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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi19

i love keesh and yes they are underrated...


i dont want any particular scenes between 4 of them, as ur a writer i will go with ur flow...


i was watching PS and i loved naksh and mishti, even i used their bond in one of my update...i just love protective naksh and keerti is adorable...

I really want to see the duo in YRHPK as well. Or maybe I will just make do with stories.


Alright! I will have to think of ways to make that happen because I am not sure of the scenarios I will have the 4 of them together. But will do.


I have always been a sucker for protective brothers. So bringing Naksh seemed right.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Naksh is such a doting, protective brother! ❤️ I'm glad Mishti have such an awesome family by her side. He recognized her distress just by a call. That's just so heartwarming. And Keerti is such a sweet Bhabhi. She came running along with her husband to be with her little sister-in-law. Hayee! How amazing are these three together. I'm glad Mishti forgot all her worries for the time being. She needed this support at the moment. 🤗


Woah! Naksh & Abir know each other? That was an unexpected twist. And I totally loved it. Abir will have to be a lot more cautious. Seeing how protective Naksh is of his sister, he will have to be very careful around both Mishti and Naksh. 😛 He didn't even spare his sister's best friend. 😆 Poor Sameer! But yeah, he would be a gone case if Naksh came to kow what he has been conspiring till now. 😆


Naksh loves teasing Abir, doesn't he? 😉 I like it! It would be fun seeing their interactions. It's entertaining to see Abir nervous before someone. Bring it on! I'm looking forward to more such scenes.


This was an unexpected twist in the tale, Shenz. And I'm totally loving it. ❤️ ❤️ Now I'll have to wait for two days for next update. 🥺 Well, I don't have any other option. 😒 Please be back soon...🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ShenzK

I found them! There are only two, right? One is a TS and the other one is an ongoing Fiction story.. I guess, it's based on detectives and spying.. right? I have bookmarked these two. Need to read them soonish.


Yes, that's my username. You can find that book with the Title - 'Voyage'.

Yeah, that's right.

I'll check out the book on Wattpad. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ShenzK

Thank you so much! I feel relieved to know I was able to pull it off and it was well-received. 😊

Unfortunately the harsh reality of the cruel society we live in. I just don't understand where do they get such thoughts from? Anyways, it just makes me furious every time I think of it.

Hope Abir does what is expected out of him. Well, the guy shouldn't be that insensible, right? Or else, I really will need to get another guy to pair up with Mishti.

I am glad it was to your liking. Hopefully, the next chapter should be up tonight. Thanks again! ❤️ 🤗



The lazy me combines 2 comments in one 😛 😂

I am just making a rough guess, because I feel it would be too sudden to make him learn about things sooner. He needs to be very cautious with Mishti as of now. Or he can forget about ever receiving a chance to act on his attraction for her and see where things lead them to.

Thank you so much! I happen to find these comments a treat for myself. So the chapters happen to be worth the efforts. 😆

Such people are really very infuriating. I just don't understand why people are so interested in peeking into others' lives. If they invest that much time in their own lives, it would do themselves and others a lot good.


I hope Abir will act sensible here on. Now that he has Naksh too to tackle, he needs to be a lot more cautious. 😆 I just hope he won't get beaten up due to any of his stupidity. 😆 He needs to take it easy. It's good to see that he is giving her the required space. Good going Abir. Keep it up! But it's going to be much more difficult to talk to her with Keerti around. I guess she too is going to be all protective about Mishti like her husband. It's actually so good to see Mishti getting pampered. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome..... What a surprise in the story,(Abhir being Naksh ka junior) loved it!

Eagerly awaiting for the next part....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Naksh is such a doting, protective brother! ❤️ I'm glad Mishti have such an awesome family by her side. He recognized her distress just by a call. That's just so heartwarming. And Keerti is such a sweet Bhabhi. She came running along with her husband to be with her little sister-in-law. Hayee! How amazing are these three together. I'm glad Mishti forgot all her worries for the time being. She needed this support at the moment. 🤗


Woah! Naksh & Abir know each other? That was an unexpected twist. And I totally loved it. Abir will have to be a lot more cautious. Seeing how protective Naksh is of his sister, he will have to be very careful around both Mishti and Naksh. 😛 He didn't even spare his sister's best friend. 😆 Poor Sameer! But yeah, he would be a gone case if Naksh came to kow what he has been conspiring till now. 😆


Naksh loves teasing Abir, doesn't he? 😉 I like it! It would be fun seeing their interactions. It's entertaining to see Abir nervous before someone. Bring it on! I'm looking forward to more such scenes.


This was an unexpected twist in the tale, Shenz. And I'm totally loving it. ❤️ ❤️ Now I'll have to wait for two days for next update. 🥺 Well, I don't have any other option. 😒 Please be back soon...🤗

Hey Ash! 🤗

Thank you so much! Yes, as stated earlier her uncle's family (Naitik's) is quite supportive and loving towards her. It's just that at times even if one wishes to, it's impossible to avoid the comments thrown by the society. You will see more of these two, that's for sure. Naksh, not so much in the next couple of chapters but Kirti would fill in for him. 😉 Mishti needed a break from all the emotional stress that she was surrounded with and I needed one from writing all of that 😆


I had to bring in the surprise in or else with the pace that he is moving forward will land him nowhere by the end of this wedding. He needs another opening and more reasons to lurk around her. I just gave him one in the form of Naksh. He better make good use of it. However, whether Abir learns to be more cautious or not, that we will have to wait and watch.

Sameer is yet to get it from Mishti, and now he even has to worry about Naksh, I wonder if he can enjoy his own wedding 🤣


There gotta be some perks of being a Senior now. You will have one more similar to this to witness in the very next chapter. I am glad these are entertaining enough to be asked for more. hush! Relief!


Oh! I love to being in unexpected twists and turns. It's a pleasure to know you have been liking it so far. Well, I had the next chapter ready on Saturday, I just had to polish it a bit and should be good to go 😎 I will be posting it up in a couple of hours. In between my work hours. 😛


Right on it, Ma'am! 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Yeah, that's right.

I'll check out the book on Wattpad. 😊

Take your time. 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Such people are really very infuriating. I just don't understand why people are so interested in peeking into others' lives. If they invest that much time in their own lives, it would do themselves and others a lot good.


I hope Abir will act sensible here on. Now that he has Naksh too to tackle, he needs to be a lot more cautious. 😆 I just hope he won't get beaten up due to any of his stupidity. 😆 He needs to take it easy. It's good to see that he is giving her the required space. Good going Abir. Keep it up! But it's going to be much more difficult to talk to her with Keerti around. I guess she too is going to be all protective about Mishti like her husband. It's actually so good to see Mishti getting pampered. ❤️

I would just day, they don't have much to do in lives that's the reason they have so much free time in hand. or maybe they don't want to do anything in life apart from throwing dirt at others. As if bringing someone else down would elevate their positions. But if only they had enough brain to think of what's better for them. Infuriating indeed.


Oh! You will see how Abir ends up. Naksh will be MIA for a while now. But how it will end up with Kirt, that's to come soon. 😆 Mishti needs all the love in the world and her family treats her how she should be. That is, like a treasure to be cherished. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mii5

Awesome..... What a surprise in the story,(Abhir being Naksh ka junior) loved it!

Eagerly awaiting for the next part....

Thanks a lot! I am glad you liked it enough.


I will be updating in a couple of hours time at max. Thanks again! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago


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