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~•Part Three•~

"There's a calm surrender to the rush of day". Abir eyed his students with interest infused in excitement for their analysis of each line of the song he'd picked out for them. Shovelling his knuckles into the depths of his pockets, his ankles crossed.

A hand rose "The rush of day is personified by saying that there is a calm surrender to the rush, people surrender, a rush cannot, therefore, providing it with humanistic qualities".

"Brilliant, Marta" with a quick nod of his head, he read the next line: "When the heat of a rolling wind can be turned away".

"Wind cannot roll" Sammy smiled in assurance, her shoulders high, but her neck even higher in pride.

Grateful that she had learnt something, he stuck his thumb up at her, but remained quiet- conversation with her usually ended with her flirtatious remarks and it was far too early in the morning for that. "An enchanted moment, and it sees me through, It's enough for this restless warrior just to be with you".

"The moment cannot be enchanted and it cannot see anyone through".

"And one last sentence, 'and can you feel the love tonight?'" His eyes wandered to a bedraggled Mishti who's kajal lined eyes were followed by brown circles that depicted the restlessness of her sleep the previous night- that and she kept yawning. "Am I keeping you up, Miss Agarwal?" His brow hitched playfully at her.

Narrowing her eyes, she dropped a pen from between her fingers, swallowed back the sarcasm on her tongue that begged to travel toward him and shook her head in the negative.

"Great, just to prove that can you explain the current lyric we're on" the second her mouth opened to respond, his hand shot up to stop her, "This particular part has no personification, so you shouldn't have even bothered to reply" looking away from her, he went back to the board.

What was up with him today? Grouchy so and so! Clearing her throat, a look showing just how not amused she was caused her lips to downturn at the corners and lines to draw across her forehead. "Actually" she spoke up without waiting for him to ask her, "I was going to say that, maybe you should wait before interrupting?"

The second Abir turned around on his heel, the class gasped, mutters of her attitude spreading like a wildfire around the room. "Excuse me?"

Crossing her arms, she sighed heavily "I said" she huffed, onyx eyes drowning him in black, "Maybe you should wait before interrupting" her nose scrunched, "Just a suggestion" she shrugged carelessly. "Now I think of it, it is personification, the sentence suggests that love is something you can feel, sure you can feel it if you're in love or loving someone, but many people are loved but think they are not, if you walk past someone who is in love, how would you know? You can't feel it, but depending on the situation sometimes you can, so rather than refusing the possibility you should express that it is up to individual's analysis, a subject like love cannot be analysed like that". Mishti did not care that the whole class was staring or that her Professor's ears practically had smoke coming out of them, she didn't do well when people spoke to her rudely without reason, so she'd yawned, so what? It was human to be tired, his attempt to embarrass her in front of the class wasn't something she'd let him achieve, regardless of who he was.

"Class dismissed" his eyes remained on her, "Mishti stay behind" a growl wound its way around his words thrown towards her.

"Good luck" Sammy giggled as she walked past, hips swaying purposefully.

"Usually you are quiet in class, anything wrong?" Shuffling papers, his gaze strayed away from her.

"Usually you are nice in class, anything wrong?" Her arms were crossed, annoyance covering her body like the scarf she always wore to keep her distanced from the cold.

"I really don't appreciate your tone, Mishti" truth was, he wasn't in the best of moods. Worrying about the implications of a student having his number had caused sleepless nights and that in turn had made him push himself too hard in the gym to release some of the pent up frustration.

"And I really don't appreciate how you called me out like that, yes I am your student but that doesn't mean I'm below you or that you're above me" grabbing her bag, she slung it over her shoulder. "I don't know what's gotten into you, but I hope you get it sorted soon".

Deciding to let it go, he pushed his arm out in front of the doorway so she couldn't get past.

"Are you being serious? Let me out" a tinge of fear crawled across her words, though she tried her best to hide it.

"I'm sorry" Abir looked down at her, his smile polite, but his eyes intense. "I shouldn't have taken anything out on you, you're by far one of my best students and I appreciate your hard work and dedication to my class" allowing her to leave, he turned to walk back to his desk.

"I'm sorry too" when he turned, she dropped her head to hide the tears. "I got some bad news last night, didn't sleep because of it".

"I'm sorry, I'm here if you ever need to talk about it" yes he'd made that promise to over a thousand students before, but this felt a little different, why he did not know.

"Thanks, Sir".

~•~•~

Abir/Mishti

Favourite show and why?

The ping of his phone made him jump, he'd completely forgot their deal and the fact that he was meant to send her some rules- he really did have a head like a sieve!

1~ Do not save my name under anything inappropriate.

2~ Do not send any pictures of yourself.

3~ Do not tell anyone else about this situation.

4~ Do not message inappropriately.

My favourite show is Hannibal, I believe the way they depict the investigations and their relationships nothing short of art. Yours?

He'd only asked to be polite, surely that wasn't wrong?

Really adamant on convincing me you're Mr Rajvansh, aren't you? Calm down, we're not in some secret rendezvous, it's just a chat! I'm not going to send you a selfie, that would defeat the whole object of this game.

Game? His brow raised. Thought this was an assignment.

Same thing. My favourite show is Black Mirror, it always makes me re-think how I see the world, I think it's important to question yourself.

Never would've took you for the type.

That's because you don't know who I am. Mishti's eyes rolled back.

But I know you're in my class, out of all the people you could possibly be, none of them seemed the type to watch something like Black Mirror.

Clearly don't know your fellow students well then.

Not my fellow students, my students, I am the teacher. Honestly, his head was pounding trying to convince her.

Possessive personality, tick.

I do not have a possessive personality.

Argumentative, tick.

I am not argumentative! I'm just making my point. Oh, she really was something else.

Likes getting their way, tick. A small smile covered her lips, irritating him was easy and fun too!

Stop analysing me incorrectly!

I'm just doing exactly what you did to 'your students', your analysis was wrong, mine isn't. As fun as this has been, it's my dinner time, chat tomorrow! Jumping up giddily, she looked back at her phone as it pinged, head shaking at his response.

🤨🙄

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Things are getting interesting

Loved the classroom interaction

They definitely are multi faceted

I did think the Prof was out of line but glad Mishti stood her ground

Can't wait to read more

Truely you are so talented

Thanks for this 😊

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Interesting story...waiting to see how you develop it further

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Wow! you really do know how to keep the readers hooked😆


I love how the story is progressing, the pace is perfect👍🏼. Usually the prof-student storylines always have an underlying awkwardness...but here you've seamlessly made it so cute and entertaining; mishbir hardly feel like teacher-student, their conversations are flowing so freely like two adults teasing one another.👏👍🏼

But then the classroom scene had such a charm to it. I could totally imagine Shah as Abir taking that prof charge in that grit in his voice, and our Mishti not backing down either (yes angry chorni!😎)


Beautifully balanced writing of the characters and story.

Can't wait to read more xx

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Posted: 4 years ago
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loved the update.. waiting for the next part :)

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Originally posted by: coolove

Things are getting interesting

Loved the classroom interaction

They definitely are multi faceted

I did think the Prof was out of line but glad Mishti stood her ground

Can't wait to read more

Truely you are so talented

Thanks for this 😊

Aw thanks lovely!

Oh me too!

Oh for sure.

Oh yeah, Mishti is one to back down when things like that happen.

Awww you're so sweet- I'm updating now, can't wait to read your feedback

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Originally posted by: rajkamal02

Interesting story...waiting to see how you develop it further

Thank you darling! Hope to meet your expectations. Next part is coming now:)

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Originally posted by: yrhpk_aus

Wow! you really do know how to keep the readers hooked😆


I love how the story is progressing, the pace is perfect👍🏼. Usually the prof-student storylines always have an underlying awkwardness...but here you've seamlessly made it so cute and entertaining; mishbir hardly feel like teacher-student, their conversations are flowing so freely like two adults teasing one another.👏👍🏼

But then the classroom scene had such a charm to it. I could totally imagine Shah as Abir taking that prof charge in that grit in his voice, and our Mishti not backing down either (yes angry chorni!😎)


Beautifully balanced writing of the characters and story.

Can't wait to read more xx

Haha thank you, sweetie:)

Aw I'm so glad you think so- I felt I was going too slow. Aw thank you, I figure as a uni student she has the ability to act like a respectable adult without the kind of emotion, if that makes sense?

Omg yess! Tots a fantasy! Yes! Love our angry chorni

Aww thanks my love

It's coming now

Xxx

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Originally posted by: shalika

loved the update.. waiting for the next part :)

Thanks darling, it's coming now:)

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~•Part Four•~

Underlining the word several times, Abir stepped back from the board and turned to his class "Embodied Writing, can anyone define it?" He wasn't expecting a flow of hands, perhaps he even preferred it this way? The ability to educate those who did not know had always been a passion of his he took seriously. Education was escape, for him at least and he hoped it would be for them too.

Massaging circles on her forehead, Mishti let out a low groan at the pang of pain colliding in thumps across her scalp. She hadn't missed a day of school, college or university, but for the first time in forever, she'd seriously considered staying home today. While she certainly didn't wish to miss out on his teaching, she was seconds from rising to her feet and making a run to the bathroom to release what her gut had so long tried to contain. Sipping on her water, she dabbed away the prickle of sweat forming on her face with her scarf.

"Have you ever read a piece of writing or heard a song that speaks to something deep within you? So much so that you can feel the emotions of the characters just like they were own? Your breath picks up and your heart begins to race".

Scrunching her eyes shut, she took slow breaths, hand on her beating heart that she could now hear in her ears. Looking through her hair at his hand also on his chest, she tried to force her major organ to beat to the rhythm he spoke aloud.

"Dun, dun, dun, dun, dun" tapping his fingers like a drum, he settled atop his desk. "That is the art of Embodied Writing, it makes you feel and it makes you live through words that aren't your own". Turning his hips sideways, he pressed down on the space bar "Listen to this song, what do you feel?"

https://youtu.be/92cwKCU8Z5c

Unable to take it anymore, her arm spread out, knocking her bottle to the ground noisily as she finally stood up on swaying legs. Rushing around the table with her hand over her mouth while she ran across the hallway and to the bathroom, she forced her hair into one hand while her throat burned with acid with each choke that sent her dinner down the drain.

Abir looked slowly around the class "Talk between yourselves, I'll be back". It wasn't like he kept a routine of following his students out of class, but the pale shine on her skin had worried him. Following the trail he assumed she'd ran, he pushed his side against the bathroom door "Mishti, you okay?"

Lifting her head, she placed a cheek on the cool tile beside her head, ran a tissue across her lips and flushed the toilet. Of all the times to follow her, why had it been now? "Yeah, yeah I'm okay" pushing a gum stick between her lips, she washed her hands thoroughly, jumping almost out of her skin when the door swung open to reveal her teacher. "You do know this is the women's bathroom? Isn't it kind of against the rules for you to be in here?" Her question had been part a hopeful distraction and part a way of seeing if he was a stickler for the rules like her message buddy made him out to be.

"The rules are inconsequential right now". His brows crossed with his arms "Are you feeling alright?" It was clear she wanted to change the subject, but seeing his student rush to vomit wasn't exactly the norm, so he wasn't going to let her escape this that quickly.

Hm, so he didn't care, that certainly didn't fit with the profile of the person she messaged, unless of course, he meant it in regards to her being sick being of more importance, but that was unlikely. "I just had a lot to drink last night" avoiding his gaze, she began to alter the order of the hand washes.

"You drink?" His eyes almost popped out of his skull, he hadn't really taken her for the type.

"The good girl can be bad too, you know?" She scowled. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a lesson to get back to" stepping forward, her eyes narrowed when he stepped in front of her, stepping to the right, she slid past him, ignoring the sensation of his muscular chest against hers which made her ponder on the kind of words she'd use to embody the only warmth she'd felt in a while. It was the closest she'd get to a hug, so she'd take it, not because she found him attractive, but because she so badly longed for someone to keep her safe from the chill rushing through her veins.

Letting her leave, he brushed his hand through his waves in disturbance, it was of course entirely possible that he'd been wrong about her, but something just didn't fit, fine she drank, but the night before a busy day of learning? He didn't think so, she took it too seriously to risk messing it up due to a hangover.

~•~•~

Abir/Mishti

You know how we learnt about embodied writing today?

Yes... Exactly where was she going with this?

Well, are you trying to 'embody' our teacher because you look up to him or something?

I don't exactly think many people in that class look up to me as it were, but no, how can I embody something I already am?

Sighing heavily, she typed faster. The illusory truth effect states that if something is repeated enough it becomes more believable even if it isn't the truth, is that your goal here?

Yes because I want you to believe me and no because I'm not lying to you about who I am. God, she was difficult! You are firm in your place and aren't willing to believe what I'm saying because it doesn't suit your version of the truth, anything that doesn't coordinate is seen as false. If that isn't a false syllogism, I don't know what is.

Actually. She corrected. That would mean that I reached the wrong conclusion from two options, e.g. Option 1: People who work out sweat a lot. Option 2: You are sweating. Conclusion: You must have worked out. But in this situation it is Option 1: You are my teacher. Option 2: You aren't my teacher. Conclusion: You aren't my teacher, I have not assumed a false conclusion from the possible evidence, I have taken a side until I find enough proof that tells me otherwise.

Urgh, she was infuriating at the best of times. Jumping up from the sofa, he began to pace up and down the front room. Call it what you like, I'll call it what it is- naive realism.

Again, no. That is the belief that anyone that doesn't agree with me is wrong, I'm not saying 100% that you are wrong, just that I think you are.

That's the same thing. Abir rolled his eyes back, he'd never ever came across anyone so argumentative.

Whatever helps you sleep at night. She shrugged, it didn't matter to her, she would find out the truth eventually until then he could live in his false world.

Your beliefs do not change how well I sleep. Who did she think she was?

Then why are you trying so hard to change it? I'll believe what I like and you believe what I like. It was just a suggestion.

It isn't a subject up for inference, it IS a fact, I AM your teacher.

Guess you won't get much sleep tonight. She smirked, he was far too easy to rile up.

He almost threw his phone.

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