MishBir: Entwined Eternally|Ch17: Pg22 - Page 12

I liked the concern of Kirthi towards Mishti .... Abhir has to be very careful since Mishti's Bhaiyya and Babhi are so protective!! Abhir ko tho bohot papad bhelne padenge.... Liked it!

Thank you 🤗

Love the protective bhabhi and once Bhai also knows then Abir will need have a very good answer.

brilliantly written please don’t leave us hanging in the next chapter because I really want bhabhi to full investigate the matter before she tells bhai.

I take my 🎩 to you👏

Aw. Kirti’s concern and love towards Mishti is very endearing. Really excited to see what you have planned for the Mehandi function since that is coming up. Kirti can read Mishti and she won’t let this go until she finds out what’s bothering her. Maybe Abir will have to come clean to her haha.. let’s see who opens their mouth first. Most probably Abir will get scared of Kirti and do it 🤣

I liked that Kirti could tell Abir may not have been the sole reason or main reason for her distress, it had to be something deeper. Only those who really understand us can read us like the back of their palm.

I like that we are slowly moving forward. There is no rush to anything, everything is slowly building up.
See you on Wednesday,

Take care, thank you a light and sweet update 💕

Originally posted by: Mii5

I liked the concern of Kirthi towards Mishti .... Abhir has to be very careful since Mishti's Bhaiyya and Babhi are so protective!! Abhir ko tho bohot papad bhelne padenge.... Liked it!

Thank you 🤗

Thanks a ton! I am glad you liked it. Abir ko papad belne padengey ya dande padengey is something I will not comment on. You will witness it yourself in the upcoming chapters. It's amazing to learn that Kirti and Naksh are liked enough.

Thanks again! :)

Originally posted by: screen22

Love the protective bhabhi and once Bhai also knows then Abir will need have a very good answer.

brilliantly written please don’t leave us hanging in the next chapter because I really want bhabhi to full investigate the matter before she tells bhai.

I take my 🎩 to you👏

Thank you so much! Really means a lot to me to know that the duo are liked enough in the story.

Well, I will simply just ask one thing, does Abir have a good answer to give? 😂

Oh! Don't worry, Kirti will fully investigate the matter. She may or may not find the need to tell Naksh for him to deal with the matter. But there's surely some need for popcorns when you sit through it.

Thank you once again! The comments are worth writing for. ❤

Originally posted by: tumhiho

Aw. Kirti’s concern and love towards Mishti is very endearing. Really excited to see what you have planned for the Mehandi function since that is coming up. Kirti can read Mishti and she won’t let this go until she finds out what’s bothering her. Maybe Abir will have to come clean to her haha.. let’s see who opens their mouth first. Most probably Abir will get scared of Kirti and do it 🤣

I liked that Kirti could tell Abir may not have been the sole reason or main reason for her distress, it had to be something deeper. Only those who really understand us can read us like the back of their palm.

I like that we are slowly moving forward. There is no rush to anything, everything is slowly building up.
See you on Wednesday,

Take care, thank you a light and sweet update 💕

Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it. Well, I needed to write a light one after all the emotional stuff that I have rolled down in this story. Never been my intention to bring the emotional mix into this. But I still did.

I am a big time sucker for characters like Naksh and Kirti. So yeah! Had to have one here or else the story wouldn't have felt complete. Well, you will see how she finds out. All at once or peeling off layers one by one. 😆

Though I wanted to wrap this story in somewhat about 10-15 chapters, it's nowhere close. Also, had I done that, it would have been too abrupt and that's not something that I like. Looking at how the story's shaping up, the pace seems fine. It's just that I feel that sometimes it's too slow and would bore the readers to death. But can't go the fast paced thingy.. the story would loose it's essence then.

Anyways, thank you so much for your time and review. It genuinely makes my day better.

Yup, will have another one coming tomorrow.

You too, take care. ❤

Oh my God! How did I miss the previous chapter?! 😲

Well I can read two chapters together now. 😃 Will be back after reading.

I already like Kirti. She's awesome! Seeing Abir all nervous before her was fun. 🤣 She's as protective as Naksh. Poor Abir! He have a tough job ahead. He have too many people to appease including Mishti herself. Poor guy is so scared of Kirti. What will be his state when he have to deal with rest of her family?😆

Mishti won't let her guards down even before Kirti. I hope Kirti will find out the reason on her own. And I can't wait for Naksh to join these two. I have a thing for protective siblings. ❤️ So I'm enjoying this to the fullest. Would we get to see rest of her family too? And what about Abir's family?

Mishti is injured, but she is refusing Abir's help just for the fear of the judgmental society. She is not realising that unknowingly she is letting the pathetic mentality of the same society win, by giving in to the pressure. I do understand that the constant taunts have took a toll on her and made her this way. But she should learn to ignore people and their opinions about her. They will always have something or the other to say. However that doesn't change the person she is. The people who truly loves her know what she is. And honestly that's the only thing that matters.

I appreciate the fact that Abir let her take the decision. He didn't force his decision upon her. The guy has started to think sanely. Good going! 😆 I like the way he is dealing with her. Giving her space, yet helping her in the hour of need. That was such a sweet gesture. And it has earned him some brownie points with Mishti too. Loved this warm& gentle side of Abir. He has started to impress me too along with Mishti. 😉

Loved both the updates, Shenz. The way you described the exchange between Mishti & Abir is beautiful! ❤️ ❤️ Though I wonder what conversation occurred between Naksh and Abir before he left. I would have loved to read that. 😆

Already waiting for the next chapter dear. Come back with it soon. 🤗

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It's just magic to read this new Abir n somewhat similar Mishti.. Abir is just magnetic hope mishti will have get a bit tender towards Abir before marriage so tht we can get a bit tender Mishti n romantic abir

You are having perfect pace bas lagta hai saare parts ek baar me mil jaaye 👍🙏

Thanx for your efforts waiting for next part eagerly won't add any suggestions bas want a bit eager mishti like abir is for her...