MISHBIR: safar khubsurat hai manzil se bhi ❤:MY STORY-Memory loss

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This is a new story in this abir and mishti had a accident and mishti in accident has lost all his memory even she is not able to recognize bade papa and badi mama not only this she doesn't even knew her name too so everybody is at hospital are trying hard so that mishti recognize them


Badi ma( crying) : mishti beta pehchana mujhe teri badi ma


Bade papa: mishti bete yaad karne ki koshish kariye

Mishti: mishti kaun hai

Badi maa started crying


Doctors : ok aap log bahar jaiye patient ko aaram karne dijiye baad mai baat kariyega


Bade papa: hume abir ko dekhna chahiye ki vo kaisa hai

Badi maa: ji humare bacho ko kiski nazar lag gayi mishti to khud ko bhi nahi pehchaan rahi hai to jab abir hosh mai aayega to use kaisa lagega


Bade papa : aap chinta mat kariye sab thik hoga abhi abhi itne bade accident ko maat di hai na hmare bachcho ne


Meenakshi: doctor mera abir kaisa hai

Doctor: he is out of danger thode der mai hosh aajayega


Abir (in unconscious mind) : mishti mishti

Badi maa:(crying) ji dekhiye abir ko behoshi ki halat mai bhi mishti ka hi naam le raha hai

After some time

Doctor: ji mishti ko hosh aagaya hai vo out of control ho rahi hai

Bade papa: kya

Everyone goes there

Mishti: mujhe kuch nahi yaad hai mai kaun hu? mera naam kya hai? mera wajood kya hai ?mujhe kuch nhi pata kya kisi ko kuch pata hai ?ki mai kaun hu ?plz plz mujhe bata do mera naam kya hai meri family kaun hai ?

Badi maa, varsha, ku hu started crying after watching this only maheshwaris are there in mishti 's hospital room and rv's are there in front of abir's room



Bade papa: beta aap shant ho jaiye

Doctor: plz calm down aap ke liye itna panic karna thik nahi hai aapke sir par waise bhi bahut chot lagi hai itna zor mat dijiye


Mishti: plz bataiye mai kaun hu plz

( started crying)

Bade papa: beta aap humari beti hai

Mishti : matlab aap mere papa ho

Bade papa: nahi beta hum tumhare papa nahi bade papa hai

Badi ma: aur mai badi ma aur tum meri pyaari si gudiya rani


Mishti: mere mummy papa kaha hai?

Then suddenly a man enters into mishti's room and everybody turn around to see who is that man and that man was none other than naman


Naman: beta mai tumhara papa hu

Mishti: aap mere papa ho?

Bade papa: nahi beta ye ache insaan nahi hai aur ye tumhare papa kehlane ke layak bhi nahi hai

Naman :ye kya keh rahe hai aap?

Badi ma: jo bhi keh rahe hai bilkul thik keh rahe hai

Mishti: kya bol rahe hai aap log mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai kaun hai mere papa?

Naman: beta mai hi hu tum chahe to mai tumhe saare details dikha sakta hu ki tum meri hi beti ho Chalo beta mai tumhe yaha se discarge karane ke liye aaya hu

Bade papa: bakwaas band kariye aap naman

Badi ma:tumhe zara si bhi sharm nhi aati na is bachi ki is halat ka bhi tum fayeda utha rahe ho


Badi ma: beta humne tumhe adopt kiya tha asal mayne mai hum hi tumhare mummy papa hai

Naman: acha to phir dikhaiye adoption paper zara

Mishti : ha

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice story dear...

Keeping going...

Actually this memory loss I wanted to see in the show...

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PART 2



Naman: acha to phir dikhaiye adoption paper zara


Mishti : ha

Badi ma: beta hmne koi paper work kaarne ki kabhi zaroorat hi nahi samjhi devyani behan ne tumhe hume saupa aur tum humari beti ban gayi


Naman : aisa thode hota hai kisi par itna bharosa thode kar sakte hai mishti beta mai tumhe yakeen dilane ke liye saare papers dikha sakta hu ki mai hi tumhara papa hu


Bade papa: humara pyaar kisi kaagzaad ka mauhtaaj nahi hai ki jab jee chhahe koi bhi ungali utha de hmare aur hmare beti k pyaar par khaaskr aap jaise log toh bilkul nahi naman


Naman: mishti beta tum in logo ki baat kyu sun rahi ho Chalo mere saath discharge papers ready ho gaya hai bus tumhe chalna hai


Mishti: ji papa


Everyone get shocked by hearing this



Badi maa: beta maanti hu ki ye tumhara pita hai lekin ye aadmi pita kya ek acha insaan bhi nahi hai


Naman:ab aap jhuthe ilzaam lagane shuru kar rahi hai kaisa lagega kisi bachchi ko jab uske aakho ke samne us kehi pita ko itna bura bhala kaha jayega to vo hurt hogi


Mishti :plz aap log jaiye yaha se papa mai ready hu ghar jane ke liye


Naman :ha meri bachchi chale phir hum


Mishti : ji


Bade papa: dekhiye....


Doctor: acha aap sab bahar aaiye mujhe kuch baat karni hai


Doctor to maheshwari's: dekhiye plz aap log unko itna force mat kariye vaise bhi itni mushkil se hum unhe dubara life de paye hai to mujhe nahi lagta ki hume itna zor dilwana chahiye unke dimag pr kyunki agar vo zyada apne dimag par zor daalengi to ye unke health k saath khilwaad hoga


Then naman came with mishti


Naman: thankyou so much doctor meri bachchi ko bachane k liye ab hume chalna chahiye


Doctor: okay medicines time to time leti rehna aur ab next week tumhara dubara checkup hai mishti so be on time


Mishti :okay thankyou doctor
chale papa


Naman : ha beta


Then naman started smiling at maheshwari's and everyone was just looking at mishti
Then when naman and mishti gone from hospital then


Badi maa ( crying) : ye kya kardiya humne hey bhagwan hmne apni bachchi ko us naman k hawale kardiya


Bade papa : aap to janti hai na humare liye sabse zyada zaroori hai humari bachi ki jaan aur hum use khatre mai nahi daal sakte


Varsha: maa aap roiye mat sab thik ho jayega


Ku hu: dadu daadi aap log tention mat lijiye hum sab jante hai ki mishti kitni strong hai


Badi ma: insab chizo mai to hum abir ko bhul gaye use hosh aaya?


Kuhu: pata nahi hume dekhna chahiye


Badi maa: ji hum abir se kya kahenge? Mishti kaha hai?


Bade papa:aap chinta mat kariye sab thik hga pehele hume abir ko dekhna chahiye ki vo theek hai


Then when everyone reached abir's room


nurse came: Mr rajvansh ko hosh aagaya par vo kisi mishti ko pooch rahe hai mishti kaun hai


Then from abir's room abir is shouting : plz mujhe mishti ko dekhna hai mujhe jane do vo thik to hai?


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PART 3



Then from abir's room abir is shouting plz mujhe mishti ko dekhna hai mujhe jane do vo thik to hai?


Everyone go to abir's room


Abir: plz mujhe mishti ko dekhna hai


Meenu: abir sab thik hai tum pehele thik ho jao


Abir: no mujhe mishti ko dekhna hai ek baar badi maa mishti kaisi hai


Kunal: bhai sab kuch thik hai pehele aap apni health dekhiye aaram kariye mishti bilkul thik hai


Abir: sach mai to phir mai ek baar mishti ko dleh kar aata hu


Ku hu: bro abhi aap aaram kariye mishti bhi aaram kar rahi hai doctor ne disturb karne ko mana kiya hai


Abir: ha to phir mai bus dur se dekh lunga badi maa mai jau dekhne mishti ko


Badi maa : beta tumhe bhi aaram ki zarurat hai


Abir: mai thik hu aur jab mishti ko dekh lunga to bilkul thik ho jaunga


Badi maa started crying after hearing these things from abir


Abir : aap log mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho na mishti ko kya hua


Batao plz mishti thik hai na? Batao? Thik hai aap log nahi btayenge mai khud ja raha hu


Then he started shouting mishti mishti and came out of his hospital room but everyone was shouting no abir plz you have to take rest


Abir: jabtak mai mishti ko apni aakho se nahi dekh leta tab tak mujhe kisi par bharosa nahi hai mishti kaha hai aap log bataiye mujhe..... Badi maa aap bhi nahi batayengi mujhe?

Badi maa: nahi beta aisa nahi hai


Abir: to phir bataiye


Bade papa: beta abhi aapko aaram karne ki zarurat hai


Abir: ha mai aaram karunga pehele aap log bataiye mishti thik to hai na


Meenu: abir tum pehele apne bed par jao


Abir: nahi maa pehele mujhe bataiye mishti kaha hai


Meenu: abir mishti thik hai ab tumhe bhi thik hona hai


Abir: bus bahut hua mai khud ja kar pata karta hu mishti kaha hai


Kunal: bhai aap ruko mai dekh ta hu


Abir: nahi kunal


Badi maa: abir plz aaram karo tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai abhi


Abir: to aap sab chahte hai na mai aaram karu to phir batao mishti kaha hai?


Badi maa: beta mishti thik hai


Abir: to phir kaha hai


Badi maa: beta mishti ko discharge mil gaya hai


Abir: thank god mishti thik hai.....
1 min mishti ko discharge mil gaya hai to mishti yaha se chali gayi aur vo bhi jab use pata hai ki mai yaha hu mai maan hi nahi sakta ki mishti mujhe is halat mai chod kar ghar chali jaye aap sach bataiye badi maa ki baat kya hai?


Bade papa: ha beta ye sach hai ki mishti ko discharge mil chuka hai aur vo hospital mai nahi hai


Abir: to phir vo maheshwari hous exhali gayi hai itni zyda tabiyat kharab hi mishti ki?


Badi maa started crying


Abir: badi maa aap ro kyu rahi hai? Bataiye bhut zyada tabiyat kharab hai kya mishti ki use khada bhi nahi hua ja raha hai kya? To use itni jaldi aap logo ko discharge karana nahi chahiye tha na


Kuhu: bro aap shaant ho jaiye


Abir: kaise shaant ho jau? Badi maa bataiye mishti ki tabiyat kaisi hai ab?


Badimaa( crying) : beta vo mujhe bhi nahi pata


Abir: kya matlab aap logo ne pucha nahi call karke usse


Badimaa: kaise pooche hum hume khud nahi pata mishti kaha hai


Abir: kya bol rahi hai aap mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai


Bade papa: ha beta aapki badi maa sahi keh rahi hai mishti humare saath nahi hai


Abir: to phir kaha hai?


Badi maa: beta mishti ko kuch bhi nahi yaad hai.....na hum, na tum, khud vo bhi use yaad nhi hai( after saying this badi maa started crying)


Abir and rv's are stunned after hearing this



Abir: kya bol rahi hai aap ye?


Badi ma: sach bol rahi hu


Abir: mishti ko mai bhi nahi yaad hu?


Badi maa: nahi beta mishti to apna naam bhi bhul gayi hai


Kunal: to is time mishti hai kaha?


Kuhu: mishti ko uske real papa le gye


Everyone get stunned again


Abir: what?


Badi maa: ha beta naman itna gir sakta hai maine ye socha bhi nahi tha mishti ke is halat ka bhi fayeda utha raha hai vo

Abir: matlab mishti unke saath hai. ...o god ye kya hogaya?






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PART 4




Badi maa: ha beta naman itna gir sakta hai maine ye socha bhi nahi tha mishti ke is halat ka bhi fayeda utha raha hai vo


Abir: matlab mishti unke saath hai. ...o god ye kya hogaya?


Bade papa: beta aap chinta mat kariye hum kuch karte hai


Abir: par mishti unke saath chali kaise gayi


Badi ma: beta mishti apni saari yaadashti bhul chuki hai to jb use hosh aaya to naman ne usse aake kaha ki vo uska pita hai aur vo iske saare details dikha sakta hai aur humne to mishti ko legally adopt bhi nahi kiya hai isliye hum kuch nahi kar paye


Abir: to hume mishti ko sab kuch bata dena chahiye na


Bade papa: humne koshish ki thi but doctor ne kaha ki mishti ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai agar humne uske dimag par zyada zor diya to


Abir: ab mai kya karu pata nahi mishti kaisi hogi mujhe ek baar use dekhna hai


On the other side


Naman : beta hum ghar pahuchne wlae hai ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi lag rahi hai


Mishti: mai theek hu par papa vo log aisa kyu keh rahe the ki unhone mujhe adopt kiya hai?


Naman: are beta tum unki baat par dhyaan mat do tum bus aaram karo ye sab baatein hum baad mai discuss karenge


Mishti: ji


( but in her mind she was thinking about badi ma and bade papa words)



Hospital scene



Abir: par achanak se unhe mishti ki yaad kaise aagyi?


Badi maa: paise..... Yahi to sabse badi kamzori hai uski aur mujhe pakka pata hai vo ye sab paise ke liye hi kar raha hai
Shaurya ke bauji hum use jitna maange utna paisa dedenge par humari bachchi hume sahi salamat chahiye


Bade papa: aap chinta mat kariye mishti ko kuch nahi hoga


Kuhu: daadi aap kyu tention le rahi hai hum sab kuch karenge milkar aur waise bhi mujhe nahi lagta ki mishti ko unse kuch khatra hai kyunki hai to vo uske papa hi na to ek papa apne bachche ko harm thode karega


Badi maa: nahi beta vo sirf naam ka hi pita hai ek baar pehele bhi apni zid manvane ke liye vo mishti ka accident karwa chuka hai


Everyone get shocked



Abir: aap ye kya bol rahi hai badi maa tab to hume ek pal ke liye bhi mishti ko unke pass nahi chodna chahiye


Badi maa: ha beta mai sach keh rahi hu yaad hai jab hum aapke parivaar se mile the shuru shuru mai tab mishti ka accident ho gaya tha aur kunal ne use bacha liya tha


Abir: o god koi apni bachchi k saath aisa kaise kar sakta hai


Kunal: ha yaad aaya bhai ne bachaya tha mishti ko aur saara credit mujhe dediya tha


Abir: hume kuch karna chahiye mishti ko yaha wapas lane ke liye


Bade papa: hum kya kare mishti khud apni marzi se gayi hai


Kuhu: to kya hum naman uncle ki saara truth mishti ko show nahi kar sakte kya


Bade papa: nahi kuhu beta abhi abhi to mishti thik hui hai hum nahi chahte ki mishti ko kuch bhi ho humne apni ek beti to pehele hi kho di hai par ab doosri nahi khona chahte


Abir: i think bade papa is right hume aaram se baithkar is baat ka solution jald se jald nikalna chahiye


On the other hand naman and mishti reached naman's small house


Naman's house



Someone is knocking at the door and naman opened the door so landlord of that house was there


Landlord: chal ab paise nikal


Naman:ha mai dedunga bus 1 hafte ka time dedijiye


Landlord: nahi humesha ka tera yahi hai


Naman:nahi pakka isbaar dedunga


Landlord: aakhiri mauka de raha hu iske baad ek bhi nahi


Naman: okay


Naman was thinking in mind : abhi ye kam tha kya jo ye bhi aagayi par kya kare sone ke ande dene wali murgi hai to kuch to nuksaan sehna padega aur maheshwari's kya sochte honge ki main phir se blackmail karke unse paise maangunga par nahi is baar ais echote mote paso se mera kya hoga is baar to sona nahi poori ki poori sone ki ande dene wali murgi haath lagi hai mujhe kuch bada sochna hoga jisse paise aur bhi zyada mile





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PART-4





Naman was thinking in mind:abhi ye kam tha kya jo ye bhi aagayi par kya kare sone ke ande dene wali murgi hai to kuch to nuksaan sehna padega aur maheshwari's kya sochte honge ki main phir se blackmail karke unse paise maangunga par nahi is baar ais echote mote paso se mera kya hoga is baar to sona nahi poori ki poori sone ki ande dene wali murgi haath lagi hai mujhe kuch bada sochna hoga jisse paise aur bhi zyada mile


Mishti: papa kaun aaya tha ?


Naman: are koi nahi beta tum aaram karo main dekhta hu ....kuch dawaiya reh gayi hai abhi tumhari mai bhul gaya tha to vo bhi lena hai aur sabzi bhi khatm ho gayi hai to vo bhi lena hai par dono rasste alag alag hai samajh nahi aaraha kidhar jau


Mishti: koi baat nahi ek jagah mai chali jaati hu ek jagah aap


Naman( in mind) : yahi to chahta tha mai ki faltu mai itni mehengi dawaiyo mai main apne paise kyu kharch karu


Naman: nahi beta tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai tum kaha jaogi ?


Mishti: nahi papa mai theek hu aur waise bhi bachche parents ki help nahi karenge to kaun karega aap bataiye mai kaha jau sabzi lene ya dawaiya lene?


Naman: dawaiya..... Mera matlab hai sabzi lene jaogi to vaha par bahut bheed hogi na isliye aur agar tumhari tabiyat zara sir bhi kharab lage to mujhe call karlena


Mishti: okay papa agar kisi cheez ki zaroorat padegi to mai aapko call karlungi


Naman: ha beta to phir mai chalta hu


Mishti: ha papa ....vo paise


Naman( faking crying) : mai to bhul hi gaya tha ki mai itna gareeb pita hu ki apni bachchi ki dawaiyo k paise bhi nahi ja ma kar sakta lekin koi baat nahi beta mere pass ek sone ki chain hai to tum use bech ke dawaiya le aana mai lekar aata hu


Mishti: nahi papa aap ye kya keh rahe hai mai dekhti hu ki kya karna hai dawaiya to meri hai na to manage bhi mujhe hi karna chahiye aap tention mat lijiye mai manage karlungi aur vaise bhi jabtak aap ki beti hai aapke saath aapko tention lene ki zaroorat nahi hai


Naman: ha beta lekin aaram se jaana ksii bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho to mujhe call kar lena


Mishti: okay papa


On the other side abir and everyone was very worried about mishti


Abir : dekhiye mujhe lagta hai hume abhi se hi mishti ko dhoondhna chahiye


Kunal: i think you are right bhai .....par hume nahi Sirf mujhe aap aaram kariye


Abir: tujhe lagta hai ki mishti ko dhoondhe bagair mai aaram kar sakta hu


Badi maa: abir tumhe aaram karna chahiye


Abir: mai aaram karunga badi maa par mishti ke milne ke baad abhi meri priority hai ki bus mishti hume mil jaye


Meenu: abir mai laxman se keh deti hu vo dhoondh degamishti ko please tum aaram karo mai nahi chhathti ki tum apni sehat se khilwad karo


Abir: maa aap meri tention mat lijiye mai theek hu bus ek baar mishti mil jaye mai bilkul theek ho jaunga


Bade papa: abir beta hum bhi aapke saath chalte hai


Abir: nahi bade papa aap ghar jaiye mai aur kunal jaate hai aur mishti ko dhoondhte hai


Kuhu:bro lekin aap log kaise dhoondhenge mishti ko


Abir: tracking app se uski location to pata karhi sakte hai na uske baad ek baar use dekh le phir aage kya karna hai sochenge


Kunal: okay bhai


Abir: chale nanko


Kunal: ha bhai


On the other hand mishti was there at the market and thinking that how she should collect money to buy medicines then she feel her earrings and got idea to sell it



Mishti: yes I think ki ise bech ke paiso ka intezam ho jayega aur kuch paise bach bhi jayenge to isse papa ki help ho jayegi aur phir mai koi nayi job dhoondhungi par filhal ke liye mujhe koi shop dhoondhni padegi jaha mai ise bech saku par kaha mujhe to koi idea nahi hai ki ye jagah kaunsi hai .......................par theek hai google kis din kaam aayega ?abhi apna phone switch on karke dekhti hu ki kaunse jagah par hu aur kaha jaana chahiye



Other side Abir and kunal are searching for mishti



Kunal: bhai kuch pata chala mishti ka ?


Abir: nahi yaar mishti ka phone switch off hai isliye track bhi nahi kar paa raha hu


Kunal: aise phir hum kaha dhoondhenge koi to clue hona chahiye na


Abir: ha yaar par kya karu?......................ek kaam karta hu ek baar phir se dekhta hu shyd koi clue mil jaye


Kunal: ha bhai


Abir:kunal ......mishti ki location mil gayi


Kunal: what really?



Abir: ha kunal chal mishti bus humse kuch hi km dur hai par vo is halat mai bazar mai kya kar rahi hai?


Kunal: bhai vo to jaake hi pata chalega na


Abir: ha sahi keh raha hai chalte hai









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Originally posted by: Janu.301017

Nice story dear...

Keeping going...

Actually this memory loss I wanted to see in the show...


Thankyou so much for your appreciation

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Nice always Wanted to see this track . waiting

Thankyou so much for your appreciation

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