Originally posted by: Pinecone
its not self respect issue or anything. they are married. its great they are having an active sex life- finally!!!
issue for me is with the narrative they set is that- they have had too much tension for 3+ months and were not supposedly intimate. infact they cut the dialogue but in BTS they had shown Ruhi overhear that they dont have husband-wife relations despite being married . so that was the story. but suddenly they are trying to fake that Abhimaan have consummated - but I dont think thats true. they have kissed etc yes. but in the 3 months, they were shown facing away from each other, Armaan refusing to have even a meal with her, walking away constantly etc.
today they give the much awaited SR but in a half hearted way imo. it seems like they changed the plot and inserted this because audience would fry them if they showed pregnancy track without any SR of leads. so its as if they put it in as an after thought because they decided Ab pregnancy track is up. they have served way hotter scenes before in terms of other factors . Sam and Ropu were still great but othr departments lacked.
Also they have not addressed their issues, talked about their pain/feelings , they have not discussed Abhiras feelings around past reveal either. and even after realizing he wronged Ab, today he was already back to impulsively accusing her with no real provocation. Abhira clearly had no clue about cabin and did not take it either.
He eventually apologized and Ab understands where he comes from too- so they made up- great
but for me, the SR would have been better placed in a separate episode that at the very least suggests that Abhimaan have been making efforts to talk out their issues and are trying to find solutions etc
I also thought that the dialogue of Abhira suggesting counseling to have less fights which was followed by Armaan kissing her and them having sex was a bit off. The sequence of events should have been more thoughtful from makers part. Is sex gonna be the way to solve their real marital issues, communication problems etc ? IT surely helps - yes! but to me, the SR was good but really didnt live up to the expectations
But so far, I am just taking the small mercies of Armaan acknowledging he screwed up. but I am back to feeling unhappy with the way they are writing him after all the character development done all these weeks.
This very scene of his outburst could have been done differently by him merely being upset but not accusing or calling selfish etc, For example, Ab coming to cheer him up and bringing a cake or sweets to celebrate her first major win WITH him but he is snubbing her because he is too upset about not fulfilling the promise to chachi and then Ab getting upset that he is back to ignoring her again over someone in family- pehle V, now chacha.
The writing is really bad.
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