naam kya hai "
"Kissme"
"acha....huh ....matlab vo lockdown hai i mean social distancing hai ...toh ...aaa"
"Arey na na na na , mera naam Kissme hai, vaise mera asli naam Kishmish hai ...pyaar se atul Kissme bhulata hai"
"yeh pyaar se bulata hai ya kuch karne ko kehta hai ...bada danger naam hai ... Acha Kishmish beta , main kaju..ab bbb...mera matlab main koslu, atul ka papa"
"Haan papaji pata hai sabko jaanti hun main ..photo dekhi hai maine sabki aur saasuji aap toh meri badi behen lagti hai , acha maintain kiya hai"
Nidhi is too overwhelmed with the compliment
"Kishmish , welcome to the family" mishti gives a warm hug to kishmish with all the smiles.
"wah varsha bhabhi yeh gujaratan ki bahu usse bhi gol gol ghuma rahi hai ab se ...badi chant hai."
"Vaise hamari bahuon ke naam kitne ache hai hai , kuhu teacher ekdum sweet , mishti toh super sweet aur kishmish bhi bumper sweet. Hai na benba "meenu's kajal filled eyes has done the talking.
"bapuji jo bhi hai , aapne itna bada faisla humse bina puchhe le liya yeh theek nahi hua , ghar ke bete ki shaadi ho gayi aur gharvalon ko pata tak nahi"
"Vaise hi jaise mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere peeche mere hi khaandaan ke utradhikari ke liye jung chidi thi !! Hai na meenu? "
oops looks like things are going to get super serious for meenu ,.time for naanu meenu face off? Will meenu try to understand others , will others understand meenu's point of view or there is another twist in the tale , all I can say expect the unexpected, see.you later peeps.
Hi nice parts...
Baaki chab chodo...bichara Abir ka suprise kya tha..??? Poor boy meherbaan. ..2 baar kiya...par kuch kehnayi paaya...
Asli varas Atul aagaya...great..
Waiting for meenu-naanu face off...
Wese ek doubt: mishti has problem with carrying baby but not with fertility issues right...so whats the need to take that treatment???...
I am asking as per the show...but if it's fertility issue in your FF...then it's ok..
Wow kya likha hai Uru👏,ab show mai kuch bhi ho,I am sure you will definitely give us all a sweet n apt closure to the beautiful Mishbir journey we all had🤗
Thank you so much dear and update soon🤗
Atul toh chupa Rustom nikla😆
I like KissMish. Abh Atul ki shaadi ho gayi hai toh Bottle ayaga kya?
Aur Jasmeet ne sahi kaha, Kuhu soch nahi sakti kyuki uske paas dimag nahi hai
Thanks Uru di for making me laugh🤗
Originally posted by: Onyourface
Hola forum waris hope you are doing good, we are going through the final lag of the show not expected it but not so soon and definitely without finishing the unfinished business. When the show going off air news came up , I started imagining various scenarios on how the ending sequence should be , what heart to heart conversation will mishbir engage in and is there and twist in the tale ? What would be a closure to meenu ? What about kuhu and kunal?
A thought came in my mind and it kept expanding into series of thoughts to the extent that I felt its time I put it down for my own peace of mind. This is my version of the end , it will start initially with a nautanki touch and you would feel what is uru writing, she isn't serious, but as the story progresses the seriousness will step in and you will see a lot of things falling in place in a way you had never ever imagined , iski guarantee main leti hun ...hehe bohot ho gayi batein let's get to the main part , I will be posting all the parts together because I have don't have the patience to test your patience, I am yet to pen down all the parts it's in my head though but type karna padta hai so please give me some time ..haha however you can read them at your own pace , I will be waiting for your precious comments on the other side once I post them , so peeps get ready with your popcorns and tissues and some buckets to be filled with tears of joy and sadness loaded together which ends into a sigh of relief.
A series of laughter and tears, tint of sadness and tons of happiness is coming your way along with a heartfelt conversation that will change everything forever for our beloved mishbir.
Prologue:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154256075
Chapter 1:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154266897
Chapter 2:
Ooooh! So excited to read your view 🤗
My little heart can take only a tint of sadness uru, pls exceed math karna, pls.😔
@bold - I felt like benba is saying this😆
Originally posted by: Onyourface
Prologue:
The scenario starts with kuhu's pregnancy report being negative , she couldn't conceive and because of the fall she got some minor injuries too , the doctor has strictly advised her not to think about pregnancy for next two years because of various health reasons. Kuhu considers it as a blessing in disguise and wants to go ahead with her modeling opportunity, she convinces kunal and others except of course meenu. Meenu is extremely furious and mad at both the girls , her only job is now to get up , rant at girls to the extent of telling them they are useless and worthless in life , not only that she has again started the second marriage topic, basically she feels she got defeated yet again and her family is still not understanding her pain.
Abir has now given up on her. Kunal on the other hand is stressed but knows he barely can do anything , he prefers being quiet , meanwhile he gets a business deal for which he will have to move to Dubai for a month, interestingly kuhu's modelling shoot is going to take place in dubai as well and they decide to go together after two days, on kunal's insistence parul is also joining them in the trip.
Meanwhile abir lands up into something unexpected that changes his whole narrative about the circumstances. Mishti is keeping strong but inside peice by peice her confidence is breaking , she feels lost , suddenly she is losing control of her life , she wants to do something for abir , she feels that might make her confident again but she isn't sure if it's the right way , she feels she should opt for fertility treatment which by the way is extremely risky , although abir never asked to opt for it neither he knows about it yet but she feels at the most this is what she can do to express her love, however she prays to kanhaji to show her the right path. Abir on the other hand tries his best to console mishti and not take meenu's words seriously, however he knows his words aren't enough if he won't turn then into concrete actions , he has planned a chain of three surprises for mishti, what are they and what significance they hold will be revealed as the story progresses. Meanwhile abir called maheshwaris at home, he wants to make one announcement.
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Rang Ja apne hi rang tu
Hoja apne hi sang tu
Bana Le Choti Si Duniya
Hoja phir se Mast Malang tu
Khaali khaali ankhon se sapne bunta Ja
Mann apne ki kar le, tu sab ki sunta Ja
Tooti tooti saanson se ladta Ja badhta Ja
Tukda Tukda kar kar ke kismat chunta Ja
Lad ja apni yeh jung tu
Karde sabko hi dang tu
Bana le choti si duniya
Hoja phir se Mast Malang tu
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Kuhu pregnancy report negative🥳 it's a four
Kuku moving to Dubai for a month - we need 2 runs in the last ball and you hit a six just like how MSD finishes a match👏🥳
Can't wait to read further.
Originally posted by: Onyourface
Chapter 1:- Announcement pe announcement
At Rajvansh Sadan Hall
Maheshwaris have arrived , kunal and kuhu welcome them , they are waiting for mishti, abir and the ,announcement, meanwhile jasmeet is in serious mood to throw some shots.
"yeh toh very good ho gaya ji pehle vo siyappon ki devi humpe bomb girane ke liye bulati thi , ab uska beta bomb gira ne wala hai".
"main toh is baat se hairaan hun ki kunal aur kuhu itni jaldi sab chod ke dubai jaa rahe hai , meenakshi ji is baat se bilkul khush nahi hogi, yeh dono ek baar mishti aur abir ki tarah nahi soch sakte" varsha has her own struggles it seems.
"varsha kunal aur kuhu galat nahi hai , unhe apne faisle lene ki aazaadi milni chahie , aur vo ghar chod ke nahi apne kaam se jaa rahe hai tu chinta mat kar " pacifes badima.
"aur varsha beta, na kuhu mishti jaisi ban sakti hai na mishti kuhu jaisi, na abir kunal jaise ban sakte hai na kunal abir jaise , hamare chaar bacchhe ek dusre se alag hai , alag soch rakhte hai, isiliye toh itne khaas hai." joins bade papa in the conversation.
Jasmeet says to herself "badi badi batein kara lo inse bas, poore show mein aisa bola ki mishti aur kuhu ek jaisi , unke saath hamara vyavhaar ek jaisa aur ab keh rahe hai sab alag hai , sab ek hai ki alag hai , bhai wah rishton ke bhi roop badalte hai"
"kya kahan Jasmeet"
"ahh kuch nahi tayaji, main keh rahi thi ab sab ghumne jaa rahe hai toh main bhi London jaun nannu ke pass ?"
"haa haa bilkul jaiye chachi, vaise bhi yahan reh kar mere kaan hi bhare hain aapne"
"wah ji wah ab yeh bhi sun lo , main kya koi kaam ka mel hun, jo meri baat ko tune apne kaam mein mujhe bhar liya"
"kaan ka mel ...#disgusting chachi"
"tu na rehne de kuhu , tu meri vahin batein kaan mein bharti hai jo tune bhar ni hoti hai , kitni baar kahan tha surrogacy mein mat padh mat padh tune suna kya? Ho gaya na siyappa , ab do saal ke liye khud bhi pregnant nahi ho payegi
Thoda toh dimaag se soch leti.... lekin uske liye bhi ek cheez chahie jo tere pass thoda kam hai , nahi thoda nahi bohot zyada kam hai""kya"
"DIMAAG"
"Chachiiiiii"
kunal bursts out in laughter and nods in agreement with jas , kuhu gets mad at him and runs behind him , they go to kitchen area and kuhu picks a vase to throw at him.
"ruko ruko ruko isse pehle tum mera murder kardo mujhe kuch kehna hai" says kunal while controlling his laughter.
"kyaaaa"
There is a slight change in his expression more on the naughty side "aise nahi tum apni aankhein bandh karo pehle"
"mujhe seriously gussa aa raha hai kunal, jasmeet chachi ne sabke saamne meri chop ki aur tum has rahe the"
kunal takes a step forward and this time kuhu senses something different "lekin mujhe kuch kehna hai vo teen words"
"Dekho mujhe koi bakwas nahi sunni tum phele....kya #threewords ...kaunse three words"
he is now dangerously close to her "Vahi jo main kab se kehta chahta tha aur tum kab se sunna chahti ho lekin pehle aankhein bandh karo"
kuhu closes her eyes in anticipation
"I.....I love..........love ...."with every second kuhu's heart beat kept increasing
"I love...............I love #UiimaaPatel "saying so kunal bursts out in laughter again and kuhu looks on in amusement"kya Hua ab vase utha ke murder nahi karogi ?"
"#LadakuChokro mazaak karna kab se seekh gaya"
"Ammm....abhi abhi kuch din se shayad koi mujh pe gehra asar kar raha hai"
Kuhu asks in suspicious tone 'kaun ?"
Hai ek #Rainbow "
saying so kunal just taps her nose with his finger and runs away, he himself was surprised to the courage he got to say this, kuhu is in extra amusement, for her it was the most romantic gesture kunal has shown to her till date lol.
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Abir and mishti arrive , mishti isn't sure what abir is going to announce , he seem to pretty excited since last two days and whenever she would ask him , he would brush her off saying it's a surprised and will be revealed later,regardless there is one announcement that she also wants to make from her side , meenu too arrives with a very sada hua face , BM tires to greet her but meenu royally ignores and remains mum , when nidhi cracks a stupid joke the only words meenu utters " lohipinini dobi daffod ghar mein mere waaris ke na aane ka maatam manane ke jagah tun khi khi kar ke has rahi ho nidhi, agar dimaag nahi chala sakti toh Zubaan chalana bandh kar do samjhi gayi, agar kuch acha nahi bol sakti toh muh bandh rakho " and the entire atmosphere again goes dull.
"Exactly maa jab kuchh acha nahi bol sakte toh muh bandh hi rakhna chahie "
"Abirrrrrr"
"Anyways mere pass ab aur energy nahi bachi kuch sunne kehne ki ,pichle kuchh dino mein aap bohot kuchh bol chuki keh chuki ab main kahunga aur aapko sunna padega "
"Main sunn rahi hun tumhe lekin tum mujhe kabhi nahi samjhoge"
Abir ignores and moves on , takes the centre stage near that star wala fountain or whatever it is ...all set and excited
"Okay meherbaan kadardaan bohot din se main kuch karne ki try kar raha tha vo finally aaj ho gaya and its time to share the good news ...ready ...1 ...2....3..."
"Ruko abir mujhe kuch kehna hai " says mishti shocking everyone " isse pehle tum kuch kaho main chahti hun main kuch kahun"
"Arey mishti usne pehle baat shuru ki usse bolne de na"
"Its okay badi ma , ladies first , bolo mishti" abir gives a thumbs up to mishti
Mishti is not able to meet eye to eye with anyone , there is a layer of confusion and fear along with strength and confidence in her tone "Main .. main bohot din se ....kuch soch rahi thi , jab se kuhu ke reports negative aaye hai sab bohot pareshan rehte hai ... galti kisi ki nahi hai phir bhi sab isme phas gaye hai, paraya khoon ya apna khoon yeh sab soch soch ke mere sir dard karta hai, kaun sahi kaun galat yeh mujhe ab nahi sochna , mujhe bas itna pata hai agar abir ke sapne ko pura karne ka koi chance hai toh main vo chance ko jaane hi dungi , yeh sab main kisi pressure main aake nahi par apni soch se keh rahi hun...maine doctor se baat ki thi, undone kahan ki agar main treatment karvau toh kuchh chance hai .....main ...maine bohot soch ke yeh decision liya hai ki main fertility treatment ke liye ready hun " says mishti , all the while she tries to be confident but there is still something bugging her, she doesn't know what. Meenu is elated but waiting to see how others react first.
"lekin aisi treatments...bohot painful hoti hai mishti , doctor ne kaha ho ga aur mujhe lagta hai tum dono ko thoda waqt dena chahie chizon ko' badima is shocked and very worried , there is something that is not going down well with her.
"Doctors ne kahan hai aisi treatments kabhi kabhi long term ke liye hoti hai, aaj se shuru karungi toh pata nahi kab tak chalegi, better hai na hum jaldi shuru kare "
"Mishti , yeh sab karne ki zarurat nahi hai , i know tum sab mere liye kar rahi ho , but trust me mere liye karne ki zarurat nahi hai , and I know ki bro ki wajah se adoption card ki band baj gayi hai aur koi agency hamara application approve nahi kar rahi filhaal " abir maintains a calm all the while observing mishti's body language, something is bothering him too.While kunal gives a what have you done look to kuhu and kuhu just passes on a I am sorry look to everyone.
"but will find a way out, and I honestly mean when I say tum mere liye kaafi ho sach mein ho mishti"
"Main yeh sirf tumhare liye nahi khud ke liye bhi karna chahti hun , shayad yeh karke mujhe vo khushi mile jo main dhoondh rahi hun "
"khud ko dard deke kaunsi khushi milegi tujhe mishti? Aur yeh sab dard leke pata chala treatment successful nahi hua toh? Kya chance hai ki treatment successful hogi ? Successful nahi hui toh...tab aur zyada dard aur dukh hoga, yeh kaisa faisla hai ?" badima is just not able to process it.
"Bilkul sahi faisla liya tumne mishti , mujhe pura yakeen tha ki maa ambe tumhe sadbuddhi degi , mera beta toh mere liye nahi sochega lekin mishti zarur sochegi aur sahi sochegi , main vachan deti hun ki main aaj se kabhi bhi abir ke dusri shaadi ki baat nahi uthaungi, tum sahi fiasla lo isiliye tumse Maine vo kathor shabd kahe the, aur mujhe khushi hai ki tum bhi meri tarah aakhri saans tak ladne mein vishwas rakhti ho."
"Mishti aapki tarah nahi hai jisne bachhe ki baat ko haar jeet ka maidan bana rakha hai , aur aap aise vachan mat dijiye, I know for a fact kal mishti ke treatments unsuccessful hue toh ghar se dhakke maar ke bahar aap hi nikalengi...aur main is darr ke saath jee nahi sakta aur mishti ko bhi nahi rehne dunga, ab aapki baton mein koi nahi aane wala maa"
"Abir , main kisi darr ke saath yeh nahi kar rahi main apni khushi aur apni marzi se kar rahi hun , aaj nahi toh kal Hume kuchh sochna toh padega na , jitna jaldi soche utna acha haina aur badi ma kisi ajeeb aadmi ne kahan hai 1% chance ho toh koshish zarur karni chahie aur mein koshish karungi "
"Phas gaya ajeeb aadmi , yeh kahan tha 1% koshish zarur karni chahie , yeh nahi kahan tha koshish karte raho karte raho sar pe tandav karte ho" says abir suppressing his smile
"tum mera mazaak udaa rahe ho abir ?" says an agitated mishti.
"Nahi main keh raha hun ki koshish karne ki hadh hoti hai , health se badhkar aur kuch nahi and I really don't want you to put your health in danger for the mess for which you aren't even responsible"
"Abirrrrr bas karo tum mujhe mere mann ka karne do na " mishti gets very irritated now.
"Mishti calm down relax breathe meditate , breathe in breathe out breathe in breathe out "
... .main bas keh raha hun thodi der ke liye life mein break le lena chahie mishti "
"Hum break le sakte hai lekin life toh chalti hai na abir , aur Hume bhi chalna chahie hai na ?" abir goes tongue tied, haha his angry chorni has used his own words on him and abir isn't left with an answer now , lol they both know how to convince or rather make each other agree lol.
"Acha ok theek hai tumne decision liya hai , tun confident ho toh tum karo lekin main itna keh raha hun tumhe yeh mere liye ya phir khud ke liye bhi karne ki zarurat nahi hai "
"Mishti tu ek baar phir se soch le, mujhe abhi bhi aisa lag raha hai tu khud bhi is baat se poori tarah raazi nahi hai " says badi ma who knows her gudiya raani too well.
"Badi maa , I am fine trust me "
"mishti beta , koi aapko rok nahi raha aap jo karna chahe kar sakti hai hum sab bas ek baar aapko sochne ke liye keh rahe hai, hum sab tumhare saath hai 'says bade papa trying to sum up the narrative for the day.
"Soch soch mein sochte hi reh jaoge , baaki sab se koi umeed nahi hai mishti lekin tum meri hi tarah sochne mein nahi karne mein vishvas rakhti ho , asha karti hun ke jo tumne socha hai vo karne ki himmat bhi tum rakhti ho" meenu pitches in to try her luck once again.
"Theek hai theek hai, mishti ne ek baat kahi aur hum sab is baare mein sochenge okay ? Aur mishti tum bhi sochogi...ab meri baari please mujhe kuch kehna hai " ...says abir who is back to his excited self again.
"Theek hai abir ab tum apna enlargement karo "
"Enlargement nahi maari vaali announcement hota hai "
"Haan haan same same dipherent dipherent"
Abir moves on takes the centre stage near that star wala fountain or whatever it is ...all set and excited
"Okay meherbaan kadardaan ...bohot din se main kuch karne ki try kar raha tha vo finally aaj ho gaya... and its time to share the good news ....are you guys excited ? "
"Yes Gadhedo"
Abir senses a very familiar voice which he hadn't since last five months now but still recognizes it immediately , he has already guessed who it is before he turns back to see and yes he is the youngest teenager of the family....handsome naanu.
Awww... Uru loved it🤗 and thanks for bringing Nanu back
Originally posted by: Onyourface
Chapter 2:- Unexpected guest , expected twist?
Everyone is excited and happy to see naanu back , it's been so long and they were dearly missing him , the excitement is in the air , menu had tears in her eyes seeing Bapuji back again , they all meet and greet him.Abir kept hugging him for like 15 seconds until naanu asked him to back off now.
"toh yeh tha tera surprise.... hai na abir"
"haan surprise to tha badima lekin yeh mera surprise nahi tha"
"haan cuz yeh mera surprise tha, naanu ne mujhe kal call kar ke bataya tha ki vo aa rahe hain ...maine socha sabko surprise dun....is ghar mein aajkal trend chal raha hai surprises n shocks ka , toh thoda contribution meri taraf se bhi .. "kunal says it with the most sarcastic expressions ever.
"naanu not fair, aapne apne best friend ko bhi nahi bataya" abir frowns.
"mujhe bhi nahi bataya Bapuji, hum aapko lene aa jaate , rishikesh se vapas kaise aaye? train toh bandh thi ?"
"Rishikesh , huh main aisi oldies ke jagah nahi jaata , main ahmedabad gaya tha meenu
the sentence shocks everyone
"Bapuji toh phir aapne ...aapne humse jhoot kyun bola tha ...aap itne mahino se ahmedabad mein kya kar rahe the ?"
"Chill kar raha tha, tum sab chik chik gang se dur, ek mission pe tha "
"Kaisa mission Bapuji "
"Aaaa aa woh mission ne kahan hai apna muh bandh rakhne ko , mission khud chal ke aa raha hai thodi der mein.... tab dekh lena "
"Aapki batein mujhe dara rahi hai Bapuji, ho kya raha hai ambe maa ?"
"Varsha bhabhi yeh toh very good ho gaya , meenakshi ji ko kisi se darr bhi lagta hai .." chuckles Jasmeet.
"Acha okay theek hai , matlab koi aane vala hai theek hai lekin jab tak vo aata hai tab tak mera surprise toh dekh lo"
"Haan haan abir bata bata" says koslu who is super excited seeing his Bapuji back.
Abir moves on takes the centre stage near that star wala fountain or whatever it is ...all set and excited
"Okay meherbaan kadardaan ...bohot din se main kuch karne ki try kar raha tha vo finally aaj ho gaya... and its time to share the good news ....are you guys excited ? "
" 1 ......2......."
"Atul ..........." koslu is so shocked
"Kyaaaa" ...Abir looks back and is surprised to see atul with ahem ahem ...a girl
Others take a few moment to process what's going on , too much is going on at the moment and no one is able to understand, there are in a dilemma whether to be happy or sad or what.
Naanu says something breaking the silence
"Bros aise statue banke kya khade ho , ghar ke asli chirag aur uski better half ka swagat karo"
This news sends wave of happiness amongst others , anticipation in nidhi and shock cum angst in meenu. On naanu's insistence, nidhi does gruh pravesh and welcomes the new vahu in the house.
' nalayak, tujhe ahmedabad bheja tha hero banne ke liye yeh tu kya shaadi kar ke aaya" koslu scolds atul.
" haan ab main vo red pure silk saree aur benba ne jo diamond necklace diya tha vo main kiski shaadi mein pehenugi, is nalayak ne toh shaadi kar li..huh"
"Nidhiiiiiiiii , tumhe bas itni si shikayat thi ke saree aur gehne pehenne ko nahi mileeeee?
Is baat se problem nahi hai ki ghar ka ladka bina kisi ko puchhe kisi ko bulaye bina kuch soche samjhe kisi bhi ladki ko rajvansh khaandaan ki bahu bana ke leke aaya ...YEH PROBLEM NAHI DIKHAYI DETA TUMHE ...." meenu is already upset, irritated and angry with a lot of things and this incident just worked as a perfect ghee to her aag.
"Benba ab ..ab ...voh ladki ko hi bahu bana ke leke ayega na ladke ko bahu thodi bana ke leke ayega ...hai na benba ..."
"Samajh nahi aata ki sach mein bewakoof ho ki bewakoof hone ka natak karti ho...atul sharam aani chahie tumhe aur is ladki ko , kitna manhoos din hai aaj ka"
"Bapuji yeh sab kya ho raha hai kuch toh bataiye na" koslu is clueless.
"mere pet mein itni butterflies udd rahi hai ki main bata nahi sakta...naanu full story bataiye jaldi jaldi ...ismein khurafaati dimag aapka hi hai na hai na" abir is the only one openly expressing his excitement, he even goes and stands near atul and nahi vahu to show his support.
"Relax relax you oldies, zyada excited mat ho , heart attack aa jayega...so puri baat yeh hai ki lockdown se kuch din pehle mujhe atul ka phone aaya tha , usne mujhe bataya usse pyaar ho gaya hai usse shaadi karni hai lekin rajkot nahi aana chahta meenu se darta tha toh maine kahan no problem main aa jaata hun , shaadi karvane ...after all hum hai dilwale , raj aur simran ko milane vaale .... main ahmedabad gaya , in dono ki shaadi karvayi aur agle din lockdown announce ho gaya.... vahan itne cases the nikalna mushkil tha isliye hum ab aa gaye. . aur ...meenu atul ne mujhse puch kar... mere marzi se.... mere saamne shaadi ki hai "
"mere darr se rajkot nahi aaye ? Aisa tumhe ?maine kya keh diya tha atul ?
"Fuuii experience se socha , aap love story ke kitne khilaaf ho , yeh maine dekha hai, kunal bhai aur abir ke liye jo ladkiyaan aap dekhti thi vo mujhe pasand nahi aati thi , bata ke karta toh kar hi nahi pata isiliye......." abir has become very confident now , perks of staying away from benba eh?
"#SmartChokro" ...kuhu looks at kunal and his look is enough to silence her , meanwhile meenu gets a strong urge to slap but controls herself.
"par atul tujhe shaadi karte waqt hamari yaad nahi aayi ?"
"Naa re naa saasuji, yeh toh khi khi kar ke haste haste phere le raha tha" atul gives her what are you saying look.
"nahi mummy vo toh thodi beech mein hasi aa gayi thi par full time aapko hi yaad kar raha tha sachi hai na bolo"
"Haa haa saasuji baad mein yeh itna roya itna roya ke aadhi sabarmati nadi iske aansu se hi bhar gayi haan bolo"
"mera dikra mujhe pata tha ...theek hai theek hai khush raho dono , vaise tum badi sundar lagti ho"
"Sundar toh hogi na maa , gujarati film ki heroine hai meri ....ummm"
"wow #Aweosme ...hamare ghar mein ek heroine rehne vaali hai ...tumhara naam kya hai "
"Kissme"
"acha....huh ....matlab vo lockdown hai i mean social distancing hai ...toh ...aaa"
"Arey na na na na , mera naam Kissme hai, vaise mera asli naam Kishmish hai ...pyaar se atul Kissme bhulata hai"
"yeh pyaar se bulata hai ya kuch karne ko kehta hai ...bada danger naam hai ... Acha Kishmish beta , main kaju..ab bbb...mera matlab main koslu, atul ka papa"
"Haan papaji pata hai sabko jaanti hun main ..photo dekhi hai maine sabki aur saasuji aap toh meri badi behen lagti hai , acha maintain kiya hai"
Nidhi is too overwhelmed with the compliment
"Kishmish , welcome to the family" mishti gives a warm hug to kishmish with all the smiles.
"wah varsha bhabhi yeh gujaratan ki bahu usse bhi gol gol ghuma rahi hai ab se ...badi chant hai."
"Vaise hamari bahuon ke naam kitne ache hai hai , kuhu teacher ekdum sweet , mishti toh super sweet aur kishmish bhi bumper sweet. Hai na benba "meenu's kajal filled eyes has done the talking.
"bapuji jo bhi hai , aapne itna bada faisla humse bina puchhe le liya yeh theek nahi hua , ghar ke bete ki shaadi ho gayi aur gharvalon ko pata tak nahi"
"Vaise hi jaise mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere peeche mere hi khaandaan ke utradhikari ke liye jung chidi thi !! Hai na meenu? "
oops looks like things are going to get super serious for meenu ,.time for naanu meenu face off? Will meenu try to understand others , will others understand meenu's point of view or there is another twist in the tale , all I can say expect the unexpected, see.you later peeps.
Arey you brought back Atul too!😆 and gave him a wife also, but I thought he would marry Shweth😆 remembering our good old times😭
And Kishmish🤣
P.S. are you bringing back shweth too?
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