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1Nice one kunal is angry chokro as usual and abir full of compassion.
that was brilliant ashi๐
i loved how u described the scenic beauty in depth โค๏ธ
enjoyed how u have given a clearcut picture of all sibling bonds ๐
Mishti-Kunal tashion was spot on๐ฅณ
Mishti- Abir scene was so soothing
waiting for more yaara..
@ ur ps -- anytime darl ๐ณ
now my ps -- aadhi neend mei likh rahi hoon..so ignore typos yaara ๐..(if any ๐)
Originally posted by: lovelycolour
Nice one kunal is angry chokro as usual and abir full of compassion.
Thanks dear! ๐ณ
Its superb ashi. Loved every bit of it โค๏ธ
I loved the badass mishti n compassionate abir
Eagerly waiting for the next part to see how mishbir become friends ๐
Asshhuuuuu!!! ๐๐๐
Oh this is the cutest! Imagining kids MishBir and KuKu! I loved the touch you have of the bond MishKu shared. They were actually thick as thieves until other situation ran their course!
Do you want to know a coincidence? I was thinking of doing a childhood Mishti story too? But a sad one! ๐๐ I donโt know why man! I just keeping writing sad stories. I havenโt figured out the details yet so I donโt know if i will write but letโs see.
I loved the protective fierce Mishtu! Whether it was for Kuhu or ketki. Kunal as usual the annoying on at first and understanding one later ๐. and Abir is Abir!
Amazing details! What I loved is you didnโt waste time in adding any other unnecessary details. It was very crisp and to the point.
Waiting to read more from you!
Regards,
This is very sweet, how children and adults act soo differently.
I love the way the story just flows smoothly and each person is introduce into the story.
The way you have written each character highlights the story especially all characters at the young age.
Please continue soon
Wow! Little Mishti is sooooooo cute.
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