MishBir OS: Tender Buds of Affection

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice one kunal is angry chokro as usual and abir full of compassion.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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that was brilliant ashi๐Ÿ‘

i loved how u described the scenic beauty in depth โค๏ธ

enjoyed how u have given a clearcut picture of all sibling bonds ๐Ÿ˜Š

Mishti-Kunal tashion was spot on๐Ÿฅณ

Mishti- Abir scene was so soothing

waiting for more yaara..


@ ur ps -- anytime darl ๐Ÿ˜ณ

now my ps -- aadhi neend mei likh rahi hoon..so ignore typos yaara ๐Ÿ˜†..(if any ๐Ÿ˜‰)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelycolour

Nice one kunal is angry chokro as usual and abir full of compassion.

Thanks dear! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Its superb ashi. Loved every bit of it โค๏ธ

I loved the badass mishti n compassionate abir

Eagerly waiting for the next part to see how mishbir become friends ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Asshhuuuuu!!! ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜


Oh this is the cutest! Imagining kids MishBir and KuKu! I loved the touch you have of the bond MishKu shared. They were actually thick as thieves until other situation ran their course!


Do you want to know a coincidence? I was thinking of doing a childhood Mishti story too? But a sad one! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™ˆ I donโ€™t know why man! I just keeping writing sad stories. I havenโ€™t figured out the details yet so I donโ€™t know if i will write but letโ€™s see.


I loved the protective fierce Mishtu! Whether it was for Kuhu or ketki. Kunal as usual the annoying on at first and understanding one later ๐Ÿ˜‚. and Abir is Abir!


Amazing details! What I loved is you didnโ€™t waste time in adding any other unnecessary details. It was very crisp and to the point.


Waiting to read more from you!


Regards,


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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is very sweet, how children and adults act soo differently.

I love the way the story just flows smoothly and each person is introduce into the story.

The way you have written each character highlights the story especially all characters at the young age.

Please continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow! Little Mishti is sooooooo cute.

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